Anonymous
Why the last thread was erased?lewd Helioptile fic>Can we post NSFW fics? R:Yes, in a spoilered link
Anonymous
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>>12874894 I doubt it, I don't know why that's there.
I think it's being overly cautious.
Anonymous
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>>12874894 Bare links rape virgin eyes.
M Pancham/F Helioptile fic planned, just gonna be pure smut, though. Don't wanna work hard on it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Can someone post one that's I don't know, good for once?
Anonymous
>>12880029 Fuck it, I was waiting for permission to use a certain image as a thumbnail, but I suppose I'll just upload without it. Expect something in appx. 5 minutes.
Anonymous
>>12880029 Fanfiction is never good because it's made of words which means you need to read which takes too long
Anonymous
>>12880118 I don't watch TV and comics are my main source of entertainment. Try me.
Anonymous
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>>12880145 that was a joke
R. A. Morri !iNUSoEEVEE
Anonymous
>>12880205 Is this Pokemon talking? No thanks.
I don't know how you guys feel about it, but I couldn't care less since the lot of you are into some shameful things. I prefer either good retellings of the games (there's a good Colosseum one I read) including secrets and theories and whatnot maybe? Or ones with original characters in original stories but existing (in any Pokemon canon) places. Very little to no Pokemon speaking English would be swell.
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/cgNmUxER Hashed this out in about an hour and a half, because I had nothing else to do as work ended early today.
This "chapter" is not finished and it just cuts off, but I just want some opinions on what is there.
Please keep in mind that it's been years since I've tried to write a story in first person.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>12880315 Depends on exactly what you're looking for. Comedy? Something serious?
Anonymous
>>12881728 Not him but I wouldn't mind seeing some serious stories that fit those criteria.
Speaking Pokemon is acceptable if it makes reasonable sense, like telepathy.
Anonymous
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someone write sword pokemon in vagina smut
Anonymous
I was planning on writing a fanfic, one where Ash has to go back in time if he really wants to become a pokemon master, however it's even easier this time because he knows exactly where he is going and has experience.. now, my question is, how does this sound, /vp/?
Anonymous
I remember when /vp/ was young, there was this grill posting her fapfiction or something.
Anonymous
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>>12885575 She's gone, man. She hates us now. I was her disciple and she abandoned us ;-;
Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
>>12885400 Gif related. That's how all of us start.
Anonymous
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Are there any good Noland/Thorton fics? If there aren't, can I request some?
Anonymous
Aw damn, new thread. What was the opinion on importing fics from the old ficdump? Is this a fresh start? I missed hearing if this was discussed
Rooh
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>>12890158 There is a reference to the old catalog at the end of the new one so people can find them if they need them. I will gladly import old fics into the new catalog if you give me the info and whatnot.
>How do I get a story in the catalog? >Post in here with the name of the author (If linking from a non-anonymous source), the name of the fic, the genre, and a short summary, and then ask for it to be put in the catalog. Anonymous
Nate !PM597lkh2g
I'll be taking a short, simple request. (500-1000 words?) Nothing lewd or fetishy please. I do better with humans than Pokemon.
Anonymous
>>12891996 Rosa's hair is out of control.
It's up to Nate and Hugh to stop it.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>12881792 Pedestal is pretty good if you haven't read it already; it's kind of humorous in a sarcastic narrator way, but the story matter itself is pretty serious.
I'm not heavily recommending Survival Project because of the talking pokemon thing, but I'll mention it because it's not really the typical talking Pokemon story. It's a journey fic told from the rotating perspective of one of the MC's pokemon, so all the Pokemon talk but only the MC can understand them (for a plot related reason.) It is explicitly shown that other people only hear the traditional Pokemon chatter, he is just able to understand it. If you get past the general theme of "talking pokemon" it's really a good story.
Of course, I could also self-promote my own work - journey fic gradually hijacked by a cult causing a revolution by convincing the public they have been oppressed by pointing out all the bizarre things in the games, such as why the Pokemon Centers are free - but you'd have to wade through a fair amount of angst and my not-so-great writing. If you want to check it out, okay, but I won't push it.
As far as retellings, I don' t know many good ones. That comedic Colosseum one he cited is about the only good one. I know of a very detailed BW1 retelling, but its author is a complete douche and the story is hijacked by badly done OC/Bianca self-insert shipping.
Anonymous
>>12891996 A mother tries to come to terms with the fact that her son has turned into a Kadabra overnight.
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>12892017 Alrighty, any specific details you want me to throw in?
>>12892103 I might try this if I have time.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12892021 I read Pedestal and liked it for the most part.
Would have liked it a hell of a lot less if there wasn't a giant disclaimer right at the front of it saying "HERE THERE BE ANGST, TURN BACK ALL YE WHO THINK ALL ANGST IS SHIT"
Survival Project sounds interesting, though maybe a little hard to get into with rotating perspective.
No harm in at least giving your own fic a looksee. What's it called?
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>12892353 Here's the link to Survival Project:
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?561603-Survival-Project-(PG-13) The rotating perspective is actually put to very good use, so I think you'll be pleasantly surprised if you give it a try.
Mine is in the archive, titled "The Angel of Reckoning." If you do decide to check it out, though, I really should make clear there's a pretty big amount of angst involved. That, and really long chapters.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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Alright, looking for critiques for this fiction I wrote on impulse after listening to music. It was all one section and written in an hour.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9454988/1/Was-it-all-worth-it-in-the-end Anonymous
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>tfw only capable of writing one story at a time
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
Anonymous
I WILL WRITE A NIGGA A STORY.no lewd pls it makes me uncomfortabul
Anonymous
>>12894716 okay, write a story where dawn and may fall in love, have it be platonic girl love and then
THEY FUCK Anonymous
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>>12894775 as long as it's consensual Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Anonymous
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Quick drop what you're doing and write a drabble about your favorite pokemon character getting addicted to your favorite video game
Anonymous
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>12892017 Bump reporting in.
Haven't forgotten about this, I'm gonna do some quick spell-editing then post it. Pastebin right?
Nate !PM597lkh2g
>>12901943 Here it is:
http://pastebin.com/94S1EiyZ I-I hope it's up to standard.. Anonymous
Rooh
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>>12902343 nice one nate, always up to standard.
Anonymous
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Bumping and such things.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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is there YancyxNancy or CurtisxChristoph smut
Anonymous
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>>12911405 After anything in particular?
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12915898 Pedomaniac post new stuff please (and/or more smut shit with consoles)
Anonymous
>>12920989 >pedomaniac explain??
Anonymous
>>12921015 Pedo -> Fart in spanish
Not really, because he likes write about 10yerold pokegirls and for de lulz Anonymous
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>>12922075 Damn, wrong pic I regret nothing Anonymous
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>>12922075 Sorry, wrong pic I regret nothing Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>12922075 >>12921015 For the love of fuck ..
I sent a link to an Iris picture to the WWYR IRC. It was a translated picture and Iris said the word "child" in it. Hence that retarded fucking nickname. Anonymous
Rooh
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Cobalt, where are you
Anonymous
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Morning bump.Bonus points if those pages are turning you on
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Alright guy's, first time doing requests for FanFiction General and I'm curious to write something stupid that makes no sense at 4AM, lay it on me.>I don't do well with fictions of pokemon themselfs, just characters, but I can try. >Give me any place, characters/pokemon and what genre you want.
Courtney
>>12926962 Sure. My boss, Maxie, has been under house arrest for awhile after trying to get rid of the world's pesky water situation. Tell me a story about how he gets away using stealth then leads a life of petty crime as a syndicate-leader-turned-rebel. Genre can be anything, but please include some crime elements.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12927013 Alright you asked for it, I'm going for humor/crime story. I must warn you though, I'm in a tired stupid mood right now so it's going to be highly retarded at this point.
Courtney
>>12927043 Can't wait to read it.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12927063 Alright time for some stupid shit!
Warning: May contain
some implied HSOWA and stupidity, may hurt to read the rushed story of a man up at 5AM and a race against time! But not really that last part. http://pastebin.com/N1ucAnTe Courtney
>>12927231 That was a funny read! I liked how there was a moral to the story, to be honest with you I wasn't expecting that based on what little I gave you.
There were a few spelling errors with feel/fell but otherwise great anecdote.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12927279 Thanks m8, I do have a bad habit of typing words from my brain that are spelled different to make another word, like I think I say the word on instead of one that I made a mistake on, but that's what I get for typing quick and being tired as fuck.
Anonymous
Do you enjoy crystals, crying, nitrile gloves, pokemon, and catheters?
Then this is the fanfic for you!
>>12927305 Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12927378 Don't forget the large hands!
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12927378 -sigh- Well instead of acting like I did in the actual thread this came from, I'm going to give this an actual critique and try not to cringe.
First off what is the actual sickness? Courtney
>>12927378 Why you do this?
At least you put it in a Colress-esque DA thread. >>12927322 you should sleep some son
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12927529 Eh. Fuck that shit, who sleeps anymore? Besides I could always nap later on in the day, basically what I did yesterday anyway.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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And just a little bump to get some interest here.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
I want a fic about this thing
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12934906 >tumblr also what exactly is that "Thing"
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12881258 Since I never got ay feedback, I'll just post this one again. Not really a serious story; more of just something to scribble when I have nothing else to do.
http://pastebin.com/u23M2gx9 Anonymous
https://fanfiction.net/s/9174048/1/Silhouette-of-Time Hey, just dropping off my Adventure/Crime/war story for the catalogue. Also maybe for a helpful once over.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12935053 I'm uh... Kind of confused on how to even start on something like this... Any kind of genre or... What?
>>12935165 >>12935304 Maybe spoiler your links just in case folk's, always better then getting in trouble for bare links. I'll take a hit at your fics just give me sometime to read them, I just got back and have nothing to do atm.
Anonymous
>>12935935 It should be a cosmic horror story.
Roxie's human form is just a guise put upon to infiltrate the humans without instantly driving them mad. Now the time has come for the darkness within her to awaken, and the blight called humanity to be cleansed from the pokemon world.
Or something I dunno I'm kinda drunk.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12935165 Alright I got my opinions on this one so here it goes!
I fairly liked how you started this out, I had the same idea for a story I started writing that started the same way but you added a lot more detail into it which made it more vivid and complex. It kind of reminded me of the hobbit when bilbo was writing his adventure in his old age. >>12936034 Um.... Alright I'll see what I can do with this...
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12936034 alright, first time writing this kind of thing and I'm sure I put a lot of cliches into it but... Enjoy you drunk bastard!
http://pastebin.com/6uNqYwqa Anonymous
>>12936633 haha this was pretty dope
I don't even mind if it kinda ruins what I was going to do with the bad end of the third chapter of hands down because it was based off the same idea this is great
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12936718 I'm glad you liked it, kind of came from the top of my head so it wasn't really planned out, last time I tried planning out a story it just never came through properly. I am curious about what you meant with the third chapter thing.
Anonymous
>>12936759 It's just a dumb idea I have because it's a lot easy to come up with ideas than it is to actually do them.
It's a thing I plan on doing after I finish the fic itself.
There are going to be joke "bad end" sort of things, one for each chapter (maybe more if I find myself particularly inspired). The idea I had for the third chapter was that Roxie is actually some kind of demon thing (it turned into that thing though after I first saw that picture though) and was actually leading Rosa on. She chases her around for a bit before eventually catching her and devouring her and whatever before setting her sights on Kalos (leaving an obvious sequel hook for something that would never happen)
Nate !PM597lkh2g
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>>12892103 This guy still want his thing-a-jig done? It's like 1 AM and y'know how horny I get for text at this hour.
Or if not, I'll take something else.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12936813 See and thats weird, I can do other's idea's like its nothing hard, but I can't come up with good idea's myself.
I like that idea by the way, just thought when you said cosmic horror I thought creepy space alien at the time. Keep on working on your ideas because they already sound great to me.
Anonymous
>>12936915 Yeah that was actually what I meant by comsic horror, sort of. Something Cthulhu-esque.
Man my ideas are really more dumb than anything they aren't that great.
I wish I could give you some advice to help you with coming up with stuff but I'm terrible at stuff like that and would only give really generic stuff that probably won't really help
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12937061 Nah it's all good anon, you have descent ideas just don't put yourself down by saying you don't. we all have some shit idea's but that's what makes us better writers in the end, practice makes perfect as they say.
If you're interested in some
HildaXRosa and warning, its pretty lewd. fanfiction, I've been writing a story on my fanfiction profile if you wanna take a read?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9218584/1/No-Way-are-Roses-this-Beautiful Anonymous
>>12937115 Sounds interesting enough I'll give it a read, but tomorrow, because right now I'm doing my own writing, and also I need to head to sleep like two hours ago but I'm almost at my goal for the night so I'm just finishing up right now
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12937142 Alright, I'll be eager to hear some feedback. Have a good nights sleep.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12939589 Hue hue hue, such a comedian.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Know what? Fuck it. I'm wide awake and taking request, just got up so my brain is actually working this time.
Anonymous
>>12941363 N finds a mariachi outfit. Hilarity ensuses.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12941731 Oh god this will be interesting, I'll have to think about this one.
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Anybody here ever read the Poke Wars series by Cornova? It's an ongoing thing, and it's pretty cool. Basic premise is that, in the anime, whenever someone gets hit by a flame thrower or thunderbolt, they never get hurt. In his story, Ho-Oh takes the thing that made the world like that away. Pokemon attacks now kill. Different arcs follow different people, some in Johto, some Kanto, even some that follow the legendary Pokemon themselves.
Here's a link to his account:
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1664081/Cornova I'm actually writing for this series as well. The arc that I'm handling for him is called Convergence. To copy pasta what is written on tv tropes: Poké Wars: The Convergence tells the story of Kanta, a Battle Frontier trainer who is trying to survive this new world with the help of his Pokémon. He's joined by three Frontier Brains, Anabel, Lucy, and Greta, and has to deal with the changes made by Ho-Oh's decision.
Here's a link to it if you're interested:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8225210/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-the-Convergence Anonymous
Anonymous
>>12941363 Drayden tries to get Hilbert to stop flirting with iris
by flirting with him Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12941731 Alright I'm sorry but I have to drop this one due to not really knowing how to begin with this one...
most likely would have ended up a Zorro parody where he jumps from building to building in Castelia City saving in danger pokemon. >>12943647 I kind of need more detail then this, do you want
soft core or extreme hard core shit going on? Want just flirting or a little further? What genre you want with it? I will tell you now I'm very awkward when it comes to guy with guy flirting due to being a straight male and this kind of thing is awkward for me to write about. Anonymous
>>12944224 I don't really care you can make it illegal if you want
romance/humor obv
Anonymous
>>12944224 >most likely would have ended up a Zorro parody where he jumps from building to building in Castelia City saving in danger pokemon. Not OR, but I actually sounds cool. Also, the Mariachi is the outfit for mexican singers/musicians, but the idea of N mistaking this mexican simbol by a masked crusader it's pretty fun.
If you wanna give it another try,
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mariachi Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12945837 I did see a mariachi outfit and knew what it was, just couldn't creatively figure anything out with it in mind.
>>12945536 I was most likely going for that genre so thats good. I just got up from napping a bit so when I wake up more I'll get right on it.
Anonymous
>>12946544 just make him pull a raiden or some shit.
Kyouhei !!iyGYdLJbI/k
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Bumping the thread.
Anonymous
bump nothing pokemon in the folder i had open
Anonymous
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>>12948684 I can see my house from there!
Anonymous
>>12948684 Serperior Bump here
Anonymous
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>>12946656 It's been about a day and I still can't figure it out. "Pull a raiden?"
Anonymous
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So a little birdy told me to post some shit of my here and see what happens.
Its a clean story about a girafarig and her trainer.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mq0biU1Dt5lirwvYHSivZZEG8TtdlSXGJp1znm3pFCE/edit Feel free to leave comments in the doc if you want. I always am eager to hear people's opinions, especially critique and criticism.
Anonymous
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So a little birdy told me to post some shit of my here and see what happens.
Its a clean story about a girafarig and her trainer.
[spoilers]
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eh-QeGbIcvFXyjF3SPCBN_uCpLHfJ1WT61Vh5jL9S-I/edit [/spoilers]
Feel free to leave comments in the doc if you want. I always am eager to hear people's opinions, especially critique and criticism.
Anonymous
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So a little birdy told me to post some shit of my here and see what happens.
Its a clean story about a girafarig and her trainer.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eh-QeGbIcvFXyjF3SPCBN_uCpLHfJ1WT61Vh5jL9S-I/edit Feel free to leave comments in the doc if you want. I always am eager to hear people's opinions, especially critique and criticism.
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When it comes to multi-chapter fics, what opinion do you guys have on rewrites? As in, the fic not being done but the author going back to redo the early chapters?
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>>12955311 its like double the autism
Anonymous
>>12956431 I think it is worthwhile. If experience is any teacher, authors tend to change. So do their perspectives, writing styles, and visions.
It also happens to be something I'm presently working on, but that's not too important. Can't say I've seen opposition to revisions, save for plot being in stagnant waters when the fic is incomplete.
Overall I think strong, polished introduction chapters are beneficial because they draw in readers.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>12956941 I have to admit I'm a little torn. Your points are definitely valid, but for me, I don't think I could leave an ongoing plot hanging for long enough to rewrite older chapters unless I was literally completely stuck on where to take it going forward.
I tend to update very slowly though, so I often end up rewriting things before putting them out.
Anonymous
>>12957825 I get that. It depends a great deal on the length and following of the multi-chapter fic in question. I'd say with fewer readers, there's less guilt in longer times between updates. Consistency in the frequency of new releases (monthly, weekly, or whatever) is nice too. Where your plot leaves off might also play into how to go about revisions.
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>>12958516 That makes sense.
Anonymous
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>>12946544 So, how's the fic going?
Anonymous
I remember when this
sexy fanfic was posted on /b/ years ago, back when there were a load of wordfilters that inadvertently made the story much funnier.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3563202/1/pikachu-unexpected-love It's a so-bad-it's-good Ash/Pikachu romance and
sex fic by deathsia called Pikachu's Unexpected Love. Yes it's as good/bad as it sounds.
Oh and back when it was posted, deathsia had only written up to Chapter 18 of Pikachu's Unexpected Love 2, so the guy posting it on /b/
tacked on a Bell Air ending Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
Is it bad that I've been neglecting the new hype in favor of pre-established fanfiction?
Anonymous
>>12964121 >Ash's cock began to grow and inflate like a balloon Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>12971161 Why does this have to be fan-art.
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>>12971161 >arcanine >3ds >FUCKING MINECRAFT! >mfw Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12968604 I'm with you on this, I've neglected to learn any of the new poke's names, let alone the ones I know already I can barely put to a face.
I've also neglected writing at this point. I still need to finish a on going fic about
RosaXHilda Mature fic where Hilda explores her stange feelings for the same gender. and I can't seem to motivate myself to write my way out of the whole I put myself into with the resent chapters.
Rooh
Anonymous
>>12968604 I don't know; I'm excited about the news, but it's at least in part on thinking about how to integrate the new things into the ideas I've been working on. I'm completely certain that Venus would have a Shushup, possibly.
Anonymous
>>12968604 I haven't really touched much
I have one fic in the works that has Serena and Shauna visiting Castelia, which is the most I'm willing to do before the games come out and I actually know enough about the region, because it would really bother me to be wrong about things
I do have something big in mind but that's probably going to wait until after I've beaten the game first
Anonymous
>>12980387 Is that plot implying
SerenaXShauna ?
>if so, my happy face when >>12978942 I'm waiting for Venus dressed up as a Shushup. that would be too perfect.
Anonymous
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>>12982579 It likely isn't sorry ;~;
I'm not entirely decided, but most likely they're going to stay friends. I mean I probably will put in some hints and stuff so you don't need particularly strong yuri goggles to see anything, but I'm putting a yuri couple in Castelia City in something else I'm doing right, so I want to make them a little different, at least
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12982579 SerenaXShauna NNNNNNNGH-
Fuck thanks now when the games come out I just have to do this...
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12983599 Also slight bump.
Anonymous
Anonymous
bumpHow goes Friday night?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>12989332 Going well, finally taking time to write and most likely finish the last chapter of a fic I'm working on.
Anonymous
>>12989488 cool. I need to get some motivation to write. Do you work on one chapter at a time or have multiple ones going? I always seem to be juggling different plots in my head
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>12989898 Lately I've been avoiding the main story I'm writing for a bunch of one shot request from this thread. But normally I'd be one chapter at a time for one story.
Anonymous
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>>12936633 >>12936633 >http://pastebin.com/6uNqYwqa No joke, that freaked me out in a really good way.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Marlon and Nate are obvious, but who else would join them in a pokemonxswimming anime crossover?
Anonymous
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>>12997192 >Your mom GEE, IT SURE IS SUMMER AROUND HERE! *rolls eyes*
BUT ANON, THIS PEACE IS WHAT ALL NORMALFAGS STRIVE FOR!
I JUST WONDER WHAGT M00T IS UP TO~!
Anonymous
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>>12997192 I dunno coming up with a logical way to have my mom in the pokemon world seems like a hassle besides I would rather all boys for maximum homosex
Anonymous
>>12997118 Hugh and Curtis all up in the joint.
Anonymous
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>>12997797 Curtis I like but Hugh is gross
Anonymous
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/r/ing a fic where Prof. Sycamore bangs a crossdressing Trevor
Bonus points for referencing/ripping off this scene:
http://youtu.be/WXsYUa3JJwI Anonymous
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Yep yep, dealing with writers block (or rather, I just fucking hate this side-arc I'm in the middle of). Luckily, not too many followers mind the time between updates- ~10k word chapters tend to keep them happy.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
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>>13009585 >I just fucking hate this side-arc I'm in the middle of I had a similar problem a while back.
I dealt with it by
deleting the entire side-arc and starting fresh. Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13009585 >10k word chapters Fuck I'd be lucky to get myself to write 3k chapters at this point, I'd go insane.
Anonymous
>>13009585 >>13010846 I go with 5k (give or take 1k) chapters, since that feels like the novel standard for chapter length.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13011330 at best I get 2k per; anymore than that and my quality of the chapter would plummet from there. That and I'd feel like I'd ramble on forever.
Anonymous
>>13009585 >Yep yep, dealing with writers block (or rather, I just fucking hate this side-arc I'm in the middle of) I'm there right now. Though, I don't particularly hate the arc I'm supposed to be writing, but I have less to zero motivation to work on it. Maybe it's because it's almost solely a character building mini arc, but jeez, I've been in this funk for months now.
It can't last forever... right?
Anonymous
>>13010410 >Duplica >Ditto Go for it son
Anonymous
>>13011510 It usually doesn't. Sometimes it's best to admit that the arc just won't ever be good, write the bastard out, release, and move on. We're not writing the next Bible, it doesn't have to be faultless.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13011510 This
>>13013685 is usually how I deal with funks like that.
Want some advice? If you give me some more specifics, I can try.
Anonymous
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>>12934906 >DOORS ARE SHUT AND BOLTED DOWN >AS THE THING CRAWLS INTO TOWN Anonymous
>>13009585 Also, something that surprised me. The premise of the story is about Jasmine being a mysandristic, prudish bitch and her friends' attempts to get her laid. Yet, the story's going on 240k words and there's barely been any sexual content, much less actual virginity-taking. It's mostly been drama, drama, and the occasional pokemon battle. You'd expect the readers to start bringing out the pitchforks and demanding lemons already, but do they? No! They're more interested in the damn backstory! I'm a little disappointed.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13014766 Tell the true, I'm with them in that regard, sometimes we got to set aside the lemons and see how the progression of how that lemon grew by seeking the past for answers.
did any of that make any sense? I feel I didn't make any. Anonymous
>>13013685 >>13014341 I'm afraid I don't have the luxury of being able to cut it out without ruing the impact of the climax that happens afterward. Thing is, the character-building mini arc I'm stuck on is there to flesh out the town the heroes in my story are trying to save. In these chapters I'm showing the daily lives of the citizens, bringing faces to the town. Without them, the town may as well just be some lifeless goal or object they're trying to save. I want the readers to care about the every man, to give the victory substance.
I think I'm just pussing out because I think my readers aren't going to give many shits about character building chapters, though they seemed not to mind the recent 18k one.
Could this be self doubt? Laziness? Procrastination?
How do you guys deal with writer's block? I know I just need to go there and start typing stuff, because any words are better than no words, but I'm running low on motivation.
Anonymous
>>13014836 It did, although, I'd like to ask if English isn't your native tongue?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13014977 What's sad is English is my native tongue, why is it very broken? I felt it sounded broken half way through typing that response so I kind of see what you're getting at. I've only recently been trying to fix my grammar and punquation and sentence structure due to gaining an interest in writing fanfiction so I could see my responses being fucked up from time to time.
>>13014946 Reading this over I'd say its mostly self doubt. You feel like the characters in the town wouldn't be interesting enough to your readers so its putting you down the path of not wanting to finish the chapters and thus causing the Procratination and laziness.
Anonymous
>>13014946 >How do you guys deal with writer's block? Take two or three shots of any strong alcohol, then just write. Sure, there's a decent enough chance what you actually write might be illegible or just shitty in general, but you also might come up with the big idea that you couldn't come up with while sober. Also, if self doubt is the problem then you'll probably dip out of that too, and maybe it'll be enough that you can write what you need without any issue. Hell, half of the fanfic I'm working on now has been written drunk, and probably a bit more that's left will be too.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13015135 This.
I might not get drunk to write but I've noticed when I'm dead ass tired, I'll start getting inspired to write whatever comes to mind. I think its mostly that over thinking something ruins it comepletely and takes the fun out of writing.
Anonymous
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>>13014946 Our advice wasn't to cut it out, but rather, just BS your way through it, kind of like writing a term paper from scratch 6 hrs before it's due. You'll hate it, you'll think it's terrible, but in the end, you've done it and can move on to better stuff.
P.S.- good backstory or no, people might not give a damn about saving the town either way. Generally people invest early; it's extremely difficult to get them to care about recently-introduced characters/locales. Nostalgia-pandering exists for a reason.
Anonymous
>>13015026 My apologies.
Immature writers and foreign writers tend to make very different and distinctive grammar errors- and I admit I'm a douche and come down harder on young writers. I think even being intelligible in a second language is a worthy feat, something I've yet to accomplish; so I forgive them rather easily.
As for advice, I had a lot of difficulty learning English natively. Like, a LOT, I was a full year behind my classmates. I got my hands on an RL Stein novel early on (6 years old) and forced myself through it. From then on I became addicted to reading. I'm not saying it's a good method for anyone, but for me, reading a hell of a lot of books taught me how to write as well as I do.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13015488 What's funny is only when I'm responding to someone like this I make major grammatical mistakes, but in my writing the only real mistakes I'll make are silly ones; for example I might type/write one instead of on or something stupid in that regard.
To tell the truth, you don't really need to be sorry about being hard on me for it, it's a learning experience and needs to be pointed out. And to the comment about writing well, I've already gotten that down and do very well for myself, just again the above reasons of making silly mistakes.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13014946 Typing this quickly before I go to bed, but one idea I get right away is to select, say, three residents of this town and have the heroes interact with them in the buildup to the action. Use those residents as devices to introduce other aspects of the town's lifestyle (for example, if you focus on a character who runs a restaraunt the heroes eat at in the town, you can introduce the staff and suppliers of the restaraunt as side characters to expand the view of the town's lifestyle.)
First try to come up with three residents who serve different roles in the town and develop them in your mind a bit. Make plans for the heroes to interact with them, then once you have the interactions going, think about what other residents can be brought in to expand the view.
Also, don't feel constrained to have to do an arc. If it's just development to get the town's residents on the readers' minds, you don't necessarily need more than 2 chapters.
Anonymous
>>13017747 I agree with that last statement 100%. If I didn't have side projects nothing would get done. Funny how that works.
>>13015173 >>13015135 I also love to drink when I write but it makes editing a bitch! I gotta listen to music too when I write. surprisingly lyrics used to give me lots of ideas, but now when I hear a good instrumental piece, the creativity comes flooding in like a Surf attack.
Does anyone have some stashed artwork coinciding with fictions? Yours or someone else's, I don't care. I just wanna see something cool made based on a fanfic
I'll never achieve that without learning how to use a tablet and pretty sure that ain't gonna happen. Dammit, someone encourage me to get back to writing.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13017747 Are you a wizard? I find this hilarious because this is almost exactly what I have planned and written down in rough already. Looks like you and I are on the same wavelength.
When I first wrote it down it was only one chapter used to flesh out those three residents, but it felt too restrained to me so I extended it to two chapters, but I didn't want to go over that because then I'd risk dragging it on for too long. I also plan to have the townsfolk the heroes meet have at least a small role in the final conflict of saving the town, and one of them develop a more personal connection to one of the heroes.
>>13015026 >Reading this over I'd say its mostly self doubt. You feel like the characters in the town wouldn't be interesting enough to your readers so its putting you down the path of not wanting to finish the chapters and thus causing the Procratination and laziness. I think you hit it right on the head though, haha.
Thanks for all the thoughts, guys. Even if I have to force myself to do it, I am going to finish these chapters!!
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13022268 Good luck to you and have fuck with it man.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13022292 fun- I meant to say fun. What is wrong with me today...
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13022268 >Are you a wizard? Why yes, I am.
But seriously, good luck with that. Let us know how it goes; I'd be glad to help more if you need it.
I'm pretty fucked with motivation right now Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13025769 Shit you can get motivated?! I can't motivate myself to escape a plastic bag if I was suffocating in it. Anonymous
>>13025769 >>13025857 Quit feeling so special
My motivation is at a record low too Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13025857 I wish I could get motivated. In all honesty I feel pretty good about tonight, though.
>>13026607 Seems it's common around here.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13027703 Maybe thats why the fanfiction thread is always so barren everyday... Maybe?
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13027781 Well, yeah, of course.
If we talked to each other more, maybe we could collectively help each other, though.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13027870 It sure as hell would help more if we did talk to each other more. Help motivate each other and all that
faggy ass shit. Though it seems like no one is in the chat in OP's post anyway so... What can we really do?
Anonymous
>>13027925 people do use the irc, but usually only at night
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13027934 Ah no wonder I never see active people, I always check at the wrong times. Oh well I'm always too socially awkward to talk in those chats anyways.
never really know what to say at times. Anonymous
>>13027953 you'd be among people who spend their free time writing pokemon fanfiction, you're not going to be looked down upon for being awkward Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13027971 You have a very valid point there, I just feel I have to be very proper all and its a little out of my nature to be like that all the time. I don't know anymore. Anonymous
>>13028017 >acting proper Nah
tbh so long as you aren't a jackass and start arguments and make everyone hate you you'll do fine
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13028029 Ah all right, I can deal with that. I'm too reasonable and open minded to even start one.
Anonymous
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>>12887011 Dat gif... God damnit rotom bring that shit back!
Anonymous
Anonymous
So get this
Anonymous
>>13037171 ...
Make
this
happen.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13037171 11/10 would read
Anonymous
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>>13037902 >>13038761 >>13038907 I have to not tell people about my stupid ideas oh god
I'll try after I finish what I'm working on atm Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13037171 instead of that, how about he has to train his pokemon to skate
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13040581 >Skateboarding Scrafty Sign me up.
Anonymous
Im thinking about making a comfort story about a blind woman and her guide glacieon, do you think this idea could work?
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13040581 I really don't care all that much about writing about pokemon and prefer focusing on the human characters Anonymous
Anonymous
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13040941 I like this idea. I'm a little biased because I have a blind character in a similar situation, but I always like to see different takes on ideas.
Anonymous
Anonymous
[terrible and silly fanfic idea that people have interest in anyway]
Anonymous
Anonymous
Is the Anon who posted this one still here?
Anonymous
I'm about to go to bed but I'm going to write a PokeFic tomorrow inspired by the West Wing. Take from that what you will.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Anonymous
>>13059818 That was beautiful...
Anonymous
>>13060212 He said it was the outline for a fanfic... I haven't heard from him since...
;_: Anonymous
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>>13059802 I don't actually have anything that was a reference to the tony hawk thing above
I did try to come up with something but I drew a blank
Anonymous
Anonymous
For those of you with multiple fanfics, is your most popular also your favorite or the one you think you did your best work on, one that you think was actually pretty lousy as you worked on it, or one that you really didn't even think anything of either way?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13069089 I could be ether way, I started writing my
Hilda X Rosa fiction and liked it all the way through, but never thought it catch the interest of anyone at all and keep it even after not updating for months, it still gets at least 50 views a day. It's really all up to mentality and perspective most of the time.
Anonymous
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>>13010410 I like it, good job. Hope you continue.
Anonymous
hello, fanfic generalA Deino & Murkrow going to a theme park, but a lucario is stalking them to defeat them so he could get more popular. It basically follows like Willy. E. Coyote. Lucario tries to get the duo, but always fail.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13072084 It always is bro. Most people are into the draw threads more then the fanfiction. Less work for the consumer to look at a picture then read a fiction.
Anonymous
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>>13018280 I drew this for aforementioned Jasmine fanfic. It was supposed to be a sailor scout halloween costume.
>>13069089 My favorite work as a whole is also my most popular (and longest). However, my favorite character to write was a moderately-well received sidestory protag (Steven Stone, actually).
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13071235 Could be interesting, depending on how long you make it and how you handle the comedy.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13072604 I only managed to write the 1st chapter before going to bed:
http://pastebin.com/tR1VG2V1 Anonymous
Pants Without Pants !!N7kjcsxEfBu
looking for good Anime fics.
Anonymous
I've been brainstorming ideas for a fan-fiction (of the "what if Pokemon were real type) but I haven't gotten around to writing it as of yet.
Anonymous
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>>13079429 >haven't gotten around to writing it as of yet feels
Anonymous
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/r/ing a new dawn.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13078132 How strictly do you want it to stick to the canon? Do you want just an extension of the anime, or something based in the same universe but different?
Pants Without Pants !!N7kjcsxEfBu
>>13083694 I'm cool with whatever.
I'd like for it to have Ash though
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13083741 I don't really know any good anime-universe fics that include Ash, sorry. I don't usually read them.
Pants Without Pants !!N7kjcsxEfBu
Ninetails
>>13059818 Here I am.
I actually wanted to make that into a fic, but didn't know if people would read it or not. I had started, but I was using my friends laptop, then it crashed, I had gotten about 2 chapters in. But now I have my desktop up and running. I can start one if anyone would be willing to read it. I'm glad people liked it. But I was going to write it as a whole story about how a girl saves a Vulpix and then they go off and start a journey. And the whole point of that short story was like a short summery of what the Ninetails when through and how it felt.
Ninetale
>>13085001 Wow, I fucked up my own favorite Pokemons name. Fuck this i am headed to bed. I'll check and see if anyone still wants me to make a fic about that though.
Ninetales
>>13085039 >>13085001 >>13060660 >>13060212 >>13059818 I've actually found the chapters, I forgot I had saved it to my email. I'll continue working on this and post it soon on FFnet.
Anonymous
>>13085236 For the love of Arceus, you must keep us
but mostly me posted! I wanted to praise you in the original thread, but by that time you were long gone.
For the good of humanity, keep these FanFic General threads informed!
Also saving that image. Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Huzzah, unbanned.>Ditto x Duplica 50% completed >Iris x Dragonite 75% completed
Anonymous
Anonymous
Quick someone come up with an interesting thread topic
Anonymous
>>13089383 Old masters looking back on their pasts
and possibly all the crazy shit they did as a young-in .
Anonymous
>>13089478 No I mean like something for us to discuss
Anonymous
Pants Without Pants !!N7kjcsxEfBu
Anonymous
>>13085236 What the fuck is that? Will-o-wisp?
Ninetales
Ninetales
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>>13085412 Alright. The story is being told by trainers point of view. I'm working on it right now. It'll take me a few days and then I can upload it. I want to make a couple more chapters.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13089482 What's your favorite genre to read?
besides smut Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13086799 Graet! Take your time Pedomaniac
Anonymous
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>>13096123 If I'm reading,
smut is superior but anything that's exciting with action usually finds a close second for me. But then again at times I really do like romantic plot (if we're assuming they're entirely different genres).
If I'm writing, mystery or crime is more my preference. I'm working on humor at the moment
involving drama in the ranks of an evil team, told by a 20 year old punk hired as the team's janitor. Hilarity and sex shall hopefully follow when he starts fucking of the grunts after losing to her in a pokemon battle that he claims was rigged all along Thoughts?
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
Anonymous
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>>13096123 Romance, action, mystery. I actually will read just about anything. Although with fanfics it usually has to be involving my favorite characters.
I don't even care about smutunless I'm writing it Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13096123 De fak? My response got deleted.
Readin:
smut is the best second to action. I'll read a slice of life every now and again too.
I like writing or imagining short crime stories and mysteries.
I want to write a comedy about a guy who winds up sleeping with a crazy chick working for the crime organization he's trying to dismantle Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13119521 Oh shit, that sounds great.
Anonymous
>>13120502 You think so? Thanks. When it's done I'll post it.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>13096123 As far as Pokemon goes, smut, fluff, and romance, humanxhuman only. I would say Pokemon action, but no one writes the battles the way I like.
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Since I apparently can't talk about it anywhere else, does anyone think of more natural ways for pokemon to evolve? Like if you need to have a trade evolution and you can't and/or disagree with how the game does it? This can apply to any evo method. Also, I know it mostly depends on the kind of story involved, but I just wonder if anyone really treats the evolutions as more of a life cycle, and if so, do you include stone evos, trade evos, or any other evo where you need an item to attain it? The nature of the stories I know have the evolutions more of a consequence of how much skill they've acquired, which I can see that, too, but I just wonder if anyone else feels that the pokes that require an item to evolve need a more natural way to evolve.
Anonymous
Milkshakes: The sequel
Anonymous
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13120709 Yeah, it does. I'm looking forward to it.
>>13121247 Could you describe the way you like seeing battles written?
>>13124051 oh fuck
Anonymous
>>13124051 You know there's an entire like saga or whatever you would call it of Yandere Lyra, right?
I've been considering writing some new Yandere Lyra though, because writing Yanderes is fun Anonymous
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>>13124624 That really helped.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13130850 Speaking of which, I'm going to be using the yandere character in the chapter after the one I'm working on now. Is there any advice for writing such a character anyone could give me? I'm still fairly new to writing the type.
Anonymous
I want a fic where batshit crazy Rosa kills people.
Anonymous
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>>13133754 http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2131432/Nate-kun There's always Nate's stories, although they leave a lot to the imagination.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13133749 Man, I know I should have some advice for this, but I really can't think of anything.
I actually just winged it when I did TiYS; my only exposure to yandere at the time was Lyra, actually.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13145715 Hmm, with how well you did, between your fic, Yandere Lyra and the token watching of Mirai Nikki, I should be okay.
Anonymous
>>13146821 >with how well you did Th-thanks...
So long as you understand the archetype and stuff you shouldn't have any real problems writing it I think. Good luck, man.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13147078 Thanks. I think I'll be okay. I'm going to take her in a different direction because of the way the plot is structured, but I think it will work out.
Anonymous
Anonymous
What would be considered a "NSFW" fanfic ?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13156240 It depends on what the story has in it that makes it horror. Does it have blood and gore/nudity and death in it?
Anonymous
>>13156240 To be honest it doesn't even matter, all stories should be linked from another site to begin with to keep from cluttering up the thread with huge things of text, regardless of the content of the story
I don't know why the "spoilering NSFW links" thing is there, because it doesn't matter either way
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
Goin on a random generator, and rollin for the pokemon centered around this horror themed short I feel like writing.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13156327 It was a thing because from the first post in this thread said that "The last thread got erased for some reason." And reading a bit after some people said it might have been because of unspoilered links.
I guess it's just a safety precaution just in case.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
>>13156359 Rolled a 72. Ok let's begin
>>13156274 A bit of everything but the nudes. Yes.
Anonymous
>>13156378 the last thread 404'd because no one bumped it, it wasn't deleted or anything
the discussion about unspoilered links was unrelated
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13156413 Ah okay that sheds a bit of light; my bad bro.
>>13156412 Well I'm sure it won't matter ether way, it's just a safety precaution thing so just post whatever you want.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
Jaron, closed his eyes and sighed with relief. He felt the night breeze of the beach wind softly embrace his face. Jaron just left Fucsia City, and was readying himself to make the journey from Route 19. To Cinnabar Island. He defeated this town's gym leader under an hour ago. After a day of exploring the safari zones, and battling. A night of sea traveling would do him well. Or so he thought.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
>>13156685 It was a clear night, but he felt a bit unnerved by how the lack of lights. It made the ocean view seem like the end of the world was in his sight. It was slightly eerie in the sense that this felt like a unmanned, unexplored frontier. There was soon fog prominently about. Encasing the buoys littered around. Their dim red lights barely making anything ,but specks in the shaded wilderness. It was quiet. There really was not a sound of a bird pokemon stirring around. cawing or crying out. He turned around to take a glance at the fading lights of Fuchsia City. Soon it was engulfed in darkness, and the haze of the night fog.
He must of been traveling for a good two hours. The dull roar of the waves, and the soft crashing sounds of them made him drowsy. He fought the slow build up of mental fatigue, edged with the relaxing and droll sounds of the sea. His eyelids grew heavy. He shook himself awake, it worked for a few minutes. Before Jaron knew what was going on. His Taruos made a startled, anguished sound. It bucked Jaron off of it's back. He was shocked, and dumbfounded. He could only watch as his backpack, fell off of him. It was his fault for it being loosely slung over one shoulder. By the time he hit the ocean, he was submerged a moment. He could see his Tauros kicking and flailing it's tri-ended tail.
There was a murky black substance slowly emanating from a hauntingly strange mass of red glowing lights. By the time he resurfaced. His pokemon's cries and bull shouts, became lifeless and gurgled. It looked as if it was melting into a horrific mush, small tentacles covered the pokemon. More glowing red lights starting to come out of the sea, engulfing the doomed bull. It's quivering body pulled into the murky mess. Jaron reached for his backpack. It started to slowly hiss. And contort a bit inwards. He tried to grab for it regardless. He pulled back as there was a burning, stinging sensation.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
>>13157028 His hand was burning more now. Jaron panicked, and wiped as much of the black gunk off upon his zip up sweater. Before tossing it off, as he could hear the sizzling of it wearing away. He began swimming as fast as he could. Away from this unknown horror. He kept swimming, and swimming. He spotted a lantern, upon a concrete raft. He scrambled upon it. And rolled into the middle of this structure he sought sanctuary. He was still feeling the effects of pain, and confusion. Jaron's mind raced. "How long was I asleep?" "What the hell is going on?", "My pokemon just died.." "I lost my backpack and the rest of my pokemon to that substance." "Where am I?". Jaron fought back overwhelming tears of bewilderment. The fatigue set in. He sat up, and forced himself awake. There was the glowing red lights from the sea again. He stood up and backed away.
He turned around to perhaps swim further away. More appeared from below the depths. Soon from all sides, all he could do was shiver in helplessness. And sink back down to a sitting position. This was nothing like he imagined. "I've heard stories" He told himself. "But I never thought them to be true" Jaron shook in chill from the coldness of the night. He was drenched after all. He willed himself awake the entire night. He hugged his own legs for warmth, and in vain of trying to console himself.
It was the crack of dawn, the sun was finally rising. Jaron never moved from his spot. Never stirred intentionally. Soon he was silent. The sounds of the ocean, constantly trying to lull him to sleep. It was a bitter psychological war with himself. To stay awake out of fear, while dealing with the constant sounds of sleep drawing waves. His eyelids grew heavy again...
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
>>13157276 Jaron awakened to the sounds of screaming, and agony. He jolted awake. In pain himself from becoming sun burnt. Startled he stood up, and peered over to seeing a small dingy of fishermen trying to fend off what ever was attacking them. An older fisherman was sprayed from all points with the black substance, his cries became drowned out from the sickening sounds of melting Jaron became all to accustomed to hearing.The second fisherman, panicked and jumped overboard. Trying to swim towards the raft where Jaron dwell.
The third fisherman tried to make a jump for it as well. As the dingy sank from the acidic gunk eating through it's hull. A small horde of blue tentacle clad creatures pounced from the ocean at him. Encasing him. Constricting ,and bathing him in that horrible acid. Jaron reached for his back pocket of his pants. Began to pull out the water damaged pokedex he finally remembered. He aimed it at the direction of what he was seeing. " Tentacool..." the dex crackled out in a off-tone voice. " nick named :The ruby of the sea: " It buzzed out, "It punishes intruders, or fishermen that hook it with a spray of it's acid. Often found in large bodies of water. They generally are found in massive numbers. They contain a toxic poison within the tips of their tentacles."
Jaron nearly lost it, as he could see the acid from the tentacool. Eat away at the man's flesh, it looked like paper burning in a sense. He could see the bone, then soon that wore away into a pulpy mess. The boat was gone, those two men gone. The second fisherman still frantically pushing for the raft. He was near the edge. Jaron crawled over, and reached out. The fisherman reached the edge of the raft. He gripped Jaron's hand. Before he could help himself up. He jolted suddenly and savagely. He cried out in pain and was beginning to get pulled back. He was foaming at the mouth and contorting. A single tentacle pierced the mans neck. Clean through, inches away from Jaron's face.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
>>13157600 A bit of blood spattered from the mouth of the fisherman, who clearly was going into and beyond shock. It went right into the face of the awestruck trainer. Jaron let go, he knew it was futile now. He fell back and sobbed. He was alone again. Unsure and unknowing of how to escape. He held his legs tightly against his chest. Sobbing uncontrollably, he curled up into a ball and wept into a sleep...
He awoke into the early evening, he was a bit more sunburned. More so on the one side. He could feel his skin trying to peel. He ached. He was now dehydrated, and becoming hungry. What could he do? He layed upon his back and stared at the clouds passing by. Still grasping at some concept that this was really reality. He was really stranded. He really could die anytime. The grim lashes of reality dug deep into him. He shivered. Not wanting to come to terms with that. He tried to sleep it off. It was the only thing he could do.
Jaron was upstarted by the screams of more victims. It was a small group of trainers this time. Some of them just barely over 10, he imagined. He was a late trainer himself. He didn't start til he was already 16. Regardless, Jaron could only watch in despair as he watched the tentacool make short work of the budding trainers. Male or female, nature didn't regard anything about it's prey. A quarry is a quarry. The eldest looking trainer, made a swim for his raft too. A stoic determination upon her face. Her brown hair held held out of her face with hair clips. He stumbled up faintly, and made his way over to the edge. Subconsciously, he couldn't help but stare at her breasts partially. Her form was prominent under her soaked clothing. He felt ignorant and childish for doing so. Either way, he hoped she made it. He didn't want to see another die. She was a hope for him to stay alive. At least motivation, companionship. Someone..anyone. He didn't want to die alone. "No, he thought" that's not going to happen.
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>>13157817 (grr, I thought I proof read enough in that last post) She was inches away. She made it! The girl began to pull herself upon the structure. Then a spray of acid shot out of the ocean. Hitting her clearly on the arm, just below her elbow. She shrieked in pain and fell to the ground. Writhing in affliction. Jaron acted , as swift as possible. There wasn't much time before it would travel, and eat it's way up her arm. Based on his assumptions. He dragged her over to the other side of the raft and dangled her arm over the edge. He began stomping on it, a loud crack could be heard over the blistering sounds of the acid.
She cried out more. A shrill cry of woe existed her mouth. He stomped one more time, before the acid damaged area snapped off. Jaron dunked her open wound into the ocean, to try and rid the acid residue as best he could. Jaron ripped a large portion of his jean legging off, and tried to doctor her wound. He checked her pack, and pulled out a first aid kit. Doing everything to make sure she was going to get through this. Jaron kept her from the brink, stopping the bleeding, and tended the wounds til it was as finished thoroughly as plausible. He fed her pain killers. She was passing in and out from the pain and the shock. He held her closely. Trying to be comforting, despite the unsettling meeting. He passed out soon after.
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>>13156240 If you're not using explicit nudity/sex, I suppose a horror fic would have to have really exceptionally over the top blood and gore to be NSFW. I'm having a hard time picturing what that would look like, even.
Anonymous
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>>13158054 He was brought awake from her groaning and heavy breathing, Jaron tried to shake her awake "Hey are you..." He was interrupted by her suddenly vomiting. Jaron rushed to pull out the kit, and opened his pokedex. He hit it a few times and finally got to read the smaller info. "Water-Poison" he gradually read out. She was coughing up blood a bit, and heaving. Jaron checked the pack and the kit for a antidote.
None was to be had. He could only watch, as she gurgled up more until she couldn't anymore. Jaron tried to be soothing. Embracing her a bit, and trying to calm her down. She had heavier breathing and in a few more hours. She was dead.
Jaron, was on his knees. Beside himself in grief. He screamed and shouted in agony. He sat up and with melancholy, dumped her corpse into the ocean. Not to his surprise. She was pulled in by the many tentacles. A red glow and black myst engulfed her. He fell over with emotional exaustion, and his eyes grew heavy again.
Jaron woke up on the third evening. His will gone, his mind numb. The food in her backpack was spoiled and unedible. There was no water in her pack. He stared at the ocean, it's waves and crashes almost hypnotic like always. He leaned forward. The red glow of the tentacool shined from the depths. Jaron eyes were lifeless, he sighed. And without further hesitation, he dove into the sea. The glowing red lights became brighter. More enticing. More embracing and loving. Maybe it wasn't going to be so bad. He watched the black acid slowly float around him. He closed his eyes for the last time.
Kyro !!nLlvQNhx+AF
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bah I am done now. I was going to go longer, but I start work soon. And this comp restarting rustled my jimmies.
Anonymous
There needs to be a fic about Sylveon horny tiem. :3
Anonymous
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>>13159033 I actually haven't seen any written smut of Sylveon.
Anonymous
>>13159033 Oh wait, wrong image.
Anonymous
>>13159140 >Prefering pleb yaoi instead of serperior yuri SylveonxHydreigon in the other hand... Anonymous
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>>13159203 >implying that male Sylveon aren't superior Anonymous
>>13159203 boys fucking boys is better than girls fucking girls deal w/ it
Anonymous
>>13159242 I can see cute fic potential involving
bi-curious Glaceon and Sylveon boys. :3
Anonymous
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>>13159263 I've actually been writing a stupid smut fic about a Glaceon boy who gets grounded and misses a date with a Leafeon girl he likes because his little brother Sylveon finds his porn stash and the parents walk in, and then the Sylveon wants to be his brother's "girlfriend" for the night to make up for it while the parents are gone. Knowing me though I'll never finish it.
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