Elm-anon, I read the next two entries of your story.
>https://rentry.org/overelmingOverall, I've been enjoying all the interactions between Elm and the guildmates, and the depictions of daily life in the guild. Your writing is good on a technical level, and I like the way you write Elm's thoughts. Also, it was neat to see Elm training and improving his moves in both of these entries.
Day 4's dream sequence was interesting. And hilarious. And deeply disturbing. The rest of the day was pretty chill, which was nice. Although it was perhaps too chill, and felt like it lacked any sort of arc or purpose, which left me feeling like nothing substantial happened. Day 5 was better in that regard, as it had more emphasis on the training.
Anyway, good work overall, and I look forward to reading the next two entries. I also have to mention that I like the art you've been making for your stories.
I think Stumpy and Sterling are the only stories left in my backlog. I'll try to read and review them soon.
