Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Did everyone suddenly lose interest?
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
OP, we should organize times to do this; people may not always be on this late.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158101 Everyone's been up at these times when I made these threads, though. You may have a point, though.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13158032 Nope. Just took me a while to find this. Also, it's kinda late where I am, but I'll try to get something up tonight before I have to go. Have faith, OP
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158123 Ok, and no pressure.
Anonymous
>>13158032 Nope, didn't lose interest yet. I don't quite understand what we're supposed to do after we select a following though.
Anonymous
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13158238 Start writing
Do we create our own obstacles or does OP wanna throw out a backstory?
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
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>>13158252 >backstory My bad, i meant conflict
Anonymous
>>13158252 That's what I figured but I think OP should provide a bit more direction in what we write. If we all just wrote whatever we wanted based off our own imaginations, I feel like our ideas would end up being a huge clusterfuck of contradicting visions that couldn't possibly exist amongst each other's.
Anonymous
>>13157383 Question about Ho-oh. The ability to raise the dead at the cost of another's life... Does the person you're "exchanging" have to be within a certain range of you?
Pic unrelated.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158238 >>13158248 Go nuts.
>>13158252 I guess if you want a backstory/conflict, you could write something like a few select people becoming various disciples and then writing an account from one of their perspectives or even the perspective of a bystander. It up to you, really.
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13158306 Yea, plus somebody suggested we get the best stories, mash 'em together and make a canon
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13158319 Oh yeah. That's certainly a good idea.
>>13158310 I'd imagine they'd have to be within sight.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13158332 Ho-oh guy again. Do you have to bring the person you're trying to resurrect with you? Like do both have to be in the same vicinity?
Anonymous
Is this human world, or pokemon world?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158366 It would make sense that way, I suppose.
Updated.
>>13158379 Whatever becomes canon. AKA it could go wither way.
Anonymous
Can someone plz post this in a higher resolution
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158401 How much higher?
Anonymous
Pretty high I just can't read it if you can post a higher one then I would really appreciate it man
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158434 Have you tried opening the image in a new tab? 3720x3600 is pretty big.
Anonymous
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where are lugia, mew, arceus, dialga, palkia, and the lake trio? and shouldn't Giratina be about anarchy or destruction?
Anonymous
I woke up in a cave, completely unaware of my surroundings. Last thing I remember was drifting off to some TV channel i wasn't really paying attention to.
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13158497 Shit, 4chan ate my trip
Opinions so far?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158523 I love it.
You've heard of pastebin, right? Aside form your computer, it's a good place to keep your stories.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13158497 IT BEGINS.
Nice one, man, keep it up. I'll wait until you're finished to post what I have.
By the way, it's huge as fuck; almost 2k words. Anyone know a better way of throwing it in here asides just dumping?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13158683 Pastebin is your friend
Anonymous
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>>13157383 Now that it's complete, maybe you can adjust the location of each god on the grid
like placing all of the gen III legendaries next to each other
Anonymous
>>13158032 Told you bro. The thing keeping it alive was the theorycrafting.
Nobody actually wants to write.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13158854 Say what nigga?
http://pastebin.com/UrQ5Ujwx So I tried my hand at doing a scene about the first time trying to keep the agenda of a Girtina follower. Not my best but hey, I tried. (And I just like to use that name for characters.)
what you guys think?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13158936 Wonderful! A few inconsistencies and errors here and there, but I like it.
Anonymous
You should do a strawpoll, OP. See which gods are most popular, see where peoples' allegiances lie.I'd follow Reshiram even though he seems comparatively underpowered. He's perfect for me.
Anonymous
>>13159102 >Reshiram is perfect for me Is that you, JustinRPG?
Anonymous
>>13159118 No, and I'm really sorry that I just googled that.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13159039 I didn't proofread and english is my second language, but glad it was good. Now to wait more
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13159102 http://strawpoll.me/280870 >>13159134 Everyone finds out about him/it eventually
>>13159145 What's your first language? Anonymous
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>>13159134 Don't worry, I just did the same and am regretting it wholeheartedly
Anonymous
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How the fuck can I even choose
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>>13159156 Portuguese. I had to refrain from using a mordekaiser es numero uno image because I don't like the joke but it's so fucking fun to use it
Anonymous
>Giratina confirmed for OP
Anonymous
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>>13158032 I'd be in here, but I'm currently storytiming in /co/
i'll be around more Monday, it's my birthday tomorrow.
pls dont let this die, i like it quite a lot
Anonymous
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I have a question about Kyurem. If a friend/partner were to die, would you be punished for that? What about losing your own life?
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
Not Suicune, damn it, stop chillin' on lakes and write some stuff so we won't lose this thread. I'm out of time to write more stuff tonight
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
http://pastebin.com/0ZHkq6xL I haven't done much creative writing, but I do have a lot of ideas.
Criticism is appreciated
but please go easy Anonymous
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Fuck yo' candy-ass mergin shit. Mista Muthafuckin Money all day erryday.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13159343 Sweet start; I'm not a fan of using "!" mid narration and I think the "vision" was a little too downplayed; it is supposed to be an Utopia that would get the follower in awe, cue why it would be a vision to use when trying to recruit people for the cause. Aside that, though, it's pretty solid. Keep it up, man, keep it up.
Anonymous
I thoroughly enjoy the idea of Yveltal disciples. You know, like, "You were meant to die" shit, not evil just keeping things as fate determined they should be. However, at the end it says that disciples are ageless, cannot succumb to disease, etc, so what would be the point of using the life energy sapped from those who were destined to die if I am ageless? Also, this also means disciples cannot die? I need more elaboration on this.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13159384 I assume that if you get into some shit and is about to die you can use that to nulify yourself. Like a gunshot wound, for example; if you have the time, you spend the life energy of others to save yourself.
Or maybe I'm jut talking shit, I'm too lazy to scroll back up and check.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
I'm surprised that no-one's following Genesect. He had enough votes to make onto the chart, but doesn't have any followers? That's just weird.
>>13159343 I like it. I'll try to write my own story tomorrow.
Anonymous
>>13159405 There aren't many people voting on the poll. Tomorrow afternoon, maybe.
If I could pick 2, I'd go between Kyurem or Genesect.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13159411 It is late, I suppose
>>13159384 I'll fix it, something along the lines of
>>13159404 >>13159270 Good point, I can think of 2 legendaries off of the top of my head whose taboos merely restate the agenda. They need to be different, if not harsher.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
Pic related inspired my choice
>>13159368 Okay, thanks. Out of all my ideas, I don't have much of what the city looks like.
I read yours and it's very suspenseful, in a good way.
>>13159425 Zekrom? :( Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13159450 No, Giratina and Kyurem.
>Giratina: Setting people free implies you shouldn't re-enslave them >Kyurem: Hoarding implies you shouldn't lose anything Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>>13159463 >A percentage of all that is acquired must be given to Kyurem himself through a portal or something because Kyurem is a greedy asshole >Giratina followers are forbidden to have BDSM sexytime PROBLEM SOLVED
Not really but it's late and I'm sleepy, cut me some slack Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
Allright it's late and I'm getting incoherent at my typing. I'm out. Those that stay, post them stories, niggas.
>>13159450 Thanks! I was going to write a kind of epilogue but I realized I'd just mess something up. And post more stuff, man, we need that sweet sweet canon compilation.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
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>>13159569 Will do, I'm currently writing down ideas for the character and team for consistency.
Anonymous
>>13159156 OP, do you want us to answer this based on how our personalities match up with the deity agendas or which powers we would like to have?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13159606 This is supposed to be a choice you make. Yes, it's which powers you want when you consider the agenda and taboo.
Anonymous
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Giratina. Though I was sad to see there was no Mew allegiance.
Anonymous
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OP this is amazing. I could create a really nice anti hero with Yvetal or Deoxys, but I haven't chosen which one I like most. If you're around tomorrow (or later today, I should say) and I see this thread then I'll post the story that I write.
Anonymous
>>13159463 Not really sure if this is quite what you're looking for but a few ideas:
Giratina: You already have not restraining a person, but how about adding something about not being able to force/coerce a person into doing something? Not infringing upon "free will" basically. (Unless it is required in order to free someone else, of course.) I would assume forcing someone to release their slaves would be both acceptable and encouraged.
Kyurem: Maybe add that not only will a follower be punished for not reclaiming lost "wealth", but also if they don't continue to expand their hoard? (So punish them for both stagnation and loss.)
Not sure if either of those actually helps with the problem, so sorry if they're shit ideas.
Anonymous
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>>13159894 Probably because Giratina's thing gives you everything you need to be a hero and its restriction is "you have to be a hero when people need a hero"
Not Mewtwo !!A0/lWspso1i
My allegiances lie with Mewtwo!
Guy who suggested Mewtwo !!A0/lWspso1i
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>>13160246 I didn't know tripCODES carried over between distinct names even if the pass was the same.
Oh well, this is me, at any rate.
Hopefully I'll find this thread early enough tomorrow.
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
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>>13159318 Little does he know i just woke up to go river fishing
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
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>>13158936 ehehe... "indian elephant"
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
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>>13158936 whoa, this was awesome. I don't know if I'll write something if I can't match this level. I loved how you introduced the Kyurem follower to the scene
Anonymous
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Would it be totally not ok to write a satirical piece based on this? I love the idea, but all my favourite legendaries (Articuno, Registeel and Lugia) aren't options.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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So apparently today is that weird day when the planets align and everyone is out of the computer and we'll only be back to normal tomorrow.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
http://pastebin.com/pKEmjFn3 Here's my second installment. Try to guess what Pokémon Mars is.
Anonymous
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
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>>13163442 The Generation is correct
Anonymous
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
I want to pick Giratina, because i feel it would create a more compelling theme, but i'm afraid people would criticize for excessive Giratina stories.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
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>>13165030 We just need to get some canon going. Post what you want.
Anonymous
It's my first try at this kind of thing so be cool.
http://pastebin.com/kmR5THtQ Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
Here's mine so far. I feel I have trouble with transition and fluidity.
http://pastebin.com/Qcr4yWfm Anonymous
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>>13165434 hmm not bad,I like it.
I honestly based mine on some of yours tbh
Anonymous
>>13157383 i saved the picture last thread so i really dont need to post any further
the story shall continue to play out and im not a crazy fast typist so i wont be able to keep up with it and share everything
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13159894 That's already incorporated into Giratina's Taboo. However, I did add to Kyurem's taboo.
>>13165434 I like it. Will there be more?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13165541 Well, the image can and most likely will be updated, so try to keep tabs on it.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
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I remember in a previous thread, someone mentioned using a battle simulator to play out battles. I think it's a good idea, seeing as I prefer the turn-based battles opposed to the anime's style ("Dodge it!")Typing out battles doesn't appeal to me either :/. Anyone else think this is a good idea?
Anonymous
>>13165543 Ouden Menei and Panta Rhei's (Love the names, where'd they come from?) descriptions make no sense. The flow of everything? See from where the landmasses have changed? What does that mean?
Anonymous
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>>13165543 I preferred Celebi's old quote. It was more poetic which is fitting for Celebi.
Adding Xerneas and Lugia soon?
Anonymous
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Can we change Zekrom's and Victini's quotes to something less casual?
Anonymous
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Eon dragons master race
Anonymous
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>>13165684 Some Greek guy named Hiraclitoris.
Anonymous
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Mewtwo is an easy decision for me it's abilities fit my style quite nicely, and i can see ways to stretch those abilities to their fullest. It's agenda and taboo are easy enough to obey and i it's unlikely i will come into conflict with another disciple(maybe yvetal).
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
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>>13165543 Of course. I'm gonna continue with Levi(The protagonist) learning from the experienced disciple
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13165353 I like it, but remember, when you type dialogue, you have to press enter after typing it, like so
blahblahblah
"blahblahblah?"
blahblahblah
Also, you may want to keep a trip, just to identify which one i'm reading
Anonymous
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>>13165543 I feel like Darkrai's taboo needs to have a much more severe punishment than "lel u r bad and u shud feel bad"
Anonymous
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>>13165434 I like it. I think you're probably the best writer we have so far. I might try my hand at this later.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13166031 thanks, I'll keep that in mind
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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I'm back with a shinning new load of free time to write, as soon as I check out the new stories.
Anonymous
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>>13165543 Can we switch Zekrom's and Celebi's back to the previous version? I find that they had more personality and suited their goals more. These sound quite impersonal and dry.
Also, is it supposed to be spelt "Lvuk" for Victini?
Anonymous
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>>13165543 Shouldn't followers of Giratina also be able to traverse through reflective surfaces as well as doors?
I mean, that's what Giratina does in that one movie.
Anonymous
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
Yvelta disciple story fresh out of the oven, folks. It is a follow up to
>>13158936 , but focusing on a different character this time.
http://pastebin.com/Zg8bBnYv Hopefully it's also good.
Guy who help with the Hoenn Trio
Posting here to say that I will be writing something up in a while (might post either today or tomorrow).
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>>13167232 So far, we're still seeing what is canon and what is not. It could go either way, according to OP, so just write whatever feels better
Anonymous
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The marked people. Do they retain memories and knowledge after they transfer to a new body?
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
>>13167199 Alan should've punched Axel out.
Here's the next part of my story
http://pastebin.com/9LXdkCYF Opinions?
Anonymous
i have a question
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>>13167623 Nicely written, and it's good to see that the impacts of being chosen are coming slowly. I can only wonder what a major freak out the characters would have if it all was instantaneous. Keep it up, keep it up!
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13167992 Nope, only real places I'd say. LIke the ultimate shortcut
Anonymous
>>13168026 aw man
I was making up a story in which a Giratina follower calls a friend, who is also a Victini follower, to "see something cool" and then they end up at the French Revolution.
At some point they end up doing something that alters the timeline and are pursued by a Celebi disciple.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13168056 I was actually going to make to where followers could go anywhere in space AND time as long as there was a door. Either I forgot to implement it or someone said it would make Giratina even more OP.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13168056 .....That, however, is seriously cool and I'm now urging you to write that anyway. Because I want to read it.
Anonymous
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>>13168107 okay,then
i'll post the link to the pastebin here later
Anonymous
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just to clarify, the moment someone becomes a disciple, are they aware of all their powers?
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
alright then
I tweaked the story a bit and add more but it kind of seems over the top to me.
Opinions?
http://pastebin.com/kmR5THtQ Anonymous
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13168623 I don't like the way it flows. Also, you're supposed to add spaces after commas.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13169324 ah alright.
how do you think I can fix it?
beside the comma thing
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13169350 >It was a late night like so many others,sitting alone and pondering about the condition of this world. >I thought to myself "Oh how sad is the human condition". >I soon dozed off with many things on my mind. This part feels a lot shorter than it should be. I also wouldn't use the word "Condition"
I would reword it to something like
>It was late. Here I was, sitting and thinking about what a shithole the world's become. It's saddening how depraved we've become. We're always killing each other over some stupid squabble, and no one wins in the end. Before I knew it, I lost my train of thought and fell asleep. Anonymous
>>13157383 You can't have Rayquaza, Leader of the Free, give his followers a task. Also change the word CHARGED in the second line.
im too high for the rest
>>You are mostly. >>Water, ayways Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13169426 Alright, my rewording might be the same length or even shorter, but don't use the enter key so often.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13169435 He's supposed to be protector of the sky and the moderator between Groudon and Kyogre
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13169436 LOL alright,I'll I try to rephrase things and hold myself on the enter button.
but my main concern is if it's sticking to the realm of what we're creating or is it too much?
Anonymous
alright,here's part of the story about the Victini dude, the Guratina dude and the French RevolutionPlease be gentle, I'm not used to writing stories ;__;
Anonymous
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13169772 Best one so far.
I'm suddenly tempted to add a clause where skilled disciples can travel through time. Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
This is me, not contributing at all
http://pastebin.com/9Gw1ep6i >>13169515 Remember what I said about not using the enter button so much? The only exception to that, iirc, is using short quotes.
Anonymous
>>13169826 >>13169843 gee, thanks anons.
it's getting late here, so i'm gonna do chapter 2 tomorrow.
but just to be sure
is there anything i should improve on?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13169997 >"...I dunno, it's like... I just think:I want to get 'there'.And poof, this place leads me there naturally." Don't use the enter key so much, either
Anonymous
>>13170020 Sorry,english is not my first language.
how should I correct this?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13170043 >"...I dunno, it's like... I just think:I want to get 'there'.And poof, this place leads me there naturally." Should be...
>"...I dunno. It's like, I just think "I want to get 'there'" and poof. This place leads me there naturally." Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13170043 Your grammar is actually really good for a foreign person, though.
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
>>13169951 >"PAY UP, FAG" top lel
>>13170043 Line break when there is a new speaker, change in mood/tone, or change in setting (this includes time and place). This is how I do it and it seems to work.
Anonymous
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>>13170083 >>13170089 >>13170110 thanks
okay, see you guys tomorrow
Anonymous
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13170242 Some anon suggested the quote. If that's where the quote came from, I'll be disappointed.
Anonymous
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>>13169951 >"PAY UP,FAG!" lost it so hard
Anonymous
I'm writing a story for Genesect right now. Why are these Pokemon choosing people as followers? Is there a point or are they just gathering people for the sake of it?
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
>>13170395 People are choosing who they want to follow. Each "god" has an agenda that their disciples must accomplish.
Anonymous
>>13170412 Yes, but why are they trying to promote their agenda? To see who is the best?
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
>>13170441 I think the question is why are you trying to promote their agenda? But legendary pokémon usually want the world to conform to their ideals. (see Mewtwo in the first movie).
Anonymous
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>>13170561 Okay then. Thanks for your help. I'll continue writing.
Anonymous
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>>13169951 Not bad at all OP.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13169951 ah yes,you had mentioned flow, right?
what exactly is wrong with it,is it too slow,too fast,abrupt?
honestly to me it feels like I'm saying "AND THEN AND THEN ANDTHEN"
Anonymous
Anonymous
Tried my hand at Eon disciples.
http://pastebin.com/PcBHifgV Feedback would be p great
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13171689 hmm seems very cutsie and stuff but I kinda like it,it felts well with the theme of latios and latias
Anonymous
>>13161677 no feedback at all? not even negative?
Anonymous
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>>13171903 Ok, just read it.
Good to see you chose Genesect. It was a little muddled in parts, and some parts were far more detailed than others but overall it was good. Readable, though we still know very little about the character.
Spelling and grammar could do with some work, too.
Awesome to see another disciple of the same legendary introduced, if briefly. I'm excited to see where this goes. Keep it up!
Anonymous
>>13171689 Holy hell yes. Love this. Perfect twist at the end.
Not Mewtwo !QqL8nX9URE
My attempt at this. Please give feedback, no matter how harsh!
Anonymous
Not Mewtwo !QqL8nX9URE
Not Celebi
I feel inadequate and weird and this is literally my first fanfic (is that what we're calling this?). I don't know if I'm breaking rules or anything, if I am please regard as non canon.
I am super in love with this project, OP. Guys, be as critical as you like, but please, be gentle.
http://pastebin.com/TrU6JrLd Anonymous
Is this thread officially dead?
Anonymous
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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Let's give a bump to this bitch.
Anonymous
>>13172307 I liked it. It could be developed into something good. BUT maybe the change made to the world might be too radical. Change the setting to Unova maybe?
And the final part is most likely too "violent" for a Celebi follower... Making him realize his mistake in a later story coulbe be some nice character developement.
Mr. Peebles !1XJBwdi6AU
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Superior Genesect disciple reporting in
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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Darkrai disciple reporting in with a bump
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13172307 I like it,it's a nice set up,tells us a little bit more about your character
Amok
I would rather choose Giratina or Mewtwo but I wrote something for Genesect.
http://pastebin.com/nCEgsjPW Amok
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>>13175645 Also, feedback would be nice, once there are more people here.
Anonymous
>>13171689 Oh boy, Incest route incoming
it's pretty good
Anonymous
I don't know if this is possible but I feel as if jirachi should be on her anyone else agree pic unrelated
Anonymous
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>>13176775 please elaborate.
what would be it's agenda and taboo
what powers would be given to the disciples
etc
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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http://pastebin.com/kmR5THtQ story continued.
tbh even if this thread dies i'm still gonna continue
Not Celebi
>>13174277 >>13175061 Thanks for the feedback!
The plan is to somehow gain enough favour to go back to before the meteor strike and prevent NF from ever happening, putting the story back in the correct timeframe.
I agree it is probably a little too violent, but part of the idea is that he chose a god that didn't really suit him because he felt "compelled to choose" something. Plus a "we love trees and nature and time" stance could be a little one dimensional, not really allowing for much character development. I'll write more tonight, maybe.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13176944 Oh that sounds pretty interesting,hope to see how it comes out
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13172087 >>13175665 Thanks!
>>13171770 Yeah, I thought for Lati@s something less serious and more cutesy would work better
Anonymous
Hey I'm that jirachi guy and there goal=grant people's wishes ie. Make them happy and taboo=crushing someone's dreams ie. Blowing up a guys restaurant and the powers=can wish for stuff and grant wishes and turn steel or fly sorry if it's a lot but how does this sound?
Anonymous
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>>13178236 could be cool, as long as you limit how many wishes the Disciple can grant to himself
Anonymous
Ok then how does 10 or maybe 5 sound and you can get more as favor improves
Anonymous
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>>13178323 just wait till Not Arceus shows up
Anonymous
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Jirachi guy again also you could wish nothing to drastic like reviving someone and every time you made a wish I sapped some of your energy so it wouldn't be op
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13177283 Honestly I took a little inspiration from yours to balance the seriousness of mine
>>13176944 I also took a little inspiration from you,you did a very good job introducing your character
Anonymous
>mfw i'm completely stuck on how should i finish this chapter
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13179469 mind if I see your story so far?
Anonymous
>>13179488 sure,here you go
http://pastebin.com/GfSuuFmz the real problem is that i have 2 endings for this chapter, and one of them can end up dragging this part,and the other is not that clear in my head yet
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/ctU6MqVq Alright, here's the start of what I'm working on. The cave itself is up next.
There's also a Prologue on that account, but I didn't like how it turned out, so read at your own risk.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13179526 so far so good,it's fun
what exactly do have in mind?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13178323 If you're going to do that, make it 5 wishes tops.
Anonymous
>>13179660 well, in one of them
the leader sends an image of the utopia he envisions to everyone's heads, and our main charcters realizes they're not alone. The other is
they call it a day,but i'm not sure if i should narrate the war or not Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13179717 I'd say go with the first one
but with the celebi thing make it that it's someone you already met from or someone you know,make the reveal of who it is a surprise instead
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13180357 thanks for the tip
but i'm calling it a day
see ya
Anonymous
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>>13178236 Every power of a legendary Pokémon's disciples have been based on unique abilities demonstrated by said Pokémon either in game or in stories that can be attributed to that Pokémon alone. Just because Jirachi is a steel type that happens to float about doesn't mean turning into steel and flying should be powers that Jirachi's followers have. Mew flies but that isn't a power his disciples should have. Celebi flies and again, that isn't a power specific to Celebi. Giratina, Zekrom, Reshiram, Ho-oh and Yveltal all fly. Get the picture?
Anonymous
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Is it possible to put things in italics in Pastebin?
Anonymous
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>>13171689 That twist. Not really sure how I feel about it. I liked how it was written though.
Not Celebi
Part Two! (same paste, just further down) Lots of dialogue, which I am still grappling with a little, this is very much a work in progress. Again, first fanfic.
http://pastebin.com/TrU6JrLd I named my character because it was too difficult to do dialogue leaving him nameless. Any feedback will be appreciated, good or bad.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13182380 oh god,you are such a tease with the name.
things seem to be getting a bit more interesting
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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Bump while I expand on my story
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>mfw I come back after sometime without looking around and I see this is still going >mfw there's still stories to come, too
Anonymous
Jirachi guy again and I know they all fly but they have to have a second power cause if they use all their wishes their screwed for a long time and flying and turning to steel were the only things I could think of anyone have any suggestions
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13157383 Ok i want to play. I will follow celebi. Can someone introduce me to the game tellin me the most important things happened, and how to properly play? Also, do i have to namefag?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13184904 This has really just started. Write a story and if it's good enough, it'll become canon.
Namefagging's up to you.
>>13184929 >Bump >Sage choose one, anon.
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
>>13184904 It's a writefag thread, not a roleplay one; we thought about making a RP thread but we agreed it would get too messy, so we started off with this. So pretty much just write something you want to tell with this setting in mind and go for it. Check the pastebin links if you're still not sure what I mean
Anonymous
Question: is it possible that disciples could have a civil war? It would let me work on a nice story concept.And explain the rise and fall of rome in this world.
>>13184963 I writefagged a pair of games before, but not in english, which is not my mother language. I'm not too good at english but i will now try to write something. Expect something very short and with basic language.
Anonymous
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>>13185300 if by "have" you mean "start", then absolutely
Anonymous
>>13157383 >choose Celebi >go back in time to pre-Sylveon /vp/ >make a "speculate on new types" thread >say that Fairy type would be a fantastic addition >wait until everyone calls me autistic and fucking retarded >screencap thread >go forward in time to where Fairy type is announced >post screencap and "I told you so" >mfw
>>13185385 Dave was eating in the dining room. His mother, as always, was sleeping on the couch, drunk, and he had to cook his food himself. Out of the house there was his only friend, Loris the Grovyle, guarding the door. "Bah, shitty food again. Life sucks. Society sucks. Every goddamn thing sucks".
Dave's dream was to live alone in the forest with his Grovyle, as he always thought that humans were a weird species, hurting and damaging itself, while only pokemons could he stand. He hated everything modern and technologic, and had a wild nature. But he just turned 17 and was at school, and could not just do it like if it was nothing. So he carryed on every day of his life, waiting for the opportunity to fullfy his dreams. After dinner he decided to take a walk with Grovyle. They went to the near forestal area, and stayed there for hours, hunting little pokemons, climbing rocks and trees, and shit. When the night came Dave decided to go back home, but after a while he saw a hole in the ground.
<Hey Grovyle, look at that, a cave! Do you wanna be an Explorer today?>
Grovyle made a grunt of approval. They went into the cave, but it was very dark and could see nothing. They proceded on all fours for a bunch of meters and then....fell
...
Dave
>>13185586 >>13185385 ...
"Where...where am i?"
Dave woke up. He couldn't tell how much time passed, minutes, hours....days?
After realising be woke up after falling in the dark he immediatly started looking for his friend. Fortunately he was near him, just woke up aswell.
<well Grovyle, let's see how to get out of here>
They started looking in the dark
<Grovyle!> (seriously i don't know, should i make pokemon speak human language, just say their names or doing normal animal-like sounds?)
<What? What is it? Ohhh... A light!>
Dave and Loris went to the direction of the light where....they found some carved rocks in circle. Dave Walles near to them, and by approaching he terryfiedly noticed other people were looking at them. He noticed a rock with something resembling a snake and tried to touch it. As soon as his hand went near to the rock, he started hearing a voice talking to him. The voice talked about rayquaza, the rules to follow and the given powers for being his disciple. He went to listen about some more stones, when finally he went to the one with a leaf on it. It talked about Celebi, God of Nature and Time, he heard that his main task was to defend nature, and that he could fucking travel in time. He had no doubt, and choose that one.
Anonymous
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>>13185550 IT'S ALL CLEAR NOW
Anonymous
Anonymous
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
Anonymous
>>13161677 Genesect follower back in a new action-packed sequel
http://pastebin.com/uh22zbyq Anonymous
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>>13179606 interesting. Ho-Oh incoming?
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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http://pastebin.com/kmR5THtQ the third installation of my story
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13157383 I definatly go for mewtwo. Firstly I become a genius and secondly I hate the country side. Win win for me and I can still live comfortably off my inventions and help others.
Anonymous
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With a friend we would love to add this to our Pen and Paper Pokemon RPG game. Is there a text only version of that image?
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
I'm back, fuckers. Gonna read through all the stories, then get to writing.
Anonymous
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It would be appreciated if someone (other than me) compiled all the pastebin links in another pastebin link. Could then be put in the OP of threads.
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
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>>13184648 Nothing more will be added. Please stop
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
Oh god I feel so unmotivated to write
Not Giratina !!2WknN6Axpqa
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>>13191451 We all know the feeling bro. But it's just that, fuck motivation; if you want to get things done, sit your ass down and WRITE. Then you can rub it on our faces because we're lazy faggots or something.
(I'm kinda unmotivated too but it's more because I'm out of break and there's work riding on my ass. I'll get this shit going again)
Amok
>>13175645 No opinions on mine? Is that good news or bad news?
Anonymous
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I'm going with Latios/Latias. It'll be nice to find someone worth my time.
Anonymous
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>>13191633 Villain/10
good job don't mind the lack of replies, there's not many people here to begin with
Anonymous
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I hope to try out writing Zekrom soon. Not the most interesting but it appeals to me the most.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13190439 Please act immature and scream at me if I missed someone or their stories
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LgUchYy-1u13UcJSlMZRwwnUwrYUMGvsKonpiOfcR7M/edit Let me know if you can see my real name pls ;_; >>13175645 Lovin' it
>>13189498 lel/10
Anonymous
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>>13192306 Yes, we can see it.
Anyone has the text of the CYOA?
Anonymous
smooth diff'rent strokes reference there op...
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
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>Go to pastebin post >I have 59 hits
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
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>>13192386 I don't watch that show. In fact, I hardly watch TV at all. Where'd you see the reference, though?
Not Implying !!f5t7F4Sgv+d
>>13192306 You missed one of mine
>>13167623 How do you put a straw through a can like that? Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
Fucking 4chan thinks my post is spam. Can't update my story
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13192747 Add the link to your story as a comment on the document
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13192757 Where do I comment at? Sorry, i've never used pastebin
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Also, does anyone remember that guy who made that doodle of the cave? Does anyone know what happened to him?
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
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>>13192881 I do, but as to what happened, I have no idea. I'd offer to draw stuff, but outside of the written word, I have no artistic talent.
On that note, though, I've finished. Might make more parts of this, but right now nothing's coming to mind for me to expand it beyond a one-shot.
http://pastebin.com/tQbh8RvA Already have another idea, but I'm going to wait until tomorrow to start writing it, in case I get any ideas as to how to expand it further.
Definitely Entei !570yq7nFOs
Any advice for someone who wants to try writefagging?
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13193161 Go all out. Write what you think is engaging.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
>>13193161 read a little of everyone's take some ideas but make them your own
Anonymous
>>13193419 >>13193180 thanks guys, I wanted to get the power grab out of the way so here we go
pastebin.com/Nf4Nsr6U sorry for the lack of pokemon, but this was moreso exposition than plot Anonymous
>>13193495 garymotherfuckingstu/10
Well written and such, but...
Anonymous
>>13193520 care to elaborate?
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13193527 The son of an asshole that sees Pokemon as inferior beings, who is additionally implied to be a prominent member of an evil team. At the very least, his family is wealthy enough to have a jail cell in their house just in case it's needed. Generic "oh no my dad's abusing X that can't defend itself STOP IT!" backstory leading to him being physically abused as penance. Immediately afterwards, becomes one of the few chosen to be disciples, and is personally singled out by the not-quite edgy god that teeters just on the line between grimdark and whiteknight. I think that covers it.
Also, forgot my name/trip, but the last post was me too.
Anonymous
>>13193562 Yeah I can see what you mean. But just to disprove some things
>the father is only for introduction to the character for better or worse >the god appealed to him the most because he is a white knight, not picked him but yeah, i guess i should work on it more.
no good can come from listening to Space Jam while writing Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
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>>13193576 >>13193527 keep forgetting my name
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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Wondered what the fuck happened to you guys.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13193576 Considering how he's just looking around, then suddenly start's hearing Giratina's quotes/agenda/etc. while the Giratina stone calls attention to itself, it really doesn't sound like it appealed to him as opposed to calling out specifically to him.
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
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>>13193613 It was just my interpretation of picking powers, instead of "i like this, I'll pick it!"
Dave
>>13192306 I pastebin'd my story:
>>13185586 >>13185603 Here:
http://pastebin.com/w5XinrVt OMG HOW COULD YOU FORGET ME YOU ARE SUCH AN ASSOLE OMHOMBOMH OMGWTFBBQ
Thank you for your attention
Dave
>>13193624 Also, any opinion? I know, i know, the guy seems edgy as fuck but it's gonna change
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
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>>13193629 >(seriously i don't know, should i make pokemon speak human language, just say their names or doing normal animal-like sounds?) Animal sounds, I think.
Not Celebi
Part One (New Fallarbor) Finished! (YAAAAYYY!)
Section 3 is as long as the first two combined, and I'm pretty happy with it. Imma take a break for a while, now.
http://pastebin.com/TrU6JrLd Enjoy, hate, be apathetic toward. I don't mind. Still in love with the concept and loving each and every story y'all post! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
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>>13193629 I would vote to just skip over Pokemon dialogue, just "Grovyle nodded in agreement" instead of "[grunt]"
also,
>Bah, shitty food again. Life sucks. Society sucks. Every goddamn thing sucks made me skim
Dave
>>13193683 Why do you guys all call yourself "not legendarypokemonname"?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13192591 Magic, I guess
>>13193683 I really liked how you introduced the Ho-oh disciple.
>>13193629 >waiting for the opportunity to fullfy his dreams I wouldn't call him edgy, but he does seem a bit off
>>13193576 Listen to this instead
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=641tlRk87X0 >>13193562 >line between grimdark and whiteknight So would that be grimknight or whitedark?
>>13193740 That's my fault. I started it.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
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>>13193750 Whitedark. Grimknight sounds more on the grimdark side of the spectrum.
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
>>13193750 whitedark
cookies and cream hershey's bar aww yiss
>13193576 (You) >Listen to this instead Fire Emblem is the shit. I like you. And that glorious Severa
update: editing the prologue and then working on part two.
changed the character's role from son to worker on the farm, and the dream events
Not Celebi
>>13193629 YAAAAYYY ANOTHER CELEBI! Are we the first ones to have more than one disciple? Or does Giratina have two?
Anyway, love it.
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
>>13193774 http://pastebin.com/gN9NM4Rq Here's my update. Starting work on ending this story so I can actually start.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
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>>13193824 Giratina has three or four already, I think.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
>>13193855 >all those Giratina followers I was here first god dammit.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13193855 To be fair, that's what you would actually choose, while we aren't limited to writing about a single disciple.
Dave
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>>13193824 I'll tell, i'll not be friendly with you just because you follow the same God as mine. Ones who step on my route...ok enough edgyness for today.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Not Celebi
>>13193855 Oh thanks! I had no idea that existed. New to the board, so this was the first I'd seen/heard of this project
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Anonymous
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>>13193886 It's only been around for a couple weeks, if that, so you haven't exactly missed much.
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
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>>13193843 http://pastebin.com/CuUcHhpV I finished the prologue.
I feel like the confrontation was lacking, but I couldn't think of anything better.
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
NOT ARCEUS: HEAR MY REQUEST
when I thought of Kindest Friend, I imagined we would set the thing in real world. Since I'm the only one to write things set in the non-pokémon world, I think we should change "kindest Friend" to the ability to talk with pokémon. And change the name: it was only a beta name. Even I think it sucks
This
>>13187828 >>13161677 is me btw
Anonymous
So, I just found this floating around. Copycat maybe?
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13194045 This is starting to look like it will take place in the pokeworld. I'd like to wait a little longer, though, as no story has officially become canon as of yet.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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I'm pretty happy seeing so many people suddenly engaged in this
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13194046 I'll be honest, the companion thing isn't such a bad idea. Where'd you find this? Yveltal's a bit too edgy for my tastes, Also,
>The two that are one... Can't fall in love >Genesect's quote and faculty All in all, 6/10 for potential plagiarism and oversimplication with some originality
This is probably the same thing the creator of the original picture is saying about me, too Anonymous
>>13193843 When he befriended a BAGON he went further down the gary stu road.
AND we haven't discussed this but would keeping pokémon in pokéballs cound as taboo for giratina disciples?
Dave
>>13194061 We have some Canon i think.
We are in the pokeworld.
It's not the utopic pokeworld where no one is TRULY bad. Is a realistic pokeworld
More than not, pokemon speak saying their names
I mean, based off the stories, those are mostly common elements. We should start to enstablish something, starting from this.
Dave
>>13194103 >>13194088 And shouldn't we have a moderator than prevents such things:
http://pastebin.com/uh22zbyq I mean, it's degenerating a little.
Anonymous
>>13193683 My favourite story so far.
Anonymous
>>13194088 A friend posted it on Facebook. He got it from Memebase. That's all I know.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13194119 That's really a matter of opinion. I prefer that one to yours, frankly.
And I thought you were done with being edgy today.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13194131 >From facebook >Off of memebase Uh oh.
>>13194103 That's certainly a start
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13194203 I'll brave the depths, try and find it.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Dave
>>13194184 Mhhhh well yes okay. I just think it's a bit too overpowered. Seriously, nobody could stop him? Ooookay, it's not a big deal anyway. Let's just people enjoy the "game"
>>13194203 New chapter. I'm doing some smaller and more frequent chapters as i find them more enjoyable this way.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13194213 It was the newest post in pokememes, so... Lvck wasn't really needed.
http://cheezburger.com/7701373952 Dave
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>>13194218 Seriously this one is shit i'm gonna redo it
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13194221 I'm starting to get the feeling this really is copied off of our CYOA. It's just too similar, and it even has the same title for Lati@s
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
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>>13194218 "undefeated" stands for the protagonist, who is the only survivor of the froup, but it mostly stands for the kid. He is a Victini follower with a thousand victories under his belt and thus an outrageus amount of Lvck.
That is the power of Victory
Dave
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>>13194249 http://pastebin.com/1yWUgAL8 You can add this. It's the same as the one posted before but with some corrected typos and i added a some text because it made nosense how Dave was asking things and Celebi just told him about unrelated things. Maybe the pastebin you already added can be called "the beginning".
Anonymous
>>13194249 It wouldn't surprise me. When you make something that's this badass, copycats should be expected at some point. Though I didn't think they'd be that quick about it.
I'm gonna call it a night. When I wake up
at 3 in the afternoon , I'll start on another story.
Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
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>>13194276 Ah, forgot trip.
Anonymous
>>13194249 But why? Why would they go through the trouble of making that instead of just using yours? Seems like a lot of work for a rip-off.
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
>>13194288 They want credit. Or their favorite pokemon/perk never made it. Either way, it makes me feel sour and slightly violated.
Not Celebi
>>13194129 Wow, really? Thank you!
>>13194290 Seriously sucks about those copycats. I think partner Pokés is pretty restricting, and they've got less choices/detail. You've got nothing to worry about. I hope.
Dave
>>13194373 I haven't decided my starting region yet. I was thinking about choosing hoenn because there is you, another Celebi follower, but this may be too much meta-game.
Not Celebi
>>13194383 Note that my Hoenn is at least 20 years after the games/general timeline
but they'll make it back to present day . You do have a Grovyle, so maybe Hoenn works best, but yeah, 20 years apart (at least).
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
Do you think it would be ok for a Mewtwo disciple to destroy a piece of technology deemed too dangerous for makind? Keep in mind that they are supposed to help both scientific progress and humanity
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13194290 beh,I wouldn't worry about it,the way they set it up is so bland that no one will give a fuck
anyways I've done a little more with my story.
and need some advice form anyone who thinks can help me fix the story a bit
http://pastebin.com/kmR5THtQ calling it a night for now though,I'll check up tomorrow
Dave
>>13194467 I think your main purpose should to make it less dangerous?
>>13194432 20 years later from the pokemon game or the writefag game?
Not Celebi
>>13194486 Either/or. No one else has really specified a time, and if mine is considered canon, it'll only affect others if they choose to set it in Fallarbor (which I chose because it is so isolated). My plan has been to bring it back to a familiar time and setting from the beginning. You could set yours to be comtemporous I you like, it's just a game.
Dave
>>13194529 I'm thinking about it. Dk. Shouldn't we all be called by God at more or less same time? Like, no more than 1 year of difference for each one of us. I don't know, just spouting thoughts
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
also why have the gods decided to do this so suddenly,after so many years,why now?
Some Guy !!G1GXVdUuOBV
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>>13194486 time machines are always dangerous Dave
>>13194551 Lol i hope not arceus has some serious explanation for this. Could it be like in death note, the Gods were bored?
Not Celebi
>>13194543 Eleanor is a Ho-Oh follower of over 20 years, I tried to imply that she survived the meteor due to her healing abilities, it didn't necessarily come through. Part Two will focus more on her. So that "within one year" doesn't suit my story. It's up to Not Arceus, to decide what's canon, I think so don't worry too much. It's a big world, our characters don't necessarily have to meet.
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13194599 maybe something like they've decided to see who is the strongest or it's actually all an elaborate test to see what humans would do with their powers
Anonymous
>>13194551 who is saying it started now?
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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>>13194681 hmm,that is very true,I'd just kinda like a reason why honestly but whatevs just rolling with it
Anonymous
>>13194551 I've been working under the assumption that there have always been followers of the legendary pokemon.
Dave
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>>13194937 That's unexpected but still quite an interesting idea.
>>13194613 Yes, but you know, teaming up in the name of Celebi and...be friends...and...ok no.
Anonymous
I found this thread. Seems quite similar, may be interesting for you to play this too.
Anonymous
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
>>13193862 You sure about that m8?
Not Suicune !!l3Xw4hdioSs
http://pastebin.com/Qcr4yWfm Should i skip the details of Levi learning how to use his abilities?
Anonymous
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Op, somebody just ripped this off.
>http://cheezburger.com/7701373952 Anonymous
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
>>13196801 i joined when there were only 9 gods and giratina didnt even have perks.
>>13194092 Bagon was because of the dex entry.
And the pokeball wasnt forced, it was offered and the Bagon went on its own will.
Totally Entei !570yq7nFOs
Phantom heLlOp/CDM
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reporting in and working on my story
Anonymous
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>>13157383 Pls help a player. Maybe play too
>>>/tg/26333382 Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13199600 it's in the last page and auto-saging,someone should make a new thread already
