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Mr.ChesterChapman Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:11:16 No.12095478 View View Reply Original Report

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Working on some Futuristic Pokemon Fanfic.

Let me know what you guys think.

http://mrchesterchapman.wordpress.com/2013/04/23/pokemon/

Mr.ChesterChapman

Mr.ChesterChapman Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:12:10 No.12095491 Report

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Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:13:50 No.12095509 Report

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You have my attention

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:14:19 No.12095511 Report

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This is complete garbage. You're switching between past and present tenses at random, and the narrative is stale and awkward like hell. Please stop.

Mr.ChesterChapman

Mr.ChesterChapman Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:22:03 No.12095579 Report

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Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:23:47 No.12095590 Report

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>>12095579
So? The grammar is still awful.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:25:51 No.12095613 Report

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>>12095579
Why are you insisting on hurting us with this? What did we ever do to deserve this punishment?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 23 Apr 2013 19:28:44 No.12095630 Report

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Mite b cool.

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