Ok i posted this in the draw thread but got little to no input. Gonna post here in hopes this idea isn't total shit but I won't bump it so please tell me your thoughts.

I essentially just want to decide on my first non-test animation, and here is one of the ideas i want to do.

Pokemon N version

Here's how it goes

>Oak fiddling with christmas lights
>I bet absol did this... wha?

>Chibi kid N comes up with his hands out
>What?
>"Pankyman plz"
>Alright, are you a boy or a girl?
>"Wha?"
>Boy or girl?
>"Isn't it obvious?"
>...
>Boy or girl?!
>"Calm down, I'm a boy-"
>What's my grandson's name?!
>"...Uh-"
>Throws pokeball at N's face

>"Yayyy"
>*hugs pokeball as it opens into a pidgey, continues hugging it, pidgey makes pidgey noises*
>Stares at it happily for a bit
>Sad music plays as camera slows zooms in on N's slowly saddening face
>"Be free my friend!"
>*opens arms and releases pidgey*
>gold/silver ending music plays as pidgey flies off into the sunset
>Slides back to Oak onlooking the event
>I don't want to live
>in this region anymore
>Ending is just Oak flying a Golurk

Just tell me it's shit and to give up and go to another idea real quick plz /vp/