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CAN WE PLEASE HAVE A SURVEY ABOUT WHAT SPECIFIC LEGENDS PEOPLE WANT INVOLVED IN THE MAIN STORY PLOT?
also, posting plot idea from yesterday. It only covers the villain's plot, and doesn't include any character references to your rival or the champion because I don't want those characters to be 'evilteamplot' critical.
I would love any usable feedback you have on this plot, feedback I've gotten so far includes:
1) "Your use of every Legendary is Hamfisted, you don't need to include all the legendaries" And now I'm asking for a vote because people get upset if [insert pokemon here] isn't plot critical.
2) People have mixed emotions in regards to the gold lady
3) Apparently I mischaracterized Mangrove and Northington and made them too important. (although I don't see how anything I wrote goes against the core concepts of their characters, or how I made either of them more plot critical than Maxie or Lance)
4) "Hurdur, Me want gold is a stupid plot". For every ones info, lust for gold is not a plot, it is a motivating factor that drives the plot.
5) "You've made the NPC's more important than the Protag, The NPC's do all the development off screen" Yeah, that's what happens in every pokemon game, the NPC's do evil shit off screen, and then the protag shows up halfway through their projects in order to foil their plans, usually after being recruited by a gym leader or other positive NPC.
Also, I'm planing to rewrite the battles a little since I forgot to include a plot critical Protag battle with version mascot. (actually, I didn't forget, I just don't care about quetz)
