>>22330611see the biggest problem i have here is the whole "and also men" thing. most of everything else is fine. the art is really great and cute and i like a lot of the designs. making a comic about characters who don't want to do battles and want to do fashion shit is honestly kind of interesting. it's a different look at the universe from a different perspective that we've never seen, and while it's not something i'm personally interested in, kudos to the author for making what's honestly kind of a bold move there. but that one fucking line ruins so much of the whole thing for me. not even because the character is gay, but because the character uses that as a means of identifying themselves. you know when you go on someone's tumblr or myspace back in the day, and on their little header they'll have information about themselves and almost without fucking question is their sexual orientation. this shit fucking bugs me, but it's not just because this is a pet peeve of mine, it's just bad fucking storytelling and character development. like at a later point in the comic, the main gets super butthurt because he finds out his mancrush has a girlfriend. that would be all the fucking indication we need to find out that he's gay. but i think the worst thing is that by introducing this character trait in such a way, in conveys to us that it will be important later on in the story, and this is all the author fucking tell us. he's gay and he likes fashion. beyond that we don't have a fucking character, aside from what we've seen so far which seems like kind of an asshole, like everyone else except basically shauna for some reason. i'm just really disappointed in this shit because if i could draw that well, i'd go out of my way to make sure i don't make stupid mistakes like these in whatever comics i would make.
