We've had fic threads before, but this one is different.
As you may or may not know, November is National Novel Writing Month. This time of year, aspiring authors from all over the world set their noses to the grind stone in an attempt to hammer out 50,000 words in 30 days. They all have hopes and dreams of one day being successful authors.
Fuck that noise.
As a writer by trade, I've participated in this event several times over course of my life. This year I decided, in honor of X and Y, I would spend this month of writing with you, /vp/.
That's right- you.
Welcome to the Tohjo Incident: 50 years after Red, Blue, and Yellow. The Supercontinent of Tohjo, made up of Kanto and Johto is beginning to unravel as separatist factions from both sides of Mt. Silver call for sovereignty, autonomy, and war.
>The story so far. Second Half of the Celadon Arc 10: And into the Fire
10.5: All that for A Single Laugh
11: The Common Man
12: A Brief Moment of Hesitation
12.5: Junior
13: Santiago
14: Picking Up the Pieces
14.5: Last Firefighter Out of Vermillion
15: From the Ashes
16: THE CELADON CONTINGENCY (In the works)
I will no longer be posting old pastebins in the OP. The story can be followed here:
>fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident I will post updates in the form of pastebins and fanfiction page edits. Pastebins are available as soon as it's live!
Index Jeff has provided an index of characters. READ THIS ONLY AFTER YOU HAVE READ UP TO THE LATEST PART TO AVOID SPOILERS
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit ANON! Your very own POKEMON legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with POKEMON awaits! Let's go!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15856535 A bit to get started. If you have an idea, feel free to use this as a jumping point or ignore this completely.
>Name: >Team: >Home Region: >Affiliation (Kanto, Johto un affiliated) >Trainer type and style: Anonymous
>>15856564 switched the pics lul
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
These threads are still going? I've been working under the assumption that these threads consist of OP and maybe 1 other person samefagging as different people
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15857178 If you shout into an empty room it's polite to answer your echo.
Also, I am replying to myself, of course
Anonymous
>>15857217 I/we/you knew it!
Roland
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>>15857252 I/you/him/her/who/us/ believe in myself/yourself/ourselves/himself/herself/?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Well then. But if that was true, how did it go on for the three days 4chan fucking up my actual image to Pokemon porn and getting me a 3 day ban?
Anonymous
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>>15857380 because you/I/he/we were never actually banned, it was just a clever ruse to keep the facade up
Roland
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15857417 God's a scary guy then.
Anonymous
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How do people around here feel about self-insertish fics? It probably sounds really gay and underage, so I'm not sure if it's looked down upon in Fic threads, but ever since I got burned out from playing Pokemon X i've sort of been obsessed with the idea of making a nonfiction documentation/log of a personal journey through a region (Hoenn specifically) that reflect an element of my actual life from graduating High School student to adulthood. It's really bizarre, I've written multiple teams and boxed Mons that my personal friends would have and made a timeline of where the protagonist goes from High School, using areas from the game, in-anime exclusives (that serve a point/provide interesting scenarios) and liberal additions based off of real world locations i've experienced and been fascinated by in this autistic fantasycanon of mine. Eventually the notepad got so bloated and just thought why not write it? Don't really know why I'm sharing this in the first place, but I see these threads a lot and felt like getting it out there
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15863945 Even if it can sound like that. If it's well written who gives a shit. That's my opinion anyway.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15857217 On occasions where I am caught talking to myself, my excuse is that I have to have an intelligent conversation sometimes
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Morning work shift then finishing up part 16. Im combining two parts to make it more interesting. I'm gonna try amd keep each arc at 20 parts not counting X.5s. Hype Question #4 What do you want to see out of the next arc?
Grayson
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>>15865225 I want to see the impact of legendary pokemon. It's Hoenn isn't it? Legends were big in Hoenn.
Also, I want to know why the terrorists' motivations
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15865225 Shipping I'd honestly want to see character building. More layers to the characters and their relationships. Some seem to know each other but we don't really know HOW they know each other.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
>>15865225 I want to see more of
Miles' background along with building a relationship with Molly they're both my favorite characters ;_;
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15868336 Life in a shipping is hard. What was it called now, RescueShipping or something was what some anon coined Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>15865225 New characters making an appearance.
Old characters making reappearances.
Plot thickening.
The usual
Anonymous
16 when? finally caught up
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15872240 Just got back from work, writing now
Anonymous
the deadest thread yet guess that's what no updates does.
Anonymous
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>>15872748 It's not the weekend and people have lives Anon.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15872748 Yeah, slow updates plus weekdays plus morning work shift equals pretty dead. Picks up around 6/7 for general conversation
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15872748 You can only talk about shippings and the same things so many times.
Anonymous
>>15873218 I gotta say, at this point I even miss THE VYROING because at least while the Vyrospamming was a thing, people still talked frequently.
Anonymous
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>>15873778 Eh it's a Monday.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>Someone reached her hand down to take Lorelei’s. She was pulled up to the ice. She rested out at the feet of a young, intense looking woman. >“Don’t worry; I have not abandoned you yet.”
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15877216 A trip down the memory lane or a hallucination
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15877471 >>15877477 Here it is.
Easily my least favorite part, but don't let that discourage you.
I hope to pick it up quicker in the future.
http://pastebin.com/WyEUWQkb Anonymous
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>>15879174 >http://pastebin.com/WyEUWQkb I like it. As I'm sure you're aware, a good story can't be all action and adventure. I haven't posted before, but I'm just going to drop by and say that I love what you're doing. Seriously, this is great. Keep at it man.
Porter
>>15879174 >that fucking ending oh lawd.
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15879174 That clifhanger, you sure love to torture our imaginations don't you Orzo?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15879388 >>15879531 He always did have a plan, even in death he had his contingencies
Jon
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>>15879174 Hmm, very interesting, gonna be sitting here for the next couple hours thinking about it. Another excellent chapter Orzo
Anonymous
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>>15879174 Holy fuck what a twist. If this is your least favorite, this story has to be fucking awesome.
Tyler
Oh thank god I found this thread, just got home and old one was 404'd so I was scrambling, anything interesting aside from new chapters?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15880364 super boring deay
Tyler
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>>15880419 You mean super boring deay until now
Roland
>>15879174 Just got back from work
Well. There goes another tower.
I also have a question or two:
It seemed that Lorelei was trying to hide the name from Hector. But was he trying to pry out the name because he wanted that information or to erase it from her? Also, while this was an illusion Hector said he trained under Will. Was this a ruse to cloud her judgement or was it fact? Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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Part of me wonders if at some point a bad guy would try to get a Legendary to even the odds a little againist the good guys
Roland
>>15880768 So, this would imply that Hector wasn't the one who assaulted her as well as him being in the dark about their true identity. And if what he said was true, why didn't any one recognize him when he attacked the Tohjo summit back in chapter 6 and when he fought off against Santiago?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15881148 It's been a while since Will was on the E4
Roland
>>15881260 Right, right. Fifty years is a long time and I keep forgetting that positions like these can rotate suddenly or be held for decent periods of time. With that being said, while you did elaborate on how seats on the elite four or the champion's can be earned, I can't remember if you mentioned if there was a limit on how long one can hold that seat?
Man. My critical thinking skills are just not working today.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15881578 It is typically held for life, but no one usually spends that long
Roland
>>15881620 Thanks for putting up with my questioning man.
Doing god's work.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15881846 That's what I'm here for
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15881887 Also, I've just hit 1,000 views with 241 unique visitors to the FF page. This is not counting the pastebin views, which often out do the FF views
Feels good to know people stop in and check every now and then
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15882906 fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident
Anonymous
Tyler
>>15882661 That's awesome! I know I have the ff bookmarked on my laptop phone and iPod so I read it everywhere (home,school,work,gf's)
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15885890 Next Part, we delve into Octavius's past with his wise Master Sobi
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15879174 Damn, that end.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15886355 The Celadon Contingency
Roland
>>15886021 Can we expect chapter 17 sometime tonight or should we place our hopes in tomorrow?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15887628 i'd shoot for tomorrow, i got roped into a double tomorrow
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
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>>15891877 Patience is a virtue
Anonymous
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>>15892766 Helping the thread not 404 nigger.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15898627 I've got a 3 hour block between shifts where I'm gonna get 16.5 done and up
Look for two of the most prominent characters, and why they do what they do
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15898949 and I'm back
Hype train
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15901433 I am hype.
And instantly got bored of breeding Larvitar's... 24 trips down Route 7 to hatch one egg. WITH FLAME BODY.
Dan 2964 - 8823 - 9838 Poison (Gloom, Swalot, Drapion)
Dan 2964 - 8823 - 9838 Poison (Gloom, Swalot, Drapion) Wed 13 Nov 2013 21:36:20 No. 15901579 Report Quoted By:
>>15901518 Hatching power, level it my friend. Changes lives.
Anonymous
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>>15901518 Go get that lv 3 Hatching Power.
Friendly bump so non-catalog users may see this fic.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15901518 I just use the Eiffel tower for pseudos
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15901433 >>15901518 >He studied the man’s face, memorizing the details, cataloging every crease and turn of the landscape of Grayson’s face. >“Yeah, I know a thing or two about bombs. Why? Need me to smoke out a cheating whore? Barbeque a disgruntled business partner? You could have just asked, man. No need for this whole Rocket get up.” >“Perhaps.” Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15901736 The Plot Thicks
And jiggles a bit Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15902031 >>15902095 I'm loving this interation between Vyro and Grayson, really getting me up out of my slump.
Expect 17 tonight as well as we near the end of the Celadon Arc.
Anonymous
>>15902628 can't believe they saved vyro
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15902829 miles helped vyro
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15903050 Well neither Miles or Molly know it is Vyro, so to them he's just another guy, right now anyway.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15901736 http://pastebin.com/03v0QAmD Part 16.5, long enough to be its own part, but I got carried away on their dynamic. Deal with it.
I hope this sheds some light on Vyro's actions thus far and gives you a clue as to his motives now.
Anonymous
>>15903249 >>15903249 Oh... So there are bombs in Vermillion too? I'm going to have to reread this one. Had a lot of information.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15903249 Now that's fishy.
>>15903426 Vyro did stomp on something before leaving Vermillion a few chapters ago. Which I now assume is the second detonator.
Anonymous
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>>15903249 I can't into transparency
Anonymous
>>15903249 Great chapter. Vyro and Grayson are great once they start getting along.
You made a type though about halfway through. When Grayson says “You aren’t in a position to be striking a deal here, madman,”, you refer to Grayson as Vyro.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15904703 Caught it and changed it for the FF page. Thanks, man
Gui 4210 4586 7945
>>15904727 Not only it was long enough, but it deserved to be a part of its own. Great job.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15908652 >>15905711 >>15904703 >>15903689 >>15903426 Glad everyone liked the part. Much easier to write than the last one.
Anonymous
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>>15910226 What's the next one about? I remember you said a while ago part 17 is mostly about how the minor characters live.
Roland
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>>15903249 Those empty, ageless eyes. I can't wait for more Grayson flashbacks. His transformation into the man he is must be fascinating.
Anonymous
>>15903689 No that was the detonator to blow up the refugee camps.
Anonymous
>>15911656 ...which are in vermillion
Anonymous
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>>15911820 Oh fuck my bad. Thought they were in Celadon for some reason.