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Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I either have to end Serena with Ch 3 or piss a lot of people off.
Anonymous
>>16705635 Why would you piss people off?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16705646 Because either I
have them fuck and write myself into a corner or
Someone cuts them off and no one faps. Anonymous
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>>16705690 Just blueball people now and have Serena go on a quest to defeat the 4 robot masters who took Ash's virginity away from her, with lots of sexy times along the way.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16705690 Short lived fic?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16705750 90% of my fics are short-lived fics. I hate that.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I'm going back to one-shot stories or one-shot chapter stories. Way easier.
Anonymous
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>>16705800 could you do a one shot story shipping a vespiquen with a mothim, kinda like a "I hate that I am in love with that one mothim" plot?
Anonymous
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>>16705800 Oh well, I enjoyed the Yandere Serena fic while it lasted
Anonymous
>>16705800 So much for my dreams of a fic that follows the anime from Crazy-Serena's perspective, with Serena's schemes to get laid as futile as Ash's quest to win the League.
Too bad i can't write for shit or I'd do it myself.
Anonymous
I'm gonnna request a Serena/Hilda fic.
Anonymous
>>16707082 Their faces in that pic will never no confuse me.
Anonymous
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>>16707093 Hilda's could be covered by her bangs and such.
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16706929 Aww Anon, don't guilt me mang.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16706929 >>16708871 Okay, forget I said anything.
I'll work around it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
I've worked on this for a good 6 hours, and it's not finished but I don't plan on working on it for a while, tell me what you think~
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZoK9qS_DC7l4LEYiDDh69BhyDNoHXSFjSmObcT8DpwU/edit?usp=sharing Anonymous
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>>16710666 It's good. Goes a bit too dark for my tastes though
Anonymous
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Alright we need a new thread question. How much of the OP image do you believe to be correct? How does it apply to you personally? Think of ways to better yourself from making that mistake.
Anonymous
>>16715153 For me it is so accurate I actually chuckled out loud.
I could make myself better about it if I could break the habit of not writing shit down when I think about it, but my mind only really ever wanders to fanfiction when I'm trying to go to sleep.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16715310 Holy shit you must be me.
I don't tend to write shit down and go with the flow, but that normally helps me because I'll forget where I wrote it down at.
Plus my brain thinks the most when I try to sleep or if I'm walking so I always other forget or take it for later.
The image is so accurate it makes me sick yet I fine it funny as shit. Anonymous
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>>16715153 That is literally me and how I write
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16715153 I'd say... right now, about 80% accurate to me. I tend to stick to what I plan out pretty closely now. It used to be 100% true though.
Anonymous
Can I write a fanfic about Lysandre and the male protag even though their love is cannon? Do I need to actually make something up for it to be a fanfic?
Anonymous
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>>16717452 Who said it was cannon?
Write it anyway. Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16717452 Sure, why not? I chuck half of what happened in canon anyway for mine, I mean, I'm working under the assumption those banned Team Plasma episodes happened.
It's just AU/alternate universe.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
Anonymous
Did this fic ever get finished yet?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16721381 So hows your night been Butler?
>>16721837 No idea but I heard Rooh might be working on it now. Not sure tho I haven't asked him about it recently.
Eric [3909-7692-3314: Masquirain, Paras, Heracross][sv:1922]
Eric [3909-7692-3314: Masquirain, Paras, Heracross][sv:1922] Tue 17 Dec 2013 04:14:02 No. 16721878 Report >fanfiction >not making the whole thing up as you go along
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16721877 Alright. I'm hoping to knock out a big chunk of what I have left on this chapter tonight, but first I have a review I owe someone to do.
My goal is to have this chapter done by the end of the year because some plot developments I want to get in time for SPP's annual awards happen in it.
Yeah, I know what you're probably thinking, but SPP's fic board surprisingly doesn't suck. There are poor quality ones that come up, but thankfully it has a competently-modded set of rules in place that keeps the board from being flooded over, and the community there's not bad. I met a lot of my friends there.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16722271 I was thinking no such thing.
Sorry for a really late reply, I had to clean and my 2DS smacked into my laptop and shut it off completely. I was scared shitless that everytime I unplugged my chjarger it would shut off. All I had to do was detatch the battary from the laptop and put it back on to fix the issue but I was scared.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16723089 I meant the general 'you' by that, sorry for not being clear.
Good to hear that nothing happened to your computer.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16724303 Again I got what you meant.
I would've raged if something did happen.
I'm debating on what I want to do atm just because I know I have people waiting for the next chapter of that fic request a little bit ago. But I also have pokemon to breed before the 20th for the /vp/ gym leader comp.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>That feel when you want to write something and already have some small story thought out, but just can't write it down
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16726629 What issues are you having?
Like what can't you write down?
Anonymous
>>16726657 Pretty much everything. I can manage to maybe get few words down, but then I can't manage to get more down. Mind goes completely blank
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16726769 Well what's your idea, maybe I can help you work with it.
Anonymous
>>16726805 It's just a silly idea of a kid being dared to go into Turnback Cave, getting lost and inevitable running into Giratina. Though instead of being eaten or sent head first into the distortion world, like the old people told, it turns out to be a child and is rather glad to have someone visit it
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16727191 That sounds kind of nice.
Is it a boy that lives in the town next to it?
Start off with maybe the boy listening to his grandfather tell a tale about Giratina.
From there describe the town when the boy goes to find Giratina. Descriptions about the surroundings really helps the reader know where the boy is and what he sees.
Do some research and find what pokemon live near the town and add them in as well.
This helping any?
Anonymous
>>16727228 It gives me some more ideas for it, yeah.
Gonna try putting it down, Thanks a bunch!
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16727310 No problem anon, don't be afraid to ask for help again if you need it.
Anonymous
So, I've written a 4-part fan fic short story. It's quite dark edgy and serious. Is there any interest for that anywhere, or do people mostly want furfaggotry and shipping?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16727372 This is welcomed and I'm sure someone will read it dear anon.
Anonymous
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>>16727372 Yes and yes to those questions, be sure to involve gay shit too.
Just to please everyone. Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16729151 Really like how you oblivious you made Ash.
Zolnerowich
Anonymous
every fanfiction ever wrote by witchan
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16730935 >Finally find a fic of Hilbert and Skyla doing it. >It's by Witchan. Suffering becomes me.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16731147 A terribad smut fanfiction author you can find over at FF net.
Their fics are all called "X Person and Y Person" after who is going to fuck in it.
How bad is it? Hilbert goes into the Mistralton Gym, she introduces herself, and she notices he's staring at her breasts. And then he starts playing with her boobs.
They fuck and start a relationship afterwards.
...Keep in mind this was their first meeting.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16731240 I took one look at her page and read the comments for that fic.
Needless to say I turned tail an knew better.
Anonymous
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>>16731240 >click on a random fic called Dangerous territory >First paragraph is Author's Note bitching about people criticizing his word choice and lack of details Anonymous
Sup /vp/ Im the guy that was thinking of writing something Bonnie related in the last thread, I already have an outline of the whole story and just wrote on paper the first chapter.
Now my question is, Im totally new to this, this is my first fic ever and the first thing Ive ever written in years.
What steps should I take? Make a
FanFiction.net account?
Im unsure where should I release this and how, should I finish the whole story then post it all at once?
I dont want this to be anonymous as this story isnt just loli smut, is about how serena corrupts everything bonnie loves with her lust, told from Bonnie´s POV.
Its more sad than anything (well, kinda, its also "thats how it is" and its actually not bad in the eyes of the pokemon world´s society but Bonnie doesnt get it) thought there are sex scenes obviously.
Anyways help em out here guys
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16732122 It all depends on what you mean by "Sex scene" like is it everyone but Bonnie or is she involved?
If not invloved I don't see why you couldn't post it on
FF.Net . In the case that it does involve Bonnie sexually then put it on Pastebin. You can still make an account there and have the Paste unlisted unless you provide the link.
Hope this helps any.
Anonymous
>>16732215 She will be involved at the very very end.
And I might not even make it explicit at all since its about what she feels internally rather than about what is going on with her body.
Anonymous
>>16732249 I also realize that I might be biting more than I can chew, I have never written anything before and English isnt my mother language,
Its just that I started writing and it was so much fun that I couldnt stop. That was a great thing I discovered today, creating things feels good.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16732249 >>16732356 I'm not sure about FF.Nets policy on loli
if they even have one. But I'm pretty sure the worse they'll do is delete the fic. I'm done some research a bit on it and some people talk about lolis so I don't see harm in posting it.
>>16732356 I know this feel you're having as well. That's how I started writing, I was bored on day and felt like writing a story that I chose the plot to instead of a teacher telling me what to write. And it felt good.
Anonymous
>>16732509 Hey thanks for the replies I guess Ill make an account there and also a pastebin with signed with my internet name and then link it here if people show interest. These fanfics threads seem quite dead but Im very happy I stumbled upon them.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16732585 We're very quiet in threads and most the time we're talking in the Rizon chat.
The # for the rizon is in the OP post if you want to find it. You'll get more response most the time from there.
I'm always glad to help man, jsut hit me up if you need anything else man.
Anonymous
>>16732788 Sure Ill take another peek around here tomorrow,
Ill also look into the IRC I havent used it in over a decade and back then it was to get anime episodes haha
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16732894 Alright man no rush on your end.
Anonymous
All hail witchan king of fanfic
>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9820373/1/Ash-and-Bonnie just read the first 10 lines
Anonymous
>>16733729 I-I'm scared...
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Anonymous
>>16731240 I wonder if it's the same person who bitches at all the lesbian pics on pahael.
Anonymous
I want to into writing and to write something short but I can't plot. Help?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16733960 What characters do you like?
Lets start from there. I'll help you figure things out.
Anonymous
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>>16733960 Well, a lot of people don't mind plot. If you plan on uploading it anywhere but pastebin, do so on Archive of Our Own and just set the Pwp/Porn Without Plot tag. :D Most the time people just read these fics to fap.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16733985 Any of the male protags, I guess. I'd also want to write gen/lighting shipping but I wouldn't guess there's much call for that...
Anonymous
>>16733729 Well I laughed when Clemont pulled out a gun from nowhere
Anonymous
>>16733729 >Lustful, OOC swearing loli Holy shit. It's like a trainwreck, I can't look away
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16734007 Hmmm....
Maybe something in the 4gen? Have Branden and berry maybe? have them go on random adventure or some random funny plot for a short story.
Anonymous
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>>16733729 >"Want to know what I learned today, Bonnie? Age doesn't matter." I never knew Pomf wrote fanfiction.
Anonymous
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>>16715153 Most of the OP applies to me. I write long stories. My current tale's plot is
a clusterfuck in my humble option, mostly because I took a break during a crucial point in the story.
Right now I've been trying to get the magic to come back with some booze.
Anonymous
>>16733729 >>16733857 >>16733882 >>16734035 >>16734031 Just to be dicks, actually do a review. Tell her each and every thing wrong with it, oooor just insult her.
Anonymous
>>16733729 >"And now you're snitching like a pussy ass bitch? Please. You know you want my cunt," Bonnie said. I think this is my favorite line.
Anonymous
>>16734135 According to the profile it's 24 year old man
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16734142 >Is willing to say pussy upfront >Writer still says cunt I'm not sure why this bothers me.
Anonymous
>>16734166 It could have been a synonym since pussy was used in the last sentence.
Anonymous
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>>16733729 I made it two sentences and ran right out. Excuse me while I projectile vomit.
Anonymous
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>>16734162 HAHA, HAHAHAHAHA, HAHAHAHA. If it is, then he is an amazing troll.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16734185 Well I meant in general more than just that sentence.
Anonymous
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>>16734709 I was only kidding Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16735739 >Her hips could certainly turn heads and her breasts were at least double D's in size. oh god why
Anonymous
Are there any good Serena rapefics out there? Also like to request a fic about Calem raping Serena after beating her before the pokemon league and then raping her Braixen in front of her.
Anonymous
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>>16737317 lol ur pretty edgy XD
Anonymous
>>16737317 Not literal rape, but there's a mini-mindrape fic where Calem bullies the shit out of Serena here
>>16733833 Anonymous
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>>16737533 Thanks, I'll read that. If it doesn't exist, I may give writing it a shot.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16733729 This makes me feel good about myself. Anonymous
>>16734135 >oooor just insult her. Grow up. Leave a review or don't. Don't be 12.
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16738545 Yeah, we're not trying to be Farla here.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16745551 It's going.
No idea where to take crazy Serena but I think she's going to fuck Clemont's gym robot somehow. Anonymous
>>16745551 It's not. No one to blame but myself.
Anonymous
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>>16746822 Well Hopefully you can write something down soon
Anonymous
>>16745551 It's being the most autistic piece of shit ever fucking imaginable.
I'm actually trying to deconstruct hard all those generic "Ash disappears for years, comes back as a ruthless loner" stories, have the first half center in a murder mystery and trying to 'obtain the truth of the past', weld the games and anime canons somewhat, and add some sprinkles of Ace Attorney and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure here and there. Oh, and it's setting up for something bigger. I still feel like a piece of shit autist for writing it, though, and I wonder if I should actually post it. Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16748271 I vote that you post it.
ITT: Who likes to listen to music while writing? I can't without it.
Anonymous
>>16752458 >>16751523 WARNING - Intense amounts of autism and edge:
http://pastebin.com/fJbyyBE9 You have been warned. This is currently like half of the first chapter. I'm planning on resolving the story in 6-8 chapters.
Anonymous
>>16752681 Well you weren't kidding about the edginess. Though I definitely think you should continue it
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Was wondering if I could get some feedback on:
>>16730783 Helpful Anon
Anonymous
>>16754639 >tfw you want to click but you're terrified you'll find your own stories on it standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>16756008 >mfw I've submitted my own stories to two of them Fanfic Mandrick !N4YE14Ihg6
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Ash Ketchum is 10 year old and Pokemon trainer. Ash wants to catch all the Pokemon and be the Pokemon master. Ash when to go catch Pokemon in the forist. Ash saw a Caterpee and wanted to catch it. Ash told Pikachu to use thunder shock and Pikachu siad Pika! Ash throw the Pokemon ball and caught Caterpee. I did it I caught a Pokemon said Ash when he caught a Pokemon.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16752458 I do. I've been using a CD of the Genesect movie soundtrack lately.
Anonymous
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>>16754639 I'm always so torn how to feel about this stuff. On the one hand, I enjoy looking at autism. On the other, looking at awful fanfiction takes considerably more effort than fanart. It makes the commentators about as weird as the authors.
Anonymous
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>>16753831 Thanks bruh. I think we'll get through most of the edginess with the first chapter, and the tone, while remaining serious, will not continue being so bleak.
It'd just be way too hard to set up a murder mystery without murder.
For the record, the theme for the first half will be 'truth and lies' while the theme of the second half will be 'moving on and accepting tomorrow'. The arc words for this story, alongside others related to it are the following: "Live nobly and with pride." Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
"Welcome to the Lumiose Gym. How many badges do you have, challenger?" "I love you too, Ash! You're so romantic!"
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16762514 Finally, we’re in Lumiose City (again)! The shopping! The food! The atmosphere! The slutty woman trying to ask my Ash for directions! Doesn’t she know he’s new to Kalos? Doesn’t she keep up with his adventures on the news and on the Internet? I didn’t start a Blog about Ash for myself, duh! I was going to buy AshKetchum.com , but obviously it would be for nothing if this girl didn’t already check it every day to see if it was full of his travels! Anonymous
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>>16707082 I'm gonna bump this, looks interesting
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>16764596 And the plot thickens
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>16752458 I always have something going in the background, either music or a movie or a tv show or something.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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bump for life.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Alright I'm now making some progress on the new chapter for Fireworks, since I now have time to work on it instead of pokemon breeding/training. Wish me luck everyone.
Anonymous
>>16778809 Personally more of a Calem/Shauna shipper, but I hope the writing will go smooth
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16781241 I'm mostly doing it from the last request I got for it and it gave me an excuse to write something involving Serena and Shauna which I wanted to do after the games released.
For some reason I can't get myself to write straight couples anymore. I've tried and it almost ended up a straight up porn fic more than anything. Anonymous
>>16781390 While I myself cannot see the bad thing about a straight porn fic, I can understand why you don't wanna write something like it.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16783104 I might just be making an excuse for not liking straight fics. Maybe it's because I feel they're done so much that I'd be beating a dead horse for ideas.
Like from my last on going fic I made a pairing of Hilda and Rosa that I didn't seen anything on
FF.net for. IT was something different that got a lot of attention.
Plus I feel Yuri is almost a pure love for some reason, like it's too cute not to write. Girls by nature know what other girls feel in life and have the same feelings in general, so it makes a closer relationship between two girls. But that's just my opinion on the topic, I'm sure you have a different feeling about it.
Anonymous
>>16783104 Even with characters that are mostly M-MUH HEADCANON (like all of Pokemon, pretty much), I still can't get into straight porn unless the couple is having fun with another dude or something. I blame being a yaoi landwhale in my formative years back in, like, 2003.
Incidentally a Sina/Calem/Dexio fic is on the way after I get done with the other two things I'm working on .
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16783609 >That picture I laughed more that I should have.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>16783609 >Sina/Calem/Dexio You have my attention.
I have a bunch of ideas for somethign with Sina Dexio and Sycamore but my backlog is so big I'm probably never going to actually work on it Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I'm back. With robutts.
Serena's Obsession Ch 4
http://pastebin.com/A8AGRWFZ Anonymous
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>>16783808 Wouldn't think I'd enjoy a yandere'ish fic like this, but I actually do. Keep it up G
Anonymous
>>16783808 So did the previous bit with Serena actually confessing get retconned or something?
Also, where can i find the other chapters that are still part of the story?
I'm so glad you didn't drop this, keep the good work coming.
Anonymous
Can someone post Ch.3? I missed it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16785068 It didn't get retconned, Ash is just an idiot.
Anonymous
>>16783609 >>16783641 Where is that picture sequence originally from?
Anonymous
>>16783808 That was enjoyable.
>mfw standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>16787931 It's the epilogue thing from XY
Anonymous
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>>16789518 Cool thanks. I forgot.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16783188 I'm pretty much indifferent to yuri fics. It isn't my thing, but I occasionally read one just for a change of scenary.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>http://mechanicalgarden.tumblr.com/post/47405836693/character-development-thing-plot-points-on-this I saw this thing earlier and it's actually a pretty handy thing for helping to develop your characters and stuff.
This is a neater version of the chart if you're into that kind of thing
Anonymous
There was a fellow he said he was writing a fic where May got picked on because of her boobs a few weeks ago? Was that ever finished?
Anonymous
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>>16792187 Not that I know of
Anonymous
Writing a fanfic about Serena now. It'll be a few thousand words with a surprise ending. I hope you all love it.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16792876 You're off to a good start, Keep it up
Anonymous
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>>16792937 Writing the Pokemon battle now. Unfortunately, it won't be long.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>16793409 Well that escalated quite a bit.
Anonymous
>>16793529 >>16793502 It's going to have a great climax, don't worry.
Anonymous
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>>16793628 You'll be so surprised though. It's like 3 twists in one.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>16793929 I'm pretty happy with that. It totaled 1800 words even if the grammar is a shit at times.
Anonymous
>>16793929 Can I get any feedback on my fanfic? I put a lot of "work" into it.
Anonymous
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>>16794095 Well I hope it was a joyful read. I had some fun writing it at least.
Anonymous
>>16794095 Well I can honestly say I did not see that ending coming. You have a good sene of pacing and you didn't make the story drag on.
All in all 8/10, would read another story from you
Anonymous
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>>16794528 >me >good pacing I was just being impatient, but okay.
Anonymous
>>16793929 >He did not need to give a gift to Serena to help her remember Gary, for she had one coming in only a few short months. Masterful.
I somewhat expected Gary though, but I'm good at guessing plots. Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16791802 This is a nice chart, thanks for posting it.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16793929 I fucking lost it. That was great.
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>http://pastebin.com/qYuh3xWd I just remembered I wrote this. Jesus Christ why did I write this.
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I have an idea for future Serena chapters, but I don't know whether to post it for approval or just leave them to surprise you.
Anonymous
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>>16801156 I'd like to be surprised
Anonymous
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>>16795262 I'm actually sad by that last sentence. The prose of it is just so fucking choppy. Ugh. It's the little things that kill me.
Anonymous
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Do anyone know if Mason have been here recently?
Anonymous
Anonymous
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Bump, and starting to make progress on the Serena&Shauna fic. It's seems pretty bland to me atm tho... So I hope it'll be good enough for reading.
Anonymous
>>16810859 If it weren't because I am a Calem/Shauna shipper, I'd be excited as fuck. Still good to hear you make progress though
Anonymous
Remu 4871-4498-7869 [2Spookytype] !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Remu 4871-4498-7869 [2Spookytype] !!RIyKvtVAc9i Sun 22 Dec 2013 00:57:39 No. 16811506 Report >>16811269 I feel it'll be long and boring before it gets to the main shipping.
I went with a "Go back to the past to see how it became" thing an I've spent almost 2k words just on them getting their pokemon and one simple battle. I'm thinking of continuing with the forest moment and ending the chapter because I feel just the pokemon picking will be boring. Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16811506 And of course I use the wrong trip...
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16813169 I've got a clip now. And it's long as fuck.
It's unedited at the moment and I want so feedback. I hope it's not too boring compared to the first chapter, but soon this chapter will start back on the idea of the first one, just had to get some set up done beforehand.
http://pastebin.com/JA5uHMAX Anonymous
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>>16705597 >That narrative structure Oh god, what the fuck
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>What do you want for christmas child? More Cynthia/Steven shipping fics!
Anonymous
Can someone clarify what happened to The Tohjo Incident? I know Orzo was in a car crash, but there hasn't been a thread for over a week now. I hope he's okay.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16815643 Most of us wouldn't know since both the Write thread and Orzos threads stayed separate.
I know some people who are regulars went in there occasionally but that's about it.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16815643 Orzo and the write thread never really got along, he came in with an air of thinking he was better than us when he isn't, he just makes a bigger attention whore of himself.
Anonymous
>>16816340 If Orzo is that nigga from that thread with all that shitty OC circlejerking, I hope to god he never comes back.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16816383 I hope he isn't hurt from his car wreck or anything, he's just not normally in here unless it's to post his own thread and leave.
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>>16814800 I liked it. It was a nice change of pace from reading Yandere Serena.
Anonymous
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>>16816340 >>16816383 Say what you will about Orzo himself being a dick, but he DID bring us the greatest character ever, and for that, I can't truly dislike him
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>>16822283 Not even.
Vyro was user submitted.
Orzo !MlmhzK88DI
Sorry for using this thread, but I'm more or less bacl after my vehicularly induced hiatus. Gonna make a new thread tonight
Anonymous
>>16822665 Fuck off retard
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>all this orzo hate Your shitty furfaggot fanfics can't even compare to his story. You're all just jealous. Make your new thread orzo. These "writers" are a bunch of cunts. You all literally write garbage.
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Oh wow I thought this thread 404'd days ago x3
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16825092 A lot of us don't hate him, we're indifferent.
His November Story Writing was fic related content and cold be posted here, but he also implied some hurtful things of being a "Professional Writer" if you will compared to us.
I'm personally indifferent to him but others could say differently obviously.
Also nice labeling us all Furfags m8. That really shows your stereotype of all writers.
Anonymous
>>16825173 I think the main reason it WASN'T posted here is because of the character submissions, and how it would fill the thread with those instead of horny fucks begging for fics about serena getting fucked by pokemon and diaper braixen
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16825298 I understand this and I can accept this. Doesn't mean he had to give his "Speech" explaining his background first before the thread link. Honestly he could've kept his background in his thread and jsut said he's doing this november fic writing challenge and if you're interested come on over. If he kept it at that then most of us would be fine.
We ignore Diaper fics btw unless someone honestly wants to do it. I can't argue with you on the Serena thing tho, it's not my writing fun but for some it is.
Again we're not all like that.
Anonymous
>>16825370 >>16825173 You sound ass pained over a little introduction. Did Orzo steal your girlfriend and kill your dog? Maybe he said that because he's been paid to write or for his writing before. I remember him saying he'd been published for poetry and short fiction.
Jesus fuck
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>>16826465 see
>>16825173 >I'm personally indifferent to him He doesn't sound all that ass pained to me.
Anonymous
>>16826465 >published for poetry and short fiction This is nothing special and it slays me to see any writer toss that around like it means anything. It's like telling somebody you have the potential to be in the NBA because you got mad slams on pic related.
Anonymous
>>16827389 >>16826465 He actually never called himself a "professional" writer, and he only ever mentioned that he participated in nanowrimo several times. Honestly the worst he ever did was refer to original fiction as "actual" fiction (which is such a common thing that I don't understand why the other idiots here got their panties in such a twist over it) and had confidence in his own skill (which it is common for creative people without confidence in their ability to mistake for being snobbish).
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Bumping for the hell of it.
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>>16827909 >He actually never called himself a "professional" writer, and he only ever mentioned that he participated in nanowrimo several times. Go look in his thread. It's in the OP.
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>>16825092 >You're all just jealous. Sure they are, Orzo.
Use your trip next time, pussy.
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia Mon 23 Dec 2013 02:46:29 No. 16831122 Report Quoted By:
>>16721878 >not doing that in erp Get on my level pleb
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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Uh .. so do I keep posting, or what
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/ZM8su8cg Serena's Obsession Ch 5 clip
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia Mon 23 Dec 2013 03:48:57 No. 16832120 Report >>16832006 You got a collection of all your stuff by any chance? I seen the first 2 chapters for Ditto and I think Duplica. I like your stories.
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>>16832006 Oh boy, even Serena has her limits
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia Mon 23 Dec 2013 04:01:52 No. 16832308 Report Quoted By:
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hooray for vodka,the struggling writer's best friend
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>>16832120 >this thread needs more gary Did I win?
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia Mon 23 Dec 2013 15:42:23 No. 16838480 Report Quoted By:
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>>16832006 That was more amusing than I expected.
Keep it up
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia
The Cancer 4141-3338-6192 jigglypuff floette kirlia Mon 23 Dec 2013 20:00:21 No. 16841374 Report I read that Lusty Lopunny story 11/10 sweet jimmies that was hot.
Anonymous
>>16841374 Thought the sequel was better.
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'nother small bump
Cain 5257-9527-7186 [Elec: Emogla, Pikachu, Zebstrika]
Cain 5257-9527-7186 [Elec: Emogla, Pikachu, Zebstrika] Tue 24 Dec 2013 02:01:13 No. 16846566 Report Hello!
I write for fun, start a lot of stories but never really finish. This is my first Pokemon Fanfic. Didn't know if you all wanted/would be willing to read what I've got and provide some feedback.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KwmA6Gc8OwrlZdeZctLqQoImxGE-mZNo1lxvG4IIWbU/pub Almost finished with part 1. Can't decide (if I continue) if I should do Origin style 4 or 5ish part 'episodes' or actually write the whole story out.
Anyways. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!
Anonymous
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>>16841374 link for the lazy? Anonymous
Here's a fic that the whole family can enjoy.
http://pastebin.com/anc4Jsmk Anonymous
>>16846566 Could you not post to Gdocs? I have to open it in Incognito mode to avoid everyone seeing my email and G+ name.
Cain 5257-9527-7186 [Elec: Emogla, Pikachu, Zebstrika]
Cain 5257-9527-7186 [Elec: Emogla, Pikachu, Zebstrika] Tue 24 Dec 2013 03:58:09 No. 16848434 Report Quoted By:
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Any Good lewd Female Goodra fic? Request that if not
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16842553 I did a sequel?
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>>16849688 where is the first one
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Remember this Furfrou trimmer? I would like if one of you guys made a story of him cutting up Serena. No killing or amputating or skinning of course. Just cruelty.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16850786 Uh, that's not mine, if you're quoting me for some reason.
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>>16854227 Merry Christmas writers, May you get some good presents this year
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Merry Christmas writers, may you get some good presents this year
Anonymous
>>16848061 Stop shitposting, Mutsurf
Vulpsis
Hmmm I think I'm going to take a break from smut and try my hand at some Pokemon horror stories. And no I don't mean creepypasta where my games is haunted, horror stories that would probably be told around campfires in a real Pokemon world
Anonymous
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>>16857445 Sounds interesting. Horror fics ain't my thing though, so I'm probably not gonna read it
Anonymous
Bumpo
Happy Holidays fags, somebody make a new thread soon.
>>16792187 That's me, holidays have eaten my free time. You should check for a link around new year, the title will be Own Tempo.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16861563 I'll make a new one soon. Maybe if we hit 300 soon for replies.
Or until it stops hitting page 0.
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>Wrote a couple of chapters for a Braixen fanfic a month ago >First time writing a story for myself, first time writing anything since highschool >Did it out of impulse but enjoyed it >Honestly don't think it's that great, hit writers block on third chapter and gave up thinking it wouldn't really be noticed anyway >Decide to check on it today >2 favs, 6 followers and 2 reviews >First review: I speak the truth when I say this is the first story featuring Braixen that I'm fully captivated in. Your way with words is excellent and well worth attention. Please continue if you can. Such heartwarming fluff is too good to let wither away. >That feel when someone, somewhere actually likes what you wrote down I feel... appreciated. I think I need to get back to the story
Anonymous
Any update on this fic yet?
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>Pikachu and Froakie mini plushes >Mario & Luigi pajama pants >NES Controller shirt/used as pajama shirt I'm totally ready to write Serena.
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
I don't think people are going to approve of the direction I'm taking Serena in.Oh well.
Anonymous
I'm working on a fanfiction (10 000 words so far) that tells the story of Apocalypse Now/Heart of Darkness using Ash/Misty/Brock as they travel from Pallet to Northern Johto. I have no idea how it's gonna be received, but I think the idea's pretty different, and it's something I can have fun with. How do most people implement music into their story? I come up with almost all of my scenes listening to music, and I like to have the actual song name in the story so the reader can identify/listen if they want, but I find it breaks flow too often. Any way to smoothly add a song title into a story?
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>>16871411 I'm not into Yaoi stuff, but that's pretty good.
Kyouhei !!iyGYdLJbI/k
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>>16869623 It was Meowstic, and Rooh picked it up.
Anonymous
>>16871411 Dude, this is, like, really queer.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16872259 That's an interesting idea for a story.
Implement music? How do you mean, like characters listening to it?
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>>16873386 You're really queere Anonymous
>>16873720 Thank you.
Pretty much. I'm just wondering the best way to give the reader a specific song that fits the scene without affecting the overall fluency of the writing by dropping a "song by artist" in the middle of things.
I normally have the music come from a source, but the name drop always feels clunky.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16832006 http://pastebin.com/iCsBKfUc New Serena preview, contains everything so far.
The Bonnie subplot is going to stay. I just don't know what the fuck I'll do with it. Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16873846 I don't know how much this helps your situation, but I write a character who has a habit of singing along to the music she's listening to. I never drop names, just a couple of lines of lyrics.
Maybe that helps, maybe not. I don't know.
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>>16874480 That's actually quite helpful. Thank you!
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>>16856106 >Mutsurf The same motherfucker that draw cool shit also write? HORY SHIT
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>>16874180 Why did I find that last scene somewhat adorable?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16879240 No, he doesn't write. To my knowledge.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16881233 Apparently he does, my bad.
Anonymous
>>16879240 Think I would have enjoyed it more if the Groudon wasn't a herm/futa
Anonymous
>>16872031 >>16874180 You were right, I didnt like it.
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Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>16882027 You do realize it was a joke fic, right? It's not serious in the least.
Anonymous
>>16887169 I do. Still doesn't change the fact, that I would'a enjoyed it more with it
Anonymous
>>16887346 I assume you mean without it?
Regardless, you have atrocious taste. Anonymous
>>16887384 Yeah I did.
I guess we have different tastes you and I then. I just like women without dicks
Anonymous
>>16887460 I prefer with with both dicks and cunts, actually.
Anonymous
>>16887543 Well on the cunts we can agree on
Shall we just say have different opinions and get on with our day?
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C-can I make a lewd request?A fic where May rubs herself against a table and discovers pleasure for the first time.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16889198 I might be interested in this.
I do have something similar already on paper tho.
If you've read or heard of her stand-along pokespecial character Sapphire then it's close to the same as your request. It's a story where Sapphire is trying to get used to regular life out of the forest and being more civilized. She takes one sniff of Rubys scent and she goes into heat like a wild animal. I will warn ahead of time this is heavily unedited and I haven't taken the time to fix it up but this is the best I can do for you for now. http://pastebin.com/sktB1eW4 Anonymous
How often do these threads pop up here? I've had a fanfic I've been working on for fun (no ones read it at all since its probably terrible) but its about [spoilers]towers that randomly begin sprouting out of nowhere, they grow on the back of a Pokemon that lives in the center of the earth, its beginning to awaken blah blah. MC gets involved with a group of trainers called Pokemon D-Runners (Dungeon Runners) and he joins them, lots of fun dungeon runnin' Pokemon adventures.[/spoiler:lit] I know it sounds shit but whatever. Just curious.
Anonymous
How often do these threads pop up here? I've had a fanfic I've been working on for fun (no ones read it at all since its probably terrible) but its about towers that randomly begin sprouting out of nowhere, they grow on the back of a Pokemon that lives in the center of the earth, its beginning to awaken blah blah. MC gets involved with a group of trainers called Pokemon D-Runners (Dungeon Runners) and he joins them, lots of fun dungeon runnin' Pokemon adventures. I know it sounds shit but whatever. Just curious.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16889603 It's up very often honestly if you check the catalog you find these threads. It doesn't have many visits so it's not always at the front page. And honestly just post your fic even if you or others think it's bad. It seems interesting enough from your description.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16889662 >>16889664 My reponce to you if you didn't see yet.
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>>16889662 I'd read it.
Sounds somewhat original, I don't think Pokemon+Dungeon Crawling has been done before (unless Mystery Dungeon counts???? that's a whole nother bag of worms I guess). I also like that "towers growing on the back of a Pokemon which lives in the center of the earth" thing.
Anonymous
Anything for Frank & Sly?
Anonymous
>>16889988 I'm bored and need something to do while my eggs hatch.
You want some scene in particular?
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>>16890029 No, I just like NPC stories.
Anonymous
I was thinking about doing a story about the crossdressing daycare teacher from BW2. Not necessarily smut. Yay or nay?
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>>16891119 And by "daycare" teacher, I mean Nursery Aide.
I've always had a hard time associating daycare with non-human things.
Anonymous
>>16889458 Yup, something along the lines of the current fic but with May would be awesome.
Just please make sure it's her first time... it'd mean a lot, since she was my first fap and all. And I'd kind of prefer it if she isn't rubbing to anyone in particular... just kind of a "oh, this feels good" kind of thing. She's so pure... Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16891755 I'll see what I can do Dear Anon.
I'm sure I can get something done sooner or later.
I kind of find that extremely cute and erotic at the same time for be to be so pure about it... Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16889458 Fix that up and it would be pretty decent. SapphireXRuby is one of my main ships. Anonymous
>>16891119 >Not necessarily smut. >Not porn 10/10
Would read again.
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>>16892352 I like writing stuff aside from porn occasionally.
Remu 4871-4498-7869 [2Spookytype] !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Remu 4871-4498-7869 [2Spookytype] !!RIyKvtVAc9i Thu 26 Dec 2013 04:20:15 No. 16892506 Report >>16892330 It's the product of a night without sleep and no effort to edit a story writing on impulse. Somehow I feel I'll never go back to edit it but I really should. That's what you get for a high schooler that had no time back then to edit. Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16892506 Look at me using the wrong trip again.
New Bread.
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