>>16604393Well Joey, it's a nice presentation about what Pokemon is and all, but I don't see much content about the actual argument: that Pokemon was a game-changer in the gaming world.
The only "slides" related to this are the bottom left and bottom right ones. The one about player connectivity is strong, but the slides about yellow/green/blue/red version have almost nothing to say about the significance of the franchise in the context of gaming.
I hope it's okay that you picked a FRANCHISE instead of a game, by the way. You have all these exposition history slides irrelevant to the argument because you have to explain so much.
Your bottom right slide, while relevant to the argument, is kind of awful. The bottom two points are just "IT SOLD LOTS OF COPIES." Citations needed on those, btw. The first point about how it changed the way players communicate and interact is good, but you don't provide enough evidence and specific examples. It's just summarizing the last slide, basically.
tl;dr I would give you a C because the whole presentation is just OMG POKEMON IS SO GREAT IT'S A GAME CHANGER BECAUSE IT IS AND TRADING
