We've had fic threads before, but this one is different.
As you may or may not know, November is National Novel Writing Month. This time of year, aspiring authors from all over the world set their noses to the grind stone in an attempt to hammer out 50,000 words in 30 days. They all have hopes and dreams of one day being successful authors.
Fuck that noise.
As a writer by trade, I've participated in this event several times over course of my life. This year I decided, in honor of X and Y, I would spend this month of writing with you, /vp/.
That's right- you.
Welcome to the Tohjo Incident: 50 years after Red, Blue, and Yellow. The Supercontinent of Tohjo, made up of Kanto and Johto is beginning to unravel as separatist factions from both sides of Mt. Silver call for sovereignty, autonomy, and war.
>The story so far. Second Half of the Celadon Arc 10: And into the Fire
10.5: All that for A Single Laugh
11: The Common Man
12: A Brief Moment of Hesitation
12.5: Junior
13: Santiago
14: Picking Up the Pieces
14.5: The Last Firefighter
15: From the Ashes
16: The Pale
16.5: R. I. G
I will no longer be posting old pastebins in the OP. The story can be followed here:
>fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident I will post updates in the form of pastebins and fanfiction page edits. Pastebins are available as soon as it's live!
Index Jeff has provided an index of characters. READ THIS ONLY AFTER YOU HAVE READ UP TO THE LATEST PART TO AVOID SPOILERS
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit ANON! Your very own POKEMON legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with POKEMON awaits! Let's go!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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A bit to get started. If you have an idea, feel free to use this as a jumping point or ignore this completely.>Name: >Team: >Home Region: >Affiliation (Kanto, Johto un affiliated) >Trainer type and style:
Anonymous
Oh damn I was wondering when a new thread would come up
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15924502 I never left, friend
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
It lives. It was dead when I woke up like 12 hours (Yay Yurop).
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15925559 Yeah, I woke up in the middle of the night and saw that little red x
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15925645 Now we can try and keep it alive a bit more.
Roland
I was a little disappointed to find the old thread had been deleted. But, I had faith that OP would return to us. Like he always does.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15926185 >>15926223 and what better way to kick off the thread than Part 17 hype
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
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>>15926223 It wasn't deleted it 404'd.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15927118 >>15926458 >[10:59 AM. Tin Tower Gardens. Tin Tower. Ecruteak City. Three days later.] Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15928050 Oh boy.
Letting the thread sit in a tab and provide me with updates as they come means efficiant stalking Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15928068 >He looked up at the sky, as he did every day. All his life he had spent in Ecruteak he had searched for the rainbow bird of legend that was said to call Tin Tower home. Tin Tower had always enraptured him, even from a young age, as it did to many of Johto’s youth. Though he could see glimpses of the future, he had never seen the legendary bird. >“Oh, maybe tomorrow,” he said wistfully. Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15928616 http://pastebin.com/KwSMcvcU get in here lurking friends, let's get this one up and running.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15930034 Compared to Celedon, this seems like such a random target. But then again, who knows what logic the perpetrators are following.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15930206 If at first you don't succeed, try, try again.
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
Wow, new action, then moving to Hoenn so quickly after? Exactly when were you going to focus on a new region?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15930622 Like, I've said before, the focus is not shifting to Hoenn. Some characters are going there
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
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>>15931253 Ahh, my mistake.
Anonymous
>>15931253 >VYRO CONFIRMED FOR HOENN Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15932381 He's going to
Saffron first
Roland
>>15930206 >http://pastebin.com/KwSMcvcU Nah, when you think about it, these targets kind of make sense. From a meta stand point, Kanto seems more economically developed than Johto, which means Celadon would be a prime target. While on the other hand, Johto, being rich in culture and history, will take great offense to watching that particular location fall. If anything, from a by stander's perspective, this looks like retaliation from Kanto toward Johto. Both sides have been hit close to the heart, and it only looks like they're gonna blame each other.
So when the bombs didn't go off in Vermillion and Kanto didn't react as strongly as predicted, why not give the other side a little push?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15933192 This guy's got it
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gonna start working on 18 very soon, we're getting close. If you're interested in closure, some subarcs will not get resolved by the end of this arc. Like Miles/Molly/Vi, that's pretty much put away until the next arc, etc.
Anonymous
>>15934958 >The three best characters getting shelved fucking dropped
i hope at least garth shows up
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15935576 Next arc is in like 2 parts friend
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15935576 I'll ask this before the mods ban me for my previous shitposting, mind defining what arcs mean?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15936431 I've decided to break this thing down into "arcs" which are roughly defined, but clearly delineated segments. Usually comprised of 20 parts (not counting X.5s) that cover a certain point. This arc, 1-20 is the Celadon Arc
Anonymous
>>15936465 So Miles/Molly/Vyro are focused on in the next arc which is in two parts?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15936522 Rather, their stories will get resumed once the second arc kicks off. But yeah. It's not that they won't appear, but that theres things I need to cover on the tail end of the arc for structural purposes and so threads that are, more or less, neatly tied, will be put on just a short hiatus.
Part 21 is the beginning of the Second Arc
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15936605 >[3:32 AM. Cianwood City Hospital. Cianwood City. Earlier that morning.] >Octavius rolled over in his sleep. Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15938051 Bump for incoming part 18
Jon
>>15938814 I am hyped, 17 was intriguing, always liked Morty, I take it he's somehow related to Claudia?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15938974 Father, which makes him Agatha's son, because Claudia is Agatha's granddaughter.
Jon
>>15939003 Interesting, care to say anything about the characters showing up before the end of this arc?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15939084 Octaivus is Part 18; 18.5 is Moira and Ian; 19 is Blue and Mia; 20 is a grab bag.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15938974 >“Son of a bitch,” he muttered. >As he slipped away... Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15939274 >When our healers identified the arrhythmia in your heart, I always imagined you would somehow overcome it; that it would be your greatest stepping stone. When you were told, that is when your fascination with time began. >“Some might call it a death wish.” Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Roland
>>15941215 This is the birth of some glorious shipping.
Brace yourself for hotness.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15941856 I doubt it's /ss/ when one of them's 80 and a rock and the other's dead
Roland
>>15941897 I actually had SantiagoXOctavius in mind, or am I missing something?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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Please leave some feedback if you've read the last couple of parts; I know many of you guys might have been lost in the thread pruning of last night. I'm done writing for the night. Got to be up in the morning pretty early for my some function at my sister's school that I'm speaking at. I'll be up to answer any questions, the usual.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15942137 oh
I thought you were talking about OctaviusXSobi
ohhhhhh Anonymous
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Rock must be the shittiest element to perfect because jesus christ that's a shitty fate
Roland
>>15942263 I hope this makes my previous post more hot.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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Hopefully this one doesn't die overnight like the last one. If kind nocturnal/ eurobro anons can leave a question or a comment, or just a general bump, I'd be much obliged.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
I awaken from having passed out and slept on the couch all night!
>>15941215 Truly he's sleeping like a stone.
This is a saying in my native language that probably sounds weird translated but I had nothing better Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15943928 Well we have "sleeping like a rock"
makes the cut fairly well.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15944030 Well at 6 am you don't try to pick between Rock and Stone, you just take whatever comes first.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15944058 Ex soviet bloc country?
thats my best guess
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15944150 Nah, boring middle of Europe where it's cold. Pretty sure it's like 40 F right now.
Roland
>>15944030 Well, here's a general question. Now that we have the concept of Sages in your story, I won't ask too much since you'll probably delve deeper into their lore later, but care to elaborate on what might the other types might become once they transcend? Or that a surprise for later chapters?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15944420 I'm expecting a puddle, a sword, and a forest fire.
Anonymous
Being a sage sounds like total ass
Roland
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>>15944460 Nurses are gonna have a hell of a time getting that rock out of that room now that I think about it.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15944420 it's not so much a transcendence as an attunement. "Defensive" types are different from "offensive Types which are different from "support types"
Nothing what I say right now is actually canon because the idea for anything else besides Sobi and Rock Perfection is ambiguous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15944523 He's still conscious inside his shell, waiting for his heart condition to pass
conceivably
Anonymous
>>15944606 Oh okay, I thought he was perma-rocked. That sounds a lot better now knowing he can control it/
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15944606 So really, it's a self induced coma.
Roland
>>15944606 >>15944678 Right, that makes more sense now. With the idea being ambiguous as it is, I'm anticipating all sorts of crazy shit to happen.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15944760 There aren't many, if any, Sages left. The last generation was reluctant to take on apprentices.
Only Sobi and one or two others did, and none of their apprentices chose to take up the title.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15944831 I'm expecting the last Grass sage to be a tree somewhere.
Anonymous
>>15945648 >special christmas chapter >"let's all go chop down a christmas tree!" >"wow this tree is perfect!" >tree turns into a man >"you bitches best get that saw away from my leg or I'm going to have to hurt somebody" Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15945856 It's a Christmas Miracle!
Anonymous
>>15946280 > "No really Leaf me alone." Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Roland
>>15946908 I swear that was me. Went off posting somewhere else and I forgot my name.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15946947 Been there. The annoying thing is I'm not on my own computer and that doesn't even remember any names at all so I have to type in my name and trip every time I post right now.
Roland
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15947847 Pre-lunch bump from the cold of Europe.
Hype Continued.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
What is the deal with the sages? Are they like pokemon Jedi or something?
Anonymous
Pizza Lunch Bump
>>15949146 I'd imagine they're a order of specialization trainers that have their center in Johto.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15949458 I forgot my trip.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
7 AM here in in the cold and rainy Umited States of America Good morning all
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15950306 It's not raining here. Yet. Looks like it could decide to rain at any time.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15951192 Bump from behind a camera dressed far too nicely. 18.5 coming soon.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15951595 Being dressed too nicely is overrated.
Grayson
bump I think I've been away from this thread for too long. Sages are cool, seems like a super 'Johto' concept, in a mystical and traditional sort of way. I've really liked these recent parts, I'll try to keep up with reading them if I have time in the future
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15953104 I'm going to say yes, you've been gone for too long.
Anonymous
>>15953375 I skip chapters if they seem boring
Anonymous
>>15953902 here's a rebel that plays by his own rules
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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I'm slacking and finally got around starting on season 2 of Arrow. Gotta bump somehow
Anonymous
Bump from phone because I got banned
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
The new XCOM expansion is pretty neat. Then I go as I usually go when my play the game, get bent over the table by the RNG and go "Fuck it!" to the whole thing. Looking forward to the next part
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15956734 Never really dabbled with it.
Meanwhile my HG Build Strike Gundam shipped earlier today and I have A Link Between Worlds coming in next week.
Bamp, chitchatthreadmodeon Anonymous
>>15957032 >>15956734 >>15956279 Well that took forever.
I'mback nd writing.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15957094 Happens all the time.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15957477 So I'd ask If you'll all bear with me for a bit because I've had to prtty much abandon my outline since Part 15 or so. I Had Part 19 pretty much firmly in my head, but not so much anymore.
Gotta hammer that out
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15957510 Improvisation is always fun. It made for fun "Story Essays" back in school.
Roland
>>15956734 >>15957032 While we're on the subject of not pokemon and not OP's story:
Yeah, I just started building gunpla but I'm torn between buying more and picking up the new xcom expansion. Maybe I should cave in and just get both?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15958489 Well Build Strike is going to be my first and I haven't played the newer XCOMs. So I'll do the only right thing and say get both.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>[8:22 PM. Foothills of Mt. Silver. Mt. Silver. The same day.] >Ian found her staring at the mountain.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15959855 In this part
Someone gets a new friend
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15960318 Hot Crazy Mountain Sex? Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15960457 >“Werner always talked about this happening one day. How we’re too different to live in peace. I always thought he was being dramatic, but I guess it’s his job to think about stuff like that.” >“It’s not the end of the world.” >“It might as well be.” Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15961044 Hype.
God I hate weekdays because I have to get up at 6 am. It's just past midnight and I'm having trouble staying awake.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15961105 Tiredness won. Time to crash and play catch up in the morning.
ralphie gamefreak !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15961585 sorry, wrong trip
Anonymous
>>15961605 YOU'RE RALPHIE GAMEFREAK?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15961585 >>15961585 ALL ABOARD THE MOIAN SHIP!
Jon
>>15961585 Cool part 18.5, Shipping intensifies.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15961992 >>15961832 Part 19 is already in the works
We're finishing this ish tonight, friends
Jon
>>15962053 You writing while watching
showderp? Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15962206 Who keeps making these Master Balls?
It's like there is always one in existence at any time and it's in the ass end of nowhere, or in one of the Criminal Team's bases
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15962242 All the Masterballs in existence are prototypes, a failed proof-of-concept. Unfeasible to mass produce. Essentially, a highly efficient trinket.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15962298 If it's essentially a load of bumph then why do people like Team Rocket keep stealing them?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15962479 Because at the time of RBY, Silph Co was still working out the kinks. It would take several attempts for their engineers to declare it unfeasible.
The Masterballs throughout the world have almost all been used, and they do indeed work 100% of the time.
Anonymous
>>15962479 They work, they're just extremely expensive to mass-produce probably.
Roland
>>15962479 Lets say we build ourselves a bike to sell. But not just any bike. This is gonna be the best bike ever. With rockets and shit. Oh and its purple.
After several additions and customization we're finally ready to present our bike. This bike works. Its not impossible to build. But because its so freaking expensive, the company you're pitching it to, says they can't sell the bike.
If you want a better example, think of Homer's Dream car.
ralphie gamefreak !jVSs2PF9Os
>>15962206 >“I met with your predecessor in this very boardroom before you were born. Do not think your status somehow gives you an edge in our talks.” >Blue shrugged. “You seem like you’ve got things under control here.” Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15962725 Goddamn shit fuck this is annoying
multi tasking is hard
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
>>15962542 >>15962568 >>15962594 Then the only remaining question is, does that particular Master Ball have something in it?
Or does he keep it on his desk because "Fuck it I have more money then god"
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15962763 What a good question
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15962725 >Blue shrugged. “You seem like you’ve got things under control here.” >“I do, Champion. I do. And I pride myself on that fact. I take pride in the stability of this company, this city, and this region. What can you do for me in that regard?” >Blue sat up and stared at the man. “That depends, Mr. President, on what you can do for me, in that regard.” Jon
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15964314 It ceases to be funny the fifth time
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Gonna start writing part 20 soon. So close to the end. I can almost taste it. Also, today marks the halfway point for the actual NaNo challenge. For those of you interested, the target word count is somewhere around 25k by the end of tonight, With Part 19, we've just hit 34,014 words, literally over nine thousand words above out target. And they'll just keep coming
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15965154 For all those wondering, I'm waiting for the arc to end before I update the Index. I'm doing a massive super-update here.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15965396 Seems like a god plan. I look forward to the update. Again, I can provide ages of anybody your missing
>>15965431 Thanks jeff
Jon
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15965469 That would actually be useful as shit, I'm missing so much for the newer characters
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15965696 Just gimme some names and I'll fire em off
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
>>15965851 Santiago
Hector
Red
Dorian Jr.
Anonymous
>>15965947 >>15965947 Santiago- 29
Hector - 31
Red - 60
Junior - 51
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15966170 God damn connection errors
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15966170 Thanks, will add to the index in the megaupdate.
Anonymous
Banned guy again, posting from phone. Fucking awesome so far. Can't wait for the 2nd arc.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15966582 Dat's sum dedication
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
RECAP BEFORE PART 20 Going into the as of yet unnamed new arc, we have several strands at work. Off the top of my head: 1.) Who are the Johto Four? 2.) Octavius achieving Rock Perfection to halt his failing heart 3.) Grayson and all his bizniz 4.) Dorian and Junior 5.) Blue as the new Champion of the League 6.) Lorelei waking up 7.) Claudia's investigations 8.) Ian and Moira going up Mt. Silver. 9.) Miles/Molly/Vi 10.) The Celadon Diaspora 11.) Alphonso and the Celadon Contingency at Tin Tower If there's anything else I missed, let me know.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15967779 >[3:30 PM. Outside the Blackthorn City Ranger Academy. Blackthorn City. The same day.] Anonymous
>>15967915 Past of
Miles' ranger experience when?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Index Jeff !vzjWIHbbuk
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>>15969642 Fucking old faggot I hate that guy
On a more positive note, the mega-update will be up soon-ish
Roland
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>>15969642 And so it begins.
Anonymous
ded thread ded fic nobody cares anymore op
Porter
>>15969642 Check in after a day to see all these new parts. Fucking awesome.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15970964 It was a huge marathon of writing
>>15970951 :^)
Anonymous
>>15971313 clearly no one's reading this anymore
its a graveyard in here
Roland
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>>15972086 Seems like a slow night anyway.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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I awaken from my slumber to three more parts. Holy so much stuff.
Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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Johto has sovereignty. Yay! But it doesn't feel as good I expected it to be. Something isn't right about the circumstances
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>15972086 Clearly not. OP said he has tons if individual people checking in on the fic frequently. And the thread's normally fast Saturday/Sunday.
Anonymous
>>15977165 i guess its because the last thread died so suddenly that people simply didn't think it worth their time to look for the new one
Anonymous
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>>15978218 It's just about getting back up on the horse.
Anonymous
>>15978218 Last thread 404'd because no one bumped it.
Anonymous
>>15979561 Yes, that's called a thread dying
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>15980068 what part of "the thread died" do you not understand?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15980607 The ladies will never quiet down.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15980691 Now that the first Arc is over I'd like to hear you guys' opinions on it as a whole; what you liked, what you didn't like, what I should keep up, what I should tone down, etc., etc.
Anonymous
>>15982413 I think you're doing really great, no major complaints. We should definitely do more to get more anons in on this I don't see why more people aren't posting.
I guess I want to see more of the smaller characters rather than just the champs, titans and gym leaders.
But that's a weak suggestion because you've already done most of that shit.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15982413 I liked the attention to detail you had and the descriptive battles. How we got to know how many different people reacted to what was going on around them.
However, getting all those reactions came at the cost of a lot of second half felt so... Self contained. There wasn't really much of a red thread at the end.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15982773 >>15982721 If you'll believe my contrivences, the first arc is almost entirely, well, a prologue.
In the traditional 3 Act set up, there is no real threat at the end of the first Act; the good guys win, more or less.
The second act is when things get nasty.
Roland
>>15982413 Yeah no real complaints over here as well. The one thing that did surprise me were the sages and rock perfection. That kind of came out of left field but not in a bad way.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>15982876 I love the Industrial vs. Mysticism in Kanto/Johto. That's mainly where the idea came from
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15983249 HE'S SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>15983249 what the shit man
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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Slacking pays off, I caught up with Arrow /Happy
>>15983249 Growlithe. It keeps happening!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15983249 And with that, we officially come to a close on the Celadon Arc.
Tune in next time for another exciting episode of the Tohjo Incident!
Part 21 confirmed for pretty soon Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15984022 [HYPE INTENSIFIES]
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15984022 >[1:22 PM. Underground Café. Goldenrod City Underground. Johto Independence Day.] >“You’re taking an awful risk coming here, Claudia.” Anonymous
>>15984039 Kouta pls. Go suck on Baron's banana.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15984873 Already they have an official Independence Day. That was fast.
>>15984918 Kouta's not strong enough for that.
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
>>15984873 Oh snap - if we in Goldenrod now, does that mean...
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15985005 Its much easier than saying 3 days ago when the last part was so short and in the future
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15985006 can you give me Aiden's character again? I lost some guys when my computer updated overnight and I hadn't saved the BBoN
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15985165 I just meant, I'd have thought it would take more than three days to gain a Independence Day.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15985228 I could have worded it as Day of the Johto Declaration, but that doesn't really have the same ring
Anonymous
>>15985005 B-But muh gay subplot??
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15985252 I'll give you that.
>>15985270 But that's Hassy and Jounouchi trying to suck up to Kaito.
And you also have the future brother love between Micchy and Takatora.
And then you also have the love triangle between Kouta, Mai and Micchy.
Anonymous
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>>15985193 Aiden was born and raised in Kanto (pick a city), and was the oldest of four kids; he was usually the babysitter, as his father was a member of an unsanctioned fighting gym. Aiden learned the basics of battling from the guys at the gym, but was always more compassionate towards pokemon than his father. Aiden left when he was 17 to travel both regions alongside his Chatot, who was his first pokemon when he was young. After traveling through Johto, and meeting the daycare couple, he realized that raising pokemon was his calling in life, and began working at the daycare. Over the next eight years, he worked at various daycare centers in and around Goldenrod city, while still traveling throughout the regions periodically. Now, at the age of 25, he is looking to settle down and start a business for himself. Aiden is not the best battler in the world, but he provides such love and care to any pokemon that he works with that they are much stronger than they normally would be. Now cut off from Viridian, Aiden misses most of his family (except for his father), and simply does the best that he can to help everyone he meets.
He also has a Sunkern (Astrid) and Dragonair (Elliot) who are two of his newer companions, but his Chatot know that it will always be first in Aiden's heart.
Anonymous
So I finally decided to bite and check out this thread after seeing it pop up a bunch of times and I gotta say, damn I'm really impressed. What exactly is this and how does it work? I see that people are asking for "more anons to join in" or something to that effect; how specifically would that be done? Introducing new characters and such?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15985644 You provide some trainers; I put them in.
Several of the characters are Anons- from the Elite Four, to run of the mill trainers. Villains and heroes. I have provided a rough rubric of the easiest way (for me) to get your character in the big book of names. I'll repost it here.
A bit to get started. If you have an idea, feel free to use this as a jumping point or ignore this completely.
>Name: >Team: >Home Region: >Affiliation (Kanto, Johto un affiliated) >Trainer type and style: Vanity !Od2bLGGtgg
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>>15985760 Now that the first arc is finished, i'm curious to see how my character turns out, relevant to the plot.
Anonymous
>>15985760 That's awesome. I was actually involved in something like this a couple of years back, but it ended up falling through because of loss interest and we never ended up going anywhere. I do have an old character concept though so I guess I'll be using that.
>Name: Charlotte (surname Langley, but usually kept secret), age 25
>Team: Joltik (Fuzzy)
Whimsicott (Fluffy)
Sharpedo (Pike)
Garchomp (Flynn)
>Home Region: Hoenn (currently travelling)
>Affiliation: "Unaffiliated", but works as a journalist for a small, somewhat niche news company based in Hoenn
>Trainer type and style: Doesn't like direct combat prefers to attain her goals without having to risk battling, but in a pinch will send out her Garchomp, or Sharpedo if in an area with water, and prioritizes speed and safety over actually winning the battle. Whimsicott can also fight, but doesn't focus on direct hits and is much more suited in helping with Charlotte's job than combat. Joltik does not battle at all and is used only for information/evidence-gathering.
This is getting pretty long, whew. I'll be following this up with a basic character blurb because character limit, but this is just an outline and you're certainly welcome to change things up if you deem it necessary.
Anonymous
>>15986559 Former League hopeful turned investigative journalist, Charlotte met Gible as a child and later received a Carvanha from a friend who could no longer raise it. The two are bitter rivals which makes it difficult for them to get along, but they do cooperate. Learning about the various criminal Teams in school and also having witnessed the damage of organized crime first-hand, she tried to train for the Pokemon League challenge so she could be strong enough to stamp out crime. Losing spectacularly to the second member of the Elite Four at age 19, she gives up her direct approach and turns to journalism instead, letting her work behind the shadows. Hired a year later by a small but steadily-growing news company in Hoenn, she travels the world searching for a scoop that will both increase her company's audience base and also bring justice to evildoers. Five years of experience in the industry has given her keen people skills and an uncanny ability to talk information out of people. Though the company is growing it's still small so she occasionally runs into money troubles, and every potential lead is a potential meal ticket.
Charlotte dresses in casual but nonrestrictive clothing both to give her the air of a commoner as well as to facilitate sneaking around, which is not required of her from her job but she does anyways for the sake of the scoop. She carries both a large, standard camera and a hidden pen-camera, as well as a voice recorder.
Anonymous
>>15986863 Holy fucking Christ kid, you're meant to post:
>name >team >region >affiliation with kanto or johto >trainer type and style (basics of your trainer) Not a whole fucking backstory and subplot. You post your character and Orzo finds a spot for him/her and makes up his/her own background/story. He's writing, not you.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15986917 I did say feel free to add to or ignore it. Both Vyro and Grayson had backstories.
Anonymous
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>>15986917 Fair enough. I'm not saying that he has to use it in its entirety, but it's there if he does want it. The "subplot" is more to explain her character history and give context rather than anything else, and serves no real purpose otherwise.
But hey, whoever calls the shots gets to pick what he does. I'm just pitching an idea.
Anonymous
>>15986946 >Both the most beloved characters had prewritten backstories Interesting trend.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15987177 I got a shipping by not even having one. That's gotta count for something.
Anonymous
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>>15987207 >Implying VyroxNoivern isn't a thing YOUR SHIP MEANS NOTHING NEXT TO MY OTP
Anonymous
>>15987207 There is a milesxtrap ship?
Where!?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15987267 Pretty sure it was just "Me" me that was a trap. I think I just saw someone named MilesxMolly a shipping. I don't think any hot crazy wilderness sex story exist
Hint Hint Nudge Nudge Anonymous
>>15987424 Make this a thing pls
I knew Molly wanted teh D
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15987538 Considering where we are, I would not be surprised if it happens.
Anonymous
>>15988115 But they can't go off and fuck whenever, they have a travelling companion!
Oh god wait. I imagine that if they left Vyro alone and went to have sex, Vyro would film it in secret and sell the video online to fund some evil plan.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15988164 Curses, foiled again
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15988164 >>15988195 Molly obviously gets off by being watched Anonymous
>>15988164 >tfw they have so much sex that Vyro ends up dominating the entire porn industry with the videos and literally becomes THE SEX KING Roland
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>>15988164 Why does this turn me on.
Anonymous
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>>15988164 >>15988266 Where's the guy who wrote the Vyro fanfic?
This is gold.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
>>15988446 I'm picturing Molly and Miles walking together, doing romantic things along the way, having picnics, holding hands, kissing, all that shit, while Vyro pops out of bushes videotaping them,
Anonymous
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Can Stalker!Vyro be canon pls All this is making me laugh the hardest I've laughed in weeks.
Miles
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>>15988506 Haha glad to see nothing's changed.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Is the twist then Miles get NTR'd by Vyro?
Anonymous
>>15988719 Nah I think Miles will take down Vyro or some other bad guy to protect Molly. It says he's got a typhlosion and pinsir, but the typhlosion got shrek'd by Garth
Anonymous
>>15988719 >Vyro >Attracting anybody Do you even know how incompetent that guy is? The only thing he could attract is the police.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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>>15988853 >Shrek'd by Garth >Garth Garth is his doctor buddy, you mean Gillian?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15988854 Who knows what few areas he is competent in.
>>15988855 And it begins.
Anonymous
Jon
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>>15988855 Yay now shit's starting to rev up, keep doing what you're doing Orzo, its excellent
Anonymous
Hoo boy. Johto is starting to wildly blame people and attempt independence. That won't go down well.
Anonymous
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>>15989369 It's like the story's really set in Quebec!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15988855 >[9:00 PM. Mt. Silver Trail. Mt. Silver. The previous day.] Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15989443 Oh boy.
Stalking while watching Super Hero Time is always fun Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15989546 >>15989616 I'm off to work soon for the evening; I'll be back later with part 22.
You all know the workplace drill. Gimme something to read while at work.
I'll probably make a new thread when I get back.
Roland
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>>15989902 >http://pastebin.com/gbCyTSaD Things are starting to pick up. You certainly are on a roll OP.
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
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Nice! I love the vibe that Aiden is sort-of an unwilling participant in whatever's going on - it fits well with his personality. I can't wait to see what's going to go down in this new arc. One thing I noticed, though, is that you accidentally called him Ian at the very end. Either that, or maybe Ian is just a master of disguise, which could be totally awesome. I'm eager to see what's next!
Roland
>>15985193 Do you still have my characters by any chance after that loss? I think I submitted two, Roland and Calvin.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15990821 I'm missing Roland
Jon
Roland
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>>15990943 Ah well shoot. That was back when you first started at the beginning of the month. I'll have to go and rewrite him. No problem. Gives me the chance to brush up on him a bit.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15990990 No
Guess I lost more than I thought
Jon
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>>15991016 All gravy, I'll repost him when I find the file I saved it in.
Roland
>>15991016 Hopefully you haven't left for work yet. This time I'll actually save the document for future reference.
>Name: Roland “Roulette” Carde >Team: Dusknoir as well as several randoms >Home Region: Hoenn >Affiliation: Rangers/None >Trainer type and style: A veteran ranger, Roland has an unhealthy obsession with gambling and foreign western movies. Frivolous and inattentive at first glance, many rangers question his dedication to the job. His fixations on his hobbies have widely influenced his dress, style, and his reputation; many rangers assigning him a variety of nicknames, from “Roulette” to “The Wild Card”. On the job Roland is often seen sporting a poncho or duster jacket to accompany his usual ranger attire. To add risk to his battles, Roland custom built a large revolver to fire pokeballs, with at least five chambers loaded with a random assortment of pokemon. Spinning the chamber before battle, Roland relies on luck to deliver the right pokemon for the task at hand. Despite keeping his team in a seemingly random rotation, Roland always leaves one spot on hand reserved for his Dusknoir, a companion of his since the start of his career. While his seemingly uncaring attitude and risky battle style have often put him at odds with his newer rangers, a small handful would testify that Roland would never hesitate to place himself in the line of fire to save an individual.
Jon
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>>15991016 And found it
>Name: Jon >Team: Feraligatr, Heracross, Darmanitan and Gliscor >Home Region: Johto >Affiliation: Un-affiliated >Trainer type and style: Jon likes to travel round the world hunting for ruins, myths, caves and mountains that may lead to rare pokemon, not neccessarily a good person but not a bad guy, just indifferent and focused on research. Gets distracted easily by bits and bobs that catch his eye. Usually starts a battle with Gliscor to annoy the opponent and whittle their pokemon down then brings out Heracross and Darmanitan to clear up whats left, with Feraligatr being his last resort if shit hits the fan.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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Roland is quite the man
Anonymous
>>15991825 Sounds like Ronald is replaced by a less gay selfless character already
Miles Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
They'll all be sexed anyway, so who cares.
Anonymous
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>>15991016 While this is happening, I might as well suggest
>Name: Fautif >Team: Lucario, Foretress, Gengar, Hydregion, Shedinja >Home Region: Sinnoh >Affiliation: Unaffiliated, but detests insurgents and terrorists, so he is more likely to side with kanto than johto, etc >Trainer type and style: Fautif would have been counted as a rising star in the pokemon league, if she was actually interested in regulated battling. She however likes to battle and travel, looking for a new place to be. Doesn't have any particular animosity or love for the governments, but hates Enemy teams and terrorists for causing large amounts of problems that she feels morally obligated to stop. Her battling style focuses on tactic ability, and will often surprise by the book trainers by having multiple mons out at once to allow for easier switches when they are in a bad matchup.
Yeah, her team/tactics are smogon incarnate, I know. Roland
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>>15992158 By the end of the month, everyone is gonna get laid.
Miles
>>15992124 >implying I'd take off my name to talk mad shit in niggers I honestly don't understand why people like my character that much anyway he's pretty much a dick that lost despite a type advantage
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15992280 I vote the shipping.
Honestly I don't have a clue Miles
Anonymous
>Shipping Molly/Miles >Not Vyro/Noivern disgusting
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>15992280 Pic saved, thanks.
Miles
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>>15992516 >not wanting hot mountain sex Roland
>>15992516 I for one support Lexie/Vyro
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>15992812 Better add manly pedophile to that profile.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>15992959 The more the better. Or something.
Anonymous
Bump because this is the best shit.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>15994012 And now with more hints of erotica and weird fetishes than ever before.
I think Anonymous
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>>15994071 Clearly, by the time this is over it will be the best
action monster collection visual novel that needs to be made ever.
Miles
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Caught up finally, real life is a bitch.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Man you guys must be po'd that any romance will be a tasteful fade to black
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Final mention about Miles and Molly getting it on while Vyro watches, with Molly getting off from it and then Miles getting NTR'd.In other words, it's 3 am, I'm dead tired and will fall asleep now
Anonymous
>>15996069 God dammit
>>15996070 I want this to be canon
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>15996105 One of the first things I said was I don't do smut.
Anonymous
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>>15996124 But that's a blatant lie because you CLEARLY wrote all the Vyro chapters and there's nothing sexier.
Anonymous
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>>15996124 Then just fade to black to hell.
Anonymous
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A little romance wouldn't hurt anyone..
Anonymous
>character was accepted but still no sign of her>;=;
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
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>>15997400 Patience. It's a little tough to fit in so many characters, but if anyone can, it's Orzo. He's got some master plan.
Also, it'd probably help if you'd mention your character's name.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI