We've had fic threads before, but this one is different.
As you may or may not know, November is National Novel Writing Month. This time of year, aspiring authors from all over the world set their noses to the grind stone in an attempt to hammer out 50,000 words in 30 days. They all have hopes and dreams of one day being successful authors.
Fuck that noise.
As a writer by trade, I've participated in this event several times over course of my life. This year I decided, in honor of X and Y, I would spend this month of writing with you, /vp/.
That's right- you.
Welcome to the Tohjo Incident: 50 years after Red, Blue, and Yellow. The Supercontinent of Tohjo, made up of Kanto and Johto is beginning to unravel as separatist factions from both sides of Mt. Silver call for sovereignty, autonomy, and war.
>The story so far 0: Deep Sea Research Facility 02
1: Silph
2: Vyro vs the Electric Master
3: Professor Oak
4: Indigo Plateau
4.5: ???
5: The Tohjo Summit
6: The Elite Eight
6.5: The Man with the Briefcase
7: Out of the Frying Pan
8: History
8.5: Last One Out, Kick the Dog
9: "Like no one ever was..."
10: And into the Fire
10.5: All that for A Single Laugh
11: The Common Man
Recently spoiled chapter titles:
>A Stopped Clock >Because I could not stop for death/He Kindly stopped for me >Junior >Out of Time >Emulation >Three Days Later I will no longer be posting old pastebins in the OP. The story can be followed here:
>fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident I will post updates in the form of pastebins and fanfiction page edits. Pastebins are available as soon as it's live!
Index Jeff has provided an index of characters. READ THIS ONLY AFTER YOU HAVE READ UP TO THE LATEST PART TO AVOID SPOILERS
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit ANON! Your very own POKEMON legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with POKEMON awaits! Let's go!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15705220 A bit to get started. If you have an idea, feel free to use this as a jumping point or ignore this completely.
>Name: >Team: >Home Region: >Affiliation (Kanto, Johto un affiliated) >Trainer type and style: Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15705220 Is that supposed to be Vyro in that pic?
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>15705278 Claudia actually does something, yay
Porter
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>>15705278 >Taking a punch from a fucking Machamp >Also, Meloetta Well, that was awesome.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15705278 And so the curtains call for a certain cunt.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
Here are the "how fucked are they" rankings for the bad dudes1. Hector. Alive and the only terrorist to actually win his battle. Probably the final boss of this arc.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
INDEX UPDATED
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit?usp=sharing Cain and Porter's entries have been updated to include both their fates and their entire Pokemon rosters
>>15706100 Also it's goddamn hilarious how big cunty muscleman Cain, and goddamn scary-ass Grayson are dead, and Hector and fucking Vyro are still the only terrorists that have come out of this whole thing unscathed.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15708064 Cain and Grayson didn't pick 8 years old as their opponents and hell if they didn't put a good fight. However, it remains to be seem whenever Sabrina de facto outsmarted Hector or not.
Anonymous
>>15708064 Based Jeff strikes once again.
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15708354 I will always be here
always
Grayson
>>15706100 Damn.
Cain had it coming, but have we given up hope for Grayson?
He's a psycho, but dangit I'm still holding out for a cyborg
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15708607 they got no faith
Roland
>>15708607 Well, even if we don't see him again for this arc, there is always hope for Robo-Grayson in future segments.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15710317 >>15708607 >>15708484 As much as it may pain me to say this
but in working on part 12, two words come to mind
Vyro Confirmed Anonymous
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>>15710543 >Vyro Confirmed (I'm sorry)
Roland
>>15710543 Real quick, a Santiago was mentioned at the end of part 11. Can't find him in the index and I can't recall seeing his name. Is he a new character coming up or did I miss something?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15710819 Hes been mentioned quite a few times. You might be the first anon to vocally acknowledge him. He is the Champion in Reserve; Octavius's apprentice
Roland
Fantastic.
>>15708484 I summon thee for
>>15710963 Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15711105 I'M ON IT
SANTIAGO HAS BEEN ADDED TO THE INDEX
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15711919 I will always be with you.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15711894 Quality research jeff
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15712010 HEY MAN IT'S A PLACEHOLDER. I AIN'T GOING THROUGH THE WHOLE STORY LOOKING FOR GODDAMN SANTIAGO RIGHT NOW.
Roland
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15712150 I'm at work updating this on my phone man come on
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15712159 LET THE FANFICS COMMENCE
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15712550 DO YOU SEE PART 20 UP YET?
Naw shit im just playing.
Roland
>>15712363 I... I mean... that was really fast?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15712613 >[5:53 PM. Vermillion City Refugee Shelters, Vermillion City. The same day.] Anonymous
>>15712613 Ahaha I really like what you're doing man. You're a very talented writer. I'd pay for this shit in a heartbeat.
I just want more of the celadon arc, the whole destruction and the weaker protags fending for themselves got to me. I know you've got something played with Hayley and Lexie. I was really thinking today that Blue would give Lexie his blastoise or Miles would give Lexie his typho or something after some sort of battle. The kid lost his parents and kakuna.
Either way, this is fucking awesome man.
Anonymous
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>>15712671 it's actually an ancient NatexHilbert fic of mine that I never finished with the names changed Anonymous
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>>15712159 No
Miles and Molly seems like it could end in a love interest if Orzo elaborates on their characters more Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15712782 Stay tuned for Part 12 then!
Glad someone will like it. According to my outline, today is my "slog day," neither of the chapters I'm very excited to write, but they're very necessary for the cohesion of the Celadon Arc.
Look out for 13, 14, 16.5, and 19 to be the heavy hitters of the second half.
If you really get a kick out of looking at how the other half live, 17 is your part.
Anonymous
>>15712966 Can't wait man, I'll be lurking. Broke my silence of about 8 months to post in this thread. You're doing gods work.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15713043 Would love to have you as a consistent poster, there's nothing that gets me writing faster than seeing anon's talk and speculate about the thread. That little beep and (1) give me a romantic boner.
Even for tasteful slashfics Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15712966 >>15712719 >A small boy rushed past the Kanto Representatives as they approached the shelter. >Moira moved to follow the boy, but Werner put a large hand on her shoulder. He removed the cigar from his mouth, stomped what was left of it into the ground, and pulled her back. “Let him go.” >Moira turned to her mentor. She bore a look of abject shock. “What?” >“He’s probably had a rough day; the worst day of his life, I’d wager. Best to let them deal with it on their own.” >“But he’s just a kid!” >“And so are you. I know for a fact that if that were you and I ran for you, you would have resented me." >Moira froze. In that moment, Werner seemed more like her father and less like the representative for Kanto than he ever did her entire life. Roland
>>15713172 I'm usually at my computer when I'm not at work or cooking, so I pretty much leave your threads open 24/7. I'm not very good at speculation but I'm usually always open for discussion.
Anonymous
>>15713172 just you wait the mpreg fics are next
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15713383 Then this seems like a good chance to post these questions
1.) Who is your favorite character?
2.) Favorite part/fight?
3.) Who would you like to see explored more?
4.) What happens after Celadon?
These are open to all anons. Seriously, it's actually easier from jumping in between the fic and this thread than it is to write when it's dead
>>15713479 >Implying I'm not a hot grill Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15713537 I'll bite, considering I'm apparently famous
1.) Vyro, Grayson or DR. GARTH surprisingly. Can't decide
2.) Probably Grayson vs. Octavius
3.) I hate to say this because I'm gonna sound like a spam fag, but Vyro. He's just interesting to me for some reason.
4.) I have no idea.
Porter
>>15713537 1) Gaap. That attitude and that kick to the face, tho.
2) Octavius' Tyrantrum charging Grayson.
3) Claudia.
4) My guess is that other regions get involved, and shit becomes a World War.
Roland
>>15713537 1.) So far, Grayson. I'm wondering how his past with Team Rocket will tie into the rest of the story. I do wish we had more time with some of the other villains though, but its still early.
If your schedule and big book of characters is still open, I might throw together an evil guy for you to use.
2.) Dat Grayson/Octavius fight. We need more baddass men on charging on badass pokemon
3.) Kai. Santiago too. In fact, I'd like to know more about the other folk who replaced the old gym leaders.
4.) I'm guessing Team Rocket is up to something AGAIN. Probably going to other regions.
Grayson
>>15713537 1) Vyro. Like, memetic-ness aside the idea of someone seemingly incompetent suddenly getting the chance to be the psycho killer he's wanted to be is cool to me.
2) The Grayson/Octavius fight. Not just cause Grayson, but with the storm and the Tyrantrum and the lightning, it was freakin' awesome
3) Honestly I kinda wanna see more pre-existing characters like Blue and Red explored some
4) Hope some questions get answered. Stock in Silph Co. rises as they rebuild Celadon in a Lex Luthor sorta scheme? Kanto declares war on Johto cause terrorism? Sudden rise of Gyarados into Kanto waters sensing danger?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15713627 >>15713783 >>15713905 >>15714058 No surprises about the Grayson/Octavius fight. It was incredibly fun to write. Legitimately the only part to date that has surprised me as I was writing it. Goose bumps.
You all interested in Vyro's development will like this next part. Same with Kai.
Santiago is very important
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15713288 >A small girl walked forward with a shy Clefairy trailing behind her. She tugged on Moira’s shirt. “Excuse me, miss? Did you see a boy kinda my height leave as you came in?” >Moira got down on to the girl’s level. “Yeah, I did. Why? Is he your brother?” >“No, not my brother. I just met him today. His Kakuna was very sick.” She peeked over at the Beedrill’s corpse. “I guess it’s not sick anymore.” Tyler
>>15714296 Another good way to finish off the day, go to school and work and come home to more stuff from OP awesome
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15714839 Always good to have you
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Tyler
>>15714937 So what do you have in store for us? Gotta do some catch up
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15714990 Have you read 10.5 and 11? Pretty important stuff.
>>15714963 ;_;
Tyler
>>15715020 I got fanfic site as home page so just finished all the reading, Part 11 was great! Now that I'm caught up
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15715205 Very cool, almost done with part 12 so you're just in time
Tyler
>>15715319 I love it! That flute part in 11 was very well written, I was impressed with that Meloetta twist, reminded me off Celebi from what was it the third movie?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15714963 >>15715379 If you guys get a chance, could you answer these
>>15713537 questions? Looking for general feedback
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15716100 Maybe the V-man's not such a bad guy after all.
Tyler
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>>15715815 Here you go OP, glad to help you
>1.) Who is your favorite character? Octavius, that man is the definition of badass
>2.) Favorite part/fight? Octavius vs Grayson of course, you could see it happening when you read it
>3.) Who would you like to see explored more? Hector, I know it's weird but why wouldn't you be interested in a no name psychic who bested Sabrina, or more developing on new gym leaders
>4.) What happens after Celadon? Silph gains control of Celadon. Full out biblical apocalypse of Kanto and Johto goes on, would love to see some Legendary interventions then legend v legend battle royale defending their respective region
Roland
>>15716100 Lexie confirmed for
future hero of justice .
Anonymous
>>15716100 NOIVERN VS. NOIVERN THE FINAL SHOWDOWN CONFIRMED
Tyler
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>>15716448 Son of a bitch, beat me to it
Roland
>>15716100 With Vyro's luck, I would have expected him to
accidentally pressing down on the detonator while trying to crush the device Might have been funny?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15716100 Moira confirmed for The Heart.
Lexie will totally become the next Champion, ten years later.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15716172 Perhaps
>>15716412 Also perhaps
>>15716448 this is a given
>>15716652 hue
>>15716744 The Tohjo Incident OVA
Tyler
>>15716412 I'm totally down with him becoming the polar opposite of Vyro, destined to face the other when he tries to stop Vyro from destroying/enslaving/evil thing (insert region)/world...if he ends up to be that being of pure evil we got a glimpse of
Roland
>>15716800 I think it was OP that said along the lines of, most madmen simply lack the means and an opportunity to do harm.
On the other hand. All a hero needs is two dead parents and a bat to get him started.
Tyler
>>15717162 Lexie confirmed NoiBatman
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Tyler
>>15717374 That gave me a good laught, lets just leave NoiBatman as Zubatman's cousin or half brother or whatever
Roland
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>>15717374 I actually forgot about this until now. Thanks for bring it back to me.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15717451 Noibatman is the Batman Beyond to Zubatman's Batman.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15717374 ahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahah
Tyler
>>15717500 YES YES YES, a thousand times YES
Roland
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15717500 >>15717555 >dubs >trips welp time to scrap this and start in Noibatman
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15717628 Epilogue:
Lexie as Noibatman preventing crimes like this from happening.
Roland
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>>15717628 We're right behind you OP
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15717660 i smell time travelling shenanigans
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15717711 I meant as "Preventing Crimes like the current actions in the fic ever happening again" in the simple "I lost something to Evil Act #25. No one else will have to lose something like that again"
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15717808 You bring a valid point. A valid point.
Roland
>>15717711 Maybe, in some freaky twist, Lexie is sent back in time and loses his memory and becomes Vyro.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15717863 oh god don't give me ideas at 130 in the morning
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15717863 Becoming the one thing he wanted to stop! Oh God.
Roland
>>15717863 The best/worst ideas come after midnight for me. I smell time traveling, alternate reality, mirror universe shenanigans afoot!
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15717955 Late night ideas is less sane and therefore more fun. They're even more fun when you see them in the morning.
Roland
>>15718091 Come to think of it, I never did proof read any of the all nighter essays I wrote during college. I wonder if my professors saw either brilliance or insanity.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15718241 I would assume a bit of both, and then confusion because you then start to repeat yourself over and over.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15718241 oh they did
I do Roland
>>15718283 >>15718288 Well, I managed to pass my classes, so I'm gonna weigh in on mostly brilliance here, with a dash of insanity for extra flavor.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15718346 Besides, everyone loves a bit of insanity. Why else would Vyro have ended up as a bit of a meme here.
Roland
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>>15718363 Personally, I've always been a bit more fond of that mask of his. But sure, insanity is gravy as well.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15713537 >1.) Who is your favorite character? Gotta go to Octavius on this one. Dude's fucking hardcore as shit, doesn't take shit from anyone. He really is the Pokemon Champion.
>2.) Favorite part/fight? Octavius/Grayson for sure. For the really sole reason of, it never actually seemed to be a one sided curbstomp like some of the other fights have been, it really seemed to be neck and neck the whole way through
>3.) Who would you like to see explored more? I'd like to see more of characters who are not Pokemon League members at some point. Going back to Ian at some point would be something I would like
>4.) What happens after Celadon? Massive political tension will be the result no matter who wins this one. If Hector gets his shit slapped, Kanto officials are probably going to start stepping up their presence in Johto to prevent such an incident from happening again. And as we know from, other incidents in fairly recent history, that never ends well
But on the off chance that the terrorists actually manage to make Johto a separate nation, now you have the incoming shit storm of a newly independent Johto, reclaimed through some massive violence next door to Kanto, who would be extremely pissed off, and would most likely want to retaliate. At best it's the Cuban Missile Crisis with Pokemon, at worst the whole continent would erupt into a war that would probably pull the other nations into it.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15716100 "tall tree near the bay."
My apologies, but I cracked a laugh when I imagined this tree to be the one we had to cut in order to get to Surge's gym.
Great chapter overall, one of my favorites.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15713537 >1.) Who is your favorite character? I have to say Blue despite him not being an anon created character. In my opinion, you build him very realistic as a very capable person who had the unluckiness of living in the same time frame of one of the greatest trainers of all time and how he grew of his cocky teeny persona.
>2.) Favorite part/fight? Gaap versus Gillian was a lot of fun to read, but Ocatavius versus Grayson had me at the edge of my seat at all times.
>3.) Who would you like to see explored more? The Silphs. Really looking forward for flashbacks with the President and Grayson as they plan the events that are moving the story and Ian eventually finding out his grandpa is behind much of this caos.
>4.) What happens after Celadon? I expect extremists from both sides calling out for an all out war, more terrorists attacks and great Orzo writing.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
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>>15721294 *really looking forward to
Grayson
Bump
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15722519 Out of class and 12.5's coming up
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15724922 Obligatory [HYPE INTENSIFIES]
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15724976 >Dorian Silph took a moment to look up from his notes. >Absol was pacing. Normally asleep by now, there had only been a handful of times Dorian had seen her like this; not one of them was a particularly pleasant memory. He placed the dossier on the long mahogany table and wheeled himself over towards Absol. She tensed and shuddered before leaving the room through the back. Dorian was alone, facing the door. Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15726483 Time for suffering.
kk 0791-2390-2317
>>15726483 NotGoingToEndWell.txt
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15726483 Incoming murder
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15727486 The plot thickens.
Anonymous
>>15727580 [Thickening intensifies]
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15727486 I couldn't be happier with the events of this chapter.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15727580 >>15727700 >>15727734 You have no idea how much fun writing Mad Men/House of Cards-esque scenes in a Pokemon fic is. Expect the Silph family to be a a major force come this next arc. When we will be visiting
Hoenn Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15727821 Looks like Molly might be going home then. If she didn't get killed somehow.
Tyler
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>>15727821 *clap* very nice, I really like the dark/serious tone of this fic.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15727821 HOENN CONFIRMED I'm sorry, but I ain't even sorry.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15728098 Why ARE we heading to Hoenn anyway?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15728185 Well there's an almost entire second half of the arc remaining
We shall see
Tyler
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>>15728185 Why the hell not! They could be the peace keepers or third army, all the possibilities
Anonymous
>>15727821 >Visiting Hoenn B-but
THAT MEANS NO VYRO. I DON'T WANT VYRO TO DIE SO SOON.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15728185 You can't take over the world with only taking a tiny bit of it.
>>15728250 Vyro will sneak over to Hoenn.
Anonymous
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>>15728270 >Vyro sneaks over to Hoenn Oh god new headcanon. Vyro's so much of a dick that he follows the main cast around just to piss them off anime Team Rocket style
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15728250 >>15728270 With all the characters so far andmore to introduce, it would be wise to keep your eyes on all regions
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15728324 FFFFUCK
Now I gotta divide this shit up into regions too I swear to god you people don't pay me enough for this.
Tyler
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>>15728355 Based Index Jeff does it with a click of a button
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15728355 was that hot slashfic not enough
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
Anonymous
Also I updated
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit?usp=sharing All the shit about the wimpy kid guy is on here, along with the other guy, and his father, the big president guy
(Also I just noticed I accidentally deleted Dorian Silph's entry when I reformatted. Oops.)
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15728631 Shit forgot trip.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15728430 >>15728525 It's his way of saying more Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Back to writing part 13 after durdling around and getting back up to 1650 in UU for a bit with my new team because I fell to like 1000 because I like weird mixstall teams but I digress.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15729265 Is the throne where Hector is slouching in the Hall of Champions?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15729877 Yeah, that's where they held the Tohjo Summit
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Hype Question #2
Grayson
>>15730070 Santiago.
Hmmm, his name makes me think of a swordsman. I don't think he should have one type (he is Champion runner up right?) I think he should have blade Pokemon like Bisharp, Scyther, or Seviper.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15730070 I bet Fire or Ground. With maybe a Krookodile
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15730179 He is monotype. Correct on the swordsman guess however
>>15730189 Neither, although he was fire in the original notes I drew up in october
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15730070 I think it'll either be Fire, Flying or Steel.
Blaziken, Volcarona, Darmanitan Or
Aerodactyl (It being a gift from Octavius since they're Master and Apprentice and he's using a lot of fossils), Gyarados, Salamence Or
Bisharp, Empoleon, Magnezone That's at least what I think.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15730248 >Gift from Octavius Incredibly good guess. Not the pokemon, but very nice pinning down that trope
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15730294 Close enough I guess.
Grayson
>>15730294 Gift from Octavius
Not an Aerodactyl
Is a swordsman
...Are you given this dude a Kabutops? Kabutops is my all time favorite fossil. Dangit Orzo you got my hype all up on Kabutops now don't you dare dissappoint.
you never dissappoint
Anonymous
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Miles and Molly when?secks man.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>15730294 Kabutops is the gift then, I'm guessing based on the swordsman thing, which also means that if that's part of his team and he's a monotype he must be a water trainer since Octavius specialized in rock types and that would be boring.
So then Kabutops, Empoleon, and Samurott are my guesses.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15730566 :3c
>>15730594 Sherlock here nailed 2/3
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15730747 I nailed the gift, that's something.
Maybe the last is
Kingdra Anonymous
It's either Ludicolo or Keldeo.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15730831 >>15730943 >“Spare me the formalities, swordsman, I have heard this speech several times already in your head. I know that you have a tinge of fear in your heart after learning I had killed Sabrina. I know you worry about your Master as he lies broken. I know you will lead with Kabutops and attempt to slash at me in tandem, hoping that Kabutops’s double-team will be enough to counter my telepathy. I know that you received that Kabutops as a Kabuto from Octavius when you visited Pewter city when you were only fifteen years old. I know that you have prepared for the event that I could read your plan, so you attempted to hide the fact that you had released your Samurott into the fountain before you entered by repeating your speech over in your head. I know that your Gyrados has mastered the Hyper Beam and you attempt to use it as a last resort in the off chance that I was able to discern your first ruse. You intend to bring the hall around my ears, and while I am distracted by the falling roof, you plan to eviscerate me with that blade of yours.” >Santiago stared blankly. >“Oh yes, swordsman,” Hector chuckled. “I know a great many things about you.” Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15731030 I GUESSED HIS LAST POKEMON ON THE WRONG TEAM?!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15731127 Them's the bones
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15731030 A thought occurs to me.
Did they ever invent guns in the Pokemon world? Can his Telepathy stop a bullet in the face?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15731397 Now that's a tricky one.
Short answer: No
Long answer: Maybe
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15731526 I expected the long answer to be "Nope".
Anonymous
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>>15731030 > Gyarados > Can't even learn Swords Dance Ludicolo can, at least :c
Anonymous
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>>15731526 >b-but Aaron Thorne, the gunslinger character wields guns... Wistar
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OP did you get my character? Posted it like three days ago.
Anonymous
Hey OP if you want to win NaNo how about you just write your own novel instead of getting a bunch of nerds on the internet to write it for you. Being creative and doing something difficult by yourself is SO HARD huh? I bet you use Pokegen you lazy lardass.
Anonymous
>>15732614 He's getting character ideas and writing the whole thing himself.
Fuck off.
Anonymous
>>15732750 man, coming up with original characters all by myself is so fucking hard. good thing I have /vp/ they can make me some characters that I can cram into my shit fanfiction even though I won't know how to write them because I didn't come up with them myself.
Characters are the easiest part of a novel. OP confirmed for uncreative lazy lardass.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15732614 :^)
>Winning NaNo Looks like someone missed the point of the month.
>Implying they write it. I value their input, but at the end of the day, I have to sit down and write; I'm 8,700 words ahead of schedule.
>Being creative and doing something difficult by yourself I'm burnt out on my own lit-prose, as an english major, I get tired of writing these stories that deal with real themes and people. It wears thin. I chose to do this with /vp/ because I didn't want another NaNo slogfest like the last six years. I feel its a good time with the amount of traffic /vp/ gets now that X/Y are here.
>I bet you use Pokegen I play on Showdown, but I doubt that makes any difference to you. I use the games as is for challenge runs.
>you lazy lardass. 6'8 and 180 is suffering
6/10 I stopped writing for it
Anonymous
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>>15732862 He's doing this with /vp/. He only takes character names, genders, pokemon, and occasionally descriptions. Everything else is up to him.
>>15732894 You're fucking 6'8? I'm only 6'2 and everyone calls me fucking tall. Holy shit.
Anonymous
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All this bait flying around.
Anonymous
>>15732894 oh my God. I can't believe you actually replied seriously.
>6'8 and 180 My bad I'm sorry I had no idea you were /fit/
>English Major pseudo intellectual faggot
Voodoo 3797-6562-5581 (Kecleon, Aipom, Eevee)
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Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
My little sister can't be this b8! Orzo !MlmhzK88DI Fri 08 Nov 2013 21:50:42 No. 15733242 Report >>15733000 >trips >nice I'll bite again; I'm having fun.
My bad I'm sorry I had no idea /fit/ thinks anything over 6'4" is desirable &
>Implying I'm fit Thanks for the underhanded compliment :^) the beauty of the English language means I can interpret your keyboard-mashings however I please. Feel free to adjust your eyes to the condescending tone in my text.
>English Major >pseudo intellectual faggot Welp, you got me there. 10/10 insult. Better go rethink my life. I'll just be an engineer or something. So much for being a teacher and doing what I love.
Did you have a favorite teacher? One that nurtured your talents and cared for you as a person? No? I'm sorry. I guess we can't all come from functional homes.
>b-but ad hominem Wrong-o, skiddo
>b-but muh stuttering strawman! Deal with it, nerd
>b-but you're a nerd for writing a pokemon fanfic Touche, anon. Touche.
Anonymous
>>15733242 Dude just don't respond to them you're helping them win.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15733394 Bump for incoming Part 13
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Porter
>>15734901 Another fucking awesome fight, which I am going to re-read now.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15734901 Grumble mumble bloody psychics and their cheating psychic ways.
Also LAST MAN STANDING MOTHERFUCKERS. Probably going to be at best locked in some maximum security prison somewhere and/or executed but still I would consider that a minor victory. Anonymous
>>15735485 >Last man standing Vyro.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15735598 Second to Last man standing then.
Anonymous
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>>15735701 No, your character got shrek'd, just not as hard as others.
Vyro was never cool anyway. The guy killed Lexie's mom. I hope he dies the most painful death out of them all.
Anonymous
>>15733242 >>15733242 >>15733242 >>15733242 Dealwithit.gif
You remind me of this guy who went to my high school.
Did you remember to wear your Guy Fawks mask on the fourth? Keep looking for that nerdy manic pixie dream girl OP she's out there just waiting for you. I bet she love to sit in your lap and snuggle up in your duster while you tell her all about your EPIC NaNo novel that /vp/ is writing for you. Chicks dig that kind of stuff, they like when you get other people to do something for you then claim it as your own original content. See you on Best Seller list OP. If your pen name something cool like Dex Paine?
Anonymous
>>15735861 You've gotta be trying to convince everyone that you're a dribbling retard, because I don't believe anyone can honestly be this pathetic.
Anonymous
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>>15736212 No, see I'm trolling. I'm actually very smart.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15735173 Glad you liked it, that one was a blast to write as well
Tyler
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>>15736345 Awesome chapter once again, if perfection is a habit then you‘ve got it bad, really liked that Kabutops swordsman direction you took, linked to Octavius nicely, Carry On my writer bro
Anonymous
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15736345 You were planning on firing out multiple chapters today right?
Anonymous
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>>15736744 This is the one Vyro meme pic I actually like.
Anonymous
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My face when I leave for some hours and lose Santiago party speculation and Hector Underwood.
Grayson
Just got back from Thor 2 and boy do I love me some Samurott. And Kabutops, what a classic. Can we be expecting anymore parts tonight maybe Orzo?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15736761 Part 14 after work
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15740521 Was Thor 2 any good?
Also I'm only gonna update the index every few chapters from now on because it's not a special update when I added one line of text to one character profile.
Grayson
>>15741116 I really enjoyed it. Lot more like a space fantasy, succeeds in a lot of ways the first fell short. There was more characters than just Thor, Loki, and Natalie Portman. I love the mythos stuff life that.
Solid 8.7/10, I'd buy the dvd, maybe see again in theater if I had someone to go with
I love the work you're doing Index Jeff
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15741285 Thank you my friend.
And good, maybe I'll go see it then. I did actually like the first one, so if this one is better, then I should enjoy it too.
Roland
Long ass day at work. Didn't miss much apart from 12.5 did I?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Roland
>>15743192 Well, caught up with that. Lets go ahead and bump Santiago up the list of my favorite characters. Give him points for
STAB bonus .
Shame about Hector. Guess he didn't
make the cut Tyler
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15746586 So I'm probably hit the hay early tonight, lost momentum halfway through 14. I'm tired as balls. Slammed at work, etc, etc.
Part 14, for those of you interested, has Gaap/Huck and Miles/Molly. Its s fun one to write, we're leaving celadon after saving Vermillion and making our way back to Indigo Plateau.
Expect some character development, no battling, and a heartfelt scene with an under appreciated pairing.
Noibatman changes everything I'll be up for a bit more, answering questions, you know the drill.
Anonymous
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>>15747270 So Noibatman
Is he going to kill Vyro right away? Because if Vyro got killed right at the end of this arc, that would be really lame and anticlimactic
Tyler
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>>15747270 Rest easy OP, rest easy..i know youll have some great writing tomorrow. I will gadly take a good chapter as a bday present
Roland
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15747270 All the shipping.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>15747270 Haha Miles and Gaap are finally back
Anonymous
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Tyler
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15757963 So how about that shipping?
It's looking to be in ship shape
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15758010 Well I'm not against it.
Miles
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>>15758160 Shipping you say?
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15758160 If Gillian had a jaw he would be saying "Oh get a room!" at this point.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15759995 I'm awake
for real this time
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15760621 >>15761605 Sorry playin some UU. My guy cancelled AGAIN so writing incoming
Hype Question #3
What will Lexie's role be in the second half of the Celadon Arc and Beyond?
Anonymous
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>>15761850 Maybe an apprentice of someone. The Lexie/Hayley story will probably meet with the Gaap/Molly/Miles story.
Roland
>>15761850 If you're seriously willing to do it,
Noibatman would be amazing . If not, then seeing him become train to become sort of similar hero of justice would be cool, but obviously not as extreme as the previously mentioned idea.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15762070 At 8, there's not much he can do as noibatman, but we can always
look foraward to timeskips Anonymous
>>15761850 He wants to help as many as he can, be their final hope and want to just make Justice prevail
It's his training for Noibatman Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15761850 as an aside, stall vs stll is like chess I love it
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15762397 Damnit, it ate my trip again.
>>15762122 I'll just despair now>>15762434 Sounds more interesting than breeding Mawiles.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15762452 I'll breed my team evenutally. Picked up digital Y to do some challenge runs after I got tired of MM on my cart
Roland
>>15762210 Exactly. Bruce Wayne didn't become Batman over night. I guess he trained with... ninjas first?
Maybe have Lexie be taken under the wing of a gym leader, an elite four member, or a ranger to jump start his career of justice?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15762563 He'll walk the path of justice, starting in the small.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15763064 Telling the refugee's to pick up their trash so their temporary homes will stay clean so no one will get sick.
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
Noibatman vs. Vyro, who I guess is Joker-y would be cool as fuck.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15763287 No problem, Jeff. I could draw up drafts of anything that happens character wise to make it easier for you tomorrow.
As for a schedule, 14, 14.5, and 15 are in the tubes for today.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15763133 Hahaha I really like that, that's better than what I had planned
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15763495 Well it just seems like the way for a kid to also perceive it. A bit more innocent than anyone else would make it. I mean you don't see big superheroes preach about something as simple as that.
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15763419 That would be great actually.
Thanks.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15763590 I'm getting a superteam vibe with Lexie, Hayley, and some of the other kids.
Like an Elite Four but with one unevolved pokemon each
it's too cute
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15764104 Youth Squad Kidranger
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Almost done with Part 14. Look for a new thread when I'm done. I'll link to it
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15765703 Nearly 2 thousand words for part 14
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
