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Can we post NSFW fics?:
>Yes, in a spoilered link. How do I get a story in the catalog?
>Post in here with the name of the author (If linking from a non-anonymous source), the name of the fic, the genre, and a short summary, and then ask for it to be put in the catalog.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13385771 What a picture to start a new thread...
It's cute but I wouldn't bang... Maybe creates the wrong attention? Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
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Reposting Chapter 4 because the thread died shortly after I published it.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9578315/4/The-Thin-Lines Anonymous
>http://coffitivity.com/ am I the only one who uses this
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13389010 Um... Are you sure you're not posting in the wrong thread...?
Anonymous
>>13389077 I use it while writing because the "generic ambiance that's distracting but not enough to make you really focus on it" is a great help.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13389140 Oh I see. I'm right to suspect it's an apple app exlusive? If so I'm not going to be trying it anytime soon; I don't own any apple products.
Anonymous
>>13389163 You can use it right from the site.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13389174 Without a Mac? I might consider if so.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
Thinking about giving one of my main characters one of the Mega Evolution-capable Pokemon, though I'm not sure which one.
Leaning toward Mawile. On another note, what would you guys think of possibly adopting the FicFags Anonymous mantle in some way, maybe some variant to designate us as a second incarnation? The old FFA has all but died off and we're pretty much the same thing. Perhaps we could work on putting together some writing exercises for people to use or something, too.
>>13389140 Background noise while writing helps me, too.
Anonymous
someone write me a fanction about glaceon doing hard drugs and robbing gas stations
Anonymous
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Everyday until he comes back.
Anonymous
>>13389200 >Thinking about giving one of my main characters one of the Mega Evolution-capable Pokemon, though I'm not sure which one. Leaning toward Mawile. Yeah you would jump on the bandwagon you faggot. Why don't you go write a fanfiction where nekusagi grows two mouths out her ass and sucks your dick.
Anonymous
>>13389181 It should've just started up right as you loaded the page actually.
Either way, I don't use a mac and it works me just fine.
>>13389200 >Mawile >not Amphabulos I could dig that, actually. Writing exercises could be fun. Would be nice to have some sort of "group" thing going on too.
>>13389247 >a fanfiction where nekusagi grows two mouths out her ass and sucks your dick. Is that bad because that happens in every fanfic I write
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13389200 I was thinking him as well when I read the post. For some reason when I saw its mega I just started loving Mawile a little more, not as much as Furret tho.
>>13389247 >This is bate. >>13389294 Ah I see, it didn't start for me most likely due to my javascript blocking it. I'll give it a go than.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13389247 You sound like you're making that a request. Bulbagarden really get this boring?
>>13389294 Ampharos is really my second choice. I think it depends on what kind of abilities Ampharos ends up getting when it Mega Evolves. I really like its design (and I like old Ampharos too) but what it can do right now leaves a little to be desired.
I don't really know yet. Or maybe I'll just wait until more get revealed. That rumored list I saw today had some interesting names on it.
>>13389333 If he's trying to throw bait, he's doing a hilariously bad job at it. I'm sitting here laughing at him.
anon fag
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13390111 Always is, just waiting for people to post and such. Its never really active till someone post asking for requests or asking for critiques.
anon fag
>>13390156 Well would you give me a smut fic of a very tsundere Serperior and her male trainer?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13390206 Well... I'm not really the type of person to ask when it comes to pokemon On anything sexually... Not much into the stuff so I'd be no good with it in a story.
anon fag
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>>13390249 Fuck.
Well I'll wait for someone else to get here I guess.
anon fag
bump in the name of my dick
anon fag
second bump in the name of my dick pls
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13390562 >>13391368 I wonder what happened to the Serperior guy who used to hang around here, unless that's you.
Anonymous
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>>13391964 I'm pretty sure it is him.
anon fag
>>13391964 the guy that kept asking for black x serperior?
lel that's me
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
Rooh, if you're around, here's a new link for the archive of something I've recommended before.
Title: Survival Project
Genre: Adventure (SFW)
Summary: The story of an unusual trainer who attempts to gather badges in Johto, told through the eyes of the Pokemon who join his team.
Link:
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?561603-Survival-Project-(PG-13) Anonymous
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>>13392325 Alright I added it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Can someone write a story about a female Mienshao and Gardevoir fighting over a male Typhlosion and it ends in a three way between them?
Anonymous
I've always enjoyed this story, even though I'm not exactly sure that the guy will ever finish it. It's pretty well written, try giving it a shot.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5196885/1/GREEN-Act-1 Anonymous
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13394473 Oh fuck I read Mienshao as "Mewtwo" at first...
Anonymous
>>13391964 Reportan. Any progress Papa Bane?
>>13392323 Fuck you phonie scum
I tought I was the only one Anonymous
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>>13394812 Hey is this that fanfic that was posted on /v/ a while back? I was looking for this forever!
Give this a shot. It's a pretty neat story. Guy gets pulled into Pokemon and is stuck in Green's body. I think the story's interesting because he seems to take the premise as seriously as possible for the most part.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13400875 On my end? Slowly but surely. On paper there really isn't much left to this chapter, it's just a matter of getting through it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
I'm trying to write a cosmic horror story. Give me ideas, faggots.
Anonymous
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>>13405443 This or something envolving Bidoof.
Anonymous
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anon fag
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>>13400875 no I had a guy make one too
LET'S NOT ARGUE
WE ARE BROS
anon fag
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So is someone actually taking my request?
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13405335 Left you a short review; I liked it.
anon fag
>>13417607 write my fic pls
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13417758 Sorry, I'm not the one who can help you. Smut is like, the one thing I literally can't pull off no matter how much I try.
Anonymous
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>>13417811 fuck you can make it a cute romance then?
I'm not even in it for the dick
Anonymous
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All these weird fics in this thread... I'd even share my Valentine's Gardevoir fic,but I guess I'll wait 'til next year. Such glorious masterpiece can only be presented once a year.
Anonymous
Looking for a fic from the POV of Pokemon who are tested on by Rockets. Anyone know of any good ones?
Anonymous
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>>13418544 Forgot to mention that it doesn't matter if the main characters get out alive or not to me.
Anonymous
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>>13405443 Celebi is now a self-replicating malignant tear in space/time inhabiting a disfigured corpse of a chikorita.
Jirachi is now the equivalent of Ghroth, the Harbinger.
Deoxys creates perfect life, a extremophile cancer that corrupts planets from the inside.
Meloetta sings of time before time. A song that weaves the fabric of reality, and twists all that witness the eldritch vibrations.
Giratina is self-explanatory
Pants without Pants !!v3b467DpdIe
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>>13385771 anyone got any good crossover refs?
Anonymous
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Does anyone accepts fan-fictions request? I'd like to see a SFW mini story with this little girl turning into a giantess.
Anonymous
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>>13417607 I actually was thinking of expanding it lol
I dunno though because I have all my other stuff that needs to be worked on and I don't know if I could pull of a silly thing for a long time and keep it interesting and funny.
I dunno really I might go back to it maybe.
vulpsis
Vulpsis
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>>13422425 Gaaaaayyyyyyyyyy
Anonymous
Good fapfics please. FPokemonxMhuman Any eeveelution, absol, lucario, ninetales, gardevoir, latias, lopunny, serperior, quilava, froslass, milotic, any other similar Pokemon. Much appreciated!
Anonymous
>>13422685 Here you have good sir
Anonymous
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>>13423031 Holy shit this is fucking beautiful my fucking sides I'm not even upset holy fuck this is a work of art whoever wrote this is a fucking hero
holy shit dude
Anonymous
I've thought of an interesting idea for a story. A Pokemon being attracted to their human. Go any way you want with it.
Anonymous
>>13425766 Like this hasn't been done a thousand fucking times already
Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
Anonymous
>>13427136 What if that Pokemon is a Slugma
A yandere Slugma
A yandere Slugma that decides it wants a sexual relationship with its human
The human finds themselves on the run from the Pokemon, knowing that the sex would inevitably kill them
The Slugma is impossibly crafty in its means to track the human down
Anonymous
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All I wanted was my Tsundere Serperior x Human
Anonymous
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>>13427180 Could've specified.
Reminds me of the story I once read about a Trainer being constantly harassed by his Electrode, whom, despite being genderless, saw itself as a female.
Anonymous
>>13427180 I... I want to read this.
Anonymous
Gardeficsunite! where can I find worthwhile ones? >Pls no Sinners.
Anonymous
Not Arceus !!UUnIq9F3xgT
Do you guys mind if me and my buddies merge with you? You might have heard of us before, we're
>>13425754 Anonymous
>>13429444 I remember reading Sinners. The anti religious stuff is what really turned me off it, not because it offended me, but because it came off as really stupid to 1) have Christian parallels with gods that are clearly more based on the elements 2) There is no basis for Legendary worship in the games (apart from the church in Sinnoh, I don't know what the fuck that is about)3) It's rather silly to have your main character spout your atheistic views in a world where the Gods clearly exist.
Speaking of god, how do you guys feel about people using "Oh Arceus" or "Oh Ho oh" whenever they want someone to react in shock
Anonymous
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>>13429834 “YES! TAKE IT, BITCH!” Gardevoir shouted as her shiny mate, Vardegoir, swallowed all the properly digested and compacted Poffins that came out of her sphincter. Anonymous
>>13429851 Damn, this sounds great.
Mewtwo or Giratina, which should I pick? Not Deoxys !!+1EF6HnSpmi
>>13429986 Mewtwo
but you should ignore both of those options and go with Deoxys instead. Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13429834 I wise anon once told me I was never to trip >>13429909 I never use "Oh God"
because my character is a scumbag atheist but I have used similar derivatives of the commonplace expression. And doubly so in a state of shock.
There's something about a character screaming JESUS CHRIST that's hard to mimic with an explicit Pokemon euphemism >>13429909 My take,
considering the Pokeworld has a creator, swearing Arceus makes enough sense, and won't be misunderstood by most readers. Then again, creating an entire religion to parallel fundamentalist Christianity in a Pokemon universe is a little silly, isn't it? >Pic related, death to the Ho-oh worshipers, let's get a crusade rolling. Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13427670 why does this happen every time I come up with a stupid idea
Anonymous
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>>13429851 Huh wow this is pretty interesting.
Not the kind of thing I would write myself but I probably might read something like that.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13429851 Sure, why not? You're certainly welcome here.
Anonymous
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>>13429909 The guy could write some great battle scenes, but the rest of his writing was utter shit. The pacing was awful, the character interaction was cringe-worthy at times and mediocre at best. I agree with what you say about his anti-religious stuff. It really is idiotic. At no point in ANY of the canons is there a parallel to Christianity and God, so why shoehorn it into your story for the sole reason to bash it and use it as a plot device for why 'their love can't be'?
I cringe when I read, "Oh Arceus!" or anything of the like.
>>13429444 Look up a guy who goes by the name of Edge Feyera; I know he's on
fanfiction.net and he may be on other sites as well. Many consider him to be the Tolkien of Gardefics. His writing is phenomenal. Everything from his character interaction, world building, and dialogue is bar-none the best I've ever read. Seriously, I swear he's some sort of scientist+historian in real life based on how he explains some of the stuff in the Pokeverse.
There's not much Gardevoir in his first story, Fractured Unity, but it sets the stage for some seriously awesome stuff. To this day, I kind of regret reading his works though. Every Gardefic I've read since then has read like bland, uninteresting crap.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13435295 Oh, also the author of Sinners named his Gardevoir some fucked-up name I can't even begin to remember.
Here's a link to Edge Feyera's first story.
http://edgefeyera.deviantart.com/art/Gift-of-the-Protector-Arc-1-Fractured-Unity-391321283#comments Anonymous
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Anybody have any good cynthia fics?
Amok
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Since the "Choose Your Destiny" threads, as mentioned here
>>13429851 , are going to be merged with you guys, I'll just leave this here:
Title: The 37th Daily Great Shiny Hunt
Summary: A Celebi follower trys to catch a shiny Chancey.
Link:
http://pastebin.com/HC5y5hXr Amok
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Since the "Choose Your Destiny" threads, as mentioned here
>>13429851 , are going to be merged with you guys, I'll just leave this here:
Title: The 37th Daily Great Shiny Hunt
Summary: A Celebi follower tries to catch a shiny Chancey.
Link:
http://pastebin.com/HC5y5hXr Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13429909 >>13435295 I read a little of Sinners out of a sick curiosity after hearing his reputation, maybe a few chapters. I literally couldn't stand any more not only because it felt creepy watching Slash 'bond' with Ralts knowing where it was going, but because his writing style was so purple that it was just too fucking grueling to read. Did the battles ever actually get better compared to the first chapters? I never even made it to the worst of the porn and the edgy shit.
When I decided to make up a fictional religion for a certain group of characters in my fics, I just took a bunch of the mystical shit from the anime and games and tied it loosely together. From my understanding, Slash took it way too far.
This is more of a reply to
>>13435295 alone, but Edge Feyera is a good author, and I'm not even really into Gardevoir fics. I read the first of his fics and it really worked because it was actually a pretty good story on top of being a Gardevoir fic. Maybe the only criticism I could level is that it's a bit edgy, but not to an intolerable degree.
>>13435338 Wasn't it "Miyako" or something?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13437142 This page sums up Sinners perfectly.
https://encyclopediadramatica.se/Slash_Firestorm The best part is the author gets extremely butthurt even at the slightest hint of criticism. If you don't think his work is the divinely inspired work of his non-god, then you're a flaming asshole troll is should go kill yourself.
Also, the Gardevoir's name is Psymakio. What the fuck man, just what the fuck?
As far as Edge's works go, it has only improved since his first story. While he hasn't updated in ages, his most recent story is levels better than his first. It's less 'edgy' and more smooth flowing. I also wasn't a Gardevoir fic fan, but then I was introduced to Edge's stuff and was really impressed. To this day, his stuff is the only Gardevoir fiction I'll even consider reading.
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13444299 That's actually the page that caused me to want to try reading some of it. I think I found it because of one of the old fiction rec threads a long time ago here. As I remember it I saw his name and "Sinners" mentioned and decided to Google it, which led me to that page. As a result, I'm pretty familiar with a lot of the basics of his actions.
I really have to get back to reading Edge's stuff. I started talking to him while reading the first story and he really is a pretty cool guy. And if it only gets better from an already good start, that sounds pretty promising.
I think what makes his stuff good is that from what I've seen, he treats the subject a lot more seriously. The idea of a human/Pokemon relationship on paper isn't what generally turns me off; I think there are some good ways to explore the subject, but that rarely happens. Straight PWP isn't wrong, it just isn't my thing, but when you get something like Sinners that puts on a huge show of trying to be pretentious to mask simply being a Gardevoir fic, there's a problem.
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Oh man, I absolutely adore Edge's Gift of the Protector series. Sana is, by far, my favorite character out of any fanfiction I've ever read. That may be an extreme thing to say, but I really like how he characterizes her.
And like
>>13444794 says, the author himself is a pretty awesome and friendly guy. You can't go wrong with his work. I actually started with one of his oneshots (his first one actually) and have gone from there. I'm still waiting for him to post chapter two of Snow Angels...
I also agree Sinners is ridiculous in almost every way possible. How it became the 'standard' for Gardevoir fanfiction is beyond me.
Anonymous
I'm trying to write one where the protagonist gets Celebi's time travel powers and then subsequently abuses the fuck out of it. It's coming along... barely.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13445371 >It's coming along... barely. That feel.
Anonymous
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Is there a good fic where Juniper and Fennel seduce Bianca and have a threeway with her
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13450146 Hilariously enough, I actually got some writing done last night. Going to do more later.
Anonymous
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>>13453049 >go to another place to work hoping the change of scenery helps me >don't realize I wouldn't have any privacy here >being all out in the open really makes it hard for me to feel comfortable enough to write >now stuck here >getting next to no work done to make it even worse the water here is really gross and makes my tea is undrinkable
Anonymous
Anonymous
>tfw making an incredibly blatant self insert for the sole purpose of banging your favorite character (despite neither your character nor your favorite character actually having any notable role in the story, and the only reason it comes up at all is because one of the two mention that they did it) Feels silly , man
Anonymous
>>13456953 I
've done that too.
Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
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Just bumping the thread to say Chapter 6 is done but I need my editor's feedback so it will probably be published only tomorrow. Sorry.
Anonymous
I'm going to start a story about Obama going for a third term against a time traveling weavile, they are both black so its a fair race.
Anonymous
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>>13457242 It's pretty fun, I have to admit.
Anonymous
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>>13460442 have it end with Obama losing the election but then catching the Weavile so he wins anyway
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>In the anime, Ditto had an issue where he couldn't get faces correctly, but could change into any Pokemon >In my story, Ditto has an issue where he can't get the dick correctly, but he can the Pokemon he transforms into, so all Pokemon he changes into have huge purple goo-dicks. Your thoughts?
Butler|1163 7517 8595 !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13471139 Pretty creative.
Anonymous
>working on a thing >realize that I'm at 6k words >just finishing up the first big event of the story >this was supposed to be a quick one shot jesus shit I don't even know what the hell happened
Anonymous
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Is there any good pokewaifu yuri around?
Anonymous
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Man why does working outside your comfort zone have to be so uncomfortable
Anonymous
>>13472696 I've tried this.
Once wrote a short story which I suddenly felt like was turning into a legitimate novel.
It was oddly scary.
On the other hand, it was a bit relieving to switch to a less word-heavy style.
Anonymous
>>13477764 To be honest I just found a good place to cut it off and decided to turn it into a multi-chapter thing.
I don't think I could really shorten it enough to really make it still work as a oneshot because it's supposed to cover too long a period of time.
I kind of prefer releasing multi-chaptered stuff anyway because every time I post a new chapter of the work it's a little bit of free publicity as it gets bumped to the top and no one can even complain about it
>>13477764 >>13480668 Whatever happened to that guy who came into one of these threads and said he was writing the longest novels ever?
Anonymous
Question. Do you guys put actual animals in your fics? Or are Pokemon the actual animals of the world? In that case, do humans eat Pokemon like we do for animals? Are they treated the same way for slaughter or produce? Do you ever bring it up or is it deemed irrelevant?
Anonymous
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>>13480797 I've actually just completely ignored it tbh
I've shown people eating meat and stuff but never have mentioned real animals so it could still go either way
I dunno where I stand on that argument really so I'll probably just leave it vague like that every time
anon fag
So is the Tsundere Serperior x trainer still a thing. Or am I being ignored
Anonymous
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So what's you guys' opinion on Archive of Our Own? I only just learned about it today and am too lazy to look through it and formulate an opinion of my own.
Anonymous
Read standingon.words 'Hands Down' yesterday, and enjoyed it. Rosa/Roxie is good clean fun. Relatively new to Pokemon fanfiction, what's the general consensus on stuff set in non-canon regions? Had an idea bugging me for ages about a place based on parts of the UK, debating whether to leap in or focus my energy on something else.
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>>13422425 >http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9598951/1/Entagled-Ecstasy When I was debating between squirtle and bulbasaur in 1999 at the age of 5, I never thought it would lead to me jacking off to a gay pokemon fanfic. The world is weird and wonderful.
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>>13481350 Th-thanks... I've never personally read anything like that, but yeah it's fine it seems, people were actually discussing it in here a few threads ago.
The main issue with it is world building, but if you enjoy that then there's no problems there for you.
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>>13423031 amazing 10/10 would read again
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13480734 Three words from finishing his work he had a heart attack, and died.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13487644 Yikes,
that sounds a lot like me. Anonymous
>>13490649 that would sound like me except that would require me ever getting close to finishing something
Anonymous
>>13491938 I feel you. Try listening to some music while you write. I find it helps me keep focus.
It's been discussed in this thread's predecessors: what do you like to listen to when writing or reading.
>this anon likes to listen to trance when writing, and an album (great for keeping track of time) of something mellow when reading. Last album played was OK Computer. Anonymous
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>>13480797 I'm writing a story where some Pokemon are wild animals and others are actual sentient characters. Don't be afraid to follow Pokemon's methods deliberately in your writing; do whatever feels natural.
Anonymous
>>13477764 I've hit 100k in my story and I haven't even hit the 2nd main character yet.
I think I'm fucked for 250k+
anon fag
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>>13480983 Why do you guys do this to me?
Anonymous
>>13492139 Why don't we do this again actually
What's your favorite artist/album/mixtape/whatever to listen to as you write lately?
Anonymous
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>>13495225 Recently I've been using a mix of Pink Noise and Listen to Wikipedia as distraction-blocking background noise, with the occasional piece of the Pokemon anime soundtrack for what I'm currently working on.
Anonymous
>>13495225 When it comes to writing (and work in general), I listen to something calm and without lyrics/words.
Music that's a bit too loud/energetic and contains more than pleasant sounds is distracting to me.
Examples:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gik1C-Z8ERw http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYJqZA7n-Ys http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t4HfbN75lFs Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
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>>13492139 Man, I do that too.
Sometimes I write whole chapters or stories listening to the same song over and over again.
Anonymous
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>>13492612 Holy shit that's HUGE
Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
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>>13495225 I'll listen to anything and usually put together playlists of stuff that is related to what I'm writing, like for Hands Down I made one of cheesy love songs and Dashboard Confessional songs. For fight scenes I have a separate one that's a mix of punk, skramz, and electronic stuff (I really don't know much about the genres there lol)
Lately though I've just been choosing albums I like, usually electronic stuff or ambient.
>>13496995 Yeah I tend to prefer instrumental stuff because otherwise I might start singing along and get distracted lol although loud/energetic stuff never bothers me much on its own.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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anon fag
someone pls do the Tsundere Serperior x Trainer I thought you fuckers took requests.
Anonymous
>>13503171 The harder you request, the harder we will ignore
anon fag
>>13503447 That's fucking stupid. I was ignored for a week, so I requested again, and I was ignored again.
Anonymous
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>>13503171 Not really something that interests me, sorry, and I have my own things to work on at the moment.
Anonymous
>>13503532 are you ignoring how hilariously desperate you've sounded this whole thread?
Anonymous
Kyouhei !!iyGYdLJbI/k
>>13495225 The album Uno! by Green Day.
I listen to punk and alternative when I write, Green Day being only one of them. I also like Red Hot Chili Peppers, Snow Patrol, and Weezer. >>13492612 Have I heard of it? That is, has it been mentioned here before?
Anonymous
>>13503532 Because we know who you are. You're a faggot that does not deserve our good will.
Lucracki !MLWuprjgYs
Are there any fans of glorious progressive rock here?
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13508681 Which bands might those be?
Anonymous
anon fag
>>13508656 Do you think you're some sort of god or something?
fag
>>13506131 also lel it's half ironic.
also le anonymous lelelelel
>>13515448 >anonymous >you're namefagging or are there a bunch of people coming into the thread begging for trainerxserperior fics with the name anon fag?
not that it matters, it's not like there's anyone who comes to this thread who hasn't seen your posts by now anyway. if nobody's done it by now nobody is going to
Anonymous
>>13515511 Yeah, I decided to give up on it and start being my usual asshole self.
Fuck it, mane.
(but to be fair, I'm not the only guy who's begged for SerperiorxTrainer fics, so don't let me ruin it for them. I'm done making Serperior requests for their sake, so don't confuse me with them.(Seriously))
I-it's been fun
Anonymous
>>13515542 Now you're just being a bigger fag.
Let it go man.
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>>13515570 I already let it go.
I'll just drift away forever.....
with a semi boner because nobody i know will find this.....
I close my eyes, only for a moment, and the moment's gone.
All my dreams, crash before my eyes in curiosity...
DUSTTTTTT IN THE WINDDDD
ALLLL WE ARE IS DUST IN THE WINDDDD
Anonymous
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Man you people are in for a treat in a bit hehe "treat"
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http://pastebin.com/qYuh3xWd Happy fapping, you degenerate bastards.
Lucario !MLWuprjgYs
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>>13513471 Pink Floyd, Dream Theater, Yes, Camel, King Crimson, Rush... I could even say a few Thrice and Mastodon albums, but I'm not so sure about the progressive vibe on them. At least The Alchemy Index, by Thrice, is experimental as hell. Worth a download. Anonymous
Anonymous
has anyone got the one about the guy with the Eevee in the restaurant?
Anonymous
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>>13429909 I've been using real-world analogs. There's a Christian-like religion, Buddhism, Islam, etc. Arceus is another diety, some people consider it God, others think of it as a servant. Most of the population are secularists/agnostics, though.
A few rare times my protag starts begging for God to help her understand things, and then worries that there's no meaning to life when she doesn't get any answers.
Anonymous
>>13520077 I have it but I'm not at my computer. If no one else does I can post it on Wednesday.
Anonymous
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>>13521910 sweet, I'll be sure to be about
Anonymous
>>13507297 Yeah, it's Silhouette of Time. That story of mine which only one guy ever reviews ;_;.
Maybe I should actually tag the characters I can and make it a yaoi, that's what ff users like.
Anonymous
>>13525468 >and make it a yao no don't
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>>13525636 But this sauve little pest is in it~
Anonymous
Anonymous
So, where do we all stand on the "Pokemon and their names should/should not be capitalized" debate?
Anonymous
>>13520077 YOU'RE WELCOME!!
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>>13527825 I do it just out of official convention.
If you wanna write "in universe" and treat Pokémon names as improper nouns than be my guest.
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>>13394812 Does it have fucking or tits? I like fucking and tits.
Anonymous
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>>13527825 I capitalize it because they are in-universe.
Anonymous
>>13429851 Who are they? I missed it.
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>>13527825 I go with capitalized because it's the easiest to convey clearly in the writing. I've seen people get confused when they don't see the names capitalized.
Of course, there is a legitimate case to be made for not capitalizing them, but I just feel like it's not that important.
Anonymous
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>>13527861 you absolute legend
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>>13389204 http://pastebin.com/dTH8XcHF i stopped caring before the first line
fuck you /pol/ Anonymous
Anyone that has the document listing all the old fanfics before the purge?
Anonymous
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>>13529398 There was such a thing?
I obviously don't have it. Someone out there in the dark depths of cyberspace
? ought to be in possession of it.
Anonymous
>>13527825 tbh I don't care either way but because it seems to make Farla all hot and bothered I feel it is my duty to always capitalize them
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So I started reading the Green might be a guy story and was enjoying it up until he caught Regirock. In Mt. Moon. With one Dusk Ball. Has anyone else read it? Is it worth continuing even though the story has been abandoned?
Anonymous
Ok hi my name is Otto Van Der Waals Tostforgenchen (but every1 calls me Phil) Im 11 yers old many tanks 4 being her 2 lissin 2 my story. It all startd yestrday when my parens forsed me 2 go 2 scool 4 anuther yer. "U STOPID MOM" Is creamed lowdfuly (coz Im mad) "IM NOT GOING 2SCOOL EVER AGIN!1" "Lissin Phil" she said all serosly. "If u do not obay me ther will b extrem consipations." But i dint want 2 go so I ran in2 the showr but I dint tern the water on. BUT THEN... THE SHOWR TURND IN2 MOM! "FUC U U BIThc" I scram but she toke away my tv 4 1 motnh so i had 2 giv up. AN: pls reveiw all castructive critasm is welcum.
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>>13532463 Hey man your story was great. I loved it and I think you should be on the New York Times Bestseller list. You should really get published man that was fantastic I cried the whole time I read it.
Oh, I'm back. Again.
Anonymous
>>13528598 Disciples of Legendary Pokémon. Ordinary people with extraordinary powers.
>>13425754 " target="_blank" rel="nofollow">archive.foolz.us/vp/thread/
>>13425754 Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13531195 >>13531195 >make Farla all hot and bothered I love you Why does she/he/it always get so mad?
FF.net isn't exactly the center of quality.
Anonymous
Is there any story you guys recommend with an adventure? I don't mind cliches, as long as there are little to no Mary Sues. I don't want some big plot, I just want to read a good adventure fic. FFnet is just coming up with a bunch of Adventure/Romance BS that I don't want to read. Romance is fine, but I want it to be something on the side, if there at all. Surely someone has done a good cliche'd Adventure fic, right? pls rspnd
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>>13533490 Because she's the hero we deserve, just not the one we want right now.
But seriously, she just wants the attention. I'm planning on deliberately timing a chapter to be released in January for her Pokemon review marathon month just to mess with her.
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Anonymous
Does anyone know of that novel-length fan fiction about Jasmine's virginity and various men trying to take it?
Anonymous
I'm writing a story that's basically Metro 2033 in the Pokemon universe.
Anonymous
Do you guys put TMs and HMs in your stories? And, if so, how do they work?
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>>13537180 I've avoided using them because I have no idea how I think they work
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>>13534723 Olivine Romance?
>>13537180 I avoid them and just pretend that the moves they can give are normally learned by the Pokemon instead.
Anonymous
>>13534669 If only The Road were longer. Survival Project is good too. Anything else? I'm actually looking for cliches done well. These are pretty good, though.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13537180 Programs that either latch onto the Pokeball or a Pokedex and uses an extreme Rosetta Stone-esque program to teach. Discs aren't meant to break, but most end up shattering anyway during the 'training.
Either that or the disc is writing and overwriting experiences and memories onto the designated Pokemon.
Anonymous
Interested in gym leader smutfics right now. Currently working on a Lucas/Candice fic- She takes advantage of his recent rejection to seduce him, and their vanilla morphs into kink morphs into yandere femdom, causing Lucas to fear where Candice's boundaries lie, or if she even has any.
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>>13543769 >yandere femdom oh baby
Anonymous
>>13543769 Why is that Glaceon so angry?
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>>13540085 I kind of hate to recommend this, because the author is a bit of a dick and the story is painfully obviously an excuse for him to ship his self-insert with Bianca, but if you want cliches you can't really get better than this.
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?538377-Chronicles-of-Unova-(PG-15)&highlight= It's incomplete and his characterization is really bad (if you ask me) but like I said, if you want a cliche, a fairly strict rewriting of the first Black and White fits the bill, and admittedly he does put a fair amount of effort into it.
This is the first thing that came to mind because I don't usually read them, so I apologize if it's not what you're looking for.
>>13542559 I like this idea.
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>>13545036 because it's a pure christian pokemon and believes female nudity is wrong
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>>13534650 I wish you luck. >>13537180 /it's the Matrix's training program. All Pokemon (save for Caterpie, Metapod, Weedle, Kakuna, Magikarp, Ditto, Unown, Wobbuffet, Wurmple, Silcoon, Cascoon, Wynaut, Burmy, Combee Kricketot, Beldum and Smeargle) have USB/disc drive ports depending on the current version of the software.
Anonymous
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The Cancer
The Cancer
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man I let myself slack for a few nights and now I just don't have the will to write anymore shit sucks
Noaj-T
>>13552564 I promised to review if you put it on
Fanfiction.net , but, failing that, here.
It's good, but it needs a bit of polishing. There are some issues with flow, and a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that a little work couldn't fix.
One very specific not is that you seem to use the same word in two or more sentences in a row. Maybe look up some synonyms if you can't find a way to describe the action differently.
Another is that you only refer to them either by name or by "the girl." If you can come up with a few different things to call them by, maybe "the trainer," for Rosa, and "the gym leader," for Roxie, it will repeat a lot less, and you can cycle through them a bit to add to this effect.
If you would like, I could try editing this in my own style, and letting you pick and choose what you like, and then you could re-post it after a bit of work. Obviously, you don't have to take me up on this, but I'm available if you need me.
Anonymous
>>13562525 Yeah I had a lot of trouble focusing and writing it so I didn't do any proofreading or anything before posting it, so it's probably a bit sloppier than I usually do.
Huh, I'm actually usually pretty careful about avoiding that.
That would be a good idea actually I dunno why I haven't done that in the past. I'm definitely going to take that into account from now on.
Yeah, sure. Go ahead, I'm cool with that.
Noaj-T
>>13562590 That's understandable.
It only happened a few times, and it only REALLY stuck out when you used immediately in two sentences in a row. The other times, I think only once or twice, so it was pretty hard to notice. I would probably only want to change the immediately in one of the lines.
Glad I could help.
Alright. I'll do the rewrite tomorrow between classes and on the bus, and I'll... Hm... it might be better to send the file to you by email when it's done actually. Unless of course you have a
Fanfiction.net account that I could PM it to.
>>13562631 Oh wow I'm surprised I didn't catch that one as I was writing it.
You could just pastebin and link it in here, but my
ff.net is standingon.words
My email's in the field too, so you can just send it wherever is more convenient for you
Noaj-T
>>13562676 Alright. I'll post here tomorrow when I get home from school.
>>13562684 All right, looking forward to it
Anonymous
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Need help. Too much procrastinating and I don't know why I do this.
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Guys, What do you like to read?
Anonymous
Guys, What do you like to read? (No fanfics)
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>>13561898 I'm lucky. I write my fanfiction because I know I have to live up to the expectations of someone else for the Nuzlocke community to see, and I personally don't want to do him injustice.
He just updated his nuzlocke by the way:
http://land-walker.deviantart.com/art/Yellow-Nuzlocke-Act-II-part-3-396316646 It's funny, writing fanfiction for a fanfiction, but he made a good world to build on and that's what I did with Silhouette of Time.
This picture here is the map I made for my own self reference, and I think I'm lucky to be having a blast collection resources and all that good stuff for this.
>>13570511 Whatever free shit I get my hands on. Which turns out to be the bargain bin at my department store.
Anonymous
what's a good pokemon/team to say "this guy is different" without being cliche or a mary sue faggot?
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>>13570511 I don't read that would get in the way of my writing.
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>>13570820 Teams of threes or fours, mono types, mid evolutions. I check the showderp thread whenever I need to worry about teams.
Anonymous
>>13562849 There. Did it. Check your inbox on
Fanfiction.net .
>>13570511 I mostly read textbooks and research papers during Fall and Spring, but I also read a lot of manga, and a few books here and there. I am currently waiting for Eric Nylund's next book in the Mortal Coil series.
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>>13573631 Yeah, I just saw it. It looks a lot better, thanks. There are a few small things I'd fix first but I'd be willing to post it to
ff.net new, if that's cool with you; I'll add like a credit thing at the bottom.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anyone taking requests? It's a little specific. A NSFW fic involving a male Ursaring.
Anonymous
I have a question regarding fanfictions that are allowed, i understand that a NSFW FC has been confirmed by moot to be OK to post if within a spoiled form, unlike NSFW images which are banned even with a spoiler, but would a guro fanfiction that is technically a violation of rule #4 i think it is on all boards, be allowed to be posted under the circumstance that it is put under a spoiler?
Anonymous
>>13576323 Well snfw fics that are allowed are only if they're linked offsite, in which case it doesn't matter what makes it nsfw
Anonymous
>>13578354 Its not a matter of NSFW its a matter of there is a rule against all guro, and the act of linking to a fanfiction depicting it could still be in violation of this rule.
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>>13578689 directly posting on site BAD
linking to another site NOT BAD
worse case scenario they think you are spamming and won't let your post go through
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>>13578689 Well there's a rule against NSFW content on /vp/ but it's okay as long as you post offsite, so you should be fine.
Anonymous
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I need a Pokemon to have as an antagonist to an Emolga. Any suggestions?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13583772 Stunfisk or Palpitoad.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13583890 I am pleased to see that duplica is getting some "love" again. I like your semi-humorous approach. Keep it up. Anonymous
>>13583890 great so far, i also like the jab at Wikipedia and its article style.
Anonymous
>>13583890 That's hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13585465 >>13584646 >>13584499 Thanks. I still need to figure out how to cure Ditto's problem.
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http://m.fanfiction.net/s/6382717/1/ whats this
i founded it in the other thread
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>>13570511 I enjoy reading Martin's works.
Anonymous
Hey guys, any suggestion for a Gardevoir story that has the Gardevoir as just a close friend or something instead of a lover?
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13591753 have them and the kid grow up together, simple as that, close friends, almost like siblings can come from being close before sex became a thought.
Anonymous
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>>13592035 Well yeah, that's basically what I'm looking for. Trying to find a story like that.
Anonymous
>>13576297 I did that!
It just has Dawn in it.
Anonymous
>>13552564 >http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9642779/1/Get-Lucky Welp I posted it to
ff.net now.
Special thanks to Noaj-T for editing.
Anonymous
Just stopping by to say thanks for the Roxie pics everyone
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Noaj-t
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>>13593935 L-lewd!
No thanks needed.
Anonymous
>>13592035 Just clarifying, I'm trying to find a story like the one you described. I can't write to save my life, otherwise I'd write it myself.
;_; Surely some anon has written such a story?
Anonymous
So, just to make sure I don't do something stupid here (someone stupid? On 4chan? Nah, never), I want to make sure. I can post a fic I'm actually working on here, right?
Anonymous
>>13597664 I sure hope so because otherwise I've been using this thread completely wrong
Anonymous
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>>13598356 It's too hot to read right now but later if I don't forget I'll go through it
Also how is da as an audience? I have no luck personally; everything I post seems to get ignored compared to
ff.net Anonymous
Any of you ever tried writing a Nuzlocke fic?
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>>13601303 I did ages ago but a bunch of my mons died because of me being dumb around vermillion and I got depressed and gave up then the computer was playing on died anyway so I ended up never finishing
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>>13593784 ...well?
Are you going to provide a link or what?
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>>13600944 The problem with dA is just getting yourself out there initially. Once you've got your target audience you're set, it's just starting off that's a pain in the ass.
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>>13601303 I tried to write one for my B2W2 nuzlocke take down of the E4, but I lost all my notes somewhere, so I have no idea what the attacks were and stuff. Didn't pan out.
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>>13598848 I'll give this a shot. Thanks anon