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>>18112751 >Post your favorite Pokemon fan fictions >Ask for opinions on your fics >Share what you're working on and post updates to your work >And etcetera IRC:
>irc.rizon.net #vpwritethread Catalog:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1saTgrG8d0KhCsVwne47w-kYbfGoL9e7wsnrEEzoqqY8/ FAQ:
Can we post NSFW fics?:
>Yes. NSFW pics?:
>No. How do I get a story in the catalog?
>Post in here with the name of the author (If linking from a non-anonymous source), the name of the fic, the genre, and a short summary, and then ask for it to be put in the catalog. If we miss your request, just post again or ask in the irc. Preferably, post in this format to make it easier on us to identify what needs to be added (this will speed up the process of getting your work into the catalog as well): >Title, Author >Link >Genre >Description When posting fics in the thread, please post them as links instead of dumping them.
It’s recommended you post links with spoiler tags to keep the janitors from deleting your stuff.
Also, we're keeping a pastebin full of ideas. If you need inspiration, check inside - any ideas you have yourself will likely be added as well if you just ask.
Current ideabin:
http://pastebin.com/yE8R0y2h
TheOnlyMoth
>>18308095 Last thread, we came to a horrible realization that Pastebin is starting to get banned in different countries, TILTED the thread into limit, and had quite a bit of stories to share.
http://pastebin.com/unTDyDx1 http://pastebin.com/VyxS1BV1 http://pastebin.com/TmTGjE1Y TheOnlyMoth
Say, does this mean that we will have to find an alternate place to upload stories without getting banned from places like FFnet?
Anonymous
>>18308352 It's possible. Whatever happened to text-upload? I think the writethread used to use it in the past.
The Half Blood Jester
Anonymous
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
>>18308595 jesus man it's been a while
The Half Blood Jester
>>18308758 It's honestly been forever. Forgot to give the catalog over to anyone, I'm honestly more satisfied with the new one though. How have you been?
standingon !msOUNdt4dI
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>>18308819 I've been swell, been writing and stuff, same old basically
Anonymous
http://pastebin.com/TtJ7Sxtx http://pastebin.com/tDHa5h3n "Little girls and Big Pokemon"
There needs to be more of this.
Anonymous
>>18309745 What about
big guys and little Pokemon? Or even just little guys and big Pokegirls?
Anonymous
>>18309953 >Male human on female Pangoro Why does this idea please me so much?
Anonymous
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>>18310096 Because you have terr
ific taste.
Anonymous
>>18309953 >big guys and little Pokemon? Anonymous
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>>18308426 I think it outright died.
Shame, there were a few stories posted there that I don't believe the writers put anywhere else.
Anonymous
anything with foot focus?
Anonymous
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>>18310765 Still gotta finish that fic, G. Anonymous
>>18313206 There's a few requests for stuff like that in the ideabin, but no one seems interested in writing it.
Wendy 3437 3755 1543 (Larvesta/Magmar/Fletchinder)
Wendy 3437 3755 1543 (Larvesta/Magmar/Fletchinder) Sun 02 Mar 2014 07:47:23 No. 18318225 Report Quoted By:
>>18308095 I just wanted to pop in to say I'm 90% sure I was the person who took that OP picture originally. This is wonderful.
Anonymous
Xavier Lukhas
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>>18308595 God fucking dammit.
Anonymous
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>>18316281 >tfw there will never be a Serena footfic Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Chapter 2 of my Serena story is called “Grooming Furfrou”
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>18325339 Looking forward to it :^) Anonymous
>>18325339 you seem to have a lot of work in progress there G. How do you maintain them efficiently?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>18328289 >How do you maintain them efficiently? That depends on how you define "efficiently."
Anonymous
At the risk of sounding edgy: I don't suppose there's anything involving sadism from a Pokemon towards a (hopefully masochistic) human being/trainer? Preferably from something serpentine.
Anonymous
>>18328807 As far as I'm aware, no, there isn't.
That can change though, Anon. Anonymous
>>18328849 But I'm lazy. If I wanted to write it myself I would have done so instead of asking for something that was already written.
Anonymous
>>18328890 I know Anon, but is there anything very specific you're asking for, or would you like
_____________Me________ to go to town with it?
Anonymous
>>18328940 I certainly won't complain if you were to go to town with it. All I'll say is that I have a slight bias towards the Pokemon being
Serperior but you're welcome to pick whichever one you want.
Thank you in advance, too.
The Half Blood Jester
>>18329009 You sound familiar...
Anonymous
>>18331338 Familiarity is
subjective , although I do hope it's a positive thing in this case.
Anonymous
>>18331420 Your writefag here,
I hope you don't mind a possible wait of a few days... I want to ensure that this is quality work (especially since this is a different topic for me), and to be honest, I'm kind of busy with personal business.
A person on /vp/ with a life?! How?! Anonymous
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>>18331515 Take your time. It's not like I'm going to order you around, much less put a time limit on it. I'm just grateful you chose to write such a thing at all.
Anonymous
>>18331338 And since the thread is slow enough, I suppose asking you how/where you know me from wouldn't be too amiss?
The Half Blood Jester
>>18332199 Have you shown up in these threads in the past? I may have mistaken you for someone else who likes Serperior fics as well.
Anonymous
>>18332829 Oh. No, I asked about serpentine fics in general once, but that's it.
The Half Blood Jester
>>18332842 Then I must be mistaking you for someone else. I apologize.
Anonymous
>>18332859 That's fine. I was just curious, I don't mind.
Anonymous
>>18324320 Incoming fic about this. Stay tuned while I attempt productivity. Anonymous
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>>18334095 Fucking AWESOME. Anonymous
>>18334095 >Pump Gourgeist full of seed >Gourgeist >Seed __________kek__________ Anonymous
>>18336036 It will be hard not to make a pun about that. Like making flower/nectar jokes about Lilligant. TheOnlyMoth
>>18337349 How the heck do you make puns/jokes about that? "Let me pollinate you? Anonymous
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>>18338425 Well, not really literally joking about it more that 'I know it's ridiculous and silly to use those terms but I couldn't pass up the chance.'
I'd still need to consider writing a fic about a Beedrill/Vespiquen pollinating a flower Pokemon, in which case I would use such terms liberally. Anonymous
I'm sick as a dog and need something to do/watch because I can't will myself to work on my fanfic. Suggestions?
Anonymous
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>>18340113 I'm afraid I got nothing Anon. I don't watch anime or other kinds of to watch on the 'net and I'm just as blank to other stuff you could do.
Perhaps finding some stories to read or play some games?
Anonymous
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>>18340113 Go watch an anime called Brigadoon to learn about the love between a loli and a robot
it's on youtube Anonymous
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>>18340113 watch a TV show called Portlandia
best satire you will ever see
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18332936 Hey Anon,
I misread your first post and thought you were biased ~against~ it being a Serperior.
Since I planned it out and stuff, and was planning on starting now, I was wondering what you would think of a shiny Seviper . Basically what I'm going with is that, as a result of being a shiny, the Poison-Tip on the Seviper's tail, instead of [read on if you don't mind spoiling it] causing agonizing pain,
poisons the victim in addition to putting them into a state of absolute euphoria, causing them to involuntarily beg for more torture, which gets the shiny Seviper off. If you'd still like me to write it with Serperior.
Sorry Anonymous
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>>18341706 That's entirely fine with me, actually. Though it's awfully nice that you asked me beforehand, so thank you for that too.
Anonymous
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>>18341706 It's entirely fine if you write it using that idea and the shiny Seviper, actually. Though it's awfully nice that you asked me beforehand, so thank you for that too.
Sorry about that, I wasn't exactly clear with my first post. cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anyone got anything on an MC and the female MC? Not too into Pokephilia at the moment.Smut not required
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>18345162 Nothing in the catalog?
TheOnlyMoth
>>18345084 >>18342250 Hm? a hint of a new yanderevoir story?
Anonymous
Blarghhh. This smut scene is kicking my ass. It feels really weird writing it in first person.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18345993 >yanderevoir It's hard to hide from something that can sense emotions (like fear) and teleport across many barriers.
Anonymous
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>>18346379 But that makes it much better!
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18346225 Your not alone mate Anonymous
I wrote an Emboar fapfic with a female trainer a long time ago, but never saved it, would anyone happen to have it?
Anonymous
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>>18348394 I've looked a bit around and I'm afraid I haven't found it. Sorrry Anon.
Anonymous
>>18346764 This needs to happen immediately.
Tinfoot
I noticed that when I write my fics, I try to make them feel like an anime (not like the pokemon anime,more like something similar to DBZ or FMA). Do other people do this and is it a good thing?
Anonymous
>>18349937 >watching the light fade from her eyes forever after a critical Nuzlocke is a bitch.
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18350051 Hey, crits happen
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>18350005 Stop doing that.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18349937 I threw the IU early (Chapter 4) and cast all that other stuff in its shadow.
>>18350005 I'm curious what you mean by "feel like an anime." Filler episodes? Fan service? Kick-ass sound track? Make Koreans put down the cat food and do 7/8ths of the work?
Anonymous
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>>18352668 That last bit would save me a loooot of trouble.
Hmm. I gotta make a few phone calls.
Anonymous
>>18352668 By "like an anime" I mean fast paced, epic and strong. It's difficult to explain, but you know how when Goku punches someone in DBZ and it stops for a moment? To let it, I dunno, sink in? Something like that. I think.
Anonymous
>>18352931 That doesn't really work in fanfiction.
Anyway, I checked the catalog for straight-up romances with MC/Female MC from the games (preferably Gen II and up) and nothing popped up. Anyone got anything? Not looking for smut.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18352931 There is a lot you can do in written format to tweak both perceived passage of time and actual reader time to influence the impact of your plot points, but it's not analogous, as
>>18352974 mentioned. It's more a matter of contrast and controlling the flow of detail than it is freeze framing or bullet timing a particular contact for emphasis.
I guess the natural question is, does this method you employ work when used to write DBZ or FMA fics?
Anonymous
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>>18353081 I don't write fics for either of those series, it's just how my mind works.
Anonymous
>http://pastebin.com/j458UCxN I just started working on a thing
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>18354446 You've got a premise, now run with that ball!
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>18352931 >>18353081 Just jumping in here for a second; that's actually something one of my reviewers has raised to me - the "like an anime" - point, but the way I hear it is different. The way she points it out is in regard to elevated/more intense emotional responses to situations, exaggerated/comedic sexuality, etc.
Does that help at all, or am I just running my mouth?
Anonymous
any update on the gourgeist fic this anon
>>18334095 talked about?
Anonymous
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>>18360074 Hey anon, that's me. Sorry I've taken a while on it, I'm trying my best, but I've been slowed down considerably. I can't give a good timeframe on when it'd be done but I'm nearing completion, relatively speaking, if I can just work past this one bit.
Anonymous
>>18360074 I feel bad since I promised I'd have it done yesterday, so I'll at least post my progress (up to the smut bit which I might end up cutting and rewriting entirely for as hard as it's blocked me).
http://pastebin.com/Mziy1kTg Anonymous
>>18341706 Any chance of an update on this? I figured I'd ask since
>>18360074 did too.
Anonymous
>>18359411 No, do continue.
Anonymous
Every fic here is lude and every fic on FF is shipping anime characters. Any fics just to be comfy?
Anonymous
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>>18362738 I don't know any fics like that but I certainly wouldn't mind reading one. Slice of life fics are really rare for some reason. Especially if you use canon characters so that I don't have any need to grow attached to new ones.
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18361702 Well, Anon, I'm trying my hardest but I'm in a bit of an overload right now. Been getting little sleep and having late nights with early mornings because workload.
Despite my best efforts, It's going to be like this until Friday, so I likely won't have it out until Saturday the earliest, but certainly no later than Sunday evening.
On the bright side, I have started work on it and have made some progress with the intro, which is for me the hardest part. Writing the actual
Bondage scene shouldn't take me that long to write.
~Krouscht@Nite (Mobile Edition!)
Anonymous
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>>18363589 That's entirely fair enough. Hopefully your workload calms down a bit soon, too. And thank you again for working on it at all, it means a lot to me.
Anonymous
I'm thinking of a fanfiction involving femtwo and her trainer meeting Red and his feral mewtwo.
Anonymous
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>>18365176 I'd give it a read. Might even kick my ass back into gear
Anonymous
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Aaaaaaaand now apparently there's a badfic going around, likely to gross out a lot of peeps. Still posting, since its from the late 1990s
>>18364300 Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
A night of random question answering made me feel a lot more open and free about writing things. I think I'm going to write more things that I want to personally do.I keep thinking of something sexual with Clover. If I do, it will NOT be part of the story so as to not wreck what I have going on.
Anonymous
So are fapfics only allowed here, like if I write some romance no smut would I be laughed out of here
Anonymous
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>>18366944 No you wouldn't. Fapfics are just more common here.
Anonymous
>>18366918 Haven't we been trying to tell you to write what you want for a while?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18367020 Yeah, but I'm so fucking terrified of ruining Clover that I'm afraid to touch it.
Anonymous
>>18367028 Make it a non-canon "What If". What if some event triggered some stuff that made Sunny attracted to Clover or reverse.
That way you can please the cunts who only wants the smut, while keeping the Real Sunny and Clover pure, while AU Sunny and Clover get's it on or some shit.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18367070 I was thinking of making it a totally unrelated one-shot, yeah.
Anonymous
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>>18367097 Gonna look forward to it as I usually do then.
Anonymous
>http://hemingwayapp.com/ I found a kinda neat thing that lets you do a bit of self editing
It's not really on the same level as an actual human editor but if you run it through and fix some problems before giving it to one you'll make their life easier probably
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18367545 What, no rum and a shotgun?
I guess if you're using passive voice habitually rather than as part of your palette and write so conversationally that you type out run-on sentences, that might help a newbie writer, but (as noted above) every one of these metrics applied as a rule does nothing but sterilize a work. (tl;dr omitted)
Anonymous
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>>18366944 Not at all. Just write and paste here. We accept any story.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>18368957 I couldn't help myself. A pity the sarcastic ending is hidden because their web design doesn't actually make proper use of screen space.
Anonymous
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>18362056 No, that's it. I didn't have more to say.
Anonymous
What's everyone's opinions on edgy shit?
Anonymous
>>18376640 Depends how you define 'edgy.' I like darkness in moderation, but there's a point (not far from the starting line) where you go too far and it just gets silly. I'm writing a story on the darker side and my biggest fear is for it to go too far and get edgy.
Anonymous
>>18376640 Yeah, it depends on if the writer can handle it.
If you have a good writer who knows what he's doing even edgy shit can make a good story.
At the same time, edgy shit probably makes it more obvious when it's a mediocre writer than a more moderate story, so it's probably worth some pause if you think about writing something in that nature yourself.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18376640 Edges quickly become dull when applied bluntly and with misdirected force.
Anonymous
>>18376640 If it logically follows from a semi-plausible assumption, it might be good. If it's just an excuse to write Dark Age tier drivel with Pokemon in it, then it never had any hope of being passable.
When dealing with bright and colorful settings, tactful and punctuating use of disturbing implication or "partial information" about something terrible happening usually hits harder and more unexpectedly than simply throwing death and buckets of bodily fluids everywhere constantly.
Anonymous
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>>18360593 Was quite enjoyable.
Anonymous
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>>18360593 Readed the preview and now am a bit more hyped up, dont worry, you can take your time, try not to rush it
Anonymous
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>>18377308 >>18377307 >>18376739 >>18376691 All right, thanks guys. I'm not quite confident in my writing abilities just yet so I'll stay away from the edges.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/dXhdWjad NOT canon to the actual story. This is a completely un-related one-shot so I don't ruin the main story and this won't be mentioned in it.
Anonymous
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>>18379989 It begins. Good work so far!
Anonymous
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>>18379989 Pretty good start. Looking forward to see it finished. Do think an evolved Sunny would'a fit better
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18379989 http://pastebin.com/YZ3FxhwP A little bit more. Please tell me any problems. I'm trying to make this different from my normal girl x Pokemon stories.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18380359 I don't know if I can finish this. This just feels wrong to do.
Consider this on hiatus.
Anonymous
>>18380359 So far it's looking good. Doesn't really feel like the usual stories, since the girl would then be all over the D, as soon as she even saw it. Though, I'd say it's still too early to really notice a difference.
Looking forward to the ne
>>18380391 Oh
Anonymous
>>18380391 Discouraged so quickly? I thought it was turning out really well for what little you've shown.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18380429 >>18380430 It feels weird to sexualize characters that I came up with.
I mean characters I named and are developing based on existing characters. You get what I mean.
Maybe I'll work on it again
if I get in the mood or something .
Anonymous
>>18380481 It's understandable. To be honest, I prefer those none-lewd, since they don't seem like lewd material. You did do a good job at setting it up though.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18380512 I sort-of had full intent to add sex in the main story when I first started it. I didn't want to, but I knew that eventually it would be demanded or would get no interest if I didn't. Three chapters in and that still hasn't happened because I just can't do it and won't do it.
I started this one-shot in an attempt to attract those who wouldn't read the actual story, and the more I did the more I thought "wow, this is really, really bland and pointless" and I just can't bring myself to do it.
Anonymous
>>18380551 I think people just gonna accept that this is gonna be a non-smut story from you. And if they can't accept that, then tough luck for them
Anonymous
Anyone here write edgy conflict shit?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18380633 Not that I've seen recently.
>>18380624 Chapter 3 got a little sloppy for my standards. I'm gonna try and clean things up for 4. If I finish the one-shot, I'll post it.
Anonymous
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>>18380831 Sounds good man
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
>>18381126 Story writing intensifies?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18381152 Just bumping for the sake of bumping.
I'm trying to think of what to do, but porn's getting boring again.
Anonymous
>>18381270 Try making another non-smut oneshot?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18381442 >Another I did a previous one?
Anonymous
>>18381465 Argh sorry, my bad. My brain got confused with the smut-oneshot of Sunny and Clover and thought every chapter of the regular story was one.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
>>18381513 I should've left it a one-shot. I regret making it multi-chapter.
Anonymous
>>18381680 Take it as a challenge. You're doing well with it so far and I'm eagerly awaiting to hear more of their exploits.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>18381738 I'm trying to force the porn one-shot through.
Anonymous
posted in the IRC but I want to get some more critique before I take it in for more edits
I did the idea in the idea bin where a guy gets his bones replaced by arceus' elemental plates
http://pastebin.com/ZAHvBiQL chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/22fTy2kE chapter 2
Anonymous
>>18382053 While I think the transaction between wrestling and team rocket's surprise attack is a bit rushed, everything else seems to work just fine, though I'm a bit curious as to how you came up with the reach-for-the-orb idea.
Holy shit original requester of that story here and now I'm hyped that someone took my idea Anonymous
>>18382053 Agreeing with
>>18382825 , the transaction between the fight and the Rockets goes way too quickly. Let the fighters work up some sweat, before going "Suddenly Rocket"
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>18380633 Again, depends on your definition of "edgy conflict shit."
I'm doing economic-based conflict Anonymous
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>>18382825 >>18383009 yeah somebody in chat told me that my transition between wrestling and rockets was quite sudden and felt unimpactful. I'll get back to it.
Im glad OR liked it Anonymous
>>18383781 Haven't heard of that one in a while, could you define a sample of a economic-based conflict?
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/u4pa7jJU I started working on chapter 5 of Serena's Obsession again. Here's the so-far.
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>18385841 The theory I'm running under is that most services taken for granted by the player of a Pokemon game - Pokemon Centers, for example - are only free to those with the Pokedex. Everyone who didn't get one has to pay, and the general arrangement of everything creates a sort of two-class system: those with the Pokedex who get by easily, and the ones who struggle even to get up one route. In the games, they would be represented by the hundreds of NPC trainers who just eternally hang out on the routes. The antagonists of my fic are exploiting the situation to create a social conflict. Anonymous
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>>18309745 >>18309953 I agree.
You guys have great taste. Anonymous
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>>18387500 >he’s probably too busy focusing on how incredibly attractive he thinks I am I laughed
Anonymous
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don't you 404 on me!
Anonymous
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>>18387500 Enjoying it so far, keep it up!
Anonymous
Anonymous
Would writefags be willing to do oneshot fics in exchange for drawings?
Anonymous
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browsed
ff.net after not visiting for like 8 years.
so many eeveelution fics with sex scenes.
so, so many...
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>18396169 I'm willing to take some up for some really really
Not Lewd pics, as soon as I'm done with my current project.
Anonymous
>>18396169 This interests me greatly. Elaborate?
Anonymous
>>18396256 I suck at writing but I enjoy drawing and am an -ok- artist I guess, so I was thinking someone could request I draw them something of their choosing and in return I request a oneshot fic of whatever.
Not sure of what though, it was just a thought.
Anonymous
>>18387722 Social conflicts always intrigue me.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
TheOnlyMoth
To whom it may concern, still working dillegently on the florges story, after a few more rewrites and research, I am closing in on around 10K words. What a read.
Anonymous
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>>18401999 Good on you. Now hurry up and post.
Anonymous
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>>18401999 Can't wait to read it. Keep up the good work!
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>18396290 Definitely up for it.
Tinfoot
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>>18396169 Seems interesting. Count me in
Anonymous
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>>18396290 If I had the time, I'd try and aim to request a pic of something related to whatever your fic request was.
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18396169 Would be interesting to do in spare time.
Anonymous
Anyone have a story for Nate/Yancy?Lewd is fine, though not preferred.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>18412303 Fuck, anyway, any good crossover fic?
The Half Blood Jester
>>18410866 Well, I was trying to finish this one but kinda copped out at the lewd part.
http://pastebin.com/Wa8xxcCA I plan on finishing it though, just kinda got bored.
>When'd you have to enter a damn phone number just for captcha? Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
>>18397226 Well, I've got plenty of that.
Though to be fair it's only one part of a bigger picture. It's not the endgame of the plot. TheOnlyMoth
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>>18413397 You made this a while back (maybe a few months ago), right?
Anonymous
>>18413397 Oh my, wouldn't mind seeing this being finished
Anonymous
>>18415049 I think this is what people call a hatefic, right? Well, its targeting braxien for some reason Anonymous
>>18419852 I'd like to see more hatefics regarding the eeveolutions.
But something on a more massive scale, like processing eevees for fuel or something of the sort. Industrial complexes are always good.
Anonymous
>>18419852 bah, deleted before my request for a mewtwo gorefic/hatefic were to get fulfilled
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18420547 Guess you'll have to suggest it here.
Hmm...what is /vp/'s thoughts on hatefics in general anyway?
Anonymous
>>18363589 Figured I'd ask once more if this is coming along alright since it's getting late on Sunday evening. Sorry if I'm being a bother.
Clouded Dawn !!RIyKvtVAc9i
Hey hey hey WriteThread, its been a while.
Anonymous
>>18419852 I have it archived in pastebin for anyone that wants it
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>18426201 Glad to see you back
Anonymous
I'm thinking about writing a story based around this cute image. A male Meowstic begins to have funny dreams shortly after evolving about his best friend who also recently evolved. Maybe tackle how legitimately coming out is harder to high school students (I say legitimately because last time I checked claims of gay/bi were fashionable for some fucking reason). I don't want to incorporate smut either, just the climax (shut up) being that the Lucario defends Meowstic's sexuality against a group of asshats. Meowstic and Lucario then come to terms that Meowstic's confession had made things awkward and they actually grow distant afterwards only to meet up in college and become buddies yet again due to the two growing more mature
Anonymous
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>>18429407 also I mean for high school students. Not to
Anonymous
>>18429407 Sounds better than the story I was thinking about doing.
It was about a Day-Care couple doing unprofessional things to pokemon Anonymous
>>18429424 I could go for that if it's a less weird version of Castelia Daycare Services.
Anonymous
>>18429446 I just wanted a daycare series that was different from the rest while having something more... depraved to balance my other cutesy stories. That's also why I want to start writing sfw stories. I'm getting tired of writing the same old stuff and want to experiment some more. Also despite being in a school setting the Pokemon won't be anthro. I just wanted to make that clear.
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>>18429529 >depraved Factory line breeding is pretty depraved. Imagine this but with semen extraction instead of limb removal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CJwyjWpP4XA Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18425123 Hey Anon,
Yeah. For the most part, I've really been having trouble trying properly write out the thing without being irrelevant and adding extraneous details. TBH, I've probably rewritten the story 2 times, this being my third attempt. I know I said Sunday evening, but I've only really been able to write for the better part of Saturday afternoon and evening and Sunday. I've been having a hard time assuring how I'm writing it, and it turns out that, except for the later part of it, my previous plans didn't really work out. Is there still a bit to go? Yeah, it's coming along better than before, but we'll see how the end result turns out soon.
I'll likely be doing some more writing and editing once I get home, so it ~should~ be out by tomorrow (Tuesday EST). I'm on a time limit of sorts (I won't be here at all on Thurs - Saturday), so I'm setting aside a bit more time to really work on it without having to worry about restricting my time.
Please forgive me ;-; Anonymous
>>18430087 You really didn't have to do all that... if you hadn't mentioned that it's going better than before I'd suggest just picking something else to write entirely. But if you've gotten onto the right track you could always try finishing it, although I certainly won't force you to or even expect you to if it would cut into your schedule.
Regardless of whether you do finish it or not, thank you for what you've done so far. I honestly, genuinely appreciate it.
also I should stop posting serperior images before I get banned for avatarfagging or something. Anonymous
Anonymous
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What defines /vp/'s active and inactive phases?
Anonymous
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I just added a third chaper to What Gods Leave if anyone wants to check it out:
After the Rising, a once feral Zoroark tribe will attempt to establish themselves as a rival to the dominant human civilization.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9992874/1/What-Gods-Leave Pic unrelated
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
17b. Time for another six-moth hiatus. :D
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18437826 >Six Moth Hiatus Gonna miss those guys ;-;7
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18437899 oh god.
I don't know if I want to keep thinking about what I just thought about doing.
Anonymous
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>>18438272 What did you just think about doing?
Saikou !XksB4AwhxU
>accept anon's request >it's coming along pretty well! >oh god it's not coming along well at all >cut away like a third of what i have written and start that section over again
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18440904 Story of writers everywhere, Saikou
The Half Blood Jester
>>18415502 Yes, I did. I'm not sure if I posted it for people to read. I might work on it tomorrow.
>>18417921 Motivation!
>>18420390 This is a really interesting concept.
>>18440904 Don't judge yourself too hard. This is a really common problem.
Anonymous
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nW4UUfiP1Xk Anonymous Tue 11 Mar 2014 04:48:08 No. 18441294 Report Quoted By:
>>18441197 The eevvees to fuel concept could be expanded to encompass any other kinds of small and/or cute pokemon, think giant trawlers scooping up pokemons from their natural habitats to be processed into something actually useful while making the pokemon equivalent of PETA and pokemon rangers everywhere cry.
Heavy industry, bitches.
Saikou !XksB4AwhxU
>>18420390 >eevees for fuel I know what you meant in concept, but I'm picturing a conveyor belt dumping eeveelutions into a hopper to be burned like coal or something and that's morbidly hilarious to me.
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>>18441316 That works too.
Anonymous
Or now that I think it, a what if the Volcanion (sp?) is indeed not only the core of a powerplant, but it feeds on other pokemons to fuel itself.
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>>18441316 This brings back memories of reading the Rainbow Factory and/or watching the Music video of it. Perhaps it can be based on that? >>18441390 A Volcanion tha feeds on other pokemon ot fuel itself? Guess that where all those level 1 rejected mons go...
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
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>>18441390 As one of Volcanion's few (?) fans, I say, fund it.
Anonymous
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>tfw There is no Aromatissee story yet, involving how her eyes glow at night, watching your every move, waiting for you to fall asleep so that she can have her way with you
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
Anonymous
Anonymous
Hoping anyone would be willing to look at my Fic and tell me what ya'll think?
I've had it written for a few months now. If you like it, I might continue writing on it.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10180093/1/Zach-s-Journey-A-Kalos-Adventure Constructive Criticisms encouraged.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
http://pastebin.com/vKjs9u4G New story based off a story called
'The Law: A World of Ignored Sex' Anonymous
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>>18450564 An interesting take, mixing in battle mechanics and how the pokemon act during battle.
However, rather than directly saying super-effective and not very effective damage, perhaps you could substitute them for phrases that match the battle, such as "taking massive damage/barely endured it" or "nearly shrugged off the attack/ignored the hit"
Anonymous
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>>18451276 "I sometimes feared that she would rape me with her mind one day. I'm not quite sure how I would react to that."
Sorry Goombario, there only one person who is mind raped around here
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18451276 I wouldn't mind if this took place in the same universe of that guy who did the Saffron story. Actually, it'd be quite cool. Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>18430119 Hey Anon,
Here again with some more news of delays. I've just gotten off a gig and have been away from the internet and my laptop... pretty much all day. Got drafted into it at pretty much last minute, but gotta do what you gotta do.
The good news is, I had what I had yesterday read over, and apparently it's coming along well as I've been told. So there's a confidence boost thanks to it.
Which means I have the confidence to not delete entire paragraphs over and over. Yay. I'm not a complete failure. Anyways, I just wanted to tell you this so you would know what'd gone down and why I haven't updated you yet. Progress is picking up though, and I may take my laptop out tomorrow to do some writing (while trying to hide myself as best as possible).
It WILL be out by tomorrow, come hell or high water.
pls forgiv Anonymous
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>>18309745 ... Need... More...
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>>18446755 I would honestly buy that.
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
And lo, it is done!
http://pastebin.com/qP1qJeW7 I'm really, really excited about this one.
Anonymous
Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
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>>18455249 Because I like it and had fun with it. Anonymous
Anonymous
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Can I have a F pokemon x F pokemon fanfiction now?
Anonymous
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>>18455788 Gotta say I enjoed the first one more more. Second one was good though, just enjoyed the first one a bit more
Anonymous
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>>18429407 That Umbreon coat looks adorable on Meowstic. :3
TheOnlyMoth
>>18455788 plan on doing a pokemon's POV soon, too? Anonymous
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>>18460482 I intend to just switch human genders for those who don't like certain pairs. TheOnlyMoth
Anonymous
Any fics involving breathplay? Preferably involving water over more violent methods, but anything works.
Anonymous
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A few years ago, there used to be a fanficition thread on /vp/ where there was a series of stories where all the main player characters live in the same house. Anyone remember it?/What was it called?
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18464026 Sounds fascinating, Anon.
To my knowledge nothing to that nature, however, you could always leave a request here with details for someone to pick up later.
Anonymous
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>>18466674 I dunno, uh
maybe something involving a Vaporeon or basically any primarily sea-dwelling fishlike Pokemon? It could be as simple as something like a dude just -really- wants to fug a fish and isn't all that careful about going at it, or it could be something like a Milotic or Dragonair taking prey for herself, I dunno. I'm not too picky tbh.
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
>>18430119 Hey, Anon (time to make an ass of myself). Here goes:
I'm genuinely sorry about all the shit I've been saying, and always stating I'll have it out by X-Day. Really made myself look like an Idiot, 'aven't I? I think it was just took unrealistic of me to try and set dated for myself for something that takes genuine time to do, especially when I have something else to do that has a more importance, but the effort (I'm a musician as well, if you haven't noticed). Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>18468403 Also I'm probably never going to use a phone to type up stuff in the middle of the night ever again. Seriously, those mistakes are just atrocious. Anonymous
Since we only ever seem to get smutfic requests, i'm not going to bother breaking the mold because it's all i ever have ideas for
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18470196 breaking the mold isn't a bad idea, y'know I DO recall somewhere where some did do a skitty-on-wailord story, but I forgot where it is :L
Wait, joltik is compatable with steelix? TheOnlyMoth
Anonymous
TheOnlyMoth
When I finish my florges story, I plan on making stories based off of Touhou Love Stories: The Bad end. Essentially, a trainer will fall in love with a pokemon, but the romance will always end in tragedy. Varies in hilarity and drama, depending on the story. Thoughts?
Anonymous
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>>18342250 >>18437826 so this is the guy who wrote Love Lost - just noticed that the series was updated. what are the pictures for?
Anonymous
>>18477551 or rather, what are 17a and 17b referring to
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18477816 >what are 17a and 17b referring to Those updates, perhaps? Could be a code. I know, it's his favorite snack machine selections!
Anonymous
>>18308200 Why is pastebin being banned?
Anonymous
>>18479947 updates to what, you butt
Anonymous
>>18480294 People like to use it to dump hacked account info and shit, so some countries have blocked it.
Anonymous
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>18480457 > the guy who wrote Love Lost > the series was updated > what are 17a and 17b referring to > Those updates, perhaps > updates to what > you butt > BUTT Subtle (not really) troll, or up too late?
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>18480457 Update to the thing you said updated. Doy.
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>>18480853 It'll probably be unblocked in a couple of months.
Anonymous
>page nine
Anonymous
>>18487399 have you tried bumping with relevant stuff
Anonymous
>>18489276 as someone who only writes fics and basically never reads if I only bumped with relevant stuff the thread would've died
Anonymous
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>>18489276 I would try bumping with fics I like, but there have been a draught of those recently, other than the fics being posted here.
Anonymous
Is Lost Love worth reading? I love me some tasteful human x poke romance, but if it's moving towards anything else for the endgame then I'd rather not push myself through it.
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>>18493282 Some thigns don't make sense unless you read the other stories too like why some Pokemon talk and others don't and when people from other stories appear
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>>18493282 you mean love lost? it's one of the best fics out there imo. lots of cute and intimate stuff between the protag and his gardevoir, if that's what you're wondering about.
Anonymous
>>18493282 Nope, way too long.
Anonymous
FemGreninja or FemDelphox fics when
Anonymous
>>18497424 Seconded.
At least Delphox/Braixen fics that aren't fetish shit like diapers, or it having a "sexy woman's body" ie: "Foxy the Delphox had DD tits and an huge ass the keeps on working." and other overblown shit.
I just want some "semi-realism" in my dumb fictional video game monster bestiality sex fics.
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>>18497870 I'm a big sucker for semi-realism and I feel your pain. I was planning on doing something with Delphox anyway, I'll make that my next project after I'm done with this one.
Expect it in several months at the rate I'm going. Anonymous
>writer hasn't updated in over two years
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>>18498313 >knowing that feel Anonymous
>>18497308 >implying that's a bad thing Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>18502083 Dude, it's like 160k already and when the creep goes off narcisistically talking about it, he says it's something like only a third done. Then add in all the other "stories" since they're a single continuity. Some people have better things to do than slog through some pedestrian's fanfic that acts like it wants to be War And Peace, Atlas Shrugged, and The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy at the same time BUT POKEMON.
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>>18502186 ok
but if it's a good read I don't see what the problem is. some people just don't like long fics, not much you can do about that
Anonymous
>>18502186 >coming from the man himself At least you've got a sense of humor about it. Respect for that.
Anonymous
Whoa, page 9. Stop it.__smut__ fic revolving around a Trainer using Pokemon Amie.
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>>18507078 I believe there's already an idea based on the pokemon amie thing,
where the trainer would give his pokemon blue blalls/vulva after vigorous petting sessions, eventually climaxing to a confrontation scene and possible orgy Anonymous
>>18502919 didn't realize he was the author. should've picked up on that. hey, while he's reading this thread, mega Grace x Joe needs to happen
Anonymous
Still in the early stages, but thought I'd give a preview of something I might be working on.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>18507529 Every time they make a new gen, I have to adjust continuity. It's like they don't even care.
>>18508871 Corruption of Master Trainers?
Anonymous
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>>18508871 Oh this looks interesting. Mind telling us more of this?
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18396169 skype's hidalgo.monsark, contact me.
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>>18508871 This is everything I have wanted for the last two years.
Godspeed, anon.
TheOnlyMoth
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>>18508871 As a fan of corruption of champions, this is me gusta Anonymous
It is a good idea to save those independent stories on
fanfiction.net into your hard drives now. Looks like they're stepping up on security
Anonymous
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>>18515425 What, again? Goddamnit.
Anonymous
So...
Anonymous
>>18515528 There's currently this WIP
>>18413397 , but other than that, I haven't found anyone worthwhile. Anonymous
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>>18515536 Damn, this
>>18413397 was pretty good, hope to see it finished soon.
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
Anonymous
i want to ask for some help but the subject is pretty edgy.
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>18519579 alright. one of my characters was almost sacrificed to darkrai by a cult and they carved some words into his chest, but i can't decide what the words should be. Does anyone have a suggestion for what the words could be?
i warned you Anonymous
>>18519620 >almost There's an ending B where he was, right?
Right?
Anonymous
>>18519700 i mean there could be.
why?
Anonymous
>>18519743 Because I consider it to be a better ending than him living.
Anonymous
>>18519866 why you don't even know the kid.
you're not helping me.,
Anonymous
>>18519872 And you're not helping me by complaining about what I suggested and refusing to add it. Fair's fair.
Anonymous
>>18519889 I guess I can have him actually be sacrificed if you really want but that still doesn't give me words.
TheOnlyMoth
You can get away with it by carving some random foreign language, or as a sacrifice, put the words "the Chosen One" in pictographical language, like Chinese, Korean, or Japanese (Maybe Russia, as well?) so that the characer has no idea how to comprehend the words
Also new thread
>>18519969 TheOnlyMoth
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>>18519897 quote from
>>18519975 Or you can just have carved on him the appearance of darkrai
Anonymous
