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>>16705597 FanFiction General
>Post your favorite Pokemon fan fictions >Ask for opinions on your fics >Share what you're working on and post updates to your work >And etcetera IRC:
>irc.rizon.net #vpwritethread Catalog:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1saTgrG8d0KhCsVwne47w-kYbfGoL9e7wsnrEEzoqqY8/ FAQ:
Can we post NSFW fics?:
>Yes. NSFW pics?:
>No. How do I get a story in the catalog?
>Post in here with the name of the author (If linking from a non-anonymous source), the name of the fic, the genre, and a short summary, and then ask for it to be put in the catalog. If we miss your request, just post again or ask in the irc. Preferably, post in this format to make it easier on us to identify what needs to be added (this will speed up the process of getting your work into the catalog as well): >Title, Author >Link >Genre >Description When posting fics in the thread, please post them as links instead of dumping them.
It’s recommended you post links with spoiler tags to keep the janitors from deleting your stuff.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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Posting for the sheer sake of posting, look at me everyone.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
Anonymous
How would you guys characterize the legendaries? I'm looking into writing about Yveltal being released after Lysandre's defeat and trying to understand why a human would release him through talking with his siblings.
Anonymous
>>16894907 >Yveltal Reluctant monster with a dash of apathy. Doesn't like having to murder everything but accepts it as an unfortunate fact of life. Only wants to be left the fuck alone and doesn't take kindly to the dumb nosy kid who keeps shoving poképuffs down his gullet.
>Xerneas A noble. Has nothing but the best intentions, but has his head too stuck up his own ass to understand Yveltal is not a cackling evil madman. They don't kill each other because MUH BALANCE, mind you.
>Zygarde Stoic and levelheaded. Emotions go from mildly disinterested to disappointed but not surprised.
Anonymous
>>16895062 Thanks! Any other ideas for legendaries from the different regions? Mostly since I'm thinking of it as a giant family counseling session. He goes and talks to Xerneas, he goes and talks to Zygarde, he goes to talk with Rayquayza, so on and so forth.
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>>16894907 You don't, they're mysterious beings beyond human comprehension. A sight of them is like a dark cloud thundering over the sky.
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>>16895351 You could try read up on their dex descriptions and ingame lore to maybe build some characterization?
Like I imagine Giratina to be a horribly bored person, since it's forced to guard the Distortion world, where, other than random blocks of earth dissappear and reappear, absolute jackshit happens
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Bumpo. Hope all yall have a safe holiday/new year.
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So instead of asking what you guys are working on, I'm gonna ask what you plan to write, after you finish your current story
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Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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Why are all (most) shipping fics so fucking awful. It's all so out of character, and is usually saddled with an uninteresting "plot"- if you could even call them that. I swear, I've read MAYBE ONE good one- and even that dropped most about pokemon other than the characters; the only pokemon IN it was pikachu.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16911037 It's a matter of opinion.
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>>16911037 I agree, I've read fics from a lot of fandoms, and Pokemon fics tend to be extremely OOC. I think the canon divergence inherent in the game/anime/manga trinity is a contributing factor, but really, Pokemon fanfiction is some of the worst. For some reason, any fanfiction from Japanese fandoms seem to really suck more than western fandoms.
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>>16911037 Maybe you should read this
>>16911122 Some people enjoy it and some don't.
Facts are that writing about in game characters is tough just because some of them lack personality. People aren't into the Manga as much so people other don't understand due to not reading it or just hate it in general. The anime also lacks diverse personality's beyond "Happy" since they can't have too much differences for the kids to see.
Just because it's fanfiction doesn't me writers of it aren't practicing their writing skills in general.
Marcos 0060-9619-1358 (Mawile, Klang, Excadrill)
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Anonymous
>>16911122 Hey, don't gimme that. I WANT, I mean I really, REALLY want good shipping fics. But, like I said, they all seem so out of character.
hey, if you've got suggestions, feel free to post.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16911594 >Suggestions It's like I said, something being GOOD (in the case of fanfiction) is a matter of opinion. Something I think is amazing might be something you think is shit.
Anonymous
>>16911037 Because most shipping stories are written with the relationship (and bumping uglies) as the payoff. Most shippers eat that shit up, and shippers are a huge part of fandom.
I wouldn't call a lot of them OOC though--pokemon characters are easy to twist into a role you want as canon personalities are rare and very shallow when they do exist.
Anonymous
>>16911663 Well, please, try me. Because I'm running on empty as far as fics are concerned right about now.
Anonymous
Oh god, I remember this one weird fanfic I read way the fuck back when, that involved almost all women being slowly turned into pokegirls for some reason, and they could be caught in Pokeballs. Stupidly enough, if you tried to catch a human girl with a pokeball, it would turn her into a pokegirl. Duplica became a Ditto, May a Skitty, and Misty was an Eevee(I think). I didn't get any farther than the 6th chapter or something.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16911684 Well, take something of mine for an example.
It's smut, but it's still shipping and extremely OOC. In the anime, Serena isn't a psychotic bitch who sincerely thinks Ash is in love with her and wants to keep everyone else EVER out of her way, but I still write her as such for the fun of it.
People still seem to like it, though.
It's a matter of opinion.
I don't really "ship" any myself outside of a different game series so I have nothing to give you. Anonymous
>>16911743 You wanna talk about bad fanfiction?
I read a 36 chapter fic where literally nothing happened. Ash found out he could like, morph into pokemon, or some shit? and then spent the rest of the fic training.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16911945 Have you read the works be "He who shall not be named."? The Ash and Bonnie fic? It's like I was in Bulbapedo.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>16912114 >Bulbapedo I thought you'd be a bit above shit like that.
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Where's my Drasna fic lolis aren't the only pokegirls
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16912143 I am. I was just making an example of bad fics.
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>>16911797 Ah.
The fanfictions I usually try to read are a bit longer (20,000+), so maybe that's why I have such a hard time finding ones in character.
And, I'm sure yours is great- that's not even the sort of complaint I'm having. It's just. Like. They all make Ash, like, literally retarded (or older edgy "badass"), his love interest an obsessive, emotional bitch who cries at the slightest altercation (or "grr strang woheman"), and somehow they get together over like, some stupid made-up tournament, where some new villain usually tries to fuck it up?
God it's just all so stupid.
Anonymous
I remember there being a pretty good one about Ash's dad coming back, and them actually getting along okay and everything. But I guess it got taken down. Don't know why.
>>16911670 Yeah, most Pokemon fanfiction isn't that good, unless it's a oneshot.
Really the only comparable fandom I can think of in terms of quality (or lack-their-of) is Ranma 1/2.
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Pokemon ain't even good
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Story I wrote in some Pokemon IRL thread. I was the only one who posted. I also dont know if this is more /o/, or more /vp/...
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>>16912337 I think a lot of fanfiction passes as good, but very VERY few fanfics are recommendable (at least if you get embarrassed by shoddy reccommendations).
>Ranma 1/2 Man that shit is 1000 years old. I'm 1000 years old.
1F
My first attempt.
A young boy cleans his attic for his grandmother one day and discovers she might not have been such a boring lady back in the day. The story of a young hot headed tomboy who walks home from school in the rain one day to witness a very unpleasant surprise of a boy throwing a Vulpix off a bridge into a river. I wrote a short story ages ago and have been working on it off and on, but that was from the Ninetales point of view, I'm doing one from her trainers point of view.
https://www.fanfiction.net/story/story_edit_property.php?storyid=9961582 1F
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>>16915137 I'll be back tomorrow at some point, but if anyone gives it a read, let me know.
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>>16914527 1000 years and 0 good Ryoga/Ranma fics.
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>>16911037 >>16911594 The biggest problem is what Clouded said, but it actually can be expanded on. In the case of game characters, at least like 90% of them lack any personality at all. What that leads to is headcanons, and from what you do see of them evolves into something more full of (at least in the case of characters who you are interested in, which are presumably the ones you are looking for fics of anyway). The problem there is that someone else does the same thing, but they come to a completely different conclusion about the character as you. What happens then is that you read their fic and the character seems OOC to you, but it was perfectly in cahracter for the writer. Usually it's not even something you realize, because usually that kind of character building is almost subconscious, it's an even more subtle thing than realizing you dislike someone's story because they didn't follow some specific headcanon of yours, which is also pretty common.
I realized not too long ago that this is why I can't enjoy a single Roxie fic that anyone else wrote, because my personality for her is really thought out and specific and anything that doesn't fit bothers the hell out of me. Anonymous
>>16915929 What if I only read fics about the anime.
It's not like it's hard to write Ash. But either the person doesn't know how to write at ALL, and he's just exposition dump, figuring out and explaining everything, or they go too far and make him a total idiot.
Same thing with all the other characters.
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>>16916107 I actually dunno about anime fics since I don't have any interest in those. If I were to hazard a guess though I would say the fact that people pick it up at different seasons and stuff would affect things to some degree. I mean I can't say for sure since I've never really watched it but if there are any inconsistencies between seasons it would have the same effect, people who started watching early one would expect Ash to act how he would in the beginning, while someone who didn't start watching until Sinnoh or whatever would expect him to act like that. Also barring anime exclusive characters you have to deal with people who have some (even possibly canon) characterization for a character in another medium that the decide to give to the anime version of the character for whatever reason. In fact if you include the EToP even Ash and Team Rocket have those alternate characterization possibilities too.
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>>16916107 At that point you blame the writer. IF they can't take the time to figure everything out before putting it on paper then they should give up on that chapter and start again.
Again like I said before, the anime has the most generic personality for every character they write which is other "REALLY FUCKING HAPPY!" or "KIND OF A DICK/BITCH/DITSY"
Personally I don't understand why people make their personalitsys all fuck up because I don't write them myself. I'm strictly a Manga/Game writer.
I personally think Ash is a moron but not to the point where he's oblivious to everything and when he tries he's a competent trainer. Love story however I can't tell help there since again I don't write the anime fics. Anonymous
I thought this was a fic thread? Where are the fics? What's the best fics. Long-as-shit ones.
Anonymous
>>16916762 Orzo made a good one but he fucking died in a car accident or something.
Now I'm just waiting for something good instead of the stream of furfaggotry.
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>>16916782 >those trainwrecks >good Anonymous
>>16916782 Not to get off topic, but I've never heard someone other than me that has this same problem.
Does that just seriously blow when your favorite fic just suddenly stops, and you have to just sit and wonder what happened? Did the person lose interest? are they dead?
Same shit happened to me and a
rule 63 Fullmetal Alchemist fic. Sounds dumb- and I thought it would be, but man did that writer know what they were doing. But for what ever reason, 400,000k words in, they drop it like a rock.
Anonymous
>>16916782 Who is Orzo.
How do you know that he's dead.
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>>16916782 >Furfaggotry >Implying that's all that's written here. Not all of us write furfics. Yes a lot of it is shipfics but still not everyone here writes furfics.
We just get a lot of people asking for them just like the draw threads get requests for lewd pokemon art. Anonymous
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>>16916856 >tfw people still follow an incomplete fic you haven't touched in 7 years Several parts loss of interest, time, and drive. I really wish I could finish it, but I'd have to rewatch the series and deal with the secondhand embarrassment of reading an old work and editing the fuck out of it.
I'm so sorry. ;_;
Anonymous
>>16917976 Post it. I want to read it.
Anonymous
>>16918005 Oh, it's not pogeyman. I just felt like sharing because that comment reminded me I got a "x is following y" email a few days ago and was like oh noooooo.
Anonymous
>>16917976 I'm going to assume you aren't talking about the same one that I was talking about?
I mean, that couldn't be you? Could it?
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>>16918035 I still want to read it.
Anonymous
>>16918052 Oh, no no no. I just realized it could be read that way. Sorry for getting your hopes up.
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>>16918091 I figured. But man would that have been crazy. I mean, that is by far my favorite fic. I woulda payed an unprecedented amount of money to see it continued.
Anonymous
>>16917976 >mfw a fanfic is dropped without explanation >mfw I see the same person updating on another one of their profiles on a different site FINE I DIDN'T WANT TO READ YOUR STUPID STORY ANYWAY.
Vulpsis
Alright so I'm almost done updating old stories. After that I have a couple ideas for said horror fics. I won't upload them yet on FF or anywhere else until Halloween but I do want all of your opinions about them before I actually begin wriing. A Prison is being overtaken by an unknown cult where they mass murder the prison guards and gather a specific amount of prisoners into one spot. The protaginist will be some young punk who was just incarcerated for possession when this happened. All the prisoners are bounded and finally set set on fire section by section making the protagonist melt into a wimp pleading for mercy and preying to god. The last thing the protagonist sees is an odd keystone that the cult leader holds as he feels his soul being sucked in and merges with the other prisoners. So that concept, yay or nay? I want to write it in a way that doesn't reveal it's Pokemon so that the ending is a mind blowing moment for those who understand. Another idea I have is a young about to be wed man goes exploring the sand ruins in that Unovan desert because of an awfully bad sandstorm. He takes a rather bad fall and realizes that he's trapped in a room which is slowly being filled due to the said storm. The next day his wife comes looking for him here since this was where questioning leads her and breaks down crying when she sees a Yamask looming over his hand that's reaching out from his body that was buried alive. Pardon the reference there I couldn't resist x3 You guys think I should change them a bit?
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>>16918215 What does the first one have to do with pokemon.
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>>16918251 Are you talking about the prison and odd keystone idea? The cult is sacrificing all of the prisoners so that they could make their own demonic Spiritomb
Anonymous
>>16918211 >a talented artist/writer quits for a fandom you don't like At least I had the decency to fall off a cliff and never been heard from again!
Anonymous
>>16918344 THAT. FUCKING. FEEL.
>favorite fanfiction writer never finishes their best one, and goes on to write Torchwood and Hawaii 5-0 stories FUCK YOOOOOOUUUUUUU
Anonymous
>>16918251 odd keystone = spiritomb
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Anyone know some good romance fanfics? pokemanz of course. Longer the better.
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>>16916856 >>16918391 Y'all/you (two people? Same person?) aren't talking about silkendreammaid are you? Returning Echoes?
On the off chance you are: Almost five years, and I'm still bitter.
Anonymous
Same person. I posted both the posts you're replying to. AND FUCK YES THAT IS WHAT AND WHO I AM TALKING ABOUT. Maybe we should STOP talking about it though. It's not exactly Pokemon. But, again, FUCK THAT PERSON OH MY GOD I'M ANGRY. Anyway, back to Pokemon, I guess.
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>>16918827 forgot to reply because I'm a dumbass
>>16918742 Anonymous
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>>16918928 Hey man, you should read it. I mean, sure, I'm still frustrated, and that other anon is clearly off his rocker with sheer rage, but it's still 400000 enjoyable, well written, well paced (mostly. Gets slower later) words of fanfiction.
Anonymous
>>16919006 Not that guy, and that all sounds great, but knowing it is incomplete is enough to keep me the fuck away. Too many fic blue balls over the years.
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>>16919070 Ahhh, don't be like that. It's not hard to make your own ending for a fic like this (but THAT DOESN'T EXCUSE THE AUTHOR, DAMN THEM TO HELL), and the moments it has in it are fantastic.
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>>16919070 Well, you're entitled to your opinion, but even with it's lack of conclusion, I am still so very glad I read it. I reread it all the time.
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>>16918215 Second one, definitely. But make it seem like he's going to escape.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16916762 There's some good ones in the archive posted in the OP. Survival Project and Anima Ex Machina are good picks I can recommend, but the latter isn't complete.
There's also mine, but it just mashes about a million different genres and universes together and
I'm not really all that confident in it. Anonymous
Has the guy who was writing the bullied May fic shown up again?
Anonymous
>>16920006 Yeah dawg what's up
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>>16919987 >There's also mine, but it just mashes about a million different genres and universes together and I'm not really all that confident in it. Summarize it for me.
and is it long?
Anonymous
>>16917967 I followed some author once. Made some pretty good pokemon smut and also made some decent original stories.
Now he have pretty much abandoned it all to write ponys
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>>16920442 >quit to work on ponys Ouch.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16920208 A summary is in the catalog in OP, it's
"The Angel of Reckoning." And yes, it's long, albeit far from complete, though I have no intent to abandon it.
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>>16911037 Welcome to fanfiction
Arent you entertained?
Dont fucking expect good writing
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>>16926294 I feel like there's a pretty big gap between writing well and having even the most vague grasp on the characters
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>>16915137 The link requires you to log-in
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>>16926294 It's probably not something Pokemon will ever have, but there are high quality (not HURR I'M PUBLISHED DURR) fanfics floating around in other fandoms.
>>16920442 >abandoned it all to write ponys I grieve with thee, holy shit.
Anonymous
>>16920691 >>16931002 ponys is that much worse than pokemon? especially when we're talking shitty fanfiction?
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>>16931191 Pokemon had a 1000 year head start on the latest gen of ponies (FiM) and still did not produce a subspecies as reviled as bronies.
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>>16931191 was that pick an accident or am i missing a /b/-tier joke?
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>>16918211 >mfw I sincerely hope people feel this way about me. I just wanna be liked.
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>>16917702 Orzo was a guy that made his own fanfic based on characters /vp/ provided him with. And yes, it actually was good unlike what people around here will tell you.
And yes, all you kids write is shitty shipping/ furfaggot fanfics.
I liked it because the Pokemon world has so much potential to have good stories written about it and Orzo captured it.
And as for his death, he claimed he was in a "car accident' and was in a lot of pain. Guess he's gone now.
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>>16932202 >And yes, all you kids write is shitty shipping/ furfaggot fanfics. So why are you in here, again? We're perfectly happy without your oh-so-special "input", thanks.
Anonymous
>>16932202 So what you're saying here is that all we write is Shipping/Furfag fics? And you're mad that you can't self insert a OC into someone elses fic and have them write about it.
I do have respect for him in the fact that he took characters he didn't make himself and find ways to fit them in with the existing other "OCs" in the fic. But sometimes you have to stop and think about what you say. Yes some people here and all people write some form of Ship fic or Furfic. Most of the time it's done by requests of other anons. But people don't write that all the time. Some of us write other things like horror or adventure fics, sometimes comedy ect. From personal experience I've tried writing an adventure fic, tho it failed because I was overhyping a concept that wasn't worth hyping up that would piss some people off.
Overall no one is dissing Orzo
only some are but they're being immature about it just we're all writers in the end. whether it be shitty fics or good ones, it's all trial and error and the tastes of the reader.
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>>16932279 >>16932639 you guys are too cute
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>>16932663 I'm just talking about it like a reasonable person.
You chose to clearly not read it so not my problem, I got my two cents in.
Anonymous
>>16932766 no it was too long lol
Anonymous
>>16932663 >>16932817 Oh shit, we've been trolled.
Time to delete the thread and never write furfaggotry again unless we want this Anon coming in and putting us in our place!
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>>16932906 If you stopped replying to me everything would be okay.
Anonymous
>>16932817 That's your issue but I guess I'll summarize it even tho I feel this might be bait.
Not all of us write Ship/furfics all the time. We don't insert OC from others like Orzo did
he did a good job of it with interactions between them but not the point. We write other genres ect ect.
Honestly it's up to the taste of the reader to enjoy another persons fic. IF you don't enjoy it then write yourself.
>>16932906 >Pic related unless you're being sarcastic.
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>>16933002 I'm not the dude that's trolling, I normally just lurk these threads, but I'm seriously disappointed by the lack of fics that could actually appeal to normalfags. No one's really putting their heart into anything, it's just a lot of fetish shit.
I never submitted a character to Orzo's story, but I liked it because I could feel that he actually put effort into explaining how the Pokeworld worked and how Pokemon interacted with humans without sex and all that bullshit.
This is /vp/, I should know better, but I guess I just got a little spoiled.
Anonymous
>>16933084 Honestly if you want something like that I could personally do it. It might take some time but honestly it's not like I haven't tried before. Again a lot of the work done here is by request or some fics made by the writers mind.
And writers do put their hearts into their fics, just not in the way you'd want it to. Again I haven't personally read his work in that thread but I'm sure it was good, just not all of us did what he does. I don't know how to explain it in the right way but again it's to the individual writer and reader to know what they like and what to read or write.
Again if you want something like Orzos work then idk what to tell you, but I personally can try to do something adventure like and such. Hell I might make up a new region if wanted.
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>>16933256 Ignore the whole "putting their hearts into it" bullshit, I'm just tired of the lack of normalfag material. Or at least semi-normalfag material.
I've seen enough of Serena having sex with Ash's Pikachu.
Anonymous
>>16933320 Again you're reading the wrong kind of works for you. What kind of things do you like?
Maybe I can help. Some of the works in the catalog might interest you tho personally I haven't read most of them.
If you don't like that kind of work I'd avoid Gs work then. Anonymous
>>16933398 Dude, don't bother catering to me, I'm one person. If majority of /vp/ enjoys furfics, write furfics.
As for what I like, I like pretty much everything as long as it doesn't involve furfaggotry or pedo
=3 shit.
I'm just voicing my opinion.
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>>16932202 >original character do not steal fanfiction >good Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16933084 I wish there was a way I could answer this without coming off as arrogant.
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>>16933435 I know you're voicing an opinion, and honestly I feel happy knowing everyone at least finds a work they like. Honestly if I write something for one person, others will read it an like the work as well.
Also it matters what you consider
Pomf =3 material when it comes to characters.
Anonymous
>YamiMarik1994 >Neverending Pokemon Romances >Last work: Spyro Yaoi >Quit writting FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16933772 It's really a shame. I liked her writing
Anonymous
I like getting people off.
Anonymous
>>16935873 Really?
What do you write to do it?
Human on human, Pokémon on human or Pokémon or Pokémon?
Straight, yaoi or yuri?
Anonymous
>>16936184 Human x Human rarely, Pokemon x Human mostly, Pokemon x Pokemon almost never.
Straight.
Anonymous
>>16937032 Any examples of your work somewhere?
Might be something I wanna read when I wake up
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>>16937085 Yup, I just don't have my trip on.
Anonymous
>>16937032 Have you written anything lengthy?
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>>16937268 What's kind of.
Anonymous
>>16937293 Usually just one-shots, some multi-chapter.
Anonymous
>>16937317 Could we get a link to them?
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>>16937317 You should write long ones.
Long as shit ones.
Anonymous
>>16937833 I've tried. I'm afraid they get boring if I go too drawn-out.
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>>16916782 Someone started a story about Team Flare in the last thread but it looks like it got passed over for crazy Serena and furfics.
Anonymous
>>16938009 Nah dude. Long character development is the best.
If it's a romance thing, I want to read them going through every stage of it, like you do at that age.
All of that "how am I supposed to act here" stuff always brings a big smile to my face.
Plus, you always have public scenes/incidents, which are always super fun/satisfying to read. Like, some guy tries to talk shit, and they ain't having any of it.
anyhoo. sorry for rambling.
Anonymous
>>16938457 Not bad advice at all, I'm usually just all smut, all the time, but I'd love to break away from it.
Not gonna happen, though.
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Well, time to write more furshit about Nurse Joy.
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>>16938492 >Not gonna happen, though. Eh. It was worth a try.
On the same subject, I don't suppose anyone knows of any fics like what I'm talking about?
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>16938457 Character development is always good... I think it's my favorite thing to write.
Anonymous
>>16940156 Love it if you'd share.
I swear getting people to post fics is like pulling teeth. Not sure why.
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>>16920156 How goes the fic? Been a few weeks since the last update. No rush, of course, but just curious about its status.
Anonymous
>>16940275 Because everybody talks about this shit like it's already written down when in fact they are just ideas we'll "get around to."
SHOTS
FIRED
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16940796 #icyhotpatchrequired
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I'm sure I'm in the minority when I say I recommend this fic, so, trust me when I say your mileage may vary, but:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5229018/1/For-A-Friend https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5229029/1/Just-Friends The first one, I really don't like at all. But it was short, and worth it to read, so that I could read the sequel.
Again, probably very polarizing for most people. And to add to that, it's about the Anime characters, so that narrows it down even further. Pretty dumb and sappy. Gets majorly "ehhh" the last couple chapters.
But I figure any rec is better than none at all.
Anonymous
>>16940275 Because everything we post is apparently "furshit" or "shipping" that's not wanted.
Crazy Serena isn't shipping, damn it. Anonymous
>>16944224 >Crazy Serena isn't shipping, damn it. WELLLL.. That's... Debatable.
Anonymous
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>>16943130 Cool. Will read.
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>>16937584 Oh my, that wasn't halfbad.
Looking forward to see it finished
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>>16945669 Yeah, I know, I know.
I don't INTEND it to be.
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>>16954410 Another small Bampu
Anonymous
Greetings, folks. Guy who wrote the greentext story about Rival!Serena losing her Mega Ring getting picked on and insulted. The fact that bullied characters seems to be gaining popularity here coupled with the constant posting of the greentext in Serena threads made me start thinking about writing a sequel. Should I do it in regular prose or keep the greentext?
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>>16959200 I'm not that in to bullied character, but I think regular prose would better.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>16959200 If you post it I recommend you put it in a pastebin and post a link.
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>>16959200 don't forget to repost your previous story so that people get an idea of what you were talking about
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Fuck, how do I do battle scenes.
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My Nurse Joy fic is going to be so much fap fodder for people.
Anonymous
>>16969367 I don't believe you.
Anonymous
>>16969968 Well, you should. So hard.
Anonymous
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>>16969367 Give us a clip soon then
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>>16963905 You could try reading some other fics to see how other authors does it. Maybe watch the anime and try and describe what they're doing?
Anonymous
Has this been written yet?
Anonymous
>>16976711 I don't think so, I'm afraid
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So what are you guys working?
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>>16976728 So what are you guys working on?
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/ZMctw7Ac Clip, contains /ss/ so be warned. This is all it'll actually have of it though, don't worry if that's not your bag. Anonymous
>>16981383 I liked it. Looking forward to the final release
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>>16982982 Not author, but I think SS means Straight Shota, if that is what you're asking Anonymous
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>>16983654 I wouldn't know, I'm not in it. But I could imagine it would be quite friendly
Anonymous
>>16983654 It's fine, we either discuss writing or just sit there in silence.
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>>16984227 idle relay chat at its best
Anonymous
>>16984227 Sounds like my kind of place.
Anonymous
>Gen VI introduced even more delicious NPC Trainers. >All fanfics still seems to be be about Serena or Shauna
Anonymous
>>16984260 damn i'm too shy
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16984438 Don't be shy, we're quite nice to newcomers.
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>>16984438 You're not alone in that part
Anonymous
>>16984475 i need a name i can't just use my normal irc name because it's literally my name.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>16984490 Well do you have any ideas?
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>>16984646 No;... Ill figure something out.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>16985327 A bit too short for my taste, but it being a clip makes me more excited for the finished piece. Keep it up G!
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>>16984393 I personally believe there should be more Calem/Shauna fics, but I get what you mean.
Haven't found a hex Maniac or a Pokémon Breeder fic, despite them being pretty popular.
Hell even Valerie haven't gotten that many fics.
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well i joined the irc as jordan but that name is registered, so i have to find something else.
Anonymous
>>16976711 I thought someone started and then didn't continue? I recall someone saying something along those lines in the previous thread.
If so, I could probably crank out something since I don't have work tomorrow. What's the actual prompt? Just female Meowstick protecting her little brother from life and other wondrous things?
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>>16987429 Not the OR, but I think it was just that. Maybe with some smut in over it.
Anonymous
does anyone know what happened to the guy that wrote that solaceon daycare thing
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>>16988267 He doesn't do that anymore.
Anonymous
>>16988267 He stopped because writing pokemon smut stopped being interesting for him
Anonymous
>>16989989 No he still writes Pokemon, just the humans, not the creatures.
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>>16989989 >interesting no, he just is apparently so into homestuck and lyraeon that everything else is blacked out
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/AgNWSZdG Nothing much new, just both clips in one big chunk for those who prefer that.
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>16990028 Ah, thought he stopped completely writing for it.
Anonymous
>>16998628 No, he just does human pairings, Homestuck, and whatever lyraeon likes.
Anonymous
>>17000331 It's a shame really, Liked his pokémon on human smut quite a lot.
But time changes I guess
Anonymous
>>17000397 Don't bother asking him about it either, he'll just ignore you unless it's about homestuck or saying he's awesome
he's a completely different person from when he did pokemonxhuman and doesn't even notice it
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
My Joy post was removed so I'm guessing it's not allowed here. Never mind, then.
Anonymous
>>17001344 but i like reading your stuff
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>>17001606 It probably got deleted for the little /ss/ scene it had. It didn't have sex (and it won't) but I'm guessing boobs are enough.
Anonymous
>>17001316 Real shame when that happens
>>17001344 Well damn, hope that doesn't discourage you from continuing it. Maybe just drop a line that a new chapter is done?
Anonymous
These threads are creepy.
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>>17003132 I don't know, I quite enjoy them
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http://youtu.be/6SBnekHKkZQ I saw this and thought of you guys.
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>>17008924 No luck yet, I'm afraid.
Personally though, I'd settle for a more vanilla female greninja smut fic, but I guess that's still pretty far off.
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>>17002244 I'm still gonna finish it regardless.
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Off the 10th page this goes.
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Another bump off the 10th page.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>17015845 DOITDOITDOITDOITDOITDOIT
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>17015945 Can't, remember? It gets removed. Just saying it's still being worked on.
Anonymous
>>17009144 i'd write it myself
but i can't get off to things i make myself
Anonymous
I wrote a fanfic once, I feel like doing it again.The first time, it was with MLP. I feel like writing something about a young mans adventure through Kalos, hell. Maybe I'll base it off Pokemon X and Y. Thoughts? Should I go for it?
Anonymous
>>17016900 If you've ever wrote about MLP I strongly advise against breeding/ writing anything.
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>>17016900 Since you need to kill yourself for writing MLP fanfiction, I think i'll take your idea.
Thanks bro
ny. Anonymous
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>>17016933 >If you wrote about something I don't like, never write again. Grow the fuck up. For all you know, someone you really like could've written MLP and just never released it yet.
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Joy is helping Machop and Growlithe while Chansey services the trainers waiting in the lobby
Anonymous
>>17021827 Dude.
Come on.
Just post and delete.
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>>17022568 I agree with this guy.
Teasers are bad and you should feel bad.
Anonymous
>>17022568 I don't want banned, though.
Anonymous
>>17023469 Just evade it man.
Or at least put it up on a fanfiction website or something.
Anonymous
>>17023631 I'm with putting it some FF site because then I would be able to read it even when the thread dies.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>17023678 http://pastebin.com/u/Goombario Preview #2 is everything + stuff not here.
Anonymous
>>17023750 >"... Excuse me?" Duplica raised an eyebrow. "I'm not showing a group of strangers my bra." >"I would never ask you to show me that, ma'am." Steven shook his head. "I'm meaning your tits." 11/10 Maximum laughs
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>>17024420 I do love my Duplica story. I'm so proud of it.
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Hmm. After noticing a significant lack of 6th gen stories in this thread, I am now considering making a one shot (smut maybe?) involving a timid MTrainer and naughty Florges. thoughts?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
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>>17025225 We could always have G post his Serena fic.
I could post my SerenaXShauna fic.
I'm not personally into that kind of stuff but go on ahead. Anonymous
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>>17016900 I'd say you should go for it
Anonymous
>tfw theres no good Anabel fics >tfw there will never be a fic where yandere Anabel comes back and battles yandere Serena for Ash's affections >tfw everyone's gonna call me a fag for liking a "low-tier" pokegirl anyway
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>>17016482 I think we would many more smutfics if people could get off to what they write
Anonymous
Writing is fine, but motivating myself to write is the challenge. What keeps you going, writefags? Besides having a few followers. I could use advise.
Anonymous
>>17031291 Have you tried writeordie?
Anonymous
>>17031414 No; haven't even heard of it.
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>>17031648 Thank you kindly.
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>>17031654 Let me know if it helps.
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>>17031757 I will be sure to. Looking forward to giving it a go after work.
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>>17016051 What the fuck why?
This is 4chan fucking shit mods I swear
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>>17023750 Liking it so far
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>>16933084 I don't write very often, but when I actually do get around to it I write for two reasons. I write what appeals to me, and what there'll be an audience for. Gotta be both; if there's no audience, there's no point in writing because I can just sound it out in my head and save myself the trouble, and if it doesn't appeal to me I doubt I'd be able to do it justice
or keep up motivation, I have enough problems with that as is .
In my experience, furfaggotry falls under both of those headings more often than anything else, but I'm a big sucker for world-building and character-building as well. Give me a specific scenario of something you'd like to see written, and if it turns out we both want the same thing maybe I'll get around to it at some point.
Horribly late but I just thought I'd throw that out there.
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>>17037425 I world build to a fault. And write epics.
I've learned to try and craft my characters from my readers' feedback - it can be difficult on occasion however when you have an idea in mind.
Anonymous
>>17037425 I have a annoying habit of building up worlds, chars and stuff like that, but I'm unable to actually write it down.
Anonymous
>>17038216 I feel that. I have a physical copy of my character references for exactly that reason.
Anonymous
>>17038260 It's annoying because I really want to write stories.
And I want to contribute to these threads other than bumping and sharing thoughts about the stories being posted
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>>17038638 Reviews are priceless. A sincere, well-thought out commentary is seriously the best resource available to any author if you ask me. Keep doing what you're doing, keeping in mind that it is a contribution all the same.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>17038638 Well what issues are you having with the concepts; maybe I can help.
Like do you have issues going into detail about what characters see? Maybe you can't describe a character in the right way?
Anonymous
>>17038745 You've already helped quite a bit, I'm the guy who talked about the Giratina story. I already have a couple of scenes and similar down in my head, it's just actually writing them down, that's eluding me
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>17038921 Oh hey it's you. Nice to see you came back and got some concepts and ideas worked out.
Are you just having issues getting motivated to write it all down? I get that feeling a lot. Like when I really want to write something and I have a huge idea for it, then I just stare at a blank doc and wonder what I should do with myself.
Anonymous
>>17039038 It's pretty much just getting it down. Everything I thought about, just becomes static when I try type it. Though at some point, I'm just gonna say fuck it and force it through. Perhaps the dam will burst and I can actually write it
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>17039210 I find when I actually get started an get something down on paper that all the ideas just start flowing and I get things done. Again just starting simple in the beginning will get the thoughts through that dam.
Anonymous
Hey, I can't say I'm a regular here, but I saw the thread and thought I'd take a quick look through. Anyway, I was reading through some of the comments and would really like to hear some opinions on something. I just started a new story and a big theme I wanted to play around with is the difference between humans and animals (pokemon). In this regard, sexuality is a big part of not only how people see animals, but a person's identity too, so this comes up a fair bit in my story. I don't write anything explicit, but would something like this put many people off? Especially since the story mainly focuses on pokemon, and there is a brief human/pokemon relationship. Just looking for thoughts.
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>>17039311 You have the best pictures.
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>>17039468 I'd probably give it a try. Your idea sounds interesting, even if you're not gonna put anything explicit in it(which I prefer)
Anonymous
>>17039311 I do hope so. I'm probably gonna try writing some in the weekend though or just see if I can write at least something.
Regardless, Happy new year everyone!
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>>17039860 Happy New Year!
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Small new years bump
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>>17028104 Anabel is
my waifu and the only one I still ship with Ash after all these years. I'd read it. Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>17039468 Sounds like it would make for an enjoyable read. The fact you intend to thoughtfully explore these things makes it not off-putting to me.
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I wish Orzo would show up again I miss reading something that wasn't shipping shit.
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>>17028104 Anabel isn't even on the fucking waifu tier list.
Step up your game, or else people gonna say you lame.
Anonymous
>>17044091 Butler, how do you keep at it? Like writing your series and all?
An anonymous friend Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>17044363 I can't help myself coming up with ideas, honestly. I just get a lot of ideas in my head, sort them out and then at that point, they'd be wasted if I didn't do anything with them. I just enjoy doing it.
hello Vulpsis
Happy new years wwyr/vp write thread! I'll update once the wheels of my "grand project" start moving!
Anonymous
>>17023750 why don't you write with megadeth anymore? if someone knows. Anonymous
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>>17025225 Damn, should've had done more research about writing fapfics, but oh well. Here's a small sample of what I planned
http://pastebin.com/nUPqjJY8 This is actually based on the giggle that florges does in pokemon amie Anonymous
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>>17051076 It's not bad. Even though it implies that femdom is gonna be prominent theme it, which is kinda a turn off for me, I'm still gonna look forward to the completed fic, So keep it up
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>>17048860 Don't wanna talk about it. Anonymous
>>17048860 I could imagine they had a falling out. That crap unfortunately happens
Anonymous
>>17057670 It wasn't so much of a falling out. I don't really know what the fuck it was. He just decided we can't be friends anymore. Anonymous
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>>17051076 >http://pastebin.com/nUPqjJY8 Pretty cool dude, maybe you should work more in the description, but it's ok.
I don't know why, but that pose seems to lewd for me, it's like she was presenting or something, her leaves looks like big and fluffy thighs Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>17058890 It's not a good idea to get into it publicly, really. I'll end up saying shit I don't mean. Anonymous
Who's this Witchan fuker I've been hearing about?
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
>>17068097 >Witchan Pomfrets fanfiction writer. Anonymous
>>17068097 Truly, Witchan is one of the greatest literary minds of our generation.
Just look at that descriptive, artful prose.
Anonymous
>>17068228 What? Who?
>>17068448 I'm starting to regret I asked
Anonymous
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>>17068493 You should.
All I have to say is
Ash and Bonnie fuckfic. also a new one he made is SerenaXAshxBonnie fuckfic. Anonymous
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>>17068543 >Reads Link >Serena and Korrina >Potential.Jpg >Reads the first 25 words Yeah.....
No.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>17058918 here is one of florges's official artwork. tell me that isn't too lewd