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Can we post NSFW fics?:
>Yes. NSFW pics?:
>No. How do I get a story in the catalog?
>Post in here with the name of the author (If linking from a non-anonymous source), the name of the fic, the genre, and a short summary, and then ask for it to be put in the catalog. If we miss your request, just post again or ask in the irc. When posting fics in the thread, please post them as links instead of dumping them.
It’s recommended you post links with spoiler tags to keep the janitors from deleting your stuff.
Anonymous
Cute pic Anyone here ever done like a group fic or a collaborative fic? If so, how badly did it crash and burn?
Rooh
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>>13774418 I haven't, but I have considered doing one.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>13774418 does the VN count? that didn't crash and burn so much as slowly fizzle away
I'm still working on it on my own though Rooh
The smut I can not wait to write about this gorgeous one...
Anonymous
Anonymous
I'm writing a simple smutfic about a nameless trainer being bound and abused in the middle of the night by their sadomasochist Nyaonikusu.This is more than I've gotten myself to write in a single sitting in months.
Rooh
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>>13777762 >This is more than I've gotten myself to write in a single sitting in months. This summary?
Anonymous
>>13777762 >Nyaonikusu Really? Not something... you know, *good*?
Rooh
>>13778808 >Not something... you know, *good*? arent you just edgy as fuck
Anonymous
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>>13778870 >having an opinion on a certain Pokemon is "edgy" Aren't you just a bitch and a half?
Anonymous
>>13778808 For some reason the darker fur parts on the arms and legs of the female one in particular made me think of bondage gear, so I was directly inspired by it. It ain't a matter of if it's particularly a good Pokemon or not. Anonymous
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>>13778940 At least you have a justifiable reason.
Post it when you're done. Golpher !fiNKP8FI0k
>>13777762 Well then, I finished this. It's more of a rough draft than a final, but for now that's all I'm getting out. Might try to fix it up some tomorrow. I honestly haven't gotten myself to finish any sort of fic, even a short one-shot, in about two years until this, so I'm probably real rusty anyway. Last time I wrote this much in one sitting was months ago I wrote a lot more, but I never actually finished that because of writer's block.
http://pastebin.com/2X0ruPg8 (NSFW)Enjoy the smut. Anonymous
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>>13781769 Late, I know, but that's surprisingly good. Good job.
Anonymous
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>>13781769 Not bad, Golpher. Not bad. Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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Hey, guys. Good to see you working on stuff. Intending to try and put a real dent in my current chapter tonight.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
Someone write a cute lusty fic that involves a male Teerunaa wearing a diaper. :3
vulpshit
all this smut. You know you're a great writer if you have people reading your sfw fics
Anonymous
>>13784361 >so much truth Damn it, /vp/, have you no taste? Recently, Fanfiction General has been nothing more than Smut General.
Captcha: eract piece
Damn it Captcha.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13784381 It's not ALL smut.
Anonymous
>>13784381 It's a significant improvement, Grandpa. Just because you can't get it up doesn't mean we all have to suffer through your shitty SFW crap.
Rooh
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>>13784400 >Just because you can't get it up doesn't mean we all have to suffer through your shitty SFW crap. ha
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13784361 >>13784381 I'm still here, but I've got no problem with you guys writing smut.
Anonymous
>>13784400 >Just because you can't get it up doesn't mean we all have to suffer through your shitty SFW crap That has to be one of the most ignorant, idiotic things I have heard all month. Thanks for the good laugh.
>>13784390 No, you're right, but most of it is, and most request are for smut as well.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13784495 That's just how these threads go. If you'd like to see SFW stories, just ask for them. Ignore what you dislike.
That's all you can do.
Anonymous
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What about the Teerunaa diaper one? :3c
Anonymous
>>13784524 That's a fair point, and I generally do just ignore the smut in these threads. However, recently that just means avoiding Fanfiction General threads entirely. Request for SFW stories go ignored, and people have been posting less and less SFW stuff as of late.
Just expressing my views and stating my observations. I'm not discouraging you all from requesting and posting smut, but I'm bound to vent every once in a while.
Anonymous
>>13784612 >avoiding Fanfiction General threads entirely Please do this again. We'd really appreciate it.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13784612 It's partially my fault, it's all I spam the thread with.
Sorry, bro.
Anonymous
>>13784622 You don't have to apologize. You aren't the one coming into an existing thread and going "I hate this, cater it more to me even though I don't even contribute to it!"
Anonymous
>>13784617 Love you too, anon.
>>13784622 No, it's cool. Like I said, I don't mind for the most part. I just vent every once and a while when I see FanFiction general filled with nothing bu NSFW content. When I read vulpshit's statement, it tiggered a small vent on my end. You're entitled to post what you want; it's not your fault other people don't post SFW or aren't interested in it. No need to apologize, anon.
vulpshit
>>13784648 fight hate with love brother.
And I posted that to see if it would make the usual writers create a masterful sfw piece. unfortunately that didn't happen so I'm just going to poof and lurk
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
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>>13784645 I'd be more than willing to write SFW stories if people would request them, but not a single person has done so in this thread. Alas, I'm getting off for the night, but if I wake up and see some SFW request, I'd be more than happy to contribute.
>>13784677 You know it, bro.
Too bad you didn't get the reaction you wanted. I'll have to start writing short oneshots and posting them here. I'm a bit tired now, so maybe I'll start doing that tomorrow.
vulpshit
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>>13784692 well that was heart wrenching. bravo
Anonymous
>>13784692 Holy crap, that was actually really good. I was half expecting some sort of joke to appear at the end, but that was a genuinely good story.
It was truly emotional despite its length; heck, the brevity may have actually HELPED convey the emotions you were aiming for. Were you the one who wrote that, Pokemaniac? Very well done!
Glad I say that before I got off!
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13784744 Yeah, it's mine. Thank you.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13784692 >>13784763 ....wow. I just, wow... that totally wasn't where I was expecting it to go at all.
You really have a talent for that kind of writing, judging from that.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13784940 I can do stuff besides smut, I just don't.
People seem to like the smut the most, and I'm a people pleaser.
Anonymous
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>>13784293 Now we need this. :3
Anonymous
I want a story where a torimian (the poodle thing) is chasing a Fennekin through a forest for her master. When the Fennekin is cornered, she (yes also a girl) suddenly evolves into Teerunaa and dominates the poor dog sexually.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13784969 Honestly? I think I'm going to start reading the stuff you post here more often. Talent doesn't just disappear because it's a smut fic, in fact, I'd almost dare to say smut can be more challenging at times.
I certainly understand why you're well regarded now. I feel like I missed out by not paying more attention earlier.
Anonymous
>>13784969 Aaaand
>>13785069 goes and proves your point.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13785069 That magic wand stick in her tail would be... useful...
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13785147 >why you're well regarded now. Where?
>Talent doesn't just disappear because it's a smut fic Yes it does. With me, anyway. Depends on what it is, really.
My Duplica story I'm extremely proud of, whereas my Serena story is just the usual "girl is a complete slut, loves to fuck Pokemon, so she fucks Pokemon" like everything else I usually do. It's what people want.
Duplica is the first time I've broken that pattern and I'm very proud of it.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13785177 Well you seem fairly popular here, so that's what I figured.
I'm interested in reading Duplica now, could you link me to all the parts?
Anonymous
>>13785159 I don't just ask for smut though. I was the one who requested the gothitelle fic. Sometimes a romantic tragedy does the heart good too.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13785191 Thanks for the compliment.
Yes, as soon as the new chapter's done being proofread, I'll put up all of them.
Give me a few.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13785198 Okay, thanks.
>>13785194 I'll actually second this one. I think I like the premise.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Duplica's Ditto Debauchery Chapters 1-3 Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq Fri 13 Sep 2013 08:39:26 No. 13785285 Report Anonymous
Anonymous
Are there any short doomsday fics? Like the sky inverting and shattering under Giratina's eldritch wrath kinda stuff?
Anonymous
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>>13785611 Giratina cane out of the distortion world and killed everybody. The end.
Anonymous
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>>13785521 le funy meem :^)
Anonymous
Since the english names have been revealed... Someone write a cute lusty fic that involves a male Braixen wearing a diaper. :3
Anonymous
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>>13785069 I think it goes without saying that the english names would make more sense now. How's it going by the way? anyone working on it?
Anonymous
>>13788612 I second this~ Anonymous
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>>13788612 Zephyrnok is likely someone who would write something like that.
Anonymous
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>>13789850 >>13788612 Shut the fuck up Niko
Anonymous
>>13788612 I'd only do it if it were a
female Braixen.
Anonymous
>>13791143 That's fine too~ Anonymous
>>13791261 What else do you want content-wise? Anonymous
>>13791285 I dunno, maybe her perhaps using the diaper and/or shoving the twig in the front of the diaper as well for pleasurable reasons~ Anonymous
>>13791556 Okay, leaving for a movie. Will get started when I get back.
So no sex? Just cute masturbation with a diaper? Got it Anonymous
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>>13791674 Not the requester but I would totally read it when you do write it.
Anonymous
>>13788612 >First Braixen Fic >It's a literaly shitty diaper fic Why Write friends, Why? Fuck you Niko
Anonymous
>>13791832 It's also their fault for giving in to his sick, disgusting desires.
Anonymous
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>>13792033 >>13791832 >implying he's the only one that wants it Anonymous
>All this smut I used to like you guys.
Anonymous
>>13792129 We're regressing to WWYR level threads.
I honestly don't care if people write smut themselves and post it, but the people who're requesting it need to fuck off. Anonymous
So please, stop feeding the smut requesters.
Anonymous
>>13792254 >>13792490 >baaw why isn't anyone paying attention to my epic fanfic where ash becomes the champion Fuck. Off.
Anonymous
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>>13792541 >Someone doesn't like the large amount of smut I like in these threads >Better insult them Anonymous
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>>13792541 I read tons of poke-smut; even then I don't request that shit here and I don't think that about eighty percent of the thread should be smut requests and arguments over them. Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13785069 ...just to let ya know I'm still here
Anonymous
An.. any with picture related?
Anonymous
I'd like to request something about two pokemon, the way they interact is up to you, but, what I'd like is any sufficiently mechanical pokemon, and, any member of the Mareep line, because 'do robots dream of electric sheep' entered my head, and it won't go away.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13792254 blame the janitors, them deleting porn has led to pent-up fuckers here,
make that change if you want to see the numbers in draw threads and fanfiction threads change.
you can try and tell me I'm wrong, but deep down you know I'm not.
Anonymous
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Re-requesting something involving a female Dragonair.
Anonymous
>>13796648 maybe we could go to /q/ and ask them to crack down really hard instead Anonymous
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>>13796648 It's either that,
or tons of diaper images flooding /vp/. Anonymous
>>13796648 To be fair, the people posting porn of Pokemon are fucked in the head to begin with. They should get out.
Anonymous
>>13796783 >>13796748 Or you could hide the thread and move on.
That works too.
Anonymous
>>13797667 You only say that because you promote smutfests.
Anonymous
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>>13798160 Or because it's true and would be a solution that benefits all parties involved. Y'know.
Anonymous
>>13796783 Well...
To be fair, the people over 16 still playing Pokemon are fucked in the head to begin with. They should get a life.
Anonymous
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>>13798160 >you promote smutfests. That sounds hipster-y, I'm just not sure how.
>>13798314 Wannabe-trolls are here. /thread
Anonymous
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Honestly, I'm still hoping that Braixen diaper story will actually happen, like the other anon requested. Yes, I'm a faggot.
Anonymous
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bump for more fics
Anonymous
Rewrite Les Miserables with Pokemon.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13785285 I actually liked it. To me, the humor seemed to be more subtle than the over-the-top, laugh-out-loud type I was expecting, but it worked. Some of the jokes were really good though, like Bad Dragonite and the movie titles.
The plot might not be elaborate but it actually gave the porn a decent context. I really dislike stuff like that horrid "Team Rocket having sex on the train" fic that gets posted on /vp/ sometimes that has no plot whatsoever, so I definitely prefered your approach.
Anonymous
Original requester here, still waiting for that diapered Braizen fic. :3
Anonymous
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>>13800130 I'll be home soon to write it. Out with friends right now.
Anonymous
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Is Vulpixbro still working on this?
Anonymous
Requesting a SFW/NSFW I don't care fic with the Kalos starter trio where Chespin and Fennekin are in an innocent relationship but Fennekin dumps Chespin for Froakie when they all evolve. Maybe change it later depending on the later evolutions. I don't care how it ends.
Anonymous
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>>13799727 >rewrite Les Miserables, Hunchback of Notre Dame, all the Disney animated movies, and all the Shakespeare plays with Pokémon ftfy
Anyone want to try one?
Anonymous
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>>13796355 I'm so going to do this when I get a chance.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13799754 Thank you.
Honestly, I was going for laugh-out-loud humor. It sucks that I failed. References and chuckles are good too, I guess.
My main issue is "Is the sex too fast? Is she randomly OK with it too soon?" I didn't know whether to save it for the first movie or not. A friend said it was becoming boring since writing smut is what I'm "known" for, and 3 chapters without a single scene wouldn't be good.
I don't know. Duplica's still unsure of the whole thing.
The DJ Mary ending was supposed to be humorous. Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Pokemon Triple-X Version Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq Sat 14 Sep 2013 05:22:15 No. 13802674 Report Ch 1: Select Your Pokemon
>http://pastebin.com/PTLgZ9B1 >>13799754 This is the "smut" people supposedly like. Most of my readers thrive on me putting out stuff like this.
To be quite honest, I'm getting tired of it. Yes, getting people off is something I'm good at (I guess,) but my Duplica story is my way of breaking out of this pattern.
I'll still put these out, though. Can't let my readers down.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13802626 I thought it was paced well. There were laugh out loud moments, so I wouldn't worry. The DJ Mary ending was one such one.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13802674 FUCK I forgot to post the image.
Anonymous
>>13784381 I assume writing smut helps your learn to write better the same way drawing porn makes you a better artist
I welcome out new sexy overlords
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13802674 We had no idea of the professor's name or gender at the time I did this.
I'll fix it when the games come out and the story continues.
Anonymous
When did smut start taking over these threads?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13802799 Since WWYR died out?
Anonymous
>>13802799 If smut wasn't the main thing about these threads, then what were they about then? Just some childish fantasies of main characters from the show winning tournaments or nuzlocke bullshit that needs to be wordbanned from /vp/?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13802844 Let it go, Anon. Everyone's entitled to their opinion.
Anonymous
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>>13802844 why are you so fucking defensive about it?
if anyone's childish her it's you Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13799754 >The plot might not be elaborate I was re-reading your posts and this has stuck out.
I'll definitely work on this for future stuff.
Anonymous
>>13802844 >implying that is what all non-smutty fanfics are >wanting to ban nuzlockes from /vp/ I don't think I like you too much, anon.
>>13802832 Maybe. A mix of that and when the CYOAs stopped happening as often. People used to talk about them quite a bit.
I'm just annoyed that we lack a reasonable balance between smut and everything else.
Anonymous
Still hoping for that particular Braixen fic.
Anonymous
>>13802986 I'm 2.1k words into it. Give me another hour or so.
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803043 >2.1k words >In anything I envy you so fucking much.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13802944 I posted some SFW before, I'm not sure if it's in this thread or not.
http://pastebin.com/AHj7JbYp I'll start writing more SFW if it'll make you happy. Provided you like me.
Anonymous
>>13803061 I have several 100k+ and 200k+ fics under my belt. 5k is child's play, haha.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Hey guys and gals of the write thread... Hows um... Hows your night going along so far?
Anonymous
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>>13803084 I would really like if you did more sfw stuff Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803094 How the fuck do you do it? None of my Duplica chapters even get close to that.
If I wrote that much it'd be boring as fuck.
Anonymous
>>13803097 I'm in the middle desperately fighting off my urge to write, because I know what's actually going to happen is I'm going to sit in front of an open document and not actually get any work done and then start to get all depressed about how useless I am.
I'm supposed to be on hiatus in hopes of getting my desire to write back but it's proving to be really difficult.
Anonymous
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any fennekin2 fics yet
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803177 Welcome to MY WORLD. It fucking sucks ass, doesn't it?
You sit there, staring at a blank screen, thinking "well fuck, what's the point? It's just gonna come out boring and no one's going to like it."
Then you close the document and swear you'll do it tomorrow. Then tomorrow comes and the same thing happens. For weeks. Months.
Hiatus times never work for me, but I hope they do for you. I have to force myself to write.
Anonymous
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>>13803253 This happened to me before a couple months ago too, actually.
I remember taking a hiatus but I don't remember if it helped or not.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13803177 Ah I see, that sounds kind of sad.
Right now I'm trying to go over my 46 page story and fix all the grammar issues that sound funky when read aloud and reword it. But I'm having trouble seeing any issues with the grammar even tho I've had someone give me an example.
>>13803253 See I have the same issue and haven't finished the story I'm fixing up now. The issue you have is that you don't get feedback right away, well from my experience with the story I'm fixing now is that I write and get no feed back. After a bit tho I started to get it. Just... I guess I'm trying to say is it takes time.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803294 >The issue you have is that you don't get feedback right away Come on man, I'm not that fucking uppity. Cut me some slack.
>and get no feed back. It's the same with a lot of my stories. I'll put hours of love and work into something I think is great, then get nothing in response because it's not popular enough.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13803359 Is it all one work or does it break into chapters?
How I see it is that people read a work more often if it's updated a lot and has ongoing chapters. Granite I post my stories on
FF.net so my story gets bumped a lot to the top of the list if I send in a new chapter and a lot more people get to it. Hell since I've done that my story I was talking about at least gets a steady 60 views a day and I haven't updated for months.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803426 One-shots, usually.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13803455 That would mainly be the issue then. Think of a good plot to start an on going story that produces many chapters. Pick a topic you find easy to write and jsut go to town. The more you update and the more chapters you send out, the more people will notice your works and see what else you've done besides the story that pulled them in.
Honestly I'm not sure how well this will work but it's up to you to try it out. Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803516 I have loads of chapter stories.
It just sucks that my one-shots don't get attention because they're not furry-popular stuff.
My WarioWare story that I'm very proud of never gets any attention. Ever. Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13803655 Well they are what you say; one shots. Trust me mine don't get too much love ether and it's lucky to get 2-6 views a day. One shots don't really get great treatment from what I've seen. So I'll be honest; I don't know what to tell you.
Anonymous
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>>13800376 re-requesting this.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>13803743 WarioWare story's multi-chap, just brought it up as an example of a story that gets no love.
One-shots like this didn't get much attention, (it's Pokemon) :
http://pastebin.com/KcKuRTut Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13803813 I um.... I'm not sure how to feel about that.
Anonymous
Original requester of the Braixen diaper fic here. Still here waiting on it~ :3
Anonymous
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>>13804223 Yes you are. I'm almost done. It'll probably be close to 4k; it's at 3.5k right now. I just have to finish the final scene, proof read, and submit.
The first 2k is setting the scene, the rest is the smut.
Not bad for two hours or so (I took a food break halfway through the story).
vulpsis !!BmizwWgKaZa
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I only have 3 requests left to work on. Once I'm done I'll focus on requests here only. I wouldn't mind switching it up and doing non smut fics as well. I have something sfw on my page but upon reading it again from over a year ago I see blatant embarrasing grammatical errors that I NEED to fix. I wish people used reviews as a way to actually review, critique and point out things like that instead of request more smut.
vulpsis !!BmizwWgKaZa
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also I want to remind everyone that Luxrays are very silly creatures
Anonymous
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>>13804223 Just finished. It's 4009 words. I'll be uploading the link and posting it here in a few minutes. Never used pastebin before tonight.
Anonymous
>>13804223 http://pastebin.com/pEHQvmQw Well, that was the first time I've ever written smut. It'll probably also be the last. I thought I should give it a go, lest I be ignorant. It's not that I have something against smut fics, I just prefer writing non-smut.
I hope you like it anon. It clocks in at 4k words, with about half of it being smut and the other half setting up the smut.
Anonymous
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>>13803129 Well, I don't write smut (Except this one time) and prefer world-building and character development. Only a couple of my stories are Pokemon. I write for a whole bunch of different fandoms.
I tend to be a bit wordy, but that's because I read really fast (I'm a borderline speed reader, I swear). I can read a 120k story in a few hours if I have no interruptions. I try to write stories that would even take ME time to complete.
Anonymous
>>13804708 No problem. Let me know what you think.
Anonymous
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>>13804766 kanashii? eh, whatever.
let's just say it was sad in a good way.
Anonymous
>>13804730 I enjoyed it pretty well,
pretty surprised that you focused alot on the watersports part of it before & after the she got diapers (which I really enjoyed btw), and the part with the stick was also decent. Overall, not bad, you have some creative writing skills right there.
Anonymous
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>>13804794 It was a strange topic to write about; I mainly took it up for the challenge and to get out of my comfort zone. That is to say SFW novel-length stories.
Like I said, I don't think I'll ever write smut again. I mainly did it to see what it's like to write.
Seriously though, I'm surprised it turned out even halfway decent. When I started writing, I thought it was going to be absolute shit because of the subject matter. Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>13802732 To be honest I don't really think writing sex is any more of a test than any kind of action scene.
Actually I would say it's probably say it's worse, because the casual reader is either going to just say "lol it made my thingy pop up xD" and anyone competent is likely to forgo giving it a serious critique most of the time.
Anonymous
>>13804683 Thanks anon. It was a good read. I liked how you took the time to set up the story. Those are my favorite types.
You should write more smut. Your style works with it, and my boner demands it. I'll never look at her stick the same way again. >>13803084 And you. I love your smut, so, so much. But really, your SFW fiction is really awesome. You should diversify and write a bit of each.
Anonymous
>>13806436 To be honest I don't really think writing SFW is any more of a test than any kind of sex.
Actually I would say it's probably say it's worse, because the casual reader is either going to just say "lol pikachu used thunderbolt xD" and anyone competent is likely to forgo giving it a serious critique most of the time.
>if it's not fapping material it's LE AUTISM xD explain to me again why 4chan should accept furfags
Anonymous
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>>13809378 Explain to us why we should care what you just posted.
Anonymous
>>13809305 I agree he should continue the story for like another chapter,
where the diapered Blaixen eventually ends up sexing her trainer, still having the stick being involved in it. Anonymous
>>13809475 Muh boner. This needs to happen anon. Write more smut. You left it open enough.
Anonymous
>>13809475 Told you to not give him what he wanted. Always the same story, he begs for days, then someone caves in and he asks for more and more and more
Anonymous
/r/ing a Gilbert & Sullivan play (doesn't matter which one) rewritten to fit into the canon of Pokemon.
Anonymous
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>>13809877 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXiU6kiq_Ms Somebody needs to do this, but themed to Pokemon.
I still cry when Mordin dies. ;_; Anonymous
>>13809864 I'm not even the same requester.
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>>13809333 I don't even care about smutin these threads but you are the most godawful annoying cunt here.
Anonymous
>>13809305 >>13809475 >>13809791 >>13809990 Well thanks for the compliments and, um, requests, guys. I was pretty surprised to wake up and see my story had 52 page views. That was a lot more than I was expecting.
But really, writing that story wasn't something I particularly enjoyed. I'm not used to writing smut, like, at all, and it felt like I was stumbling in the dark while penning that story. I feel like I'd need to practice more before doing more smut. For me to consider a second chapter, there'd have to be some serious demand. I haven't ruled it out entirely, but don't hold your breath. I'll probably just stick with my SFW stories.
Anonymous
>>13810590 >52 You lucky bastard
Anonymous
>>13810590 What did you write again?
Anonymous
>>13810914 Up in the 60's now... how many people want to read about a Braixen in a fucking diaper? I don't get it, but I'm just an author...
>>13810987 Some fetish, Braixen smut fic that an anon requested.
http://pastebin.com/pEHQvmQw Anonymous
>>13811043 >how many people want to read about a Braixen in a fucking diaper? Because there are people out there that DO find that hot.
Anonymous
>>13811081 Oh, I know that. After all, somebody DID request it. I just didn't think there'd be so many people who'd want to read it.
I'm not exactly proud of it... but at least people are enjoying it I guess.
Anonymous
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>>13811104 There's like diaper art that already exists of it already,
and it's male in that one. Anonymous
>>13810590 >there'd have to be some serious demand I formally request chapter two.
Would like it if Braixen and her trainer had some good old fashion Poke-sex. Maybe they could do it when he's changing her diaper. Don't fail us anon!
Anonymous
Holy hell, stop with the shitty diaper crap
Anonymous
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>>13811720 >shitty diaper crap So much pun.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13809305 Thank you, I appreciate it.
I'll try.
Anonymous
>>13796336 Feyera's protector fic was mentioned before
I'm a little surprised it hasn't made the catalog yet Then again edge (the authorfag) hasn't updated in what feels like eons. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8003882/1/Gift-of-the-Protector-Fractured-Unity I'm not one to write summaries, I will say the series tries hard to differentiate itself from conventional gardevoir stories. Can be ploty as everliving fuck, but if you've read stories like Pedestal you should be ok.
Anonymous
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>>13796336 Adding to
>>13813197 's post.
An Uncertain Future by affTwill is another good Gardevoir story. It's a bit edgy and dark at times, and the author tries a bit too hard to show off certain plot points, but it's a quality read regardless.
There's a censored version on
Fanfiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8300602/1/An-Uncertain-Future , and an uncensored version on
adultfanfiction.net . I don't have a link to that one though.
Feyera's work are also of incredible quality. You'll be hard pressed to find another Gardevoir story of his quality.
Another option is Amazing Grace written by Write by Faith (that's the authorfag's name, not me being redundant). It goes an entirely different route from Feyera's and affTwill's approach. It's basically a slice-of-life, boy grows up with a Ralts story.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8232703/1/Amazing-Grace It starts out a bit slow, but the author really fleshes out the characters and setting. He just finished the first story and promises part two is going to be more of an adventure and less slice-of-life stuff.
And if you want a good laugh, look up Sinners. Better yet, look up Sinner's encyclopediadramatica page. Gets me every fucking time.
Anonymous
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Requesting a SFW fic where a Quilladin, a Braixen and a Frogadier talks about what they think their secondary types will be. Whoever picks this request up can choose where to go with this.
Anonymous
>>13811679 >>13811043 I'd hate to pressure the author, but you definitely have talent, and a second chapter would be something I'd be behind. But it's cool. Great work on what you did, I was impressed by how you set everything up believably.
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>>13810590 please don't humor these idiots anymore or the threads will get completely overrun with diaper requests
maybe do some more smut if it interests you, but something that interests you, at least
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13818696 Bumpin for Braixen chapter 2.
Anonymous
>>13818696 >>13819832 Stop. If you want that anon to even consider your request, I'd act more patient to see if he MAYBE wants to write a chapter 2. Asking over and over again probably won't help.
Rooh
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Vul I'm working on your editing stuff for the absol fic. Can you come back into the irc pls.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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I'm working on Duplica 4. This is going to be the best one so far, I hope.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>13820308 Not these anons
>>13815484 >>13818696 >>13819832 But I also want to throw my hat in the ring in support of the author who wrote the Braixen story. He said he'd consider making a chapter two if a lot of people want it, and it sure seems like thats the case. His story has 202 hits as of right now.
I also don't want to pressure the author, but I think he did a good job and would like to see more of his work, especially with Braixen.
I've read through his story four times now. In the end I respect his opinion as an author, but I would like to see his story continued. It would be really easy to set up another chapter considering how he ended the story.
If he doesn't want to continue, I request a SFW fic with the same Braixen. :3
Anonymous
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>>13822170 >SFW >diaper Does that even compute?
Anonymous
Has anybody ever noticed that the Fanfiction General picture used in the OP usually contains a Glaceon? Is there some pattern I'm unaware of, or is it coincidental? Pic related. This was used for the last Fanfiction General thread.
Anonymous
>>13822590 Might be just coincidental. I don't remember the one used two threads ago, so I can't say for sure.
Or maybe Rooh likes Glaceon Anonymous
>>13822590 Everybody likes delicious shota Glaceon Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13822612 >>13822631 I find it small and cute, but not in a
Shota or pokefile way. Anonymous
>>13822673 I do too, Dawn. I do too. Anonymous
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>>13822590 Rooh uses Glaceon, I use Roxie (or the Shauntal FF general pics I did).
It depends on which of us makes the thread.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>13822690 Well even if I find it tiny and cute like a small cat, I still have Furret as my one and only pokebro.
Anonymous
>>13822741 I like Glaceon better. But I do like Furret as well. Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13822769 You. You get good in my book good sir/madam.
Anonymous
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Could you imagine a diaper fic or any smut fic for the matter involving either or both Meowstic, due to their emotionless/expressionless nature.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Requesting a female Nidoking confessing her love for her confused male trainer. Lewds optional, but preferred.
Anonymous
>>13827228 >female Nidoking >female >Nidoking Did you mean to say Nidoqueen?
Anonymous
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>>13827349 Nope, I know what I said.
I like genderbends.
Anonymous
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This thread needs a bump. It also needs authors to start doing request. Make it happen anons of /vp/
Anonymous
>>13810590 You doomed yourself to be endlessly requested stories with different fetish shit now.
Anonymous
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>>13830922 They can request them, but that doesn't mean I'm going to write them.
NOF
Writefag here. Never lurked these threads before but, oh well. Taking the first interesting request given to me.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13831354 >3 regions of Rome, Constantinople, and the Holy Land >No gyms, only battles with high Caliphate leaders where you rise in ranks upon winning ("ranks" in the place of badges) >Twist where the Pope is assassinated >You become a high cardinal and later learn that you are the lost child of the Holy Roman Emperor >While in Constantinople you meet the Roman Emperor >Learn he's your lost brother >Both travel to Jerusalem >Double battles everywhere >He moves ahead of you and is defeated by the Caliph >You battle and defeat the Caliph yourself >Caliphate collapses >Ending with you being declared as the new Holy Roman Emperor by the new Pope with your brother (Roman "Byzantine" Emperor) in attendance >happily ever after >everyone dies from the plague three weeks later Anonymous
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>>13831354 >NOF >in /vp/'s FFG I really hope you aren't who I think you are. Either way run while you can! These threads are shit!
Anonymous
>>13831354 what kind of requests are you looking for?
NOF
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>>13831648 Nothing in particular. Anything that seems interesting or unusual. I'm doing
>>13831418 at the moment.
I don't do sex, though. Not unless it has something real to add in a lengthy story.
NOF
>>13831418 “Finish this! Hyper beam!”
>An explosion of energy within the Petalburg gym shakes the entire town like an earthquake had hit with a vengeance as blinding light shines out through the few un-shattered windows of the building. >When the light within finally dies down, it reveals a pair of panting Pokémon. A burnt Slaking and a shaking Nidoqueen to be exact. >For a tense moment, it looks as if the titanic beasts might clash again. >Then one goes to its knees. >With a final groan of pain, Norman’s Slaking topples over with a mighty crash, succumbing to the brutal punishment he had endured. >The bruised and battered Nidoqueen just across the field from the superpowered ape cracks a smile through her exhausted panting. This was the toughest battle she had faced yet. And she won! All thanks to... >The sound of a loud buzzer cuts off the regal Pokémon’s thoughts. >”Slaking is unable to battle!” The human referee cries at the top of his voice. “Nidoqueen and trainer Anon are the winners!” >The small crowd of spectators within the gym erupt into thunderous applause. All of them standing, clapping, and cheering as hard as their little human bodies could. >Frankly, Nidoqueen could do without the irritating roar of noise. “Damn. We really had to work for that one, huh?” The most handsome voice Nidoqueen ever heard says to her side over the din of the crowd.
>The large Pokémon turns her head to and feels her heart flutter from what her gaze lands on. >It’s the proud visage of her beloved trainer, Anon. 1/?
NOF
>>13831810 >The blue combatant tries to form words over her exhaustion, but all that comes out is a stuttered ‘Y-yeah…’ >Of course, Anon only heard “N-nido…” >”Well I’ll be damned,” Norman comments as he walks up to the pair, “I never thought I would see the day that someone could use just one Pokémon and take on my entire team.” >The words are the slightest bit terse, as if it stung the man to admit such a thing. >The edges of Nidoqueen’s lips twitch upward. >”But,” he continues, “a battle is a battle, so you’ve earned it this…” >The normal type trainer stiffly holds out his open hand, where a shining Balance badge lays. >With a grin that nearly made Nidoqueen’s knees weaker than they already are, Anon takes the prize and stuffs it into his pocket. ______________________________________________________________________________
>Just a few hours later in a nice hotel room, paid courtesy of Norman’s prize money, Nidoqueen sits and fidgets to herself as her trainer mindlessly flips through TV channels. >She needs to say something. All these years and she’s never even tried! >The blue mon had always felt like this around her beloved human, even since day one. The feeling of Butterfree in her stomach, the constant heat on her face, how she could never speak straight around him. Yet it had taken her so long to realize it. >It was hardly three years ago as a Nidorina did Nidoqueen have an epiphany on her little crisis. >She was totally and hopelessly in love with her human. >And she spent all this time fooling around with subtle hints. 2/?
Anonymous
>>13831810 >>13832046 Not to be rude or anything, but the request asked for a female Nidoking, not a Nidoqueen. Not that I mind, love the story so far, just pointing it out
NOF
>>13832212 Fuck, I just assumed it was a typo.
>>13832046 >This needs to end. Now. >All Nidoqueen has to do is tell him. Anon is open-minded and he would understand. He would love her back and she knows it. >Other Pokémon she had talked to say that most trainers would jump at the chance of getting romantic attention from a member of their team. Some had boldly claimed to have gone even farther… >Just the thought makes Nidoqueen’s spine tingle in the best, yet worst sort of way. >A human and a Pokémon? Doing...things… >The regal Pokémon’s face flushes at the images. >Her and Anon? >Nidoqueen’s face goes even hotter and her tail twitches excitedly. At one point the mighty Pokémon thought she was going to faint from the dirty thoughts flying through her head. >She shuts her eyes and shakes her head. No time for that right now! >’Ok, Nido.’ She mumbles to herself. ‘You can do this. Just tell him! Go before you lose your nerve!’ >Without opening her eyes, Nidoqueen turns to the bed where she knows Anon is sitting. After so long together, Anon needs to know. >’A-anon?’ she starts, mentally cursing herself for stuttering. ‘There’s something I need to say to you. E-ever since day one, I’ve always felt… A little funny around you. For so long I wondered what it was. It plagued me every day and it just got more and more frustrating as time went on. B-but it while ago I realized what it was, but never said.’ >Nidoqueen stops, listening for his reaction. He must be listening intently because he turned off the TV before she even began. 3/5(?)
NOF
>>13832664 >’I can’t believe it’s of me this long to say it. A-and I’m sorry for never saying so sooner. But…’ >Here it comes! The moment of truth! Don’t mess this up now! >’A-anon… I … I love you!’ Nidoqueen all but shouts. Dear Arceus, The entire hotel probably heard her. ‘I’ve always loved you! More than a Pokémon should love their trainer. I know, you’re probably going to think it’s disgusting, but I need to tell you! I couldn’t go another day!’ >Tears slowly start to leak out of the corners of her eyes. ‘I understand that this is so sudden, but I just… I just...’ the Pokémon can’t go on. >Total silence greets her in response. Making Nidoqueen freeze in terror. Is he stunned? Why isn’t he saying anything!?! >Slowly, the Pokémon musters up her courage and slowly cracks open a teary eye to see… >...Nothing? >Nidoqueen opens both of her eyes and blinks away the tears in them as she looks around the room. Where did he go? She didn’t hear his feet on the floor while her eyes were closed, so where did he have gone? >Another look around draws Nidoqueen’s attention to a sticky note on Anon’s bed. >Gingerly picking up the note like it was a pissed off Voltorb, Nidoqueen scanned the hasty scrawl on the paper that was undoubtably her trainer’s. Nido
Went out to grab a bite to eat. You looked pretty deep in thought so I left you. I’ll bring you something back!
Love
Anon
4/5
NOF
>>13832713 >No… No fucking way… >The little note is easily crushed into a tiny ball in Nidoqueen’s iron, shaking grip >He left while she was thinking of what she wanted to say? So she just spilled her guts to the open air for nothing? >FOR. NOTHING?!? “NNNIIIIIIDDDOOOOOO!”
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>Anon slowly trudges his way back to the hotel holding a pair of still hot Styrofoam boxes. After Nido worked so hard that battle today, she certainly deserves something hot and filling to eat. >As he walks, the trainer idly wonders when his Pokémon is going to come out and tell him just how she feels about him. >It’s so painfully obvious that it’s almost cringe worthy. But he wasn’t about to force her to admit something she wasn’t ready to. >Any further thoughts from the human are cut off as a massive hyper beam cuts through the sky and sends the entire town into a panic. >Anon is forced to cover his eyes, lest he go blind from the intensity of the attack. >Holy hell, that beam had to be a solid 50 feet in diameter. “I wonder if I should be worried… After all, that they come from the direction of the hotel…”
5/5
NOF
>>13832728 >“NNNIIIIIIDDDOOOOOO!” That was meant to be green.
> After all, that they come from the direction of the hotel…” After all, that DID come from the direction of the hotel..."*
Writing drunk is hard.
Anonymous
>>13832859 You're supposed to pastebin, not paste.
NOF
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Alright whats upp niggas of the write thread. Hows your day been?
Anonymous
>>13833553 I'm an unproductive mother fucker~
(I still have a few hours of the day left and the doc is open so... SOON)
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>13833652 Hey same here !
I'm going to find some time to continue fixing the grammar of my main story today but need to get the motivation to do so.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>13833553 Doing some reviews and then getting right back to
hopefully finally finish this chapter.
Anonymous
>aw yeah, I'm gonna write tonight >open focuswriter >stare at blank document >shit how do I start this literally every time
Anonymous
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Second chapter of the diapered Braixen fic pls?
Anonymous
I'd like to request non-smut story that involves an old man and his equally old Ursaring out picking berries and reminiscing about the good ol' days.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>13838470 If you find a way to fix this, let me know.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13838470 >focuswriter What is it? A text editor or an addon?
Anonymous
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Oh my god, FFG, where have you been?!>actually, I've been the one who's been missing Not the point, I'm excited to see these threads again!
Anonymous
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>>13839209 >http://gottcode.org/focuswriter/ It's a fullscreen text editor. It's good for keeping you from getting distracted if you're like me and really easily distracted.
I like it because it lets you set a goal keeps track of (it actually hides away unless you hover the mouse over the bottom of the screen, like I did here without realizing).
Also you can set themes with backgrounds and stuff, which I like.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>13833256 OR here, even if wasn't exactly how I requested it, it was still well worth the read.
8/10 would request for again
Anonymous
>>13838790 There is a highly probable chance I will do this
Yveltal !G7jzfPvOIg
Anyone know any good Pokemon badfics? I'm putting together a shitty fanfic catalogue
Anonymous
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>>13847509 DAVE STDIDER POKEMON TRANER and that Mewtwo one come to mind.
Pants Without Pants !!N7kjcsxEfBu
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any cute friendship between trainer and pokemon fics? or good crossovers?
Anonymous
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>>13847196 That would be nice.
Anonymous
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>>13785069 reminder for this
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13847509 When you say 'good badfics' you basically mean the worst ones?
Sinners is always a classic bad one, and even though it was deliberately bad, Farla's "Lucki" could still count.
Yveltal !G7jzfPvOIg
>>13849903 Yeah, I mean the worst of the worst. I already have "Wabloo Swabloo" "DAVE STDIDER POKEMON TRANER", "Burston's Sorrow"and "attack of mewtwo"
Anonymous
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Hey guys, is it almost time for a new thread?
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Are there any fanfics about Red being Ash Dad and Ash Mom being Blue.
Anonymous
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>>13803655 You wrote a Wario Ware Fic? With Penny? Is it on your FF acount?
Anonymous
Kinda wanna write fanfic of Lyra shamelessly getting mounted by a Bayleef that doesn't even belong to her because she's not the playable character.
Anonymous
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>>13851832 Then write it if you want it.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>13850043 Oh hold on, I got a real winner for you. Let me go see if I can find it.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
Rooh
>>13822590 >Has anybody ever noticed that the Fanfiction General picture used in the OP usually contains a Glaceon? Is there some pattern I'm unaware of, or is it coincidental? Sorry I'm late to this. I like glaceon. standingon is too lazy to create the thread. It's as simple as that.
Anonymous
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>>13856318 Then I was right about you Yveltal !G7jzfPvOIg
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>>13853978 Oh fuck me with a rake that's bad.
Thanks anon.
Anonymous
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>>13856318 I have no problem with Glaceon. In fact, it's my favorite Eeveelution. I was just wondering if there was some sort of correlation between FFG and Glaceon.
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/kKxVAbYz I have no idea why I wrote this. But I did.
Anonymous
>>13859469 Aw, I was hoping for
the second chapter of that diapered Braixen fic. Anonymous
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>>13859809 Write it yourself
Anonymous
>>13859809 You guys really want it? You want a second chapter?
Fine. Give me an hour or so.
Why is my smut on 4chan more popular than my SFW on Fanfiction.net ? ;_; Anonymous
Anyone interested in fat/weight gain things?
Anonymous
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>>13861507 No fatties allowed.
Unless you want a story written. Feel free to request one.
Although I wouldn't do it, somebody else may. Anonymous
>>13861411 Don't do it. It's the one person. He'll keep asking and asking until he drags it out of you.
Anonymous
>>13861563 >one person >over 300 hits on the first chapter Anonymous
>>13861563 The story has over 350 hits... I have no idea why, but it's popular. This must be what Pokemaniac was talking about, being tired of people enjoying his shallow smut more than his other stuff.
It's got one more chapter, that's it.
Who knows? Todd may end up going to Bel Air or eating mom's spaghetti. Or maybe they all walk the dinosaur at the end? Or maybe I'll give it a real ending and just make sure a sequel would be impossible?
I'll figure it out.
Anonymous
>>13861576 >>13861624 Pastebin doesn't distinguish between hits; still, I guess it's no skin off my bones if you want to be pestered for the rest of your tenure as a writer here.
Anonymous
>>13861643 After I finish this story, I think I'm going to get a trip and start taking request
not involving people's fetishes. Anonymous
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>>13861710 Would probably be wise
Anonymous
>>13861710 I made a non-smut request, but it's only gotten one person interested, as far as i can tell.
Anonymous
Anonymous
If it's this story, I plan on doing it so long as the other anon hasn't started on it.
>>13838790 Anonymous
>>13861969 See
>>13861969 Just an old man and his ursaring picking berries. Maybe indulging his grand-daughter with sweets and gifts.
Anonymous
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>>13861996 Okay, you have my word, I will write that story.
I'll start on it tonight or tomorrow. By then this FFG thread will have died (Almost at auto sage limit). I'll post it in the new thread.
Anonymous
i would actually like to see a fanfic of an old retired trainer who has lost the respect of his entire family trying to pursue his lifelong dream of one day defeating the elite four and going to see annother region. he stumbles across a mysterious cave and his entire team of pokemon dies trying to get out he is the only survivor. what happens next is up to the authorfag
Anonymous
>>13862231 If you added a little more edge, maybe somebody will pick it up.
Anonymous
>>13862247 fuck it i think ill write it.
Anonymous
>>13862247 ill post it in a new thread when its done
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>13862334 By all means. If it turns out okay, I'll be happy. But the premise doesn't sound too promising.
Prove me wrong, anon.
Anonymous
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>>13862349 will do
ill get started immidiately
Rooh
Anonymous
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>>13862936 I was just about to post a new one, haha. Good thing I refreshed this page first.