>>34221658I don't know, maybe just keep it normal instead of all caps. It also feels a bit too on the nose, not cringy, just a little too direct, but that's just my style so it's preference. I like implications. It may make things also a little spookier as the player pieces the story together, I don't know.
Otherwise this is a really good video anon, I like it.
Did you make the music yourself? Because that's really impressive. I also like the fact that talking to objects like the lamps gives you like a line or two, always love it when games do that.