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Gardevoir Appreciation Thread

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+ Mon 22 Dec 2014 02:59:47 No.22262575 View View Reply Original Report

Preemptive Christmas edition.
I'm the writefag that showed up the last thread to write a Gardevoir-based X-mas story. Before making it official I would like you to tell me some remarks in grammar, please (I know there are a lot)
Here you have: http://pastebin.com/eP4nxiUi
As usual, this Pastebin will selfdestroy in one hour.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:02:39 No.22262606 Report

Quoted By: >>22262669

>>22262575
>http://pastebin.com/eP4nxiUi
As a regular of the write thread, I'd advise putting some space between your paragraphs/dialogue so that the story doesn't come out as one word wall. If you typed this in microsoft word/libre office, you need to add 2 spaces for each paragraph to make space appear in pastebin.

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+ Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:07:04 No.22262669 Report

Quoted By: >>22262765

>>22262606
Thanks! I was careless about that. It really looks nicer with double-spacing.
I'm using gedit (a Linux notepad)

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:16:08 No.22262765 Report

Quoted By: >>22262935

>>22262669
hm, try adding 2 spaces just to be safe.

Otherwise, a few typos are present, such as misspelling responsibility (responsability in line 51) and a couple of others, but story seems fine for a Christmas special. I would've though that would have switched to just part-time work than quit altogether because some money needs to be made, but whatever works for you.
Also this story hit me right in the feels because I'm still striving for a job that makes me money, even when I know the consequences.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:29:03 No.22262896 Report

Quoted By: >>22262935

I miss the Gardevoir threads that popped up in /d/ for a while. They were tolerated for a spell, but too many people pushed the envelope and ruined it for everybody.

I'm glad to appreciate cute Gardevoir content for a change, but I hope people from the thread didn't just turn around and shitpost in /v/ all day.

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+

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Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+ Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:33:23 No.22262935 Report

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>>22262765
Going a bit deeper in details, I thought about some that.
>I've always liked to save a little every month if anything comes up.
But I thought that detailing further escapes the scope of a christmas tale.
>>22262896
It simple. Don't mind the Gardehaters. It's a natural reaction here in 4chan that if one thing is loved is hated (and shitposted) as well. Let's deal with it and let us not hothead about it.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:50:57 No.22263121 Report

Quoted By: >>22263141 >>22263216

>Last thread hit the bump limit only yesterday.
>Folks mentioned that a new thread would be made on Christmas Eve/Day (whichever was easier for folks).

Okay, NOW we're getting close to the edge of a veery slippery slope...

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 03:53:30 No.22263141 Report

Quoted By: >>22263216

>>22262575
Wasn't the plan to wait for that one anon to post a thread on the 24th? These need to stop happening so often.
>>22263121
On Christmas eve, yes. This is what I'm afraid is going to happen though.

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+ Mon 22 Dec 2014 04:00:02 No.22263216 Report

Quoted By: >>22263231

>>22263141
>>22263121
I'm sorry then. I'm going to close this thread... (Can I?)

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 22 Dec 2014 04:00:58 No.22263231 Report

Quoted By: >>22263245

>>22263216
Yes, if you love Gardevoir threads you'll do it

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+

Writer Anon !!XbYjt6u6PO+ Mon 22 Dec 2014 04:02:01 No.22263245 Report

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>>22263231
Hmmm... I can't. It says that post is too old.
So, can a janitor do that for me?

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