Draw, request and ask for critique.
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Requesters are free to request what they wish but avoid bumping your request every half hour as it’s only going to put people off, try giving it an hour or more. Also avoid asking for the same thing every thread, have some patience and come back to it later. Please provide references in ONE image, especially when requesting something outside of the Pokémon universe and if you request something from the old DrawThread or a separate thread, copy and paste the actual request instead of posting a link.
New artists are welcome to join the fun and if you need any help, other artists are very keen to help, don’t be afraid to ask.
Anonymous
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>>13207172 This guy still around?
Anonymous
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Made a request the other day. Elite 4 girls Lorelei, and Karen making out. Was it ever delivered? Won't mind if it wasn't. I'm just curious if anyone had interest.
Anonymous
I'd like some lewd mienshao paws (her being lewd but have her paws be a part of it. footjob/cum on paws ect. )
Anonymous
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Could I see a Mismagius in a library, reading a book and chanting a spell of some sort?
Anonymous
Requesting a picture involving two moderately busty & curvaceous bodies, one with a Solrock for a head and the other a Lunatone. Both of them are wearing either school uniform or maid outfits (or any other fashion attire you find appealing to you).
Anonymous
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requesting this with any cacturne
Anonymous
REQUESTING BJÖRK WITH A GARDEVOIR BODY
Anonymous
>>13212543 That's explicit not lewd.
Anonymous
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>>13212592 Heh, heh... yeah, I hope ths gets done, too.
Replace "moderately" with "extremely," though. Anonymous
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>>13212636 I still want it done Anonymous
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>>13212636 You can have her paws covered in sticky yoghurt.
Anonymous
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Requesting a top tier Caterpie tackling or bug biting something much larger than it in a dramatic way.
Anonymous
Requesting Gardevoir or Lilligant dressed like pic related
Zuzu
Anonymous
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Requesting a mama Gardevoir breastfeeding her baby Ralts, please.Give mama the enormous breasts to keep her baby fed
Anonymous
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Requesting qt little smiling Gyarados.
Anonymous
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Requesting lazy Dawn looking bored, doing something that's adorable
Ban the Slash
Anonymous
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Rerequesting Dawn or her mother wearing Bronzong themed oven mitts and taking something hot out of the oven, but then she gets burned because the gloves have levitate instead of heatproof
Anonymous
Anonymous
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you request any pokemon wearing Gnarls Barkley armor, or you request Gnarls possessing any pokemon, then I draw it.
Anonymous
>>13212994 A Machoke that doesn't lifts
Ban the Slash
>>13213018 I dont know who that is so requesting you give me references
>>13213058 So a
chubby Machoke basically
Anonymous
Requesting Cynthia dressed like Iris
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13213065 You could also go with slim, but
chubby is cool too
Zuzu
Ban the Slash
>>13213081 Well yeah I dont really know who that is. Although after googling it I now know that its some norwegian singer. I dont really know how to give her a Gardevoir's body though. Like have her in a gardevoir dress?
>>13213095 Im actually pretty bad at chubby characters, so we'll see how it turns out
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13213212 >norwegian I'm out
Ban the Slash
>>13213243 Oh Im sorry.
Icelandic singer
Better?
Anonymous
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>>13213243 >>13213269 >implying white people don't pretty much look the same Anonymous
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Re-requesting form old draw thread: Bianca in her style via Black2/White2 doing a pose like pic related. Please and thank you kindly.
Zuzu
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Gold and zubat rough draft. Gotta eat dinner will finish after
Anonymous
Since Snorlax's seem to be loved Lewd Chubby Snorlax Maid Lewd is optional
Anonymous
>>13213728 >chubby snorlax what the fuck are you talking about
Anonymous
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>>13213755 I dunno. They have been drawn not-chubby before, so I guess I thought I would need to specify.
Ban the Slash
Ok, I have a problem. That problem is arms. I can't get them to look good. Can anyone help?
Shiny !!P6xoxtqTnC+
For the people in the last thread that asked for a clauncher gijinka!
Anonymous
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>>13214057 One of them here
I love your stuff, thank you, Shiny!
Anonymous
>>13214057 Well done Shiny
Have you done a fletchling gijinka yet?
Anonymous
>>13214057 a gardevoir ginjnka would make my year, if you have the time. obvious do anything else you have going first.
Anonymous
requesting Durant with stockings
Anonymous
Is Bibbuls done yet? or will we be waiting a third day?
Anonymous
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requesting male hips
Shiny !!P6xoxtqTnC+
>>13214168 Now I have
>>13214404 Well I'm not drawing anything more today, but I will try to draw one tomorrow!
Anonymous
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>>13214649 thanks man, stay awesome.
Anonymous
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Hey, so... I'm requesting someone draw me a Golurk with an afro playing basketball... Why? I have no idea, but I think it sounds funny.
Anonymous
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>>13214649 Thanks shiny, it's so pretty
Anonymous
I would really like a picture of a Pinsir defeating a Heracross. Thanks if you are willing to attempt this.
Anonymous
>>13214783 >fantasy pictures general Anonymous
>>13214794 >lewd requests are always taken over stuff like this Anonymous
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>>13214816 I was more making a joke on the fact that pinsir would never beat heracross, but that's cool.
shame
>>13214038 Id say the issue is not with the arms but the torso...i did a pinkline to explain it better
>>13214816 Don't you fucking start with that entitled shit.
Anonymous
>>13214932 I'm not. Just was pointing out how wrong their statement was.
Bibbuls
>>13214544 3 of them are finished, 1 is almost finished, the last one I really liked so I'm planning to colour it.
The first 4 will be posted in I'd say an hour, the last one some time tonight.
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>>13214954 Ah. Carry on then.
Anonymous
>>13214538 i have the weirdest boner right now
Anonymous
>>13215283 Everything went better than expected, those eyes are lovely
my dick .
Anonymous
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Requesting Banette looking sinister and unzipping its mouth. Inside, a horrid void can be seen.
Anonymous
>>13215283 That abdomen reminds me of a Trapinch, staring at me.
Anonymous
>>13215358 Everything went better than expected for me too!
>my face when I realize one of the best things I've drawn recently is a sexy ant Anonymous
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>>13215384 Anon, no!
There's nothing to feel bad about sexy ants
Ban the Slash
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13215477 And then you realize,
you're already stuck in her arena trap. Anonymous
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Requesting Maylene performing a German Suplex on a Machoke.
Anonymous
>>13215283 Wait...did you just make a metallic ant sexy?
Nine
Requesting a female Fennekin and a Male Quilava cuddling.
Anonymous
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>>13215552 I'm simultaneously proud and scared..
Anonymous
/r/ing Lucario trying to keep scrafty from taking his chocolate
Anonymous
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>>13215561 When two fire types cuddle, it should be called
kindling .
Anonymous
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Requesting Female Backpacker sitting cross-legged on a large rock relaxing
Anonymous
Requesting a Cute, somewhat-chubby Nidoqueen. You can draw her as a Pokemon or Gijinka, whatever floats your boat.It's my friends Birthday today and Nidoqueen is his favorite pokemon.
Anonymous
>>13215010 still waiting on them bro. also you don't need to post a mile long self critique like you always do.
Anonymous
>that person who makes the same request every thread
Anonymous
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>>13216000 That only bothers me if it's already been filled. If it hasn't re-requesting it once a thread should be fine.
Bibbuls
>>13216000 >that one guy who points it out every thread >>13215881 The 4 simpler ones are done. I've been doing a lot of experimenting with visual styles, this one in particular an attempt at a more cartoonish or comedic style.
I've obviously got a long way to go. 1/4
Bibbuls
>>13216027 This one I was attempting a intimidating worm's eye view perspective. It didn't really come out the way I wanted, and I'm also worried I'm lulling back into symbol drawing. I think I'll follow up with pictures similar to it though, I really like fiddling around with 3 point perspective even if I still am not great at it.
Mon
Man, I almost forgot to do this request. "A Gardevoir wearing a babushka and blushing" Had to look up what that was but when I did it become obvious. Didn't make it any easier to draw though. Hope OR sees it regardless.
Anonymous
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>>13212011 I fucking love this.
Vono
>>13206289 Now, who's the lucky guy who wanted this lamb?
>>13211689 Vono approves
Anonymous
>>13216075 amazing work. you should draw gardevoir wearing many different hats. that looks adorable.
Bibbuls
>>13216058 3/4
This one started out strong but the concept and perspective started falling apart getting really far into it. Still I think it's cute, I'd probably the silliest picture I've done.
Anonymous
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>>13216075 I approve of this.
Not the OR.
Bibbuls
>>13216106 4/4
This is I feel definitely the weakest piece from the session. It's flat, the proportions are lacking and everything feels fake, like I said starting to lull back into symbol drawing and I have to stop that.The last picture I'm working on, and I'll be finished soon.
Critique welcomed for all 4 pictures.
Vono
>>13216098 I actually bothered to draw thighhighs on her
it is my fetish, shut up anyways, taking some fuckin requests. bring it
>>13216106 I have to admit, this is cute. the shading still needs work though
Mon
>>13216103 Heh, I'll leave that up to someone else for now. Gardevoir's head is already awkward enough for me to draw already.
>>13216098 Did you get a new scanner or something Vono? Looks a bit clearer from what you normally draw. Looks good regardless.
Zuzu
Anonymous
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>>13216156 well you did a fantastic job on that one. not the or, but thanks for the picture.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13216151 Try this on for sizes
>>13212592 Bibbuls
>>13216151 Yeah, I've been having a hard time with the whole sketchy artstyle and line art in general. Makes me really excited to finish this painting I'm working on. I haven't painted in like a week.
Not going to stop practising my line art and sketches/hatching, but it just feels good to work on something I'm comfortable with already
Zuzu
Didn't someone want liligant with a blue flower?
Vono
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>>13216156 nah, it's from my phone cam, set to Sephia with a 640 x 480 resolution. Stuff scanbed from my Canon scanner would make it much sharper
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13216157 What was the request? Ethan's eyes look a bit scary.
Bren
>>13216178 What program are you using again
Bibbuls
>>13216209 A program called Corel Paint. I've been meaning to transition to Sai but never got around to it.
Anonymous
>>13216075 OR here, she just looks so endearing, not in a "omg kawaii hnnng" sort of way but in a way that she just looks soulful whilst maintaining some sort of mystery like something is pressing in her mind.
Never really liked the whole only old-women-is-able-to-wear-a-babushka dealie, but it's amazing how it can be pulled off without it being some sort of 40's film vibe.
Bren
>>13216226 Is it just corel paint or something after it? Only ones I can find are painter and paint shop, I want to have a look at it because it doesnt seem like a good program for lineart
Vono
>>13216226 I've used Corel a few times before. I didn't like how soft the colours look whenever I paint and I was rubbish on tablet.
and I forgot to add, you really need draw shapes first before you add in the details for that chansey. shape looks a bit weird there
Bibbuls
>>13216292 It also doesn't feel like a program for line art, only the pen tool is really fit for it everything else being for painting. The only real reason I'm doing line art recently rather than full paintings is because it's faster and I need to practice my line control and construction. I may transition to Sai or Photoshop, or I may just practise my fundamentals in private and stick to painting requests here.
Also the full of the program is corel painter essentials.
Anonymous
>>13216267 It's funny when I looked up references on google, all I saw was a bunch of old ladies. Glad it came out in a way you liked though.
Bibbuls
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>>13216318 Chansey was actually really difficult to do because it's pretty much one big egg. I'd redone the sketch like 5 times before settling on a final one that even then I didn't like that much. It was difficult to plot where all of the details like the eyes and face go because it was all just a pink egg shape.
I may redo it some time, I really like the concept.
Anonymous
>>13216144 Thank you! I wish I could offer some kind of critique, but I quite like it~
Anonymous
>>13216345 Or you know you can just get gimp instead.
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>>13216366 gave you a little watch and a Llama. :P
Anonymous
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Requesting a lewd anthro sylveon with massive tits
Bibbuls
>>13216413 I haven't looked into Gimp, it'd probably be a good idea too for line art. thanks for reminding me.
>>13216394 Hey no problem at all! The fact that you like it is what's most important. I hope if I ever get another request from you I can do an even better job.
Also I finally finished my painting of Porygon-Z delivering a rocket punch. This is definitely my favourite ever painting I've done, I'm glad I took the request.
Anonymous
Zuzu
>>13216194 Hey hope you like 1/2
Zuzu
2/2 made a quick background
Bibbuls
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>>13216498 That's really impressive. Seems a bit technical and Corel is meeting all of my needs right now, but I'll keep the link to the download bookmarked if I ever feel the need to change.
Anonymous
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requesting Touko doing something formal
Anonymous
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>>13216465 Those are some crazy colours bro. Giving Porygon Z a sword like arm was a creative liberty I can get behind.
Anonymous
posting these here cause the thread where it was requested reached post limit
Bren
>>13216345 I'd reccomend SAI because it's great for both painting and lineart plus there's a lot of artists who use it here so you can get a lot of help around with it, also SAI is pretty easy to use so you can grasp basics really quick.
Anonymous
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>>13216508 >>13216522 Daww, thanks for that, that background its adorable.
Any Lilligant is a good Lilligant, but as expected, red really works with green.
Thanks for showing me that and thank you for the pics
Bibbuls
>>13216623 ...is that a party streamers texture brush?
Anonymous
>>13216465 This is probably my favorite from you as well Bibbuls. I think you really captured that perspective well. Keep it up.
Anonymous
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>>13216593 This is a pretty interesting take on the evo. Looks Ghostly.
Anonymous
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>>13216465 >dat filename >>13216666 quads confirm. This is astounding, especially next to all those meh tier line arts you posted. here's to you continuing to get better.
Vono
>>13216465 love this one from you, bibbs.
>>13216623 How do you find ArtRage? would you recommend?
Bren
Anonymous
>>13216719 Draw a linoon with it
Anonymous
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>>13216465 I knew you were holding out on us. I knew there was a reason you got so much talk. I knew you were more than wobbly lines and a polite attitude. This is what I want to see more of from you.
Bren
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>>13216717 I never used it but I think alcott used it and found SAI more useful not sure tho
>>13216746 I will just for you anon kun
Anonymous
>>13216465 Holy shit mr. Self loathing pulled this out of his ass? Guess those verbal beatings you took really motivated you.
Bren
Anonymous
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Requesting BW girl ace trainer with protection glasses and a drill drilling a hole with a Drillbur
Bibbuls
>>13216876 Well that and the line art I was doing was the only one I really liked. I had to keep going with it. It's a big step up over my old paintings too.
Anonymous
>>13216915 It's like its being warped out of existence.
Anonymous
>>13216941 Keep it up then.
because you're going to end up the best drawfriend eventually Vono
>>13216165 this... THIS is gonna take a while. gonna need me some red bull for this shit.
Anonymous
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>>13212454 I still love this picture! (registeel requester)
Anonymous
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>>13216915 das sum good stuff
Anonymous
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>>13215836 Bumping request. Hope someone picks it up,
and Happy Birthday to your friend. Bibbuls
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>>13216994 Try not to pass out. Looking forward to it.
>>13216984 That'd only be true if I were the only one getting better. It's a nice thought though.
Bren
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13216994 >this is gonna take a while. That's fine, it's not like I need it ASAP (which is almost never). Take as much time as you need and I'll probably be here when you post it. Anyway I would like to give my thanks in advance and good luck to you.
BTW has that picture even been "pokeifized"? Zuzu
Taking 1 more request before I battle myself for sleep
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13217201 A jirachi glaring up and pulling down its sunglasses, and with the other hand is pulling down one big shade covering the third eye
Anonymous
>>13217141 No bed for me tonight.
Bren
>>13217466 I know something about that
Anonymous
>>13217590 Go the fuck to sleep
Anonymous
>>13216465 It looks like something that would glow in the dark. How do you make your colour choices?
Bren
>>13217631 There's no point of sleeping now
Anonymous
>>13217637 It looks sort of like Myst's rendering, in just a few parts I mean. Like the smoke and plasma/lightning coming off porygon Z's arm.
Anonymous
>>13217715 I share that feel.
Let us be 5:30am bros together.
Anonymous
>>13217733 >sort of like Myst's rendering Nigga, you high?
Anonymous
>>13217812 >not reading the rest Focus in that one part that was described. It's similar to most of Myst's backgrounds with the wavy lights
I actually like Bib's rendering in this particular picture better, even if his skills as a whole still haven't caught up Bren
>>13217751 What are you up to 5 am anon
Anonymous
>>13217846 Nothing much just shitposting on /vg/.
Bren
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>>13217866 Fun I'm gonna do some design stuff
Anonymous
>>13217835 I read the rest and I don't see it at all
feels like an insult to Mystical
bibbuls has a ton to learn before he is any good at just the basics
Anonymous
>>13217893 Well just my opinion. Even if it's not the same level of quality it still reminds me of it. Probably the lime green on red contrast.
Anonymous
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Suggesting Gardevoir with long fluffy "hair" into a fluffy ponytail, wearing a neckscarf and a tight black leather abaiya with white gloves.she's holding a padded sleepmask and a bandana with a huge knot in the middle, she asks "Can you make sure that you tie them really tight, please? ~<3" yes, heart included
Anonymous
>>13217905 I think it's the generally dark background contrasting with the actual subject. Bibs' painting is still pretty crap though. It's all cumulative errors
>bad line control >bad lines lead to bad forms >bad forms lead to shading errors >shading errors fuck up your textures Anonymous
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>>13218006 I'd say his line control and forms are starting to clear up. Compared to his older stuff it's all pretty tidy. I know that should apply to everyone and isn't anything special but his "older stuff" is from a week ago. He's raw ability with poor application.
Xavier !!wm+/O+oWE27
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13218966 darkrai bein cute
Anonymous
>>13218966 Sealeo
piloting Wily Machine 7 against a pissed off Porygon Xavier !!wm+/O+oWE27
>>13218978 Decided to try and paint something with a little more effort rather than just cartoony. I'm still new to digital painting in this style, so bear with my slowness.
Here's some progress~
>>13218984 Will do this right after!
>>13218999 Is it just me, or does /vp/ constantly request the Spheal family?
Xavier !!wm+/O+oWE27
>>13219210 More progress, will continue on this tomorrow or the day after.
AC:NL Just finished downloading on my 3DS so I must play >>13218984 Will try and draw that cute Darkrai until I either get it done or get too frustrated, where if the latter happens then I'll do that tomorrow too.
Vono
Anonymous
Can I request Magnezone that looks repulsed
joseph smith
someone requested nate hugging a pink dewgong hours ago, i fell asleep
Anonymous
>>13219441 Still... awake...
Thank... you... bro...
Anonymous
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>>13219404 Ha ha, not bad at all. I like it!
joseph smith
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>>13219471 whoa. no problem man
Anonymous
Xavier !!wm+/O+oWE27
Anonymous
Requesting Beartic, Ursaring, and Pangoro respectively.
Anonymous
Requesting an eevee lying on it's back Nothing lewd.
Anonymous
Vono
I got time to draw some more. taking some fresh requests
Anonymous
Silkmagician !!KplhuMIiEnq
>>13219981 Harem girl Anabel?
Always liked those transparent sleeves on her official art, maybe see-through sleeves and pants, leaning against a pillow?
Turban and a mouth/nose veil with the Ability symbol optional.
Anonymous
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to the anon who requested the zoroark lewds with the thighs i could probably get this done this morning but i think i might want to take some more time to work on it so it's not all rushed and shit since i kinda like how it's looking still going to try to have it complete sometime tomorrow though, i'll have more dead time to work on art stuff by then anyway instead of trying to chip away at it
Vono
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>>13220001 well, said freash as in new but eh what the heck
Anonymous
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>>13219981 A Kirlia performing some sort of elbowstand backbend, by telepathically controlling gloves to grab her feet and pull them backwards, arching her back and over her head? You could even have bikeshorts if the skirt part is tedious.
Anonymous
>>13219404 Is this what they call...
celestial bodies? Anonymous
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>>13219441 Looks like he's hugging a dick,
Anonymous
Vono
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>>13220128 bloody motherfucking...
Anonymous
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>>13220128 getting real sick of your shit Carlos.
Anonymous
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>>13220128 Fuck off, Carlos
Anonymous
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>>13220128 I'm simply in love with you, Carlos.
Anonymous
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Requesting more Arbtails
Anonymous
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>>13219404 Not bad, not bad. I see you drew them in nurses outfit.
You have good taste Thank for the pic mate.
Anonymous
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Could anyone do Douse-Drive Genesect being all moe? No not a gijinka.
Vono
>>13220001 sorry about being late for the delivery. Programming test was a bitch. have this qt
Anonymous
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Hey Jhon I thanked you for this in the IRC last night but I don't think you saw it so just in case thanks again!
Anonymous
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Does anyone have that pic a drawfriend drew of a Scrafty trying to hang itself?
Anonymous
I don't know if joltick is around, but could you happen to draw bianca wearing her glasses in the attack on Titan outfits?
Anonymous
>>13221083 So, draw a hat and glasses on Armin, huh.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Bren
Joltik !L9qZJ..U7I
Bren
Latarn
Tried to draw the request for the anon who wanted a Chespin balancing on a basketball (in the middle of trying to, anyway). Practising forms and still failing to understand perspective and construction principles.
Anonymous
>>13221138 don't forget about the nose bud
Bren
Anonymous
>>13221149 Pretty frackin good. For perspective look up point perspective and foreshortening. For this particular picture you would create a box using 1 point perspective, then mark important points on the box like the middle vertically and horizontally. Then using that you can place your forms in a way that works.
Or maybe you know all this and just need practice.
Anonymous
>>13221200 it can't be a Bren drawing or edit unless it has the "nose"
Anonymous
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>>13221200 >A-all my friends...have Pokemon of their own...I've failed them....I'll never be as good as my comrades at battling >Maybe I should just kill myself It's the same character!
Anonymous
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>>13221005 thanks, that's very cute.
Bren
>>13221213 OH right how could I forget
Anonymous
>>13216465 I almost missed this.
Hmm, your line art you were working with seems good last time I saw it. And you did indeed make more of an effort to add texture, you've porygon look like metal/plastic. The shading is okay, I mean you do have some hard edges easily separating surfaces without the use of outlines.
It's a step up from your others, but it's still lacking. I can still see your brush strokes and your gradients are not that smooth and not in a good way that works for the picture. It feels incomplete, it also feels like you're just placing random shit down trying to find out what works in some places. Remember that if you're not sure why you're doing something the viewer won't either, and it will detract from the painting.
So:
>good perspective >getting better at line art >painting itself is decent but you really gotta work on painting regardless Anonymous
Anonymous
Goddamn I'm shit at this So am I learning anything by doing this? Seems to just be lining up colors with the ones that match
Latarn
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>>13221205 I sort of get foreshortening and hows it's due to angles and distances.
Yet when it comes down to laying every thing down in a uniform manner with perspective guides, things just spiral out into confusion. I can't seem to match up what image comes from my mind and how the guides aid it.
I should probably just whip out a few books on perspective and study long and hard, hoping to decipher it.
Anonymous
>>13221287 It's funny. Bibbuls is usually the one who posts the longest critique analyzing his work.
Anonymous
>>13221445 Even if he didn't post it he probably thought it all out. It doesn't make sense for him to suddenly stop thinking about his shortcomings. Unless his confidence has increased THAT much which I highly doubt.
Anonymous
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>>13221750 Mordekaiser es numero uno. Huehuehue.
Anonymous
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>>13221737 Bibbuls needs a lot of work. He should take a class. Trying to figure it out all on his own will only get him so far.
Vono
>>13220007 orait, time to get off my lazy arse from playing vidya to work on this one. but first, I'd appreciate some help on her anatomy. How fucked is her's?
Bibbul
>>13221857 I don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think her ass sticks out too far/her spine is too curved. That and the face is facing the viewer, but the neck still looks like its facing her front, like the face is on the side of her head.
Better than mine/10
Anonymous
>>13216623 >SAI Whats that?
Anonymous
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>>13221891 A character in Naruto.
Bren
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>>13221891 It's a good program for someone who's starting out art digitally and even for someone who has good grasp in it
Anonymous
>>13221874 >Bibbul Typo or impostor?
Bibbuls
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>>13221944 Typo. Thanks I almost missed that.
Vono
>>13221874 as much as I like the her ass here, I think that's what getting me (not that way, tho). I'm not really sure how her torso should look in this and trying to get her right leg, uhh, right is tough. maybe her spine does look too curved
Anonymous
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>>13221874 >>13221952 Nah, i think is ok, just a little bit super deformed.
Bibbuls
>>13221952 Well you're better off asking someone more experienced than me. Still I should thank you for making me want to practise my own anatomy.
Anonymous
Anonymous
I'm sorry it took me so much time to do this,I'm having some problems By the way this is for the anon Who requested an espeon gijinka dressed like iku nagae,I hope you are still here and can see this (I'm also still working on the bianca picture making out with serperior,if the anon Who requested that is around please,be patient,thanks)
Anonymous
>>13222090 That's really quite an impressive angle. Nice job on this.
Anonymous
>>13222090 I'm that anon and this make me so happy to see this. It looks so gorgeous and I just love it. Thank you so very much and the wait was worth it.
Anonymous
>>13222000 You're too hard on yourself. If you keep talking about how shit you are you'll just end up a defeatist. Take it one step at a time, amd remember; what's important isn't how good your art is, its how much better it is than your last one.
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>>13222237 Bibbuls is the one guy who isn't going to give up because his art sucks. It's the very thing fueling him.
>>13222090 It's nice. I especially like the overhead angle. That's two awesome perspectives this thread.
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>>13222125 Thank you very much,I actually had some problems with her left arm/hand (it was supposed to be like the right one) then I switched to how you see it now and I still had problems with the hand;also I did another sketch in the beginning,but it was horrible and I did this instead,I'm happy that someone finds this a nice job,thank you
>>13222186 And I am so happy that you like it!I'm still sorry I kept you waiting this much thought,usually I'm a bit faster
Joltik !L9qZJ..U7I
Bren
>>13222888 She has to kill dem giants
Anonymous
>>13222888 I thought the request was Bianca, not Armin
Anonymous
>>13222937 Attack of the Regigigas
Anonymous
>>13222970 Reggie looks like a titan
Joltik !L9qZJ..U7I
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Anonymous
>>13222888 I've got to watch this show eventually.
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>>13223013 armin has made me question my sexuality many times
Anonymous
>>13223040 People may call it flavor of the month, but I find it very endearing. You could even say
I have shit taste
Anonymous
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>>13223025 >M-my body is ready to eat humans Anonymous
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>>13223025 Why is everyone obsessed with this shit anime. FotM?
Anonymous
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>>13223049 Like I care about that. Like half the shows I watch regularly people would berate me for. What is it about anyway?
Anonymous
requesting a Banette Gijinka
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>>13222888 Nice double trips for that image.
now do cheren Anonymous
>>13216984 Bibbuls will never be a great artist. He doesn't have the dedication or understanding. Look st his art, it's obvious he's just aimimg blind aimlessly figuring out what does and doesn't work. He doesn't know what his tools are meant for, he's all "what" and no "how" or "why". He's all flash with no fundamentals.
>>13221149 Its pretty good actually. Just concentrate on point perspective since it dictates how all of your foreshortening works in each picture. But you have good form and control.
Anonymous
>>13223396 >Aiming aimlessly I actually do agree with you, but you have to admit that was a pretty funny mistake. Anonymous
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>>13223013 Joltik could you do a Sylveon gijinka?
Anonymous
>>13219210 >Is it just me, or does /vp/ constantly request the Spheal family? I'm fairly sure it's the same few people if not one. Anonymous
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>>13223472 >>13223396 He's definitely not good now, but to say he'll never be is a bit of an overstatement. He's at least making an earnest effort to improve and find direction, better than what happens to most amateurs.
Anonymous
>>13223396 I think saying he doesn't have dedication is just incorrect, as he wouldn't even be trying new things if he didn't. You also act like those things can't be fixed or learned over time. For some people it just takes a bit longer to get it and that's okay.
What I think he needs to do is really analyze what's going on when he gets to a certain stage in his drawing to make sure the forms are right. Every once in awhile while drawing, you should be taking a step back to see if it's coming out the way you want, and if it isn't make small adjustments until it does.
Anonymous
>>13223502 >few people It's literally one guy.
Anonymous
Could someone possibly draw a couple of fletchlings nesting in the bush atop an orotto's head?
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>>13223567 That's what I was thinking, but I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt.
Anonymous
>>13223548 I'm starting to believe these discussions about Bibbuls and about him having a hidden potential are just because people do project themselves on him. The moment it crash and fail will turn this into hell.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13223617 What crash and fail? He's an amateur artist who made an effort to improve, did visibly improve, and will continue to do so.
Whether or not he has any of this special hidden potential people talk about is irrelevant, all he's doing is trying and bettering himself. I fail to see how he'll ever "crash and burn". He'll just keep doing what he's doing.
Gekkou !FolnyKFvJY
Anonymous
>>13223662 I think by that he means failing to hit the ridiculously high standard that the majority of anons in the threads seem to have set for him
Anonymous
>>13223685 Again all he's doing is learning and growing a little bit at a time. Not just him, but pretty muchaanyone with the will to achieve can become a really good artist with time.
Unless you mean they expect him to become really amazing in a really short timeframe then yeah they may be disappointed. At least Bibs himself hasn't seemed to let the hype get to him, he hasn't become complacent or a showboater.
Anonymous
>>13223859 The latter was what I was leaning towards. He's definitely improving, sure; but so is everyone else. Now, no offense, but with the level at which he joined the thread (even with his improvement) I highly doubt he could surpass the skill and understanding of a lot of artists already in the thread and, for lack of a better term, dethrone them.
I don't believe that's Bibbul's aim for one minute; he just seems like he wants to improve and better himself, it's the anons that are pushing that idea on him.
Anonymous
>>13223887 He shows the potential for greatness, but I fear the rate he's being praised for every little thing he grasps can be dangerous to his growth.
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>>13223887 I definitely see what you mean, and its no fault of it's own. Just that he joined the thread at a much lower level than most other drawfriends had, and advances are much more pronounced at a lower skill level. Its created the illusion he's improving faster than everyone else. Wish most anons would sort of cut ot out, and I applaud him for remaining so steadfast and honest rathee than taking it all to heart.
I do however look forward to him eventually getting really great though. The stuff he already does on a more stylistic level I like, such aa his colour choiceItlIt'll be neat seeing how he grows.
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>>13223934 I disagree, he seems to be very hard on himself in almost all of his self critique, and he generally ignores all the praise yet often had full length discussions with people almost straight out insulting him. He seems to excel under pressure and harshness.
Vono
>>13220007 bah, I can't into harem grills. I need that one animu reference again. I think I've deleted it for some reason
Anonymous
Silkmagician !!KplhuMIiEnq
>>13224005 OR here, you mean this anime?
Don't have the specific image, more partial towards harem pants than flimsy skirtlets.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13220007 >human harem girl You sicken me.
Vono
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>>13224090 close but no dice. looks like
>>13224156 found what I'm looking for so I'll get onto working on Anabel
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Requesting Lucian wearing a cute Gothitelle dress
>>13224196 It is a VP thread, isn't limited to the Pokemon themselves.
Anabel just seems that she was only there mostly as an androgynous character of the day in the anime, just something to glam up a bit of femininity slightly whilst still retaining some see through clothing.
VP would've been sick of Gardevoir constituting most of the requests, better to spread out the characters/Pokemon a little bit. :)
Anonymous
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>>13224279 I've seen more requests of other Pokemon than I've seen of Gardevoir.
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>>13224300 I guess so, you have to agree though that Gardie has quite the stranglehold within its own section of pokewaifus though, i'll probably stop talking about it lest it turns into a large discussion like a few threads ago.
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>>13223934 The way I see it Bibs has attracted so much praise and hype for one of two reasons (maybe both)
>he's mostly self taught, is not that good but really really wants to get better, painting him as an underdog >he entered the draw thread at such a low skill level we're all interested in what happens to him and seeing him grow from nothing to something, like he's our apprentice or something HombreHongo
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For yesterday's Machoke that needs to lift request
Anonymous
>>13222000 Oh hey, it's you.
Glad to see you're still working on that
Anonymous
hello people mediocre mousefag that you probably don't remember here i'll be taking requests, but yeah they'll probably all look retarded like this
Anonymous
>>13224702 fiendish banette
Anonymous
>>13224702 Try some Deoxys
Anonymous
>>13224702 Give me your best "retarded" Litwick you can muster.
Anonymous
>>13224702 Yanmega looking like that
Anonymous
>>13224702 Could you please try your hand at
>>13223579 ?
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>>13224653 I dont know if he's still working on it. He was probably using it as a point that he's not the best person to ask about anatomy.
He could probably start it from scratch though
Anonymous
Anonymous
I wonder what happened to Saxtinatran. Don't even know if I got the name right... Anyway, requesting a Gardevoir in trousers and a white, buttoned shirt. the natural skirt stuffed into the trousers.
Anonymous
>>13225041 You already got this filled.
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>>13212728 Because Osamu Tezuka is wonderful.
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>>13225078 Yes, and I liked it. But I also enjoy to have multiple of a picture, so that I have more to be amazed at.
That, and I lacked inspiration for a more unique request.
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>>13224722 I googled "fiendish" yet I still have no idea how to make anything look fiendish.
on the plus side, i developed a new appreciation for banette
>>13224736 >>13224739 on it
>>13224821 >>13224899 might not have enough time to do these
by the way, the fletchling request sounds cute, and i am terrible at cute
Anonymous
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Nothing to see here, move along
>>13225214 >>13225214 >>13225214 Anonymous
So do we filter Bibbuls? He seems to cause a lot of arguments.
Anonymous
>>13225306 Filtering him won't do anything because that doesn't getting of the discussions about him
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>>13225340 Oh you're right. Like how people just started calling reddit redshit and leddit etc. On /v/ when it was filtered. Come to thing of it Bibbuls already had a million different names back when he was on Showderp.