>>58791974"struggling financial" should be "financial struggles"
One foot doesn't sound like much, but I might be dumb.
You'd really think proof of pets having transformed wouldn't be THAT hard to find, but fair enough.
"admit to myself" should be "admit it to myself", "indiscriminate" should be "indeterminate", "furs and skins" should be "fur and skin", "inbtween" should be "in-between" and "were all stunning patterns" should be "all had stunning patterns".
"I chided myself with" should be "I chided myself", "drawn in" should be "drawn to", and "I'd try my hand at" should be "I'd try", since trying your hand normally refers to actively taking action in the attempt to accomplish something.
"interesting projects" should probably be "interesting events". Seems kinda odd, really, but I guess the political coverage is probably their brand.
"put in an" should probably be "put in during an"
Heh. Nobody said politics had to make sense, Val.
>>58794840"broke the area" should probably be "broke the silence"
Yeah, I hate when my phone does shit like that.
"greeted to" should be "greeted by"
"think about to the" should be "think about the" and "in the recent time" should be "in recent times"
Heh, I actually kinda love how Val's decision to buy a gun was born out of a half-remembered Starship Troopers reference while in a half-awake haze. It's kind of a scary prospect for someone as unstable as him to be arming himself, but it fits his established characters so well. Love it.
I also like how much reflection Val's doing on the Pokemon stuff. It's a good winddown after the police scene, and kind of demonstrates how the world's new state of affairs, while it has its downsides to, is able to poke holes in the cocoon of misery Val's built around himself. We saw that before with Matsui as well, the hope being that these strange events can subtly (and maybe in the future not so subtly) guide him onto a better path.
>>58800564"would pull over" should be "pulled over"
