>>12463570Awake (barely...)
So I see you went with Mai's costume.
Some refinements to suggest:
-If you can, I'd like Hilda's hairstyle to be her default regardless of the outfit chosen. See if the you can retain the bangs, they don't have to be perfect, a near facsimile would do.
-Cheren's ahoge (I guess the non-weeaboo way of saying this is "Alfalfa Hair" as a friend of mine would say -- but who even knows of "The Little Rascals" in this day and age?) Bends.
-Also, too many bangs are drawn for Cheren and Hilbert. Try to have a definitive number, seems like you got a tad carried away. You could try drawing each bang as two different curved or bent strokes so you can plan their width, spacing or mass. Drawing as a single stroke (I'm assuming) can be limiting to their shape.
Should be about it.
