>>20095821not the anon you're looking for but I'll talk about itYou have a pretty nice Basic, but there's a huge jump in detail, size and realism for the Stage 1. The Stage 2 looks kind of underwhelming as a result.
Other than that, you may want to distance these Pokemon from actual jackalopes, else they look like real animals with anime eyes. Your Basic averts this.
I can tell that you're great at drawing, though. And you can make a very "Pokemon" design, just look at your Basic. I hope I wasn't too hard on you.