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(The screen fades into a grand Foyer with many fancy decorations. Togetic is frantically flying around: dusting, clear cob webs and doing general cleaning of the new mansion. Espurr, Snubbull, Riolu and Bulbasaur are watching from below) Riolu: Bulbasaur! Since you are the newest member of our crew. I demand you use your vines to help clean the Mansion! Bulbasaur: Nah, I smoked too many drugs earlier. I think I'll just take a nap. *Bulbasaur falls to the ground and is asleep instantly *Laugh Track* Riolu: heh classic bulbasaur Snubbull: What do you mean classic Bulbasaur? We have known him for like a day. I don't think its a good idea to let him stay with us in our new Mansion. Riolu: Well, Espurr put up such a good case to let him stay. I just had to! *Espurr Blinks at camera *Laugh Track* *togetic flies down and stands with them Togetic: Thank..I um. Y-You must have done some heavy convincing yourself today Riolu. I-I cannot believe your uncle is letting us stay at his extra mansion! Riolu: TOGETIC! We all need to work hard to get this mansion up to par! We don't have time to chit chat lets get back to work! Togetic: S-sorry *Togetic flies back up to finish his job Snubbull: There is something suspicious about it. I don't like it. Riolu: Relax Snubs, its a free mansion. Lets go get some snacks! Come on Espurr lets go eat. (Espurr, Snubbell and Riolu leave the room) *Togetic begins to follow but makes a defeated face and reconsiders, going back to work *Laugh Track*
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Here is our story so far
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(In the grand kitchen, Riolu and Espurr sit at the counter while Snubbull vaguely searches all the drawers and the pantry for something to eat.) Snubbull: UGH! There is absolutely nothing to eat in our stately estate and I am starved! This is the worst day ever! *Half the audience laughs* Riolu: Yeah, they day that you move into a mansion usually is the worst day of a person's life. *The other half of the audience laughs* *Snubbell turns and scowls at Riolu Snubbull: Too bad I cant eat this hunk of junk mansion. Riolu: I would like to see you try! *Laugh Track* Snubbull: YEAH well I JUST MIGHT BONEHEAD! *Snubbell proceeds to start munching on the countertop *Laugh Track* (Togetic comes flying into the kitchen in a panic crashing into a chair in the process) Riolu: Woah calm down Togetic what are you doing? We are supposed to be getting the house in order! Togetic:b-b-bb-b-b--b-but g-g-g-g-guyyyys uh um. guys (He said still panicking) Snubbell: Relax you are sppeaking more terribly than normal *Laugh Track* Togetic: W-w-w--w-W-WE HAVE A GHOST! *Everyone in the scene and in the audience gasp* Riolu: YOU JUST WANT TO GET OUT OF HELPING US CLEAN *Laugh Track* -commercial break-
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(Back in the Foyer Togetic explains to Espurr, Snubbull and Riolu about what he say. Bulbasaur is lying asleep in the middle of the floor) Riolu: So you are saying that the ghost just flew in here knocked over and broke the vase, then flew out in a hurry. Togetic: Uh.. y-yea Riolu: I don't know if you know this about me, but I am one of the worlds greatest detectives and I have already solved the case. (Riolu gives the camera really smug look) *Laugh Track* Riolu: IT WAS TOGETIC THAT BROKE THE VASE *Snubbull and Togetic gasp *Espurr blinks at the camera *Laugh Track* Riolu: SNUBS! apprehend the suspect for questioning! Snubbell: ugh ok.. how would I do that exactly? *Laugh Track* Riolu: Get some ropes or something! Snubbell: Where do we keep the rope? Riolu: Hmm.. I'm not sure . Togetic, have you seen any ropes around here? Togetic: N-n-no Riolu: I KNOW! Bulbasaur! *He nudges bulbasaur awake Riolu: Tie up Togetic with your vines please! Bulbasaur: Fine *bulbasaur wraps togetic up in his vines then passes back out *Laugh Track*
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Is this gonna lead to lewds?
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(The lights in the foyer are all turned off except for a single spotlight pointed at the tied up Togetic. Snubbull, Riolu, and Espurr stand behind the spot light and are interrogating Togetic) Riolu: ADMIT IT! You broke the lamp with your clumsy disregard for other people things! Then you blamed it on a ghost and tried to get out of putting your fair share of work in! Togetic: N-no I swear I didnt! Snubbull: This is so dumb. Lets at least get food before we do this! *Laugh Track* Riolu: This will be over soon enough, Snubbs. My surprise witness can attest to there not being a ghost! Togetic: W-who is it? Riolu: Why silly, he is right under your nose! BULBASAUR! Please wake up! *bulbasaur stirs slightly Bulbasaur: I didn't see a ghost. *bulbasaur snores obviously back asleep *Laugh Track* Riolu: THAT PROVES IT! Bulbasaur was in the room and he didn't see the "ghost" Togetic: HE WAS ASLEEP HE DIDNT SEE ANYTHING Riolu: WATCH YOUR TONE! Of course he didn't see anything. Because there was no ghost to s... *A loud crash comes from a distant room Riolu: That must have been the ghost! We have to go investigate Snubbull! Snubbull: I just want to eat. I am starving. Riolu: Just come on! Togetic: Untie me! Riolu: There is no time! Togetic: Dont leave me alone in the dark with the ghost! *Laugh Track* (Riolu and Snubbull hurry out of the room with Espurr waddling close behind) (Close up of Togetic all tied up looking really nervous)
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what the FUCK is this thread
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>hurr I'm gonna have le meme Espurr be an awkward mute that mugs that camera because it's funnie xD
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(Riolu, Espurr and Snubbull walk into a dimly lit and dusty study. Riolu spies a broken vase on the floor) Riolu: Definitely the work of a ghost! Snubbull: You can't tell that just by looking at it. Riolu: HAHA of course I can! I am this region's leading paranormal researcher! Snubbull: More like you are a paranormal researcher. Riolu: Yeah thats what I said! Snubbull: No I was calling you a researcher who is paranormal because you are acting like an idiot. *Laugh Track* Riolu: Hmmp Thats no way to talk to your boss! Snubbull: You aren't the boss of me. I'm leaving this is dumb. (as Snubbull approached the door a ghostly figure moved past it in a hurry) *Snubbull turns back to Riolu Snubbull: Ok I guess we have a ghost. *Laugh Track* Riolu: Alright lets bust this ghost! Snubbull: Aint No ghost gonna spook me at night lets get him. *Espurr pounds its fists together with a determined look on its face *Audience Dawws -2:30 minute long ghost search montage-
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(Snubbull, Espurr and Riolu walk back into the foyer, turn the lights on to find Togetic still tangled up in Bulbasaur's vines) Riolu: Togetic stop being so lazy and give us a hand for once in your life! *Laugh Track* Togetic:b-but Riolu: No buts! Bulbasaur release him! *Bulbasaur stirred awake for just long enough to release Togetic. Togetic (while nervously looking around): d-did you get the ghost? Riolu: No of course not! Its a powerful specter it might take all night! We need your help! The study is dustier than a diggersby. go clean it immediatly! Togetic: oh.. ok Riolu: Us actual workers have to go down to the basement. My deductive detective deductions lead me to believe that we have cornered it down there. *Laugh Track* (Espurr, Snubbull and Riolu leave and head to the basement. Togetic reluctantly h to the study and bulbasaur continues to sleep.
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(Down in the basement the heroes press on searching every nook and cranny for the ghost. A large storm has brewed outside and lightning is constantly crackling. ) Snubbull: There! *He pointed to a ghostly figure move into the corner. Riolu: We GOT YOU SURROUNDED come out an face us! (A gastly emerges from the shadows) Snubull: OH! It was just a ghost type pokemon! I forgot those existed. I thought it was a real ghost. What a relief. *Laugh Track* Gastly: please take anything and leave... just don't hurt me. Snubbull: What do you mean leave?! This is our house! You leave! Gastly: Excuse me? This is my house. You people broke in and started chasing me and that Togetic broke my vase! Riolu: I'll have to have a little talk with him about that later! Snubbull: Why don't we have a little talk now? I thought you said that your Uncle gave us this place! Riolu: Well maybe he just told me about this place.... we both thought it was abandoned. *Snubbull looks furious *Espurr stood there unphased by the situation and blinked *Laugh Track* Snubbull: Wait.. so if togetic broke the first vase.Who broke the second? Gastly: I thought that was you guys *They hear Togetic yell for help from upstairs *close up of Riolu's face Riolu: Uh-oh *Laugh Track*
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( The trio and Gastly hurry upstairs to find Togetic and Bulbasaur, still asleep, tied up with a shadowy figure in front of them.) Snubbull: Woah where did you find the rope? Riolu: Shut up. Mysterious figure Show yourself! I believe you owe this gastly a new vase. You do too actually Togetic! *Laugh Track* Shadowy Figure: I don't think I will be paying anyone for any vase any time soon. (The figure stepped into the light revealing his identity as Pancham) Riolu: PANCHAM! My eternal rival! What are you doing here?! Pancham: This morning when I heard that you were moving into a mansion today. I decided to pretend to be a ghost to scare you out of your Mansion and take it for myself! MUAHAHA but it looks like someone beat me to the punch and I'll have to use force.. like a punch! *Laugh Track* Riolu: Actually PanCHUMP we don't even own this place and were just about to leave! Pancham: Oh.. ok Snubbull: Yeah idiot and even if it was ours you couldn't scare us out if you tried! Pancham: Curses... you people may win this round! but at the End of the day the mighty PANCHAM is the one the history books will praise. Riolu: Whatever lets just get out of here. *Laugh Track* (They untie Togetic and bulbasaur and everyone except gastly leaves the mansion.) (Outside) Riolu: We are kinda homeless now can we stay with you Panchump? Pancham: uh yeah sure as long as you dont mind chipping in fo rent Riolu:You've gone too far this time panchump! *Laugh Track* -credits-
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That is the end of Chapter 2 . Who was everyone's favorite characters?
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Next Episode is tentatively titled "Hurricane huddle"
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I laughed the whole way through
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>>15730681 Espurr is the only good one, the other ones can rot.
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The second episode of the ESTR now comes in a compact form!
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I want more Espurr.
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[autism intensifies]
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>>15727368 Hey anon! I really love your fanfic!
i'm a flash animator and i will be glad if you let me make a animated short with this.
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>>15735769 feel free. I'm gonna work on chapter 3 later tonight.
Here is the teaser trailer.
chapter one is at the top
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>>15735852 Thanks! Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!
I will be waiting all the night the next chapter.
i made a little sketch for the first scene
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>>15736154 Awesome! Where are you gonna publish it at? I'll probably tart posting the third at around 9. after im good and toasty
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I look forward to more Espurr.
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(The scene opens with Snubbull, Espurr and Togetic sitting at the kitchen table eating breakfast. Bullbasaur is also at the table but he sems totally out of it) *Espurr eats a donut in a really cute way *Audience Daaaws* Snubbull: Oh great its starting to rain... I planned on running errands today. I guess that can wait... this is terrible. Togetic: I think its kind of tranquil (Riolu bursts through the door in a mad rush) Riolu: EMERGENCY EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY EMERGENCY (He yelled on and on) *Laugh Track* Togetic: Well there goes my trainquility. Snubbull: And Here comes my headache! *Laugh Track* (snubbull rolled his eyes) Snubbull: So whats this big emergency? Riolu: Well boys... this is hard for me to say (He looked terrified) *he pointed towards the rain on the other side of the window* Riolu: but THAT will be a Hurricane by nightfall! *Togetic gasps and Snubbull rolls his eyes *Espurr just blinks *Audience laughs like crazy* Togetic: S-s-so What are w-w-w gonna do? Riolu: Stop asking stupid questions Togetic! It is obvious what we have to do and I am completely capable of making sure that we SURVIVE this demon storm! *Togetic starts clapping and Snubbull rolls his head back in annoyance, Espurr did nothing ) *Laugh Track*
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>>15742582 to be continued tommorrow
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Looking forward to that.