MAJOR SPOILER IN THE OP PIC DO NOT VIEW IF YOU HAVE NOT READ UP TO AT LEAST PART 6
Ahem
We've had fic threads before, but this one is different.
As you may or may not know, November is National Novel Writing Month. This time of year, aspiring authors from all over the world set their noses to the grind stone in an attempt to hammer out 50,000 words in 30 days. They all have hopes and dreams of one day being successful authors.
Fuck that noise.
As a writer by trade, I've participated in this event several times over course of my life. This year I decided, in honor of X and Y, I would spend this month of writing with you, /vp/.
That's right- you.
>Pastebins to get new reader's up to speed. For spacing reasons, I have omitted early part pastebins. The entire fic may be read @ fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident Part 5
http://pastebin.com/DH4jUZ3b Never Forget
Part 6 (NEW FOR THIS THREAD.)
http://pastebin.com/KcNLTXYC Things fall apart at the Tohjo Summit
Part 6.5
http://pastebin.com/7kAnBCrh The man with the briefcase
Part 7
http://pastebin.com/FSutzhc6 The Dead Flag Blues
We have a fanfic page as well! over here at fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident
Index Jeff has provided an index of characters. READ THIS ONLY AFTER YOU HAVE READ UP TO THE LATEST PART TO AVOID SPOILERS
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit ANON! Your very own POKEMON legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with POKEMON awaits! Let's go!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15600107 A bit to get started. If you have an idea, feel free to use this as a jumping point or ignore this completely.
>Name: >Team: >Home Region: >Affiliation (Kanto, Johto un affiliated) >Trainer type and style: Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15600107 Part 6 is obviously not new for this thread.
But it might be new to you, anons who are just joining us
Porter
>>15600107 Goddammit, that image.
;_; Anonymous
Contributing a character>Name: Jon >Team: Feraligatr, Heracross, Darmanitan and Gliscor >Home Region: Johto >Affiliation: Un-affiliated >Trainer type and style:
Miles
Anonymous
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>>15600346 For a second I thought you were quoting
>>15600189 I was very confused
Anonymous
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>>15600397 toast for coolest background character
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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Name: Dexter
Anonymous
I'll toss in a character:>Name: Rolan "Roulette" Carde >Team: Dusknoir >Home Region: Hoenn >Affiliation: n/a >Trainer type and style:
Anonymous
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>>15600989 Sweet, looking forward to chap 8
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15601038 So...he only has a Dusknoir
Tyler
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>>15601612 I think he means that his team is random except for Dusknoir, I assume that being a ranger of sort he has access to rental pokemon, so go nuts when you make a team OP
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
TAKE YOUR BETS
Tyler
>>15602190 Octavius for sure! I made him to be strong, puny Grayson had nothing on him! Can't wait to see him in action
Porter
>>15602190 Big Good vs. Big Bad?
yes pls.
$10 says Grayson will take Round 1 Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15602190 Well Octavius is the Champion, rock hard rock type user, a well respected member of the community, the Tohjo summit leader and is on the side of good
Which means Grayson is going to slap the piss out of him through the power of plot convenient super powers and evulz
I also bet that the Connor character I made is on the book of names right now, near the back. Probably under the "Cannon fodder" section
Anonymous
Anonymous
Tyler
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>>15602263 >>15602283 >>15602292 Have faith my brothers/sisters! Octavius will prevail
Anonymous
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>>15601612 My bad OP, should have made it more clear that aside from his Dusknoir, his team is usually random. So whether or not he uses rental pokemon or blind picks from his own collection is completely up to your own discretion man.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15602377 Pattern Analysis. But I am sure he will put up a good fight
Anonymous
>>15602283 someone sure seems
analpained that their character is
a bad guy .
Not sure why though. Gillian is one of the top 5 trainers on the side of the Johto radicals. That's a pretty fucking top notch character, if you ask me.
Tyler
>>15602437 I wonder if Octavius will go for speed with Archeops or bulk with Bastiodon or something in between (if using my original party of Archeops Bastiodon Tyrantrum and Armaldo)
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15602575 I'm not anal pained. I just wasn't expecting it. And I'm kinda okay with it and like to see what he does with it
Grayson
>>15602254 I hear you talking shit?
Honestly I can see Octavius's team winning, but that Grayson seems to be a clever dude.
Tyler
>>15602633 For all we know he could have some huge revelation and turn to Kanto
Tyler
>>15602702 Hey it's me against you, course ill talk some shit, makes things interesting
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15602713 I see it more he is going to go "Wait how is this going to get our independence again?" at some point.
He is in it for the FREEDOM
Grayson
>>15602748 All right then, can't wait till the next part. Let's see Marowak crush some old dude's puny dinosaurs
Team Grayson number One
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15602599 Friendly reminder that trainers have 3 pokemon
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/miJCQZkD Here's something I cooked up to pass the time. Tells the story of the meeting of Gaap and Huck.
Canon would have to be determined by Orzo but I don't think this should mess up anything he has planned
Tyler
>>15602875 So you'll be providing Tyrantrum with a tooth pick (marowak's club), that's cute
Tyler
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>>15602899 Oh true, kept thinking in terms of some E4 had 4
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15602931 >>15602875 Shots have been fired.
Porter
Anonymous
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bump 4 justice
Tyler
>>15602989 All in good fun of course, would love to see a double battle with both of them on the same team and bickering at the same time
Grayson
>>15603283 This is a good idea. I'm not good at comebacks, I had nothing to say after that toothpick line
Double battles should be implemented more in this story, It'd be a good chance for some good dialogue
Tyler
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>>15603420 I was so proud of myself when I thought of that, who knows maybe Grayson will win
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>“No, of course not. Not you, not the Master of Stone, the Timekeeper. How will history remember you? Your legacy? Your role in these events? I will leave me mark in stone, in history, in you.”
Anonymous
>>15603606 Orzo, I'd love your input on my prologue of the meeting of Gaap and Huck a few posts back.
Tyler
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>>15603606 >I will leave me mark in stone, in history, in you. That was one of the most badass lines so far
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15603756 Honestly, and this is strictly my opinion of the content and not the writing itself, it's a little two fetish-y. I'm not sure if you're the Anon who posted either Huck or Gaap or both, but since Huck's inception, I've tried to play down or otherwise ignore that area of his character. I'd rather have him develop as a character rather than be defined by his sexuality.
You feel me?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15604106 'two"
not "too"
jesus, I shouldn't write while I watch football.
Anonymous
>>15604106 >Fetish-y I can see that lol
Though Hucks sexuality is mentioned twice and both times in very vague words.
Tyler
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>>15604277 Well his sexuality is vague in a sense, since he seems to be a closeted gay
Vague = hidden
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15604277 The sexuality came from the rather blatant display of Huck man pokemon love throughout the threads
Anonymous
>>15604363 What the threads do to a character has no bearing on them canonically tho
Anonymous
>>15604445 yeah really
Look at Vyro for god's sake.
Tyler
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>>15604842 Now now, nothing to get all hot and bothered about
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15603606 >“Goodbye, old friend. You've given me all the time I need.” Tyler
>>15605415 Oh great... Those are words clearly from Octavius ;_;
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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>>15604106 I'm sad u didn't like it ;-;
o well
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Part 8 is almost done! Lurking anon's get in here. You're not gonna want to miss this one.
Tyler
>>15606546 Time to prepare myself for the feels ;_;
Porter
>>15606546 >Part 8 >The part that author said was his favorite so far. No stopping this hype train.
Anonymous
Tyler
>>15606636 >Goodbye, old friend I don't think I will be able to handle it ;_;
Anonymous
>>15606747 I actually don't think it's Octavius saying his last words. My guess is that it's Grayson saying it to Octavius, after a battle.
We'll find out soon enough.
Tyler
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>>15606881 That is a good point, never saw it that way. Why do I jump to the worst possibility?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Tyler
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>>15607322 And it begins....
Tyler
>>15607322 Gotta love speed reading... and did Tyrantrum just do that... OP you are twisted, I like it
Anonymous
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
I think you made some errors near the end.Was it Octavias who tanked that bolt for his tyrantium?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Grayson
>>15607322 Grayson, your crazy is showing
And dear god that Tyrantrum. Brings me flashbacks of those ngihtmares I had after watching Jurassic Park as a kid
Tyler
>>15607870 That was amazing OP, I tensed up at all those tight moments and I was grinning at the end
It's just a flesh wound Grayson, I win this time Porter
>>15607322 God damn, that was epic.
These old guys can fight.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15608054 They don't fuck around. It's not a real battle if the trainer isn't taking part.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608054 >>15608012 >>15607953 >>15607759 >>15607702 Seriously glad you guys are enjoying this. That fight was a blast to write. I'm taking a quick break from 8.5 some I'll be here to answer any questions, take trainer ideas, the whole nine yards.
Miles
Anonymous
>>15608214 The bombing part was so beautifully written. Is Molly going to be an important character later? It seemed like her story with Miles and the rest might tie into something later.
Loving this.
Tyler
>>15608214 So is Grayson going bionic with a pokeball shooter or stumpy?
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15608214 I really want to know is Conner was okay to take part.
But I also really wanted to know. What were the circumstances of Johto and Kanto being united as one. Why is there so much hostility about this?
Grayson
>>15608318 Please be a cyborg, please be a cyborg, please be a cyborg, please be a cyborg
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608302 Never count a character out. We still have much to do in the Celadon Arc
Anonymous
I caved and decided to write Vyro fanfiction about his pre-story days as a criminal. Similar to the Huck and Gaap one (NOT written by me), I will not claim this to be canon, nor will I say it is well-written.
It was fun though, and I WILL be making more if people like it.
http://pastebin.com/U3FWY0QZ (Pastebin kinda fucked the formatting, might put it on fanfiction.)
Anonymous
>>15608392 Cool, and how many parts do you plan to write?
Tyler
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>>15608390 Confirmed next Winter Soldier
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608375 Johto and Kanto are the only two regions to share a Pokemon League, while separate regions, this lumps them together, however, both regions have a provinicial capital, Kanto's being Viridian, and Johto's being Blackthorn
Anonymous
>>15608214 You're here with us till December the first. I'm curious as to how you're going to break up the material. Do you plan on visiting other regions outside of the Kanto/Johto regions? Or maybe have separate stories in different regions, all coming together in one final glorious ending?
Anonymous
Is there a place where I can actually follow the story? Seems like there's no follow link on paste bin.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15608512 So if it's just a joint pokemon league why are these separatists killing folks so Johto can be independent?
Is the pokemon league serious business?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15608563 >>15608440 The world will take note of the events in Celadon
Porter
>>15608429 Holy fuck, I'm only halfway through and I'm already in tears.
This is fucking gold, anon.
Anonymous
>>15608637 The Pokemon League is pretty much the government. I'd say it's like the EU or UN but more important. Whoever controls the League is the Head Nigga in Charge.
Anonymous
>>15608637 I recall it being mentioned that the league is like the government, and currently it's being run by all Kanto natives.
>>15608429 Also this is the greatest thing I have ever read in my life.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608613 fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident
>>15608637 The Pokemon League acts as the governing body of its region
Anonymous
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>>15608667 >>15608709 Thank you so much. It's the first real fanfic I've ever written in my life, and writing it was a massive amount of fun.
I'm glad people like it.
Tyler
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>>15608748 I really like your take on the League being the governing body. They don't mention the use of them in the show or game so it's a refreshing take on them
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608709 A neat detail about that is that Octavius, the Champion is from Johto
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15608748 >>15608709 >>15608692 I'm British. So this sounds to me a lot like the troubles in Ireland. Taken up to 11. With pokemon.
In before North Johto and the Republic of Johto. Or PokéScotland.
Anonymous
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>>15608429 This is awesome.
Anonymous
>>15608907 Well Orzo you gave your opinion on the huck and gaap story, what about
>>15608429 ? Tyler
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>>15608907 That's awesome, would that consider him a traitor in the eyes of Johto?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15608429 >>15609121 Hue
definitely not canon But I did laugh.
Shame about Vyro though Anonymous
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>>15609222 Thank god that's not canon.
Anonymous
Just gonna say OP, you're inspired me to take on NNWM. At least not this year. Already a few days behind and it doesn't seem like a good idea to start this late without any prior planing. Maybe next year!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15609417 Bits and pieces. Participated for 6 years, finished 3.
Tyler
OP I'm going to go out on a limb and say this, I would totally buy this book...
Anonymous
>>15609222 >Not canon B-but it could have easily happened before the story at some point!
Nah just kidding.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>15609417 If you can write at least 2k a day it's still doable, actually.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15609504 Jasmine isn't the Gym Leader Anonymous
>>15609551 Would she not have been around at some point in the past? This isn't set a month before The Tohjo Incindent, It was meant to be years ago.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15609510 exactly, just got to pound it out. By the end of day 4, about an hour, my time, I will have written 14,735 words, 8,067 word ahead of schedule, assuming the base of 1,667 words a day.
You can do it!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
Another thought occurs to me. Is this rampant destruction going to disturb/attract the attention of any legendaries?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15609729 3 of the 11 Tohjo Legendaries are accounted for.
And that's all I have to say on that subject Anonymous
>>15609660 THEN I SHALL CHANGE IT. I AM DETERMINED TO GIVE VYRO A COHESIVE BACKGROUND STARRING HIS WACKY CRIMES.
If anything, if I keep writing these, after seeing him be a complete doofus for a while, it would make whatever terrible thing that happens to him even more terrible.
Roland
>>15609510 >>15609622 Thanks guys. A friend of mine recommended that I at least lay out some sort of story board to get myself going. So I'll think about it.
I'm also the anon that posted up Roland's character data a while ago. Since it looks like I'll be hanging around your threads OP, I figure I'll stick his name on myself. Did he make it into your big book of possible characters by any chance?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15609818 Several names were hypothetically lost in thread transitions, not by omission.
If you've still got him, post him
Anonymous
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>>15609807 Actually I don't care if my stories ever become canon so much as I'm a massive perfectionist and need to get every detail correct Roland
>>15609902 He's actually still at the top of this thread, but I'll repost him with some edits. For minor corrections as well as clarity.
>Name: Roland "Roulette" Carde >Team: Dusknoir as well as five random pokemon >Home Region: Hoenn >Affiliation: n/a >Trainer type and style: Roland is a veteran ranger with an unhealthy interest in gambling and old school western movies. To play the part he dresses up like some sort of cowboy, usually accompanied with a pancho or a leather duster. To add some risk to his battles he's modified a revolver to launch pokeballs, usually spinning the chamber before combat, trusting in his own luck to deliver the right pokemon for the task at hand. Despite his tendency to shuffle through random teams, he always keeps a spot on his belt specifically for his Dusknoir, a companion of his since the start of his career. Although his unusual attitude and risky battle style put him at odds with his fellow rangers, Rolan takes his job seriously, and will often throw himself into the thick of things to save an innocent.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
re-submitting my inproved character>Name: andrew >Team: zoroark, azumarill, salamence >Home Region: unova >Affiliation: unaffiliated >Trainer type and style:
Tyler
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
[2:12 PM. Celadon City. Earlier the same day.]
Tyler
>>15611293 The hype lives on!
Anonymous
>>15611454 Can you re-post the profile of your Vyro-fangirl character? I want to see if I can throw her into episode 2 of THE VYRO FILES.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15611892 Holy shit. VYRO caused the Kakuna's death AND fucking murdered Lexie's mother in front of him? God damn, he's getting really scary.
Tyler
>>15611579 Sorry took so long, was retyping on iPod
>Name Lola (presumably)
>Pokemon Mismagius, Mawile, Swoobat
>Home Region Hoenn
>Affiliations Vyro
>Trainer type As a kid Lola suffered from severe paranoia and schizophrenia which often lead her to become destructive in an effort to fend of her own personal demons. She was sent to psychiatric hospitals multiple times as a kid, which left some psychological scars. During her stays she would later her rooms with newspaper clippings of anything about Vyro, she idolized him and hoped to be his soul mate. However on her last visit some routine procedures went terribly wrong. First the Thundershock therapy hit the wrong nerve and triggered violent spasms and then the Dream Eater therapy pulled something out that was locked deep away in Lola's mind. Something so sinister the pokemon administering the therapy couldn't handle them and whatever was locked away manifested into a new personality. Retrieving her beloved pokemon she broke out of the hospital in hopes of finding Vyro who she now fixated even more on. Before the incident Lola used defensive tactics, but after her style became more destructive. Risky moves and cheap shots now show how unstable she truly is. And she's out for revenge, and Vyro of course.
Tyler
>>15611892 Oh my god....Vyro is a monster
Anonymous
>>15611892 Wow.
He's fucking insane.
>>15612064 Thanks.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>15611892 jesus christ vyro
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15612119 >>15612166 >>15612177 >>15612054 most madmen simply lack a means and a chance
Tyler
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>>15612283 Yeah a chance, AKA a defenseless little child. Was going for the long term effect, psychological damage. I smell a protégé whaat???
Anonymous
Roland
Anonymous
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>>15611892 >we want the edgy audience! Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Well that's fun. After my little unlucky image swap yesterday my computer at home got banned from /vp/ until the 7th... So that's another 40 or so hours I can't post from home. Funsies.
>>15611892 Holy fuck Vyro you crazy bastard.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15613222 How did you like the treatment of Molly?
Anonymous
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>>15613314 For the first time ever
that's actually fitting.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15613381 Liking it so far and it feels like the right place she was at when shit hit the fan.
Anonymous
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New part when?
Anonymous
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>>15613381 When's the ghost guy gona show up, what's his face; Mark, Marts, I can't remember
Anonymous
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>>15602900 The first couple paragraphs read like an introduction to a porno.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15612283 A very enjoyable take on the character as he changes from an ineffective comic relief to a mad man who gets drunk with power and delusions of greatness even when he is only preying in the weak and scared
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15609902 Well I couldn't find the last one I made since foolz didn't seem to save thread 2. But I remember it easy enough.
>Name: Connor >Team: Houndoom (Chop), Mightyena (Hunter), Granbull (Bruno) >Home Region: Native Hoenn, currently in Johto >Affiliation: Unaffiliated >Trainer type and style: Connor is a street tough who isn't as tough as he would appear, or would like to think. Most of this comes down to him working voluntarily down at a Pokemon shelter, whilst training to be a veterinarian, and living with his mother who was a fairly successful coordinator in beauty and cute category contests in Hoenn, Connor is at odds with maintaining his tough image.
What isn't at odds is his personal love of canine pokemon, all of whom on his current team he had raised since they were pups, and where he originally found he was really good at raising Pokemon.
The convenient thing is that, it wouldn't take a lot to expand the team to 6 Pokemon, since there are only another 3 lines of dog Pokemon hat could be added
Einzel: 1736-0343-0412 (Jigglypuff, Togepi, and Floette)
Einzel: 1736-0343-0412 (Jigglypuff, Togepi, and Floette) Tue 05 Nov 2013 14:34:24 No. 15619906 Report Quoted By:
>>15600107 >Name: Largo Noin >Team: Meowth, Ditto >Home Region: Kanto >Affiliation Unaffiliated >Trainer type and style: Kleptomaniac, possessive over objects and people, has an extreme paranoia of electric-type Pokemon (Pikachus in particular), and tends to go off on the deep end... normally. He enjoys collecting rare items, either from ruins, peoples pockets, and even robbing people blind. He's rather selfish, and prefers to collect items purely for his own interest rather than to sell. If he sees something shiny, he will take it for himself and refuse to give it up. He can be a little dense at times, and has a horrible sense of direction. He is very attached to his Meowth, partly because he originally claimed it back when it was a kitten for it's shiny charm. However, he has grown to love it more than just for the shiny. Ditto was acquired just as a means of fighting, he actually never thought very highly of the Pokemon. He usually uses it to counter his enemies, and to give some time to escape. In fighting situations, he prefers to run first. Either using Ditto as a distraction, or having his Meowth "make it rain" with Pay Day. He is extremely terrified of Electric Pokemon as a result of a traumatic accident at an early age involving a Pikachu and a child's love for cuddly animals. The result has made him utterly "piss-your-pants" scared of all such kinds. He will scream, hide behind random people, and yell for them to kill it with fire until it's dead.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Wake up bump from the waffle house.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15620072 I wish we had waffle houses. Or Pancake houses.
I just want easy access to unhealthy food but I live in the countryside and chippy doesn't open until around the afternoon
Anonymous
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>>15620926 Yeah I don't even have a true "waffle house".... Yay canada
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
I know it's early, but INDEX UPDATED
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit?usp=sharing Vyro's profile is almost completely reworked, along with Lexie's. Additionally, I've re-organized it into categories for easier viewing.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15622198 Good guy Jeff bringing home the bacon.
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15622341 >>15622412 I'm glad people enjoy my contribution. I don't even know why I started doing it tbh
Anonymous
>>15622477 Well from the nature of how this fic partially audience participatory, means that there are going to be a lot of fucking characters as a result. So it's a good help that there is someone keeping track of everyone lest we forget who someone is if they come up later.
Keep doing what you do
Anonymous
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Did anyone save those Vyro and Huck comics?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15622520 Precisely. My Big Book of Names is so unorganized it turns in to ctrl-f fest when I'm looking for details on a character
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15622595 Oh, I meant to ask. While you're here, do you have ages for Garth, Harley, Molly, Gillian, and Naomi?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15622652 Garth 27
Harley 22
Molly 21
Naomi 25
Gillian 42
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15622707 Thank you for your contributions to science.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Forgive me, gentle readers, but after the climax of part 8 and the dickbaggery of 8.5, we might be turning the clock back. Who know's. We'll see.
Tyler
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15623020 Expect to see a disconcerting familiar face
Tyler
>>15623194 Gotta be more specific than that, got a laundry list of them...winter soldier Grayson, cunt Cain, twisted Vyro...you get the point
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15623291 *REAL MEAN cunt Cain
Anonymous
>implying Vyro's character wasn't changed because a select few individuals were annoyed at the fact people liked him and were afraid that another few individuals would permanently spam pictures of him in every thread
Anonymous
>>15624125 I haven't really noticed much of a change. He's still an overdramatic prick, he's just an overdramatic prick who was given enough power to actually cause damage.
In the first chapter he was in, his Noivern blew out all the windows in the city and made people's ears fucking bleed. He wasn't completely goofy, and none of that "SEX KING, VYRO IS LOVE, or SWEET VYRO AND HELLA HUCK" STUFF was even present in his character in the story/
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15622198 Your work is hugely appreciated Jeff.
Anonymous
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>>15624216 I guess. Maybe I just feel like the story is moving fast. Characters don't get much time to be introduced, although that's to be expected with so many. Vyro got a solid intro, but his character changed pretty quickly. I just Orzo that it'll all work out in time.
Anonymous
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>>15624125 Vyro even spread outside of this thread several times, but I'm with
>>15624216 . He was always calling people heretics and trying to kill people, he just couldn't because he was incompetent as fuck.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15624216 Precisely, very keen to the point.
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15624125 >>15624216 I'm curious to hear what Orzo has to say on this, but IIRC Vyro was hinted in the very first thread after he appeared to be a lot darker and intelligent than he seemed at first.
Anonymous
MilesxMolly 4evar
Anonymous
>>15624527 Speaking of this, are Miles and Harley actually firefighters or did the by just volunteer after the bombings happened?
Can we have a backstory?
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15624604 It was stated in the story I believe that they were volunteer firefighters BEFORE the bombings, but were assigned along with Garth to the rescue squad.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15624527 You opened the shipping box, something that should have been left undisturbed for the sake of our minds.
Anonymous
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If you're still taking characters:
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>15624125 I legitimately think the only reason people spam Vyro is because he's the only one that we have some kind of visual reference for. Most of them are just photoshops of the original anyway.
If someone drew Grayson or Ian or something, I'm sure they'd get spammed too.
Anonymous
>>15625631 I would like if we had more visuals. It's tough for me to imagine the characters sometimes.
Tyler
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>>15626048 I second that, we need some drawfags here
Anonymous
>>15626048 How about we choose actors who would be suitable to act our characters, if it were a movie? Could be fun, right?
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>15625631 >>15626048 Maybe it's time for
dress up games Anonymous
Anonymous
>>15626133 Aww, why not?
[spoiler/];_;[/spoiler:lit]
Anonymous
>>15626275 Because that's fucking gay. The whole point of the story is to keep things to your imagination. Art of the characters is fine, but imagine them as actors?
Not replace characters with brad Pitt.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15624455 psy·cho·path
noun
1.
a person suffering from chronic mental disorder with abnormal or violent social behavior.
Anonymous
>>15626358 You're fucking gay. Anonymous
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>>15626445 Have fun imagining your characters as washed up whores you unimaginative sports fan.
Anonymous
>>15626048 Fuck, if I had one of those computer-draw thingies I would draw a few.
I could always make a few on paper and just upload them via cam...
Tyler
>>15626897 I thought myself to draw on paper then scan the page, then I realized I can't draw
Anonymous
Anonymous
Thanks for using a spoiler so that I can filter your cancerous drooling shit.
Tyler
>>15626897 How about we choose which characters need art the most, so we can leave smaller characters for later
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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>>15627625 Unfortunately, this poor bastard doesn't have a scanner either.
>>15627630 Just finished a sketch of Octavius, it isn't very good or anything, lemme try to get a good shot with my shitty webcam...
Anonymous
>>15627737 Well we can eliminate Vyro right away. God knows that guy has enough artwork.
Tyler
>>15627773 I think we really need some before and after art for Grayson
Anonymous
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>>15627650 Back to showderp with you.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Tyler
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>>15627903 Oops
my bad ;_; Anonymous
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>>15627737 Still need Miles and Molly art for my shipping fetish.
Anonymous
>>15626897 I sincerely apologize for the quality of both the drawing an d the picture. In an enlightened moment, I came up with the idea to tape the piece of paper to a piece of cardboard, making the snapshots slightly more stable, and well...
...here's the result.
I am sorry.
Anonymous
>>15628156 That's actually pretty fucking good. Nice job.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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This is a friendly reminder from Mick.
Anonymous
>>15628156 A close-up shot...
...God, I hope Sinterklaas gives me something do draw on the computer this year.
Anonymous
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>>15628202 That's awesome. Draw Vyro next. I know he has art, but I'd like to see what he looks like without shitty MS Paint
Tyler
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>>15628156 >>15628195 I agree, it's a good base to start of his art with. His pocketwatch better be there....
Anonymous
I really want to draw one, but I don't know who. Somebody give me some basic features they'd like to see on a character (e.g. hairstyle, clothing like maybe a sweater or jumpsuit or whatever you want me to draw) and I'll try it with my terrible skills.
Anonymous
>>15628202 Sup dutchie!
Nice drawing by the way.
Anonymous
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>>15627903 Hey Orzo, Hayley has a Clefairy, right?
Anonymous
>>15628277 Draw Gillian facing off against Miles with Molly crouched over her broken Sceptile.
Hardmode.
Tyler
>>15628277 Try drawing Lexie, fairly simple concept being a child. Draw him with his Weedle
Anonymous
>>15628350 Does the "Goedheiligman" visit your chimney too or do you just know about it?
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15628388 I partially imagine Gillian with a great pair of Mutton Chops. But that's just me.
Also he wears platemail, it's comfortable
Anonymous
>>15628401 He'd better, I want my presents. I'm not accepting rainbow colored "pieten" though.
Miles
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>>15628388 Well if someone wants to draw me, just wearing a mangled "CELADON FD" or however you abbreviate "fire department". I've got sort of longer brown hair with bangs that go to my eyebrows.
Anonymous
>>15628510 Neither do I, my friend. Neither do I.
Anonymous
>>15628537 >>15628510 I swear to god if that fucking nigger brings his shitty candies around my house I'm gonna fuck him up
Anonymous
>>15628676 >pepernoten >shitty PICK ONE OR LEAVE THE COUNTRY YOU FUCKING MOCRO
Anonymous
>>15628722 ;_;
B-but anon... Trying to eat that shit is like trying to eat a rock that happens to taste like cloves.
Tyler
>>15628722 So this is getting off topic a bit
Anonymous
>>15628854 I...I'm sorry, Tyler-kun...
>>15628813 That's not true and you know it.
So folks, I tried some
hot Hayley and Leslie action sketch of Hayley and Leslie, again, I apologize for shitty quality.
Anonymous
>>15629075 Fuck, forgot the image.
Anonymous
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>>15629121 >Kakuna R.I.P.
Fucking god Vyro's a cunt.
Anonymous
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>>15628392 Accidentally grabbed a pink pen, lol. Unfortunately, he kind of reminds me Ralph Wiggum.
And I hope the pose is understandable? I tried to make it like he was bending over with his hands on his knees to look down at Weedle.
Anonymous
>Name: Annie Heartwreath >Team: Blissey, Gothitelle >Home Region: Kalos >Affiliation: Battle Chateau >Trainer type and style: Annie is one of the younger maids at the Battle Chateau, and can usually be spotted doing her assigned chores or serving the higher ups. Annie is 5'6" and has soft colored blond hair along with hazelnut colored eyes. Also, she's a total sub. Battling doesn't usually go well for her, since she lacks a team that works well together due to having two Pokemon out of six needed for a balanced team.
Anonymous
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>>15629553 Forgot to say I made this character. Sorry if my writing is bland as fuck;;
Tyler
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so OP said his a while ago:
>>15622940 What do you guys think he means by this? Origin story or something else, what do you all think?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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>>15630608 Whew, I'm glad about that!
I'll do a couple more tomorrow, but it's 11.30 PM here so I'm gonna go to sleep.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15632212 New thread going up
Tyler
>>15632329 Yus, let the hype build
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
