Write, request (good luck), share, ask for critique.
This is not a thread strictly for requests and delivery, but it is a thread for mundane ass patting and ignorance. This is a thread for /vp/-generated autistic content, discussion and growth. We are a community, we should try to act like it; because at the end of the day, we're all here to have fun and maybe learn a thing or two.
Requesters are free and welcome to request lewd pieces from the writers who frequent, however please have some degree of courtesy. If your request is not taken, just try your luck on a different day or try a less kinky topic. Spamming "bumps"
like VN threads or whining isn't pleasant for anyone. If, however, your request is taken, even the smallest of a "fuck you" means a lot to any growing autist. Keep in mind that these are people just like you. Reader feedback is highly encouraged, just don't be a good guy greg. Pointing out flaws and giving suggestions will take an artist by leaps and bounds, just insulting them will make them cry.
New autists are always welcome and encouraged, regardless of skill level. Even if you firmly believe you "shit nigga I can't write at all goddamn" at first, we can help you. So please, don't hesitate to come in. You are free to post your delusional, non-requested work, however if you aren't seeking critique or actual feedback it is recommended you post elsewhere. No one likes a standingon or a Pokemaniac.
Remember, patience is key; don't bump every hour, delete, and bump again hours later, it'll only put people off. Do not spam in the thread and paste ALL stories in a separate link, pastebin recommended.
Previous thread:
>>12215927 IRC Network:
Rizon.net Channels: #vpwritethread
Google Docs page:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A3Q0hLr1Jt2eMeMvYAm6Xn2knTaod-OvNphxCwiAGnk/edit?usp=sharing Discussion topic: What point of view and tense do you write in and why? Are some easier than others?
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>don't bump every hour, delete, and bump again hours later RIP thread
Anonymous
>>12246175 Solution: Don't delete bumps, stack them on top of each other.
That's what cool people do.
Anonymous
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>>12246294 A whole bunch of visible bumps is so much more annoying though.
Anonymous
May I request mystery dungeon stories in here?
Anonymous
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>>12246432 You may request
any kind of Pokemon story in here.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>No one likes a standingon As true as this is I do actually want critiques and stuff.
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
>>12246432 I'm writing one, what do you need?
Anonymous
>>12247289 Just requesting one is all
Anonymous
A good while ago, I requested a story about a trainer who falls in love with their Pokemon and tries to see if the Pokemon feels the same only to find out the Pokemon just wasn't interested in that way. The Pokemon was an Ampharos, I believe. An Anon took it for me. Any progress?
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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>>12247406 I can't do it unless you're specific as to what you want. If you like my PMD fic, link is here:
http://pastebin.com/ZLSkhuir Rooh should eventually finish editing it.
Anonymous
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>>12249224 Hype level >100
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new human species when
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>12250436 Those highlights are disgusting.
Who thought that was a good idea?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>12250467 Couldn't tell you, don't really care.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Why aren't there any Pokemon murder mysteries? I want my mind raped inside and out.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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In the end I didn't kill myself because I realized that if I was dead I would miss out on a lot of pictures of Roxie.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>12255543 Human-on-human murder or Pokemon-on-Pokemon murder?
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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I was lying in bed about to fall asleep when I realized I should probably bump the thread first.
Anonymous
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I want to do a monologue/reflection of a Hypno living in Lostlorn forest, but I'm not entirely sure how to start
Anonymous
Terrakion raping male trainer. Get on it
Anonymous
Anonymous
Pokemon... In the time of the Crusades.
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naah naah naah naah wait till I get my bump right OHOHOHOHOH
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>>12247435 > a story about a trainer who falls in love with their Pokemon I always wonder Why human falls in love with their Pokémon? Most of them can't speak or communicate properly, so How they can love them I they barely understand them?
Anonymous
>>12255543 >Pokemon murder mysteries NIGGA I AM ON tHE MUTHA FUCKA
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>>12264492 >Pokemon... In the time of the Crusades. Deus vult!
Anonymous
>>12268894 Well fuck.
My piece went from dark noir to comedy.
I still like it, though.
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>>12268865 >can't speak or communicate properly It's not like they don't understand english or anything. They just have to deal with not being able to talk back. And as far as I can tell they can respond to question or follow a command.
Anonymous
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>>12269335 All I'm willing to write tonight-
pastebin.com/x0gxWvpM I need sleep.
Anonymous
Anonymous
And so begins the inevitable wait for Nate-kun to write smut based on the new Pokemon.
Anonymous
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>>12275545 you mean Goombario!
I SUMMON THEE HITHER!!!
Anonymous
Gogoat raping male trainer. Get on it
Pants without Pants !!v3b467DpdIe
looking for some good anime fanfics. can I get recommendations?
Anonymous
>>12278260 What kind of fics are you looking for?
Pants without Pants !!v3b467DpdIe
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>>12278318 adventure, action.
if it's got romance that's fine.
perhaps some horror.
Anonymous
>>12277072 >not Elekitelu/Yancham/Gogoat orgy PLEBS, the lot of ye!
Anonymous
>>12279967 I'm going to /d/ to request dirty Elekitelu art. see you later.
Rooh
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>>12280180 they kicked me out because no furshit on /d/. Funny how /b/ is okay with it...
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Landwalker: WIP guy here.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9174048/1/Silhouette-of-Time Got an actual title, almost four hundred views, feels good. Any thoughts asides from the grammar issues?
I don't want to review anyone else without making it look like I know what I'm talking about.
Anonymous
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>>12263268 Too many good ideas there
Anonymous
>>12280010 Question. What DID you ask them for, anyway?
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>>12286072 You. I can't say ITT because I'll get b&.
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>>12286072 If you have to ask, you don't need to know.
Anonymous
I want to make a fanfiction. After seeing the new Pokemon and loving some of them, I'm too excited about the next gen to start it yet. I'm waiting until we know what we need to know about the new gen so I can remake my characters' teams and possibly the story. I'm taking an easy way out and make it one of those school stories. The Global Academy of Pokemon or so. I am going to split the school into four groups that I NEED HELP WITH. See my pic, I want it like that but of Grass, Fire, Water and Electricity. I want mascots of each one, none being starters or legendaries. And names that would work and give it a small "Harry Potter" feel to it. Then the main mascot on top of all of them, the school mascot itself will be Victini. The school is obviously on it's own island, sort of. There will be a city or two and other landscapes on the said island. The ONLY area in my ff that would be fictional. My Pokemon World would consist of every location seen in any movie, game or episode of Pokemon - and areas in the Pokemon Special manga. On this island, the villain team will be Neo Snagem, yes this story is influenced by the Gamecube games. Eventually, the main character receives a Friend Ball from the girl main character and uses it to snatch a Shadow Reuniclus who helps him in the final battle.
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>>12287424 Even with the teams, as you see now in this pic, I try to keep them balanced between gens and types. These are the teams as of the final chapter for each main character (although again it will change to include Gen 6). I want to do the same thing with legendaries. Mew for Gen I, Ho-Oh and Shiny Celebi for Gen II, Lati@s and Deoxys for Gen III, maybe Darkrai and Cresselia for Gen IV and Muskedeers, Victini and Genesect for Gen V.
I’m thinking this for the pairings until I see more Gen 6 Legendaries:
>Muskedeers against Neo Snagem to free Shiny Celebi story, leading up to – >Lati@s against the five Genesects Team Snagem retrieved from the past and experimented on >Mew, Ho-Oh and Deoxys in a classic alien style story Leaving hopefully Gen 6 Pokemon to fit in with Darkrai and Cresselia
Thoughts?
Anonymous
>>12287426 Ignore Darkrai and Shamin by the way, old pic, too lazy to fix. I also don't know if each Pokemon will be fully evolved yet.
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>>12287435 The main character is Aaron Marshall Parker, the rich boy from Goldenrod who could care less about money. He is similar to Yusuke Urameshi in Yu Yu Hakusho, personality wise, to save me words. His favorite Pokemon is Electabuzz, which he WILL be staying Electabuzz and not evolving dispite the pic. Fuck haters.
The top right team belongs to the main girl of the game. The daughter of an archaeologist from Mauville City, Hoenn. She is the peace to Aaron's attitude. That Flygon was given to her by her father.
Harley “HJ” Jordan, the Unovian (American) kid is Aaron’s rival. He’s the American, where as Aaron will behave more Eastern and the girl is Latin. His team is the bottom lefts.
And team four, another female’s team. All I know is she’s the ditsy crazy-ish one.
The fifth team is for a character that joins the villains. I need to come up with a team to fit someone French, if the new region is really based on France. I’m stoked about that.
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Requesting NTR-- Ash and Dawn now have a happy family. Misty regrets never telling Ash her feelings.
Anonymous
I've got a story idea revolving around my head to contribute. I figured I'd split it into whats coming on each gen, still no ideas for gen 6 since its to early but I got my ideas mostly set for gens 1-5. The story would chronologically start from gen 2 but...I would begin telling it from gen 1. There would be a main character for each gen, however in all gens except 2 the main characters would meet up and start adventuring together. The story would build up to a climatic finish in gen 4 and then continue on with the main plot-line from gen 5. Gen 1 has the primary of the main characters. His motivation for starting his journey is finding his father, who just for no reason known to him up and left the house one day. He's your typical brainy kid type sporting a scrawny design but very high levels of intellect, using a tactical battle style. His starter would be Charmander and would eventually capture and use pokemon like Gengar and Magneton. His style in battle would be special attacks and using tactical moves (such as toxic or counter) to take his opponent by surprise. In gen 2 we would have the wisest and most experienced out of all the main characters as he starts out his journey before everyone else. He would be your typical brawns type of character with an outgoing personality, full of willpower and confidence. He would eventually become the champion of Kanto and Johto and meet the main character from gen 1 and start traveling with him due to the interest he takes in this characters journey. He also simply just wants to travel the world. Eventually they would become an inseparable pair. His starter would be Totodile and he would eventually capture pokemon such as Aggron and Donphan. His style in battle would involve brute force and holding his ground with bulky pokemon, eventually breaking through the opponents defenses. Due to the sheer amount of training he gives them (sometimes involving himself in the training) his pokemon have insane physical strength.
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>>12287733 Back to the gen 1 arc, eventually the main character from gen 1 and the main character from gen 2 would re-travel through johto involving themselves with some sort of villain who I have not thought up yet. This would cause the usual use of legendaries and whatnot, I was thinking of pairing raikou with gen 1 protag and entei with gen 2 protag while leaving suicune alone. Still not entirely sure about this idea.
Gen 3's main character would be a cool and collected type of character who keeps to himself a lot. His starter would be Treecko and his motivation would be to simply become stronger. He would eventually catch pokemon like Lucario and Gallade. His fighting style usually involves speed and ordinary attack patterns. Eventually gen 1 and 2 protags meet with him but he continuously shrugs them off. He would also constantly butt heads with gen 2 protag thinking that he has the ability to defeat a champion-level trainer. His journey would eventually culminate with taking care of team aqua and magma remnants and more groudon and kyogre shenanigans. He would gradually start accepting gen 1 and 2 protag as friends after all the help they give him. He would also eventually become the Hoenn Champion.
Gen 4 introduces a new protag but focuses on gen 1 protag. Gen 3 protag is also traveling around Sinnoh but is not hanging around with gen 1 and 2 protag. The new protag that gen 4 introduces is the youngest and most inexperienced protagonist, a young girl who dreams of becoming a pokemon coordinator. Her starter would be Piplup and she would eventually catch cute pokemon like Clefable and Pachirisu. She doesn't particularly have a battle style she follows as she's not really into pokemon for battles. Gen 3 protagonist meets with her first and forms a strong bond with her due to how much she reminds him of his younger sister who is deceased. He becomes very overprotective of her.
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>>12287735 Gen 4 is where gen 1 finally finds out more about his father and his reasons for leaving his family behind. His father is a scientist that researches pokemon much to the likes of people likes of the professors. He was researching pokemon genetics particularly those of Dialga and Palkia as he had body fragments of them (I was thinking maybe parts of the jewels that you can see in their body) and eventually implants their dna into himself as a sort of experiment, giving him an extent of control over Dialga and Palkia's abilities of controlling space and time. However, these abilities he obtains pale in comparison to those of the real thing. Since he does this before he gets married to his wife, the resulting child inherits these abilities but to a much greater extent. Gen 1 protagonist hasn't realized he has this potential until he meets his father however. His abilities are much greater to that of his father but are still inferior to those of the real thing and if overused can kill him. Former team galactic members (particularly the leaders who where fond of cyrus and that one scientist dude from platinum who seemed to be crazy) are after gen 1's dad because of his abilities. The team galactic leaders want him to see if they can use him to enter the reverse world and find Cyrus while the scientist has a greater ambition involving what Cyrus wanted to do in the past using the power of Dialga and Palkia. Eventually shenanigans lead to shenanigans and all of the protagonists would get involved one way or another with gen 1 protag becoming the new target after its been established that his dad won't cut it. All this culminates with gen 1 protag getting captured, controlled with another red chain, and all these events stirring up the legends which further culminates into a battle with the three inside the reverse world. Cont.
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>>12287738 Cont. The legendary trio would once again help of course with Azelf pairing up with gen 2 protag, Uxie with gen 1 protag, and Mesprit with gen 4 protag. I was thinking that perhaps reverse world Giratina would pair up with gen 1 protag as well. The battle would cause the portal to the reverse world to go haywire becoming a danger to Sinnoh itself. Protags character would sacrifice himself to stop this as Dialga and Palkia are too weak after fighting amongst themselves and Giratina. He would seal it from the real world while Giratina seals it from the other side (not entirely sure about this part yet) exhausting himself and eventually leading to his death. Gen 1 protag is sad of course but would eventually accept it, realizing that not all was for naught due to all the friends he made and all the experiences he had.
Since I wanted Gen 5 to include N in some way I figured I'd just let it happen as BW1's story but with my protagonists. Not yet sure how I would go about it. I just know that I would want to introduce a new character who would be female and use a Snivy. Anyway thats it, thoughts?
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>>12287741 Err, seems that in my hurry writing it I missed saying that the protags father is the one who sacrifices himself to stop the reverse world portal.
Anonymous
Pants Without Pants !!v3b467DpdIe
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anyone know any good pokemon crossovers?
Mystery Orange Guy
I really need to stop leaving. Hey, we have a chat, that's cool. How are you all?
Anonymous
>>12297082 Fine, don't got to the chat it's lame as fuck
Anonymous
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>>12297129 It wouldn't be so bad if more people came to it ;_;
Anonymous
>>12297218 If more people came to it then no one would talk in the thread about whatever
I don't these to turn to those Rocket threads :(
Anonymous
>>12287424 Discuss this post instead of discussing people not discussing stuff.
Anonymous
>>12297254 The drawthread has like 50 ircs and is going strong
it's not going to kill the thread to use the irc
most of the things we talk about when it would be on topic to the thread is usually stuff that we usually wouldn't bring into the thread anyway
>>12297287 I really want to because it's a cool idea but I can't think of anything to say about it
Anonymous
>>12297287 tl;dr
Make your summaries direct
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>>12297316 It's not even a summary lazy
Anonymous
>>12297306 How do the teams look
Anonymous
>>12297397 They look alright I don't see any problems with them, although I don't think get what your plans with the legendaries are.
Anonymous
>>12297435 I don't exactly yet either. They are the ones I want to use though.
I love the Musketeers, Lati@s, Ho-oh and Victini, so I definitely want them involved. And I think a story involving Mew, the DNA Pokemon and Deoxys would be cool.
Ho-Oh is the big legendary of the land
Musketeers I guess would be similar to the Crown Beasts in that sense
Celebi for time travel to get the Genesects, shiny because I love shiny Celebi.
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>>12297501 I need to stop making the second O in Ho-oh capital. All day it's been happening when I know better.
Also, Victini as I said is the school mascot. Lati@s will fit in somehow.
Anonymous
Okie dokie guys who wants me to write their Pokemon fanfic?
Anonymous
>>12297501 Oh alright, I get that then.
Something with Mew the DNA pokemon and Deoxys could be pretty neat, yeah.
It sounds like you've got a solid enough base and that you just need to start building on it.
Anonymous
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>>12297630 I...I, uh, have the right to refuse requests...right?
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>>12297656 Not if you want to be taken seriously
Anonymous
>>12297597 Creating all the characters is a hassle. That's why I chose something easy like an acedemy. There won't be a lot of traveling, same chacters.
Anonymous
>>12298054 Haha, it's basically the opposite for me.
I can spend all day making characters, but I struggle putting together a cohesive world.
Anonymous
>>12298092 I love coming up with how I think my own Pokemon world would be. A lot of fun to it.
How do you come up with good names?
Anonymous
>>12298202 Usually I just use name generators, because they give out pretty good "normal" names. If I want a meaningful name or some kind of theme I'll look up names that mean what I want.
Anonymous
>>12298303 Do you have a way of doing it? Like a chart you fill out of what do they do, how they act, etc. or something like that?
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>not naming characters after colors >not having paired characters
Anonymous
>>12298418 Yeah, I got something off DA ages ago that I like. A lot of it is just in head though, especially backstory stuff.
Anonymous
A male Typhlosion and a female Gardevoir Make it lewd please
Anonymous
>>12298503 Backstory I get. It's just a "template" in like of other words would be nice.
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>>12298602 >http://pastebin.com/Trn1hTD3 It's not specifically pokemon related, but I get good enough use out of it.
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We will be bumped We'll build a home with a beam of a barn The fenced-in farm oh city, city, gonna be more I know for sure We're bumpin' out past the field of corn The fenced-in farm oh city, city, gonna be more
Cake !!yD2X3PbQhvG
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How do you access the archives? For the previous threads?
Anonymous
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7354757/1/The-Game-of-Champions Honest to God, the best Red & Blue story I've ever read. World building is excellent and Pikacue is a little shit
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Is the Author of PokeWars gonna wright any new Ash & Co stories anytime soon, I fucking love the edgy in that series.
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>>12298513 >No one has written a Sir Knight's Experience Fic Anonymous
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>>12304884 Yea that's really good and all except it's not fucking finished and never will be since it has been updated in forever
Kyouhei !!f+OmALwb9z4
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