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Anonymous
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
Steel Gym Leader Concepts
survey
monkey.com/s/KKNHGCJ Overall Difficulty Survey:
survey
monkey.com/s/BMRT9N9 New Names Survey:
survey
monkey.com/s/skinknames HM Survey part 2:
survey
monkey.com/s/G9C88PP Dillopang Survey part 2:
survey
monkey.com/s/8R6SFBL Anonymous
>>12573628 ok...
so...
I made a Kobold redesign. I tried to add something.
A symbiotic parasite, the Simic causes enhanced growth and strength, quickening the processes of evolution.
I can expand on this idea, or scrap it.
I know 9/10s of you guys arent going to like it so im just gonna go ahead and start to scrap it... Anonymous
>>12573655 Post the check list faggot
Anonymous
>>12573658 7/10 for effort but at the end of the day they just look like unnecessary green blobs on a pokemon to the average player.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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ok so this
Anonymous
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
<ok so this
Anonymous
wait are the types being changed for dillo and pango? they were supposed to just look like bushes not be bushes??
Anonymous
>>12573699 i dunno i think it's a bit much. the clover thing irks me too. we don't need any more 4chan refs.
moot isn't paying me shit.
Anonymous
>>12573658 >>12573679 Now with 100% less shoulder cum
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12573738 ok i should explain this again
the clover is not supposed to be a subtle refrence to /vp/, it is just like game freaks logo in emerald, it goes behind the name, then interacts with the environment
its not a subtle refrence, its straight up giving this community credit
>>12573744 fuckin game ready, 10/10 will vote
Anonymous
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>>12573744 Much better I like the candle motif.
Anonymous
>>12573744 what if the colors were less garish?
also i altered the eyebrow on the big one
Anonymous
>>12573800 U no tak candle
Anonymous
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>>12573800 i like always hated the haneous red section
Anonymous
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>>12573800 I like the bright red, it screams "danger danger dont come near me or you'll get a lick of a burn" like most of nature does
Anonymous
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>>12573800 I am anonymous and I approve these changes.
Anonymous
>>12573721 This is in light of a recent redesign and survey IIRC. I actually like the type change, it'll help make the desert a lot more hellish
>diloweed used leech seed! >diloweed used ingrain! >diloweed used mega drain! >diloweed used rollout! etc.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12573806 i dunno what the candle talk is but generally the colors should be balanced better no matter what hue is chosen
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12573836 Hue.
However, Reptar, I think that your dilloes need a little less to them to make the change less JGB syndrome...
>>12573721 After many months of arguing, people still don't understand that they're are our soodowoodoes. Even those who do understand think there are too many mimics, despite them being the first. As
>>12573827 said, it will prove in it's favour in the end.
Anonymous
>>12573836 There was a superior Diloweed floating around in one of the past few threads. Your pangolash look better than that artist's, though.
Anonymous
>>12573851 i missed those months of arguing. i'm not a very stubborn person though and think the change is fine. we had too many rock pokemon anyways.
>>12573836 i like those far right ones. maybe they could be a bit more stocky tho?
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
the ice tiles are killing me yo
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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>>12573870 Rock-> Grass Steel-> Grass is still winning. Ground/Grass Steel/Grass is a close second.
Anonymous
>>12573677 This shit wouldn't happen if Clash was here.
Anonymous
I thought we couldn't remove pokemon once they made it in. Where's my computer virus pokemon? That was a very unique concept!
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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>>12573915 Vectol and Vectol.2. Still there.
Anonymous
>>12573915 i hope you mean bacteriophage pokemon
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12573870 The problem is with the water:grass:ice ratio, water types are at quite a disadvantage despite all their handy second types. We could just spam ice beam in their TM lists, but a typing which now outnumbers them still resists their STAB.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
yeah, theseice on water tiles are messing with my brain, apart from that, how does everythign look so far?
Anonymous
>>12573876 what you need bro?? us slave anons await
Anonymous
>>12573800 >>12573744 These redesigns look completely awful. please stop. Everything you touch turns into sameface plastic toys for toddlers. Please please stop. I don't think you understand why design choices are made.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
hows this for opening words?
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12573876 >>12573937 It's good to see you image drop again, draik.
Anonymous
>>12573947 lol less rude. basically invite them to borrow our ideas as we have borrowed theirs.
Raptor
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12573929 i dunno 42/229 of our pokemon are weak to water. that's not bad.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12573945 those were done by different people you ass burger
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12573946 beautiful!
>>12573956 lol i kinda like it, it establishes character
>>12573978 yeah i know...
>>12573980 DAMNIT
alright any other sugestions for what to say at the opening?
Anonymous
>>12573923 No dude. I based them off old wireframe games and threw in DNA/RNA references among the CYMB. They're a scorpion because INJECT CODE and a mouse with bacteriophage limbs for what I feel are obvious reasons. They're computer viruses reconstituted into false life by the Box technology.
And thank you to everyone that pointed them out to me! I'm relieved. I know it's biased but Vectol line is my favorite in the whole 'Dex.
Raptor
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>>12573993 >implying you designed them hue
Anonymous
>>12573993 And earthqueake is my favorite move in pokemon see me in showdown wit ur shitty vectols #rekt
Anonymous
>>12573946 Make the intervals on waterfall waves further apart and instead put some subtle vertical detailing.
Anonymous
>>12574009 airballoon gigadrain vectol has something to say to you ground types
Anonymous
>>12573971 Raptor. Please for the love of god stop. Other drawfags are always having to correct things you do. You are making the pokemon look very much not at all like pokemon and you keep losing detail and bastardizing concepts.
Anonymous
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>>12574023 >says the guy not posting a redesign every day with this shit
Anonymous
Raptor
>>12574023 deal with it. Im here to stay. if you dont like my art or my designs, vote against them. simple as that.
DashingHero !!jDn6qImItZZ
Hey everyone, remember when I made wallpapers for the project?
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
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>>12574016 ask a tilemaker, I only put everything together.
>>12573992 >>12573972 thank you
>>12573950 lol, yeah yeah.
>>12573943 Im just trying to get them to fit together better, I want more ice on the water, but im not super worried
Anonymous
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12574061 YAY!!!!
>>12573947 "game freak pay attention, you could learn a thing or two from this"
-/vp/
Anonymous
>>12574074 >"game freak pay attention, you could learn a thing or two from this"-/vp/ God no.
Anonymous
>>12574074 >>12573947 No message other than Pokemon belonging to gamefreak/etc.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12574082 >>12574083 yeah i know im joking
and wait
>>12574083 are we giving any credit to gf? i mean we dont have to but it would be polite
Anonymous
>>12574056 Just dropping by to reaffirm how arrogant you make yourself seem, no need to be an arse.
I will be quietly voting against every design you alter.
Anonymous
>>12574088 >arse sure is summer in here
Anonymous
>>12574088 Welcome to 4chan, where mommy doesnt give a fuck if you cuss.
Anonymous
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12574127 Can we get rid of the pikachu tail?
Anonymous
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
i tried to make a simple clover patch placeholder
Anonymous
>>12573909 where is he? havent seen him in like the past few threads...
i hope he didnt leave...
Terra !4dLvBoNE..
>>12574381 At work/friends/family. If not, a tragic incident with a body part a la Moose or SZ
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12574401 > a tragic incident with a body part a la Moose or SZ Considering I've been here all day, it is not /that/body part. Unless you mean I impaled him with my antler, in which that wasn't the case, either.
He hasn't said much on skype, either. I remember him coming in, and replying 'im here' when I said he hasnt said a word all day...
Anonymous
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>>12574370 sprouts. need that on a lemongrass sub with some cilantro
Anonymous
>>12574401 >>12574419 well hopefully he is alight. normally it just seems he lets us know when he is going to be gone for awhile especially like a few days.
Anonymous
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>>12573699 here's this, since I agree with they guy that said you don't have to have someone stomping on the 4chan logo.
Anonymous
tempted to go back to doing sprites. we got nothing to fill the dex and only polish today. that's a rarity. we need flarries, then new convo survey and then well waterfall cave made. love new overworld dude got a few new ones now.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
toki doki, guys, heres what we got. fixed some small things, and added a bit more ice. ready to survey?
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
Anonymous
>>12574808 I really like it.
Anonymous
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>>12574115 >>12574124 >butthurt anonymous shitposting razor sharp edges there Raptor
2edgy4chan
Gunvarrel !Oq/9NMk1yg
>>12574808 Man that's coming along awesomely! The only thing that's really bothering me is the ice. From what I've seen, stuff touching water usually has some sort of "transition" area, whether its a deeper darker color surrounding a rock or a lighter shade to denote shallow water next to a sandy shore. I think the ice would benefit from having something like that!
Anonymous
>>12574808 damn looks real nice. maybe mirror a house or move a stack entity on one?
as for me finally took the man outta me wip of a npc i like(i know it's not approved and most shading is backwards wip)
Anonymous
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>>12574922 is that Mad Mod?
Anonymous
since the other mini snow-poke was so much cuter and mine was massive and the talk of optional trainer battle .........
Anonymous
>>12574988 I think it may be too gimicky... even if it does make sense.
Anonymous
>>12574922 the mask looks like a pokemon head and not a mask at all
Anonymous
Sorry, missed the last thread, posted this last night. Thoughts
Anonymous
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>>12575058 kinda idea. it is mainly the head. still need to adjust legs and shirk the hair. could flatten shading on head but trying to sleep soon
even if captcha is trying to seduce me. lubricate away. you dirty dog.
Anonymous
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>>12574208 oh my, i think i might start caring about this line
Anonymous
>>12575010 I mean, we had that sort of thing already, except for more obvious - ninjas behind trees etc.
Anonymous
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>>12575101 I think that one is missing the thinner legs and knobby joints.
Anonymous
>>12574808 i missed you always forgetting your image.
Anonymous
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>>12574554 you could try backsprites
Anonymous
>>12575125 >I mean, we had that sort of thing already, except for more obvious - ninjas behind trees etc. but their sprites weren't ninja arms sticking out of a sudowoodo costume.
The concept is solid, this particular execution is flawed.
Anonymous
>>12574554 >tempted to go back to doing sprites if you do, please try finishing pic related
Anonymous
>>12575150 >implying it'll ever get a good sprite or name Anonymous
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>>12575139 Well that is true, I am sold about concept, AND if someone can make the sprite look at least solid, they great.
Anonymous
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>>12575150 been there, failed dat. was the one who tried dithering lines to remove the extra hardline shades
Anonymous
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>>12575161 >implying that sprite is bad it's just not finished
Anonymous
>>12575133 Care to elaborate?
Anonymous
>>12575189 obviously there's one guy who always forgets their image when they post,
and then there's another idiot who assumes everyone on 4chan is just 1 guy samefaging his own posts.
Anonymous
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>>12575200 I had no idea what you were talking about for a second, then I realised I replied to the wrong post. My bad.
This pic is for me
Anonymous
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>>12575189 When Draik was active he forgot his image like 75% of the time.
Anonymous
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
Alright, got dragged into some exam partying, sorry about that, but now I'm back again, with some variations on the Space-Quetzal for you to choose from.
Anonymous
>>12575273 a few notes
1) I really just don't like Quetzal's space form
2) That being said, I think he should have more stones exposed on his body, Like the space energy inside it's body is holding it together, I'm probably not explaining this well.
3) Oh god those swirls... Enjoy spriting that yourself.
Anonymous
>>12575273 Swirls alt 1 but have the two bands come together behind quetz's head. I wanna see what that looks like.
nice work
Anonymous
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>>12575273 The design wasn't complicated enough to begin with.
Anonymous
>>12575273 can we have the wings a bit more bird like, other than that no swirls is fine.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12575291 it'll be like a meta joke about how our dex doesn't have enough birds and serpent/dragons.
Anonymous
>>12574922 Base the Poison E4 on a Plague Doctor. Would make sense with that art.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
>>12575278 I could add some stones here and there to see how it looks.
>>12575279 Alright, I'll give it a shot.
>>12575291 Good suggestion, I'll see how it looks.
Anonymous
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>>12575308 No swirls,they look rather odd IMO
Anonymous
>>12575308 I tried by just pissing around with the liquify tool
Anonymous
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>>12575273 No swirls. please god no swirls
Anonymous
>>12573849 >>12573744 Why is this biped- quadruped- biped?
Anonymous
>>12575356 split evo
biped->quad
biped->biped
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12575356 Because it's biped -> quadriped or biped
Anonymous
>>12575329 looks more like shit than piss.
Anonymous
>>12574808 Pretty sure ice wouldn't freeze on running water...
And where is the water even running to!? Gah...
Otherwise 10/10 looking good Anonymous
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This looks terrible.
Anonymous
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>>12575409 rivers freeze all the time...
Anonymous
>>12575409 It happens, uh always?
And it can flow to some kind of underground river.
Anonymous
>>12575445 we have dive in the game
make it happen
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12575463 Yacuma is best legendary, seriously. She's evil without looking edgy. Also dem stats.
Anonymous
>>12575496 >not seel of approval Anonymous
>>12573628 Here's a quick redesign for the Grass type Elephant 1st form I did while on the train.
Anonymous
>>12575510 Sorry, here. Fuck iPads...
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12575518 >brown that's already a strike against it
Anonymous
>>12575518 >elephant balancing hot dogs on forehead.jpg Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
Alright, the new wings turned out great, in my opinion. As for swirls or rocks, I think it just becomes too much. But nevertheless, here are the different options anyway.
Anonymous
>>12575564 Rocks look better than the swirls, but clean still looks best. All the other options look too busy.
Anonymous
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>>12575563 I drew it with my fucking finger,w hat do you expect...
Anonymous
>>12575518 well... it's certainly an elephant... it's ground type I assume?
Anonymous
>>12575593 he even said grass type you dingus
Anonymous
>>12575564 >>12575569 maybe make the rocks bigger?
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12575596 >implying I was replying to the post where he mentioned the typing, and not the post where he actually posted the drawing. you guys are just trying to start fights.
Anonymous
>>12575564 the wings should have faint white nazca lines in them, at least in the official artwork
a bit like star constellations
Anonymous
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>>12575616 sorta like this i guess
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
>>12575603 That would probably look a bit better, but I still think it would be too much.
>>12575616 Cool idea, I'll note it down.
Anonymous
>>12575564 first swirls are too much like regigigas's shoulder things imo, and the second swirls make it look like a cobra
the rocks will work if you put them along the wings, I'll draw up what i mean
Anonymous
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
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>>12575662 Hmm, interesting suggestion. Do you think the wing rocks should replace the body rocks or be added to them?
Anonymous
>>12575518 Here's the evolution.
Anonymous
>>12575652 >That would probably look a bit better, but I still think it would be too much. I was thinking it could be like Quetzl's shell was broken open by the cosmic force inside
pic related, it's my shitty idea.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
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>>12575727 Very well. I'll give it a shot, after I've had some lunch.
Anonymous
>>12575727 the colored version
Anonymous
>>12575397 At least the design is getting
solid Anonymous
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>>12575779 too bad the work's going to
waste Anonymous
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>>12575273 Try making the swirl 3 swirlier around the body
>>12575293 >>12575291 This
Anonymous
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>>12575273 Try making the swirl 3 swirlier around the body
>>12575329 YES
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12575711 Honestly, nut elephant isnt a terrible idea.
give it a different colour scheme though.
we have enough brown as it is.
Anonymous
>>12575999 elephant pokémon in general are a stupid idea, the closest you can get without them looking like neopets or something is donphan
similar rules apply regarding lions and tigers
Anonymous
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>>12575150 Can you put that head on this body?
Anonymous
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>>12576021 >animals x y and z cannot be pokemoned Anonymous
>>12575999 How about this then?
Anonymous
>>12576112 Cute. Don't like the whole head being covered though.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12576112 Shouldn't it be a peanut, if you're forcing yourself to go down this route?
Anonymous
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>>12576140 Peanut for prevo maybe?
Anonymous
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>>12576140 That's too obvious.
I like the idea that it's growing out of the nut.
Anonymous
>>12576119 That's the first form. It will grow into something like the design for Waltrunk.
Anonymous
>>12576112 we could call it vagina head
Anonymous
>>12576176 Vagina Head used Water Sport
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
Added some shell remains on the wings and body. Still unsure whether or not it's too much detail though.
Anonymous
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>>12576186 >vagina head used swallow Anonymous
>>12576192 Looks really over designed.
Anonymous
>>12576192 Looks like a pain to sprite
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12576171 elephant should be cute. Hard to be cute without any facial features at all.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
>>12576197 >>12576202 >>12576209 As I suspected. Do you think I should remove the shell pieces altogether, or perhaps just remove the tiny pieces?
Anonymous
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>>12576221 If you're gonna have pieces, they should be huge chunks
Anonymous
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>>12576213 Yeah I like this idea much more, thanks.
Anonymous
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>>12576221 Keep the fragmented idea, but have a few larger pieces, forming the basic structure of the wing, i.e shoulder piece upper wing mid wing etc.
Anonymous
>>12576221 It can have pieces, they just need to be bigger than that. Pic somewhat related.
Anonymous
>>12576274 Rupy... the generation that overly designed legendaries happened....
Anonymous
>>12576289 Not gonna disagree, but they did have some cool things going for them.
My point is can't have eye-sized rubble.
Anonymous
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>>12576192 Tone it way, way down. The rocks are a good idea, but they should be bigger and not as numerous.
Anonymous
>>12576334 Don't worry, I understand, It's just I cant bear looking at any legendaries arts Ho-Oh... Call me old fashioned but I'd take a Zapdos over past legendaries any day.
Anonymous
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>>12576289 they weren't OVER-designed, as they did look good
Anonymous
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>>12576355 I used to think they were the most "legendary" looking, with the arcane rune looking tattoo things. But yeah, they could have been toned down a tad. All those spikes, all those edges. Still think they're probably a good base to use, just with some discretion.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
Alright, got a few versions of the shell chunks for you guys. Which one do you prefer?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12576446 Medium or none.
Try making a version with the "zippers" looking more like rock
Anonymous
>>12576446 Medium looks good to me.
Anonymous
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>>12576446 Try constraining yourslef.
Less is more
Anonymous
>>12576289 nah, it was definitely IV that broke the camel's back. III was fine to me, it's my second favorite gen
Anonymous
>>12576593 IV had megazords, V had a chicken with a jet turbine butt.
No one wins in that contest.
Anonymous
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/r/ing XY style box art with V and P using either quetz form
Anonymous
>>12573744 The Fire Branch Evo is too canine. We have enough dogs as is, it could use a more monstrous appearance.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
>>12576522 >>12576543 Medium it is then. I'll be away for a few hours though, got some stuff to do, but I'll probably be back later tonight.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12574808 how come you cant see the bottom of the river?
Anonymous
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>>12575463 >Llarona I think you mean LLORONA
Anonymous
Anonymous
Experimenting with glows for Lumishroom. What's your favorite?
Anonymous
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>>12576932 Upper right. Subtle, but noticeable.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Top right it is, then. If no one has any objections, I'm going to update it on the wiki.
Nondell 4983-5420-9227 !PJ.OdWT5NU
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>>12575101 Great improvement.
Anonymous
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Tempted to draw something after a game of LoL.
Anonymous
>>12575101 also repostin a splice from yesterday
Anonymous
>>12577268 still pic related is superior
Anonymous
>>12576881 Because it would be a bitch to sprite?
Can you provide a pokemon example? Preferably not B+W, but I'll take whatever you've got and try to make it work.
Anonymous
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Personally I'm fine with any of the new Flairees designs.
Anonymous
>>12576793 Hurricanine and chihaha are dogs, kobold is an ambigious wolf, it's not like the 54 birds we have
Anonymous
>>12577268 Don't think that's how legs work.
Anonymous
>>12576401 I love everything except those walls... they're killing me.
Anonymous
>>12577494 What about them? How can I improve it?
Anonymous
>>12577534 I'm wondering if the battlements on top of them are working, it makes it seem more like their in a giant snow fort rather than a building. maybe a different style on the top of the walls?
Anonymous
>>12577603 >it makes it seem more like their in a giant snow fort rather than a building Isn't that the damn point?
Anonymous
>>12576702 IV is what stopped me from playing pokemon. I hear BW2 is good though
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12577701 I mean more along the lines that they're boring to look at when you get up to where Foster is.
Anonymous
>>12577736 I do agree that foster's area is a bit dry, but the idea is that the place is literally one bit snow fort. Or at least a snow fort built inside of a building.
Anyone have suggestions on how to jazz up the top area? Just thought of adding the round tip thing like it has outside. Can try that later
Anonymous
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>>12577703 That's funny since IV saved the series.
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12577316 That humanface is really starting to bother me.
Anonymous
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>>12577843 Nice.
>>12577812 Rightnow i'm working on an animated shoreline. Not that we need it atm, but it's fun and challenging. Not the most smooth thing in the world, but I'm trying to cut down on frames. 9 different frames atm
Terra !4dLvBoNE..
>>12574432 Why would you want him on fire?
>>12574419 No I mean when you hurt your hand.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
>>12574851 >>12574917 thanks
>>12576881 yeah, we just dont have the tiles.
>>12574922 I was actually thinking, the protags house should be two stories huh? especially do to the large family.
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12577922 Ah. Well, he doesn't draw as regularly as SZ and I, so I don't think it would have hindered him as much. He would still be able to type. He's sleeping now. I hope he talks more today.
Anonymous
>>12574917 >>12577934 Dude's right. Here is the ice with more shadows.
Anonymous
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>>12576812 >>12575758 if thats what you're going for, theres a good idea of it there. your wings are far too large for a spriter to work with anyway, and the rubble just kinda makes it busy.
Try making the spine (or, bone?) of the wings out of the shell thing, and then leave it at that, also make them smaller because fuck that wingspan is too damn high
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
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>>12578037 sweet, I'll put this in in just a sec
Anonymous
>>12573947 I'm going to release a ROM copy with this message and the better water starters from way back when and it will be the more popular one for it. Just you try to stop me, you anonymous pricks.
Anonymous
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>>12578129 No one really gives a shit what you do, so go ahead.
Anonymous
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>>12575329 Definitely adds excitement to the sprite.
Anonymous
>>12578129 And blackjack, and hookers!
Anonymous
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>>12578205 This actually the first time that overused joke made me laugh, good one.
Anonymous
>>12576401 It's supposed to be a daycare center. This is clearly not a daycare. The wiki is really explicit about this.
>He runs a daycare for preschool children in his gym and saves people in trouble around the icy roads of the mountain. His staff are care workers; your battles are surrounded by children and blackboards showing status effects and type advantages. Anonymous
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>>12576446 Large, definitely. It's a more dramatic display and can be carried over into the sprite. The medium just looks like a mess.
Anonymous
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>>12578264 That gym design was never final.
Anonymous
>>12578264 Has that been voted on? Because not everything on the wiki is explicit cannon and that would be one hell of a boring gym.
The snow fort stays true to his nature of taking care of kids and giving them a place to play, is obviously ice themed just like he is, and also serves as a cool gym to battle through.
Anonymous
>>12577354 How about the kobold being... a kobold.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
>>12578264 I think he should have a daycare center right next door, and he lets the kids from there go train in his gym
Anonymous
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Can we have it that Fosterville has few adults because so many of them work in the coal mines next town over?
Anonymous
>>12578335 Kobolds themselves don't have a specific look
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12578318 It's hardly a pokemon game without a daycare center, a basics tutorial classroom, or a first gym. Getting them all in the same place creates interesting design possibilities. This snow fort thing is a result of minimal effort. The space is very samey, the color pallette is practically monochrome and there is no puzzle or challenge or even an assymetrical path. It's boring. It's a really boring gym. The whole point of this project is to go above the minimum and show what could be done with a mainline pokemon game. Even Misty's fucking gym was more interesting than this one.
Anonymous
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>>12578349 This. Jesus newfags pls.
Terra !4dLvBoNE..
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>>12577943 Never said the hand. I said a body part. Maybe he got shot in the knee and cant walk or something.
Anonymous
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>>12578360 how about a cutebold then
Anonymous
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>>12578376 The daycare was never supposed to be a pokemon daycare and this FIRST gym is more interesting than every first gym in pokemon so far
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12578376 The whole idea owas for him to have a daycare for children. Like, a kindergarten. People just got it wrong once and it continued.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12578423 Don't see why he can't just have a kiddaycare next door. Shoehorning it into the gym is interesting on paper, but there are just so many more interesting ways to go.
Or even just make them attatched, like the museum/normal gym in BW.
Gym posted above could just be the back room.
Anonymous
>>12578408 Kanto had 7 bird lines and 151 species, and we have 11 bird lines and 229 species.
Anonymous
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>>12578408 >implying owls are birds Anonymous
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>>12578376 >Getting them all in the same place creates interesting design possibilities. Putting them in the same place makes cherens gym.
Anonymous
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>>12578462 Wow. That's actually a really good point.
Maybe just having them all lumped together brings it to people attention more.
Anonymous
>>12578462 >Pidgey >Spearow >Farfetch'd >Doduo >??? >??? >??? Anonymous
You guys are just making excuses again. You really haven't confronted the major problems of the first gym.
Anonymous
>>12578462 I said this many times but why the fuck are people on /vp/ so autistic about birds, this is the only pokemon community I know that does this.
Anonymous
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>>12578497 Legendary birds
Anonymous
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>>12578456 Well, I am fine with that. Just pointing out that "daycare" in his case was supposed to be a human daycare.
Anonymous
>>12578497 he included the legends.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12578519 but muh kappa/platypus
Anonymous
>>12578519 >Implying Platypi are birds Anonymous
>>12578500 It's weird because the Autists hate birds with a passion while the Aspies love birds.
Anonymous
>>12578528 >implying psyduck is a platypus Anonymous
Hey guys, do we have a water/ground type? If not we should make a mudpie water/ground pokemon.
Anonymous
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>>12578538 I thought that was a "lel i trol u" type thing.
Anonymous
>>12578538 >2013 >still thinking Aspergers is a thing do you even DSM update?
Anonymous
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>>12578550 You know I just learned that an autism causing gene is named after sonic the hedgehog yesterday?
Anonymous
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>>12578538 Well i better see a doctor.
Anonymous
>>12578499 This is actually the first time I've ever heard repitition, colors, or design elements brought into question. Usually people just shout about it being a brock clone and nothing gets done.
I welcome this constructive criticism.
Not sure minimal colors is that big a deal, with it being a giant fort made of snow, but I'm open to suggestions.
As for the puzzle, once again I'd like to stress that this is just one possible design. I already posted a hidden snow man deal at
>>12576401 Had another idea about there being several snow men blocking the path, and you had to pick the one with/without the trainer to get throw unbattled (or battle him anyway), but I'm still trying to fine tune that one.
And I'll totally cope to being a fan of repetition and symmetry. Also open to suggestions on that.
Anonymous
>>12578539 Duckbilled Platypus.
And please people, lets not mock easy oversights. I'd like to think we're better than that.
Anonymous
>>12578581 It was only a brock clone you put the fucking diagram up there that had a single path with only two fucking trainers.
Anonymous
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>>12578595 They both look like they've seen some shit.
Anonymous
>>12578600 There you are!
I missed you yesterday.
Yes, the first draft of the gym was very similar to brocks in that it had two trainers, stairs, a leader, and probably more things that I overlooked.
Please, let's argue about that instead of trying to fine tune the newest versions.
Anonymous
>>12578642 You could've easily just defused by saying that you've moved far past that and asking for actual suggestion instead of antagonizing me by continually reminding me of your awful, lazy first draft.
Anonymous
Couldn't figure out a way to add in the mottled blue-grey patches from the sprite. When I tried dithering it like the other mushroom evos it just looked wrong.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12578692 Why are you so upset? There's no reason for hostility.
Anonymous
>>12578733 You missed the point. You shouldn't have responded by saying "Yes I made a brock clone for a first draft" I'm willing to bet you still want to be that way.
Anonymous
Please excuse me because I am not an artist. But this is a really interesting first gym. It has a puzzle (the trainers you defeat can give you hints about which snowman at the end is the right one), two interesting movement elements, multiple unique scenery features, and implements the ideas of daycare/kindergarten, tutorial basics, and a pokemon gym.
Anonymous
>>12578777 let's try to post this again
Anonymous
>>12578750 Why are you so angry that the first draft was shit?
Anonymous
>>12578784 Holy fuck thats overly complicated and ridiculous. Reminds me more of Brycen and less of like, Falkner or something.
Anonymous
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>>12578777 >>12578784 I don't like at all honestly it looks needlessly complex for a first gym. It's not a crime to separate the day care,school, and gym.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
>>12578784 It looks like a nice idea, but holy shit thats complex for the first gym.
Anonymous
>>12578792 Because he was so unwilling to change it.
Anonymous
>>12578793 It is neither. It's making gyms into interesting areas and encounters instead of two rooms and a TM at the end. Everything about this project is supposed to be Pokemon, But Done Right. Dropping the ball on the very first gym is idiotic.
Anonymous
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>>12578806 But he did change it
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12578804 >for a first gym Why are we trying to make any of our gyms lame? Out of tradition?
Anonymous
>>12578548 Anyone? Seems pretty cool.
Anonymous
>>12578820 But the first gym isn't lame.
Anonymous
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>>12578820 There's a huge difference between lame and simple
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12578820 This. It should still be simple, but more than a room with 2 trainers.
the snowman idea is great
Anonymous
>>12578827 It's lame as shit. There is literally nothing happening. Someone took the kind of interesting idea "hidden trainers" and put in the smallest bit of effort to tick off that checkbox. Even is a snow fort it is lame as fuck.
Anonymous
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>>12578809 >Defying the formula of the game is idiotic No we're making a Pokemon game, like other pokemon games.
In ANY RPG the first dungeon or two are simple and not overly complex. That design is a late-gym design, not first.
Think of it this way. If we start out complex, we'll have entire cities to build later, and it'll make the final demo EVEN LONGER to come out. I'd rather have the demo launched next week than next month.
Anonymous
>>12578809 This screams "let's put everything we can there!". Gyms are rarely this big and long and this is the frst one. In the picture I can see like, 10-12 trainers? Please compare it to gyms in other games.
Anonymous
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>>12577405 can someone draw this properly?
Anonymous
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>>12578836 I completely disagree, and your gym SCREAMS tryhard to be honest.
Anonymous
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>>12577405 Oh, it's the meloetta smirkear one again.
Anonymous
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>>12578826 Read the OP.
>>12573628 >>All submissions are closed at this time! Sorry, but we couldn't take pokemon submissions right until we release.
Anonymous
If you guys are trying to crap out on the very first gym we have a chance to design I really hate to think how pathetic the rest of them are going to be.
>>12578855 It is four rooms and one optional battle. The rooms do not have to be huge at all. There are maximum six battles before the gym leader, and with most gym trainers having 1-3 pokemon that is nothing.
There is nothing here that would be difficult to implement or overly busy to look at.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>only two trainers >brock clone >four trainers >wtf ruin the difficulty scale >no puzzle >too simple >attach daycare >too complex
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12578889 I'd do it like the museum.
Daycare out front, Gym in the back. I think four rooms is a lot, especially when I think the museum is the only that has more than one.
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
>>12578901 yes
>>12578889 I apoligize, but It just feels like too much for the first gym. But my thoughts when i saw it told me that I'd love to see your take on the circus gym.
Anonymous
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>>12578936 >I'd love to see your take on the circus gym. Took the words right out of my mouth.
Anonymous
>>12578889 >if you guys don't make the first gym SO HARDCORE I'd hate to think how pathetic the seven gyms intended to be harder are going to be What you think we'll never get a bigger gym with more trainers? Of course we will. Later in the game = more dex discovered = larger number of potential 'mons i.e., stronger trainers with larger teams and more of them.
>maximum of six battles First battle
2 preschoolers + 3 caretakers
4 motherfucking students entirely irrelevant to the gym and should be in another building and not opponents except maybe 1
At least 5 in the final room
Foster himself
Thats 16. Sixteen trainers. what the fuck is wrong with you
Anonymous
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>>12578931 This guy has it straight.
Also make sure we have a decent lineup of trainers/snowmen.
Anonymous
>>12578979 One caretaker
One preschooler
One (optional) caretaker
One teacher
0-3 snowmen [three trainers, two empty, one button]
Every NPC is not a trainer battle you idiot. I marked which ones are trainers.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12579059 Im going by the numbers you had in each room.
1, 2, 3(optional), 4, and (5+ trainers).
Anonymous
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>>12579086 Oh I think those are just the number youve fought thus far. My bad, i misinterpreted it. However, your design is still far too busy and complex for the first 20 minutes of the game.
Anonymous
>>12578979 The puzzles can be harder, the battles can be longer, the pokemon could be tougher, the gym can be bigger. It doesn't mean that if we have four rooms in the first gym -- which is very very little compared to some of the gyms in even the first generation -- the rest of the gyms can't be as fun and as interesting. We should be trying to make EVERY gym as memorable as possible. Every single one.
Anonymous
>>12578931 There are tons of gyms that have more than two rooms. Basically all of them.
Anonymous
>>12579059 that's still seven, to which his point still holds
Anonymous
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>>12579059 Still fucking lot.
Anonymous
>>12579103 >which is very very little compared to some of the gyms in even the first generation No one in Johto, no one in kanto ... Well Lt. surge kind of had 2 rooms but not really. Most every gym had exactly 1 room.
Anonymous
>>12579123 Bit fuzzy on black and white, but I'd like to challenge that. I don't think there were any at least in the first three generations that were more than one.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
The shell remnants are as good as they are going to get now, I think. Not too many small details, but enough to suggest he broke out of his stone shell.
Anonymous
>>12579129 You don't have to do all of them at once. And seven trainers if you go out of your way to fight seven trainers (most will fight four which includes the gym leader) is super easy at the beginning when your opponents will be all low level, mostly spamming growl, and the battle will be over in one or two fights. There's also the question of if we want the game to be as easy as Gamefreak's. Which I really don't think we do.
Anonymous
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>>12579161 Scratch that, some had two floors. But still, saying every gym had more than one room is just untrue.
>>12579129 Pic related, the final gym
Anonymous
>>12579181 >super easy at the beginning when your opponents will be all low level, mostly spamming growl What's the point of these filler opponents when we can just the four trainer set up and actually make the fights interesting
Anonymous
>>12579145 Surge, Koga (invisible walls everywhere), Sabrina, Blaine, arguably Erika's, and Veridian's gym were all multiple rooms with non-linear paths. That's just generation one. This trend continues over all the generations.
Anonymous
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>>12579204 To reward players that go out of their way to explore with more money and experience for their team.
Anonymous
>>12579145 Do you just not know what a room is or
Anonymous
>>12579163 Dude, you've got skills, but even on HD TV pokemon don't have that level of detail.
Anonymous
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>>12578705 prefer the more bluish purple of the old one. Feel like the old one just looks more like a ghost type.
Anonymous
>>12579283 apparently not.
I was thinking anything you had to physically exit to reach the next room.
Which is stupid, because by that logic Pokemon mansion has like 3 rooms.
Cheerfully withdrawn
Anonymous
>>12579163 Try making a version without the rocks and make the rings on his body look more rock-like
Anonymous
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>>12578901 Yay. But where's the blue moustache?
Anonymous
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>>12579404 seems pretty spot on to me
Gunvarrel !Oq/9NMk1yg
So I'm not 100% sold on the Aquilor sprites we have right now, so I decided to give one a shot. Unfortunately, since I am incapable of drawing birds, I copied the art pose. Thoughts?
Disregard the creepy lack of eyes >>12579404 >>12578901 Something about how perfectly shaped the eye coloring is bothers me. I don't think there's really a way to fix that though. Other than that, pretty good!
Anonymous
>>12579478 WARQUILA NEEDS KNEES
Anonymous
>>12579478 They seem kind of fat.
Anonymous
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>>12579244 HOW THE FUCK IS A MAZE MULTIPLE ROOMS ITS NOT EVEN REALLY A MAZE ITS ALL IN ONE SQUARE ROOM
>>12579356 Okay yeah thats totally multiple rooms.
Erika's gym is a room with a bunch of trees in the middle. My god
>>12579244 is the most retarded person ever
Sketcher
>>12579103 >We should be trying to make EVERY gym as memorable as possible You are confusing "let's make every gym super-duper hard and complex and try to jam everything in there" with "memorable". Simplicity and progression are key, especially since we are making a Pokemon game. We want to add our own spin on it but still keep it referenced to the source.
If every gym is a clusterfuck of objects, none will be memorable and all with be messy. If we start simple and progress to complex, it will feel as if we've actually progressed from that first, small gym into the big league. More powerful gym leaders should have more powerful and more complex gyms. Not the first gym that is part of a daycare and run by a friendly man who resembles Santa.
If we start off complex, every gym will be monotone since we can't build up.
Put all of that stuff in the side building.
Cheren's gym in BW2 is a good example of how I was thinking the gym should be set up, except with the daycare/orphanage on the side.
>>12579478 Is this any better?
Also, the Aquilor sprite's looking excellent. I think the shading makes it look a bit too round, though?
Anonymous
Gunvarrel !Oq/9NMk1yg
>>12579518 If I could draw birds I would fix him but I can't. I'm sorry.
>>12579530 Yeah, they do, but I have no idea how to accurately show Aquilor's design and make a decent transition between the first and last stage. You think there's a way to salvage the sprite I made or should a whole new one be made?
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
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>>12579316 There is a lot of detail, but actually not as much as it seems. A lot of the perceived detail comes directly from the roughness of the strokes (this is just the sketch, not the final lineart), with the exceptions of the cracks in the stone pieces, which can easily be reduced.
>>12579375 At first he had no rock shards, but people wanted to see some remnants of the stone form's shell in this form. And as for the rings, I'm not quite sure how to make them look more rock like without straying too far from the stone form and from the original space form design.
>>12579478 Aside from the lack of thighs and knees on the last one, and that the middle one looks like he's retracting his head into his body, they look fine. Wings look good, body shape looks good, heads look great.
>>12579567 Looks great, man.
Anonymous
>>12577843 hey, now its no longer beezlemon
Worldwibe !!Ss4pOUddSQJ
>>12579576 Top lel
>>12579601 Maybe I'll try my hand at it, should I?
Gunvarrel !Oq/9NMk1yg
>>12579567 Yes!
And thanks! Which part in particular looks too round? Or is it the sprite as a whole?
>>12579576 Yessss.
Gunvarrel !Oq/9NMk1yg
Sketcher
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>>12579621 To be honest, I'm not entirely sure why. I might try playing around with it a bit myself, and if I can't find anything then it might just be me.
Anonymous
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>>12579618 Good. Now you can finally stop making that odd connection.
Anonymous
Whoops, looks like I moved on a bit quickly. Sketcher, mind uploading your updated Perishroom to the wiki?
Anonymous
>>12579767 This line has quickly become one of my favorites.
Anonymous
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>>12579567 We can show the progression into the big leagues easily by having more pokemon per team, more advanced tactics for the trainers, more complicated puzzles... this one is a slide, a chalkboard, and a brief memory puzzle before the gym leader. It's really not that advanced or complicated. We can do more with it than have a monochrome, simple path with nothing to look at.
Anonymous
>>12579767 I think you made him too psued-3D. If this was 3rd gen it'd fit, but the old one fits 4th gen more.
Anonymous
>>12579767 I drew this crayon Rocano yesterday if that helps.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12579794 I actually don't like it all that much, but hopefully that doesn't show in my spritework. It'd be an insult to the project if I did less than my best work regardless of my personal opinion.
Anonymous
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>>12579826 It looks like you had fun with the effects, at least.
Anonymous
>>12579810 Okay, here it is without that one additional patch of shading.
Anonymous
>>12579767 perfect. you are doing arceus's work anon, i wish there was a name i could call you by
join us. one of us one of us one of us Anonymous
>>12579836 I hate it. Too flat. Go back to the other one.
Anonymous
>>12579847 >>12579836 dont listen to him anon
Anonymous
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>>12579843 Heh, this is like the third time someone's said I was doing arceus' work, was that you each time?
I don't think I have a thick enough skin to tripfag, though. Or that what I'm doing is really that special...
Anonymous
>>12579864 But it's really flat. It has no curve to it anymore.
Anonymous
>>12579836 Better, but the eye still looks a little weird. I think the outline might be too light?
Anonymous
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>>12579908 I like the old one better, but dude, the shading is exactly the same. Any flatness problem is shared by both.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
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>>12579767 That looks absolutely amazing. You're definitely capturing the official art style of Mr. Sugimori.
Oh, and the version with the highlight looks better, imo.
Anonymous
>>12579908 How about a compromise? A tiny bit of dithered highlight and a bit more shadow to round out the front?
Anonymous
>>12579908 rather than add another shade, id say move the further eye up or the closer eye down because its currently skewing the perspective.
one pixel down actually worked perfect i think
Anonymous
>>12579991 Now the dither just looks like a compression error.
Anonymous
>>12579944 >>12580011 >>12580026 Tweaked the eyes and shading some more. Do I have the right idea yet?
Anonymous
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>>12575306 i likened it as a ally not a trainer. depends on you opinion. imo ?, !. wild boy, mask girl and mud buddy are potential allies. as previously discussed with numbers of allies/quest npcs you meet and help you battle bad guys(easier to beat with allies) and post game if it's 7 allies or 15 to make a nice tourney. (way to earn massive money postgame and a way to gain exp from trainer battles when all plotlines are done)
Anonymous
>>12580073 it makes it look as if his foreground eye hole is slowly falling off of his face
Anonymous
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>>12579864 the best Snogre ever
Anonymous
>>12580073 well now the eyes need to be looking bottem left.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12580133 Can we keep him looking out of the corner? looks cute.
Anonymous
>>12578705 make sure your not adding too many colors. many a sprite have been touched up without the limits originally instilled. lucito line........
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12580133 Here it is looking forward, but why would it need to look down? It's tiny. And I'm not fond of it looking forward, it makes it look way too googly-eyed and cutesy.
>>12580179 I always keep an eye on the palette, no worries.
Anonymous
>>12580212 it needs to be looking at the enemy pokemon. somewhere between
>>12580191 and
>>12580212 would probably be perfect
>>12580191 also seemed to add a color, which it kinda needed
Anonymous
You can't name a pokemon after an uncorrupted and common real word, especially when it's part of an evolution line where everyone else's name is a pun on that very same word.
Raptor
>>12580359 im really not sure why we havent changed it yet. Ive been calling it caraschist for a while now even though i was against it at first. Im gonna change it on the wiki if thats alright with the rest of yous
Anonymous
>>12580359 But a joule is a well known measurement of electricity, and "nox" obviously comes from "noxious". No one knows what "schist" is. Why that word in particular? Carastone or Caramohs works better.
Anything but Caraschrist.
Anonymous
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>>12580390 i find the name a tad long. carasist maybe?
i'm still waiting on a survey for the argibi from argibiv. (loose the v and make the tail more indigo)
Anonymous
>>12580390 I'm tired of the wiki wars on that article. You can try.
>>12580414 Because of point one and point three.
Sketcher
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>>12579767 Sure I can.
And those look fantastic!
Anonymous
>>12580414 I wouldn't say it's WELL known.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12580435 >>12580474 A lot more than a "schist" which also looks like "Christ".
I agree with changing the name but not Caraschist. Points 1 and 2 are "It starts with cara-!" And it isn't a pun. I like the idea, but
>>12580359 is going at it completely wrong and a different word should be used.
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>>12580172 I think this one works fine.
Anonymous
>>12580527 I'd like Terrapace, but that breaks the pattern.
Anonymous
Anonymous
How's this? The pose is a little bit more interesting and it's looking at the opponent.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12580580 STILL TOO CLOSE TO CHRIST WE DONT WANT JESUS BUG
Anonymous
>>12580527 Point 1 is schist contains many of the same sounds as -pace. And Point 3 is that it's a really advanced pun that contains information about the pokemon itself.
Anonymous
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>>12580580 >>12580549 I like these
and not just cuz one of them has my trip in it Anonymous
>>12580609 It contains the same s sound and thats it. Its not a sound shared between evos so that point is rendered irrelevant.
>advanced pun What are we, Golduck?
Anonymous
>>12580627 There's nothing wrong with having a good pun.
Anonymous
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>>12580627 Carapace and caraschist has only one sound different. A p becomes a s
Anonymous
Carapaha? Close enough to carapace but actually ground-related.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paha_%28landform%29 Anonymous
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>>12580695 what about Capich?
Anonymous
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>>12580559 i like this a lot
Anonymous
>>12580664 I like this too.
>>12580654 >thinking a pun has to be obscure to be good. Arcanine is a good pun. Bulbasaur is not. Neither are obscure.
Ho-oh is a good name. Seel is not.
Anonymous
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>>12580695 What does it tell us, though?
Anonymous
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>>12580725 It's not good because it's obscure. It's good because it tells you so much about the pokemon.
Anonymous
here's this terrible thing
Anonymous
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>>12580820 lego dragon!
that being said, i kinda like it Anonymous
Cara-crete?
Anonymous
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>>12580852 I like Caracrete.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>changing its name in the wiki before anything has been decided
Anonymous
>>12580894 I changed it back already so its a moot point
Anonymous
>>12580894 This is the same guy that thinks his gym is objectively better. He's far past the point of being a faggot.
Anonymous
>>12580931 just noticed that. Sorry for being a faggot myself.
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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>>12580894 >>12580931 >>12580947 It can be surveyed with the next name survey! Just make a collective list of all your punny cara- names and we'll add it in.
Anonymous
Guys guys I redesigned one of the pokemon line, no need for survey because I know it's awesome, just put it in the dex already
Anonymous
>>12581108 Surskit.jpg
That WAS what the joke was, right? Anonymous
>>12581108 >redesigning one of the best mons in the dex mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnope
Also we should merge it with the sub bug line
Anonymous
>>12581108 that evo is almost exactly what i wanted bug/dragon to look like. oh well
Anonymous
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>>12581144 yeah that was a joke (just look at that awful drawing), this line is just one of the best of the dex
Anonymous
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>>12580933 I am not Raptor.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12576401 i know this was posted awhile ago but i want to comment
i think it would work a bit better if the snowmen were blocking the way, then when you select one it will break reveling a trainer or nothing
im assuming the intent now is to have the trainer pop out if you try to go forward
also what is the deal with the two at the end? double battle? seems to much for first gym, i think having a max of 2 and min of 0 trainers is good
Anonymous
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>>12581180 >Not wanting Barney the imaginary Beetlesaur. Anonymous
>>12581235 any way we could merge that idea with this?
Anonymous
>>12581235 >Max of two trainers Kirn pls
Anonymous
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>>12581153 we should merge ur mum with my dick
Anonymous
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>>12581272 That was always a shit idea. Fuck off.
Anonymous
To continue my crayon drawing (
>>12579816 ) I drew crayon Argibi. Mosquito prevo is next.
Anonymous
>>12581235 Wanted to do that, think I've just realized how to iron out the kinks. Will put it on my list.
In the meantime, here is low tide.
Anonymous
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>>12581272 I think if you can do that without the moving trainers it at least stands a chance.
Anonymous
>>12581339 I'd love to see the wet sand last a little longer after the wave pulls out.
Otherwise it's great!
Anonymous
>>12581235 >i think it would work a bit better if the snowmen were blocking the way, then when you select one it will break reveling a trainer or nothing >im assuming the intent now is to have the trainer pop out if you try to go forward this idea has been mentioned
>also what is the deal with the two at the end? double battle? seems to much for first gym, i think having a max of 2 and min of 0 trainers is good 1) we want our game to be at a higher level of difficulty.
2) That being said, I thin the best option is to have 4 trainers, 1 with a ~lv.6-8 mon, 1 with two ~lv.5-7 mons, and a double battle with 2 ~lv.4-6 mons. Then we can set Foster's mons at ~8-14 depending on how many he has. I don't think any of that sounds too intimidating... as long as you don't fuck up and chose the grass starter.
Dog !StaIqxr34U
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>>12579163 aw yes that looks great
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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z13.invisionfree.com/ Pokemon_Gen_VP/index.php?showtopic=308 Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
Half the lineart done. It's getting late here though, so I'll continue on him tomorrow.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12581339 This looks amazing.
Could you put like a little seashell or starfish there when the wave goes away?
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12581272 i also like this one, it also makes it not required that you fight both
but honestly when i fight a dude i dont expect 2 random snowmen to fall down, just seems unintuitve
>>12581328 not that its bad or anything
but why are you making these?
>>12581339 i love it, id make the dark spots in the sand stay at its highest tide and then start fading when the water is like half way back, and then they both hit low tide at same time (if that makes sense)
>>12581312 fine add a third double door
>>12581368 its not that i think it should be easier, just having your first double battle right before the first gym leader seems a bit much
unless were introducing double battles before this
Anonymous
>>12581391 >but why are you making these? Fanart I guess, I'm also kind of bored. Some people like crayon drawings.
Anonymous
>>12581378 Do one without the rocks
Anonymous
>>12581391 >unless were introducing double battles before this maybe Doucherado throws out 2 mons at once (because "fuck you, this ain't no tournament")
Anonymous
>>12581412 look earlier in the thread
Anonymous
>>12581391 >double battle With each of them having one mon, I didn't really think it was that big a deal. I'm fine if people don't want them there. But I think we need to vote on how difficult/complex the first gym needs to be first.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12581413 oh thats brilliant
>>12581435 i just remember having my first double battle and going OMGWHATYES, to me its a big moment in the game
id hate for that to overshadow or be overshadowed by your first gym
Clash !BMy7CLasHA
Anonymous
>>12581403 I think they're cute, I can imagine Foster's kids drawing them to send as thank you cards to donors.
Sugimori Style Drawfag !!C9l4eH1vDuZ
>>12581412 As
>>12581419 said, I did multiple versions without rocks earlier, but people felt he became too disconnected from the stone form without them, so I stuck with the rocks.
>>12581485 Oh hey Clash, I remember you from the /vp/ Creates A Fakemon threads! Cool seeing you again.
Anyway, I'm off to bed now. See you all later!
Anonymous
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>>12581378 Lookin good but just forget about the cracks. There's a million of em and it makes it looks busier than it should, they don't look very good and won't be present on the sprite anyway.
Anonymous
>>12581485 >>12581517 I'll continue than! They're fun to make and really easy. I'm doing Mosquito prevo next, but after that I'll take requests.
Anonymous
>>12581563 requesting Loneleaf
Clash !BMy7CLasHA
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>>12581539 Hi hi, I haven't been feeling very good the past few days, but normally I am all through the threads. Been seeing all your work and it looks amazing! Great job, and sleep well~
Anonymous
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>>12581539 Then give the "rock" in
>>12575564 lineart too
Anonymous
>>12581485 I like you
r big ass Anonymous
>>12581471 Oh yeah, I by no means what that to be your first double battle. That's definitely too much.
>>12581386 >little seashell or starfish That does sound nice. I'd need to think abou how to tackle that... it would need it's own set so that it wasn't repeated each time.
Peeps want wet sand longer still?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12581590 Then you're gonna love me
Anonymous
>>12581593 I like the idea of Ricardo surprising you with a double battle.
bonus points if its your first fight with him. it adds to the "wow I wasn't expecting that" factor
Anonymous
>>12581624 >implying you can be bigger than clash >>12581593 So tileanon designs gyms?
Anonymous
>>12581638 Then again isn't the first trainer battle always your rival? Do we want to keep that tradition?
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12581593 what you have is the wet sand going at the same speed as the water goes back (top)
but i think it should stay at max and then quickly go back (bottom)
either way its great
Anonymous
>>12581577 So next will be the mosquito 1, than Loneleaf...any other requests for crayon? Preferably prevos, they're easier and cuter (better for crayon). I'll probably do them tonight, I was going to go to a baseball game but it rained out.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12581660 the starters!
and Doppole
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12581659 or alternatively
have the wet sand fade out while perfectly still
rather than sliding back
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12581638 It would also make a good excuse for giving Ricardo a second mon (since the current, though not definite, plan is to have him steal a starter from your BFF) it makes sense for him to have had a pokemon of his own before recieving a starter, and if he has two pokemon it makes sense for him to use both at once.
Later in the game we can have him move back and forth from doing single and double battles with the explanation that he's changing up his strategy to take you down.
Clash !BMy7CLasHA
>>12581590 >>12581642 I don't.. Why you... B-baka!
>>12581660 Erycoon? Anonymous
>>12581660 baby penguin!
>>12581642 I'm not one to argue, but It is one of my most noticable features. And I'm Puerto Rican.
Anonymous
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>>12581642 Tileanon does more than Tileanon is comfortable admitting. Prolly why I do so much anonymously.
>>12581659 right now it is pretty much a delay, so it's dark where the water was a few seconds ago. I'm not sure it makes sense that it speeds up drying near the end.
Anonymous
>>12581654 >Then again isn't the first trainer battle always your rival? Do we want to keep that tradition? The first battle can be against your gender flip protag who doubles as your child hood friend... Your second (and first double) battle can be against Ricardo after he steals your friends pokemon.
perhaps your friend was on their way home to heal their pokemon when they were attacked by Doucherado, since they're pokemon were already weekend by your fight it was easy for Douche to take the mon. You blame yourself and vow to catch Doucherado and reclaim those mons. Chalenging and then defeating Doucherado, even after he cheats by pulling a double battle, is the embarrassment that turns him against you and causes him to fight you at every opportunity. Anonymous
>>12581791 Iirc, we wtill havent determined if your opposing protag will be in the game, Though I want her to be, with the same role as lyra or may
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12581791 i posted an idea awhile ago that you get ambused by an avalynx while delivering mangroves bag
inside are 3 starters and you fight him off
you appologize to mangrove and he lets you keep one saying one would be for you anyway
Draik !sgg1MEH.f2
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12581791 >Even after being defeated Ricardo still manages to run off with your friends pokemon, >You return home having failed to help your friend. >The Professor mentions that there's still 1 pokemon left and gives it to your friend to train. >Your friend dedicates their self to training a kick ass team so they never have to wory about being taken advantage of by a more powerful trainer >You get to battle them again with an Uber team in the post game. Anonymous
>>12581825 I like the idea that was floated around about your father being a professor that teaches at a university in one of the bigger towns, he's old friends with Mangrove and has set it up that you have an internship working with Mangrove to compile a pokedex, you want to do your best to make your dad proud...
Anonymous
>>12581856 Always loved this idea.
Having 2 rivals.
Ricardo being the main rival that constantly challenges you and acts like a dock and then a minor rival who takes the league challenge with you. Like a better executed wally
Anonymous
Im working on a Caranox sprite, but im going to a movie. I'll be finishing it when i get home. if you want to finish it or fix or whatever go right ahead my pretties
Anonymous
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>>12581922 ALL ANYONE EVER DOES IS ARGUE. NOTHING EVER GETS DONE.
THIS PROJECT IS DEEEEEEEEAAAAAAADDDD.
good job anon
Anonymous
>>12581887 >Later you run into Foster after he shoos his kids away from you for throwing snowballs at you when you first get to town. >He notices that determined look in your eye and mentions that you should consider trying the League Challenge. >By the time you meet back up with your dad he sees how much you've grown on your own and tells you he's happy you're finding your own path in life. Anonymous
>>12581903 as long as they aren't a spastic waste of oxygen.
Anonymous
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>>12581403 >>12581391 Clearly, they're the official sugi art for the Retrodex.
Anonymous
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>>12581682 >>12581686 >>12581718 >>12581720 So I have
>Mosquito 1 >Loneleaf >Foliat >Kidling >Aguade >Doppole >Orret >Erycoon >Penglif to crayon draw. Don't be offended if your request is taken later than others, I'll probably take the easier ones first. I'll be sure to get them all though.
Anonymous
>>12581791 >The first battle can be against your gender flip protag SophiaXSimon OTP
Craynon or someone should draw some porn of them
being raped Anonymous
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>>12582042 >spastic waste of oxygen Sounds just like Barry!
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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>>12582091 SophiaxRicardo OTP
but not in a sexual way, I don't think... Anonymous
>>12581718 Post ass already.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
im just having fun doodeling crappy redesigns
Anonymous
>>12581953 Pokemon league spectator is still the best motivation
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12582141 Hey! Be subtle about it buddy you're giving me a bad name.
>bad name >anonymous I know..
Anonymous
>>12582148 I like Ash Ketchum too, but I think we're trying to be a little more original.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12582210 the one that's facing the proper direction.
Anonymous
>>12582144 Speaking of mons that need name changes. Erion should be changed to erindus or something.
Anonymous
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>>12582187 >implying a competent ash wouldnt be great Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
i drew the evo small just as a refrence, so pretend that the prevo is much smaller
>>12582222 i think he meant should the clouds go away or towards the player
and i say away so
>>12582210 top
Anonymous
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>>12582226 >erindus he certainly looks
herindus carlos.jpg Anonymous
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>>12578904 What about 3 trainers with trainer school/daycare in the front like Lenora's? Plus, the kids in front could offer optional battles/ go teehee we'll hide in the gym seek us and make hidden snowman make more sense
Anonymous
>>12582256 >dat prevo PERFECT, where the fuck have you been?
Anonymous
>>12582144 Gurren Lagann bodyface
Anonymous
>>12582256 Not the clouds, the eyes. The top one is facing the right way, but the bottom one is looking the right way.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12582256 gonna catch one and call it either ironman or tonystark
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12582278 ive been spriting
i havent drawn with a pencil in like half a year
>>12582286 oh you noticed did you
Anonymous
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
damnit i was really liking this and i cant figure out where to go with the bottom half
Anonymous
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>>12581366 Maybe I just need to get some pussy, or maybe im not the only one who thought something reading that.
Either way I need sex Anonymous
>>12582413 position the legs like picrelated, and make them slightly undersized from disuse (because it uses telekinesis to float around)
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12582478 its not the legs its the lower abdomen
im still working on it but i just need a better place to stick the legs on
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12582413 redrew it
this ones cleaner if anyone else wantes to try and finish it
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12582413 redrew it and messed with contrast
this ones cleaner if anyone else wantes to try and finish it
Anonymous
>>12582573 My mother's mantis.
Dia !7zfFcmVqWQ
>>12582626 I feel sorry for the hybrid life you must lead
Anonymous
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>>12582638 >implying he's not my mother's pet mantis Looks good in the gardens blends in very well.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12582278 i traced him on my computer
added some color
Anonymous
>>12582794 Cute but drop the lightning tail and add some +/- signs
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12582824 like i said im doing this purely for fun
i really dont care to try to perfect any of these
its all pure colors so you can edit it REALLY easily, so if you have ideas please go ahead
Anonymous
>>12582824 That would ruin the simplicity of the design
Anonymous
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>>12580820 I actually like this concept. Keep it coming
Anonymous
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>>12582913 >>12582855 U w0t m8 ill hok u n the gabber
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12582969 Uggh there is no need for that X
Anonymous
>>12582969 >>12582969 worst part of the design.
Erase the tail and it automatically improves by a minimum of 75%
Anonymous
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>>12582996 but it's teeth...
Anonymous
>>12583017 Erase the tail and it's magnemite.
Anonymous
>>12580359 Stupid question probably, but what are the numbers around the arrows for each pokemon?
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12583090 there the approval rating in %
notice anything with 66 green is approved
Anonymous
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>>12583114 Ah, ok that makes more sense. Thanks.
Anonymous
>>12583114 Don't hanhold the newfags.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12583149 if you dont teach them they will stay newfags and mess up our surveys
i would have said look on the wiki but i dont think the wiki says that
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
where can i post my poorly drawn rule 34 viipii
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12583166 this
a hundred times this
Anonymous
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>>12583060 >implying magnemite is the only floating head mon Anonymous
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12583294 i think you should just recolor the old one and give it your eyes
Anonymous
>>12583294 Smoke might be a little too white and not a solid plume
Anonymous
>>12583317 I wanted to match Rocano's smoke. Unless Volcoalder's smoke is supposed to be grungier than its prevo?
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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there i made it sfw
Anonymous
Changed the walls to the previous color scheme
Anonymous
>>12583334 Probably. I'd just 50/50 the two smokes.
Anonymous
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>>12583364 That blue looks too water-y (not that the walls look like water, just the color) and while its monotone as fuck originally, I think an Ice gym SHOULD be monotone. Just my $.02
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12583364 I like the light one, left.
also there is a random corner tile behind the snowman
Anonymous
>>12583364 so do the snowmen only attack if you interact with the, or when you walk in front of them? because even I think 3 double battles is too much.
Anonymous
>>12583393 It's a sectret passageway!!!1!
Nah, I just forgot to remove the piece I got the colors from.
Might makes some flags or something, just a little to break up the cyan.
Anonymous
>>12583381 Good suggestion, I like how that came out. The smoke blended in with the grey background I sprite on, though, so here's a screenshot on white.
Anonymous
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>>12583411 In that picture, the snowmen are just props.
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
>>12583424 The top wall going down the slide is disconnected, yet the walls are disconnected. Is it possible to connect the walls in the main area, too? It looks like there is a little corner-closet sort of thing behind each of the walls closest to the edges.
Anonymous
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>>12583411 They were put to block the line of sight from the trainers and imply the kids pelt them with snowballs.
There are other layout with kids in them, but this isn't one of them.
Anonymous
>>12583428 Im just saying in the art, he had a single plume of smoke instead of puffs, which makes more sense for a large volcanic vent, as opposed to a tiny single stone.
Anonymous
>>12583447 If you mean is that the sideways walls don't connect that's because it was meant to show that there are several floors, and that those walls are elevated.
I grabbed the wrong version, it might look clearer here where the buttress things reach farther.
>>12576401 Anonymous
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>>12583508 Threads probably sick of this gym today. I should have waited til later.
Anonymous
its just me or that eagle is wearing kamina glasses
Local Moose Friend !isnn/AUU0c
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>>12583508 Hmm. I understand now, but it still looks like a weird corner, hehe. Interpretation! I really like it, though.
>>12583529 Just you.
Anonymous
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>>12583529 Definitely just you.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12583529 >simons goggles >kaminas glasses >adult simons metaphysical glasses Anonymous
>>12583479 It was a single plume to begin with? I guess the shading broke it up some, is this what you wanted?
Anonymous
>>12583545 Goddammit Kirn stop that.
Anonymous
>>12577340 that's no excuse. It just looks like paint not water
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12583556 sorry i posted before reading you two
but seriously
>>12583166 Anonymous
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>>12583557 Can you see the bottom of a river in Platinum version?
Anonymous
>>12583529 No, it's just you. It's not like it's part of the concept or anything.
Anonymous
>>12583568 You're late mate.
Anonymous
ah good
Anonymous
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>>12583581 You don't know how respond to a post do you, newfag?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12583557 >because it would be a bitch to sprite I was kind of kidding. I've actually tried making it clear, with bad results.
What I was saying is if you provided me something to go off of I'd be happy to give it a go.
But I don't think the water is clear in any of the pokemon games, and I think there is a reason.
Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
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>>12583581 my drill peck is the drill that will pierce the heavens
also
>gurren lagen Anonymous
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>>12583555 Sure is. Looks great
Anonymous
>>12583581 It's not Gurren Lagann, it's mere coincidence.
Anonymous
>>12583592 You can do so in Platinum
Anonymous
>>12583592 >>12583627 Although that's for very shallow water only not ones that have wterfalls pouring into them as you can see here.
Anonymous
>>12583627 Alright, cool. I an try to do that. I was going about it a different way, thus the suckage.
Anonymous
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>>12583639 >>12583672 A better example of what I mean. I suggest making tiles for both shallow(lakes, pool) and deep(waterfall pools, deep rivers) and sea tiles
Anonymous
>>12583672 Especially now that I'm done with this magnificent creature.
Yeah, that's just adding ridges underwater. That should be easy to do. Thanks.
Anonymous
>>12583615 >A fierce predator that uses its speed and maneuverability to outwit its prey. Its powerful talons can tear through even the toughest of hides. >90 speed Anonymous
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>>12583735 >Draik's anus.gif Kirn !ZIX1K1Rn42
>>12583735 ITS
BEEEEEUUUUTIFUL
could you make an actual shore like with both kinds of corners for demonstration purposes
Anonymous
>>12583740 why would a gay ass eagle need speed anyway
Anonymous
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>>12583740 >It can circle the globe in just 16 hours. It is a kindhearted Pokémon that leads lost and foundering ships in a storm to the safety of land. >80 speed Fuck off, m8
Anonymous
I wish I could have been around when you guys were taking pokemon submissions.
Anonymous
>>12583850 >warquila >not the manliest eagle in the history of manly eagles Anonymous
>>12583900 you have shit taste in music
Anonymous
>>12583921 I like classical music Anonymous
>>12583886 What the hell is that
Anonymous
>>12583933 even shittier taste
are u autistic?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12583941 Pokemon I'm trying to draw with my extremely limited drawing skills. have been trying for weeks, keep going to square one at the end of each day.
Anonymous
>>12583947 >u Holy shit it is summer?
Anonymous
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>>12583735 Or I can look through the demo stuff and see precisely that, just waiting to be reshaped to fit our stuff.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12583962 Don't mind them. It's got nice shapes and cute design. Frankly I think some ours are lacking in that department. Try coming up with a theme first though.
Anonymous
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>>12583768 Sure thing. Gonna have to bring out the big guns though.
Anonymous
>>12583981 ? sorry English is my second language, could you be more specific about your question?
Anonymous
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>>12583968 u is totsl acepted in adult word aspie
Anonymous
>>12584046 What is the concept behind your design?
What is your Pokemon based on? It looks fire typed
Anonymous
>>12584046 What is the pokemon is supposed to be? It's inspiration for the design?
Anonymous
test sprite, what does everyone think?
Anonymous
>>12584061 >>12584077 Ah, its based on a tedibear I had as a child, that was the inspiration, I used to imagine he was a ghost from another world that turned all the monsters to stone... it was... a long time ago
tl;dr Ground/Ghost type bear pokemon...
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12584176 That's adorable.
captcha: smitten umobill
Anonymous
>>12584203 >>1 line>>tl;dr its not one line for me.
Anonymous
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>>12584162 The proportions look good to me. You're going to have a rough time shading that and keeping the skeleton visible, though. Can't think of anything that would help, though, that's just the way the design is.
Anonymous
>>12584212 You could help redeisgn a unpopular pokemon
Anonymous
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>>12584247 Ther aren't any different pokemon I want to make, my abilities are already limited and this is the only one i have any attachment to, and this one is too dissimilar to any on the list at the moment.
Anonymous
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>>12584176 Hmmm, it wouldn't need the ground typing unless it had a specific purpose. Also tl;dr doesn't really apply to short sentences (I.e., not a full paragraph) and well, the typing isn't part of the concept.
Clash !BMy7CLasHA
