We've had fic threads before, but this one is different.
As you may or may not know, November is National Novel Writing Month. This time of year, aspiring authors from all over the world set their noses to the grind stone in an attempt to hammer out 50,000 words in 30 days. They all have hopes and dreams of one day being successful authors.
Fuck that noise.
As a writer by trade, I've participated in this event several times over course of my life. This year I decided, in honor of X and Y, I would spend this month of writing with you, /vp/.
That's right- you.
Welcome to the Tohjo Incident: 50 years after Red, Blue, and Yellow. The Supercontinent of Tohjo, made up of Kanto and Johto is beginning to unravel as separatist factions from both sides of Mt. Silver call for sovereignty, autonomy, and war.
Welcome to the Three Day Arc. This Arc will bridge the three day gap between Johto's declaration of independence and
Grayson's return to Saffron We're nearing the end of the Three Days Arc. One part left, then season 2.
Previous thread here
>>16191481 New Arc:
21: Underground
22: Carrde
23: Hook
24: Underrated
25: Wild Carrde
26: Line
27: Undercover
28: Trump Carrde
29: Sinker (New for this Thread!)
I will no longer be posting old pastebins in the OP. The story can be followed here:
>fanfiction dot net/s/9818574/1/The-Tohjo-Incident I will post updates in the form of pastebins and fanfiction page edits. Pastebins are available as soon as it's live!
Spoiler Alert: The Index has Spoilers. #tybj
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RHEi4gTftIGWNQm_Ubh4z25MRkxiPHYBiEYpKFWPScQ/edit >le full monty meme paste http://pastebin.com/Q6EfUjuq ANON! Your very own POKEMON legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with POKEMON awaits! Let's go!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16266501 So, because I am so good with Microsoft Word, I didn't save my recovered Big Book of Names.
That being said, I need so bodies. With the next Arc coming up, I need trainers. If you already submitted and still have your trainer, please re submit it. If you're already in, please repost your mons so I can get it down as best I can
Now, a little bit to get started, feel free to ignore this or add to this
>Name >Pokemon (3 Max) >Home Region >Trainer type and style This is just a suggestion; do with it as you feel.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Vyro you absolute son of a bitch The Sex King strikes again, but this time he's ACTUALLY getting women too for once.
Anonymous
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>>16266584 holy ass
vyro god dammit
Anonymous
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>>16266584 Shit man, this is starting to heat up
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>[3:22 PM. Oswald Hanes’ Personal Log. All recordings property of THE SILPH COMPANY, Saffron City, Kanto. Do not alter or duplicate. Isolated Testing and Observation Center Codename: {FARAWAY ISLAND} Day 128. Begin latest entry.] I think they’re on to me.
Anonymous
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Awwww shit son And now that means the filler arcs have that one last part before we officially steamroll into ACT 3 WOOOOO
Anonymous
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Damn, Vyro is a son of a bitch. I like it. Good job Orzo. Really been enjoying this fanfic (and I actually never bother to read any because of how cheesy, pokeporn they can be)
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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Last bump of the day for me Excite
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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Aw shit man, I did wake up to lots of crazy.Nothing like ten hours of sleep
Anonymous
>>16266584 Fucking mad. Miles isn't dead, but I can't really see him coming back.
I think that ending paragraph existed for a reason tho. Maybe he'll come back..
Anonymous
>>16271435 He'll be back. That final scene would be really sloppy writing if it wasn't specifically meant to show that he wasn't dead yet. It would also be really lousy writing just to revisit that only to show him die. He's also the only person (other than the man himself) that knows Vi and Vyro are the same person, which is a pretty important detail I think.
Anonymous
>>16271435 Look into context clues. He's always explained as "big" or "strong". Orzo goes out of his way to make you know that he's a strong guy. In the last scene the chains were described as "old".
Put 2 and 2 together.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16271608 Revenge will happen.
Anonymous
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>>16271608 You're probably right.
Kudos to Orzo, this is the first fanfic to make me feel emotions when characters get hurt.
Anonymous
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>>16271527 If anything that last part set him up to be more powerful. He knows who Vyro is.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16266584 Ohh man the plot thickens. If Miles somehow escapes Vyro is in a world of shit.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16272944 You could say he
would walk miles for Molly Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16275456 >>16276622 Bout to head home from work; part 30 this afternoon. 31 and Season 2 tonight
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16277049 Some days I wish I had work....
All the hype.
Anonymous
>>16272944 I doubt he'll get away.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16277350 Don't ruin the possibility of Miles
walking miles for Molly Anonymous
>>16277724 I'm not sure if Orzo's going for the:
"foreshadowing possible rise of a trapped character"
or
"yeah that character's fucked too bad lol"
Either way that was a great chapter.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16278075 Being left to die in a hole is the best way to breed a revenge driven character out to save his love. Everyone knows that.
Anonymous
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>>16279234 That's actually true.
Aiden !3I50et5IU.
>>16279234 >implying Molly is his love Anonymous
>>16279967 who else would it be
Anonymous
>>16280015 A proxy for his sense of responsibility for his supposedly dead comrades
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16280015 You are never the first; all you can do is pray you're the last
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16280015 >>16280107 Wow, I just realized that I totally misread the question and gave an answer that wasn't even related.
Anonymous
>>16278075 No.
Miles left behind his friends when they bailed from the bombed out city. He believes they are dead and wasn't willing to turn back.
Now the bitter irony is HE is left behind thought to be dead.
Anonymous
>>16280195 Well I think you're right about Molly being a proxy of his sense of responsibility and his "dead comrades".
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16280282 Gotta project it onto something.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16267322 Part 30 incoming
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16281167 Victory.
Also...
2spooky4me. Silph is dealing with some crazy shit no one should touch.
Anonymous
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>>16281167 [CLONING INTENSIFIES]
...shit, did they clone Giovanni?
Anonymous
Anonymous
Miles
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>>16266584 Goddamnit even my Fan Fic character can't hold a steady relationship without being left to die.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16281167 Jesus christ. Come back from work and this is what I find.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16281167 Part 31 kicks off Season 2 in a region to the fic starring 2 minor characters from the fiest arc who will become hugely important.
Hype Question #6
Who are they?
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16286494 Hayley and Lexie
You heard it here first, folks
Anonymous
After you're done with this are you going to make it into an epub for us OP?
Anonymous
>>16286494 No idea
Molly and Vyro? Miles comes back from the dead?
Anonymous
>>16286772 Vyro was never a minor character, even in the first arc. He's one of the more "main" characters in the story.
Garth and Harley are my bets
Anonymous
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>>16286852 My bad. I bet it'll be around the two kids and the remaining firefighters.
Orzo, older characters will still be in season 2 right? You keep leaving us on cliffhangers for the Miles/Molly/Vyro arcs.
Anonymous
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>>16286763 I think before that happens we'll need someone to go back through everything and fix the random scattered typos and character mixups though.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16286494 People have been requesting Kai for more screen time, and I know Lexie is gonna be thing, especially after we started up the whole
Noibatman fiasco .
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16290240 Pre-teaser hype bump
Anonymous
Well shit, that was probably my favorite part yet. It was written well, how you would except recordings to be. I could actually picture everything that I was reading. Also, congrats on hitting the 50k goal Orzo, my nigga.
Anonymous
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>>16293895 >except Meant to say "expect". Eat a dick, autocorrect.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16295166 >>16295650 >>16296580 >>16298667 >[10:00 AM. Silph Co. Research and Development Center. Mossdeep City. Four days after Johto Independence.] >The helicopter banked in on the morning breeze. Anonymous
>>16299647 Oh huh, so now we're in Hoenn? Sweet.
TOP
HYPE
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16299647 Simultanious action time!
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16299835 >>16300151 >He was greeted by several rows of men in navy blue uniforms standing at attention. The stood motionless like statues. Silph adjusted his sleeves and checked his belt for his pokeballs. A man with a red bar on the lapel of his uniform stood in between the rows, hands folded behind his back. He swallowed nervously. >“Mr. Silph.” Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16300312 [BUSINESSMAN INTENSIFIES]
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16300410 >“Gillian Stone, of the Rustboro Stones. Billionaire investor, steel mogul…” Silph chuckled. “Convicted terrorist, mass murderer, and enemy of the state." He opened his arms in mock hospitality. "Welcome. I trust the flight over was pleasant enough?” >The man said nothing. Gillian !HbL/CrWg.E
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>>16300877 Oh do please tell more
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16300877 >Gillian Stone. >Convicted Terrorist. Oh damn, it's that Gillian.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16301013 ...was it ever not?
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16301042 Well I didn't remember him mentioning his last name.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16301088 he's the guy from Claudia's miniarc with Goldenrod Electric
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16299647 >>16300312 http://pastebin.com/9huaUQpr For maximum appreciation of the part go here
http://grooveshark.com/#!/search/song?q=John%20Williams%20Main%20Title%20/%20Approaching%20The%20Death%20Star and play the first song, because Ralphie Youtube is a fat jew and has blocked anything with the main star wars theme.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16301194 Hm, I was thinking of the guy who lost his jaw. Maybe I glossed over him also being there.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16301263 Revenge is sweet. And weird, I'm pretty sure this is the main theme and I could play it just fine on Jewtube. But then again, oceans on the internet and what not.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JG5OsfOuEy0 >>16301296 Well then I did gloss over something.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16301382 Yeah, I'm interested in the part afterword from the official soundtrack. It's the music from when Darth Vader arrives at the Second Death Star.
But I digress
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
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thanksgiving bump
Vyro
YES, FOOLISH HERETICAL FOOLS, I, THE GREAT AND POWERFUL LORD VYRO, MASTER OF ALL EVIL, SHALL BUMP THIS PITIFUL THREAD! AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME! AHAHAHAHA!
Anonymous
>>16306027 give us back Miles dickhead
Anonymous
>>16306068 You can't bring back the dead Anon.
Anonymous
>>16306068 YOU'D LIKE THAT, WOULDN'T YOU?
TOO BAD I DON'T HAVE HIM, YOU INSIGNIFICANT PEST! I LEFT HIM, BROKEN AND INJURED, SITTING IN THAT GODFORSAKEN TREE, AND HOPEFULLY HE STAYS THERE UNTIL IT ROTS AWAY!
Assuming of course, HE'S NOT ALREADY DEAD!
Anonymous
Vyro
>>16306326 Cry all you like. In fact, call it a lesson, from the most glorious teacher of all.
Nice guys finish last, and by last of course, I mean DYING IN A HOLLOW OLD TREE!
MEANWHILE, THE DEVIOUS (AND ATTRACTIVE) VILLAIN NOT ONLY ESCAPES UNFAZED, BUT GETS THE GIRL TOO!
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16306551 He's preparing his quest for revenge. He's left behind in the classic way to build up for it.
Anonymous
>>16306730 It'll be one intense-ass battle if he is alive.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16306852 It'll be a cheesy one-liner horizontal samurai showdown sundown battle.
Vyro
>>16306730 >>16306852 >>16306919 HEY SHUT UP I COULD KICK HIS ABSOLUTE ASS
Anonymous
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>>16306987 eh because you cheated
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16306987 I was only descriping the battle, not the victor.
Anonymous
>>16306919 >implying it wouldn't be a battle full of blood tears and semen Anonymous
>>16307208 Sounds like anal
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16307208 >>16307246 Spoils of the victor.
Anonymous
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bump for feelarinos
Anonymous
>>16301263 Nice choice in background music. This should be a reoccurring thing.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16312362 Aaaaaaaaand forgot my name. Tired from work god damn it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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before bed bump
Anonymous
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Bumpan for season 2 hype
Anonymous
I uh I just saw someone posting Vyro as a reaction image on /v/ Should I be worried that this is spreading?
Anonymous
I need part 31. I need it now.
Anonymous
>>16319254 It's right here you dork
>>16301263 Anonymous
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>>16319407 >>16319254 Think he actually means 32.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16319254 While its a boliday tommorow, ill try and have at least one part for you guys then
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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Slumber awakening bump.
>>16320092 Neat.
Anonymous
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5 hour's death bump
Le Ruse Bird !!QSvwrQMMkoH
Anonymous
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>>16319407 Whoops. Yeah I meant to say 32.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Turkey day makes this a quiet day.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16326811 Well since thanksgiving dinner is at my house tonight and no work, I'll probably be able to keep one eye on the thread.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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I'm enjoying Samurai Fla menco so much Bump
Anonymous
Anonymous
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
>>16333926 Thanksgiving bump
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
Bumpan for Tasty Blaziken Day
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16332124 >>16333926 >>16336768 >>16337278 >>16339296 >[2:10 PM. Vermillion City Warehouse District. Vermillion City. The same day.] >Nothing could have prepared Kai for this. Anonymous
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THIS WILL NOT DIIIIIE
Anonymous
Anonymous
Miles
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Staying up all nite hunting in FS for a shiny Ariados while lurking this thread. Hope all you fellow americlaps out there had a good Thanksgiving.
Anonymous
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bamp before food coma
Anonymous
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Bump for Kai Do we know his third party member yet? I remember there being Magnezone and Lanturn
Anonymous
Are there anyfemale blaziken X male trainer fanfics In existence?
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Turkeyday food coma bump
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16343031 I think you need to ask the actual fanfiction thread for that.
Anonymous
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>>16343031 Wrong thread furfag.
Anonymous
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Bumping patiently
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Not even Black Friday or any crazy sales here but today was a good day, I got a better tv to a decent price.
Anonymous
>>16350160 Heh, I tried to get a PS4 last night.
Didn't work. Almost got trampled by niggers.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16350199 History shows getting consoles on launch is a bad idea so I'm waiting with getting a PS4.
Infamous isn't out for a few months anyway Anonymous
>>16350227 Yeah hopefully I'll nab it before christmas. Need dat BF4.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16350404 I prefer fps on my PC, but each to their own.
Anonymous
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Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
So when I asked fir more hours now that christmas break was comimg up;, they took it as oh Orzo can work doubles on the days he already works! Why would we ever just give him work on dqys where he does nothing but smoke and jerk off! So today and tomoorw will have scarce updates
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>>16357148 All good man, just keepan the thread alive for ya.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
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>>16357148 Black friday is shit for people that actually work those days.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
>>16357148 Super. Are you working a double shift for just those two days or will you have more double shift days in the future?
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16362967 Should be just thwse two with the odd double here and there
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Anonymous
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>>16371049 Bump for interest
Anonymous
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this shit gonna die
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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I got free month to the subpar Danish Netflix. Guess I can finally get around watching White Collar.
Anonymous
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bimp bomp bamp bump
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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Off to the races once again
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
>>16378153 morning/afternoonish bump
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16378356 My hands are still cold.
Anonymous
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Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Anonymous
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Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16390045 >>16390081 Got off early. Time to hammer out some words or something
Anonymous
>>16389945 Only if Vyro confirmed
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>>16390122 Take your time man. We're all here for the ride, no rush. Us Anons really appreciate what you're doing.
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16391838 don't listen to that faget
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16389945 >And it was that conundrum that brought Kai into a meeting with an older man. The man was in his mid-fifties, graying hair that was covered most times by a brown hat. He wore a slim and fashionable coat. He also carried with him a brand new leather briefcase. The man was short a limb since the last time Kai had seen him. He tried not to stare. >“Mr. Grayson.” Kai extended a hand to shake, conscious of the implied bodily tension and irony. >“Master Kai, don’t mind the arm. I never much used it anyway.” 21.3% 3995-7355-8866
>>16392000 hype
nice trips
:^) Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16392000 >>16392060 >Kai took the bait. “Alright, how did you lose it?” >Grayson broke into a wicked smile beneath his well trimmed moustache. The creases in his face disappeared into the totality of his smile. >“Big game hunting.” Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16392000 >>16392060 >>16392150 >>16392235 >>16392369 http://pastebin.com/1jkFqMeT Shorter part. Really wanted to get something out before I hit the hay; freakishly tired right now. This part is a very important set up for the aftermath of the Celadon Arc. As always, even in a shorter part, Grayson is a blast to write, and I'm excited to flesh out Kai and his responsibilities.
In my mind, Grayson is played by Hugo Weaving.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YInNwFXYess Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16393299 Bout time Kai returns to the spotlight. I always like it when the games explore the background and lives of Gym Leaders outside of their occupation. Shame it doesn't happen that often.
Anonymous
Could I get a link to part 28? It isn't up on fanfiction dot net. Also I don't know if this is the same thread as the one I posted my character in, and I don't know if you got it saved or not so may as well repost. Magnus, 28 Big dude with a big dwarf beard. Buff, not dumb, but not exceptionally smart. Just average, maybe a little smarter than the everyman. Hates the everloving shit out of water. This includes the type. Loves Ice though, and the type. From Hoenn, hated the heat, the people and the TRUMPE-- uh, uh, I mean water. Left as soon as he was old enough to make it on his own. Pokemon are Drapion, Walrein and Gardevoir. Ralts was his first Pokemon, and was teased for it. As a result, easy to taunt him about having one. The man is honorable, but only when it suits him. He'd kill at the drop of the hat if was a matter of his life or someone else's. This includes people he's close to. And yeah, whoever replied to me last thread, he is basically aesthetically Techno-Viking.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16393299 They're in for a surprise when they see Ian.
Anonymous
>>16396601 But no seriously I need that pastebin for part 28 I wanna REEEEEAD.
Anonymous
>>16397437 He'll fix it when he wakes up
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>>16396601 kek techno viking
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16396601 That would have been me who instantly thought "Techno-Viking"
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16397437 Will add. I'm four parts behind on ff
Anonymous
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anti death bamp
Anonymous
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>>16266584 crai everytiem~
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Will the next thread title be "November Fic Thread #13: December Edition"? These are the question that plague us.
Anonymous
>>16406628 Hopefully with this gem some anon made when Huck was popular as the OP pic
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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This death is going bananas.Pre-Sleep Bump
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16393299 >[9:22 AM. Santiago’s Personal Chambers. Indigo Plateau. The same day.] >He had come to kill him; that much was certain. I, for one, welcome the return of X.5 chapters
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Anonymous
I started working on this a few months back and kind of put it at the back of my mind, so if you could tell me how it is then that would be awesome
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZoK9qS_DC7l4LEYiDDh69BhyDNoHXSFjSmObcT8DpwU/edit 3995-7355-8866
>>16414730 Wrong thread. Go to the fanfic general.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16414730 I'm not one to throw around "edgy"- especially with the directions this fic is going, but
>My life is dark. My life is blistering hot. My life hurts. Sounds rather My Immortal tier.
Also, I've never been a big fan of game to text translations. But do listen to
>>16414754 . The fanfic general is a much better place for criticisms and the like. I've never been much of a constructive editor, and I'm sure they'd appreciate the traffic and discussion
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16415000 too young
put on your remembering cap and go all the way back to part 18. He gets a mention 3/4's of the way through the part
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16396601 >>16397437 >>16398660 FF is updated
sorry for another slow day. It's my mother's birthday and the family took her out for the day
Anonymous
>no bumps in over 4 hours What the tits?
Anonymous
>>16419426 bump limit guess we'll have too look for the new thred tomorrow
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
I don't even care if this needs a bump, I'm bumping it.
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Anonymous
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bump for more bumps
Anonymous
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bump for mas bumps
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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Today it's my feet that are cold.
Anonymous
Just started reading this, but holy shit is it good. Question though, is the Vyro character meant to be incompetent? Because he's probably the ONE character in the story that has succeeded in everything he's set out to do, barring his intro chapter. He's blown up a city, overtaken Miles, stolen the girl, and is safely on his way to Saffron, and all without even having to really battle.
Anonymous
>>16425066 Wait until Miles rises from the dead and fucks him up.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16425066 Well he's just meant to be an incompetent battler iirc.
Anonymous
>>16425229 I doubt he'll return. His downfall was compete irony.
>ditch friends in city thinking they're dead >tied up alive and deemed dead by vyro and Molly Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16425066 Even if he came off as incompetent in his intro chapter, I'm pretty sure its mostly an act. His recent chapters have at least shown that he can be very dangerous when he puts his mind to it. For whatever reasons he had, it seems like he'd been holding back or setting himself up to fail in the past.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16425343 I'm still expecting a triumphant return ala. old school hotblooded hero.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
>>16425791 At this point I'm hoping for a Lexie and Miles team up.
Anonymous
>>16426133 >Lexie finds miles >they team up >revenge for betraying him and taking Molly >revenge for Lexie's parents Delicious.
Anonymous
>>16426133 >>16426157 >tfw Vyro takes them both down because you can't beat the sex king Anonymous
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I wish for more glorious story.
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16426243 Can't stop the hotblooded hero without making him stronger for next time.
Anonymous
>>16427459 >hotblooded moar like dead
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16428063 It ain't over until the fat Jynx sings.
Anonymous
>>16425343 The way it was written it would be really shitty writing if he's dead
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>>16428303 Yeah you're prolly right.
Anonymous
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Waiting patiently
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16428303 If he was dead, he would have died in part 29
Anonymous
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>>16433186 so he's not
orzos back time for hype
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16434986 fuck you google images.
Anonymous
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16434986 Just when you think you figured out who's really organizing everything from behind the shadows
Anonymous
>>16434986 With every new chapter, my VYRO WILL BE THE FINAL BOSS theory grows weaker
god dammit
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16434986 Talks with masters are never easy.
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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good time for a bump i believe
Anonymous
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>>16436394 Kek not happening
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
Five hours of quiet. Not anymore.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16443446 >>16446689 >>16449957 All quiet on the Tohjo front. It's taking me a bit longer to write these parts because I have no outline. Working on that plus 33 in tandem.
Anonymous
>>16451691 Just good to know you're alive.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
>>16452058 ill make a new thread soon. This one is 50% bumps.
Anonymous
Roland !v6vs6ANDBY
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>>16452092 Thread activity has been slow, not too surprised on that front. What with the holidays and all that.
Anonymous
I was going to make a joke about how Orzo sounds vaguely familiar to the word orgasm instead of just saying bump but I guess I'm not the comic genius I think I am so here's a picture.
Anonymous
Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
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>>16452092 No one wanted the thread to die.
Anonymous
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Molly !wUz67Uj/v2
>>16461319 Or-Zo
Or-Gasm.
Doesn't really sound "vaguely" alike.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
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>>16461319 >>16468017 Well now that you mention it