>>23606861some critique:
>hawluchaDon't use assault vest on hawlucha, it doesn't have the bulk
Superpower+drain punch is redundant, not to mention it gets hjk if you really need power output
Bounce is garbage. Use either acrobatics without an item/with a consumable or sky drop
Thunderpunch should be replaced with stone edge or rockslide imo
unburden is useless with av, sitrus berry could be usable, or something like power herb sky attack with acrobatics on the side. If you don't want that, use limber
Fix your spread, 4 speed jolly is retarded, as is max hp lucha
>spindaSpinda is just awful in general. There's really not much you can do to make it better, but your set is still garbage
Boosting a stat dropped by nature is stupid
>heatranGive it protect, this is doubles
Replace ancientpower with earth power
Toxic is awful in doubles, don't use it
You should also be running a much more offensive spread, heatran is a powerhouse more than anything else in dubs.
>gliscorGliscor is a pokemon that isn't very good in doubles.
If you need to use it, I'd run a fast spread with swords dance, but for the love of god don't use toxic
You're also missing 4 evs
>altariaDD altaria is better in general, especially because altaria's attacking stats aren't great to begin with and hyper voice/heat wave do piss-poor damage thanks to the doubles damage reduction
If you want tailwind, put it on gliscor or another mon, but you shouldn't waste your main attacker's moveslot with it
Run more speed as well.
Salamence pretty much outclasses it in every way, but if you really want it you should try to build around it more.
>venusaurplease, for the love of god, don't run power herb solar beam. It's just shit. HP Fire/ sleep powder would be a better use of the slot
Venusaur is also pretty useless if you're not running it on a sun team.
>overallYou should use protect more, and try to make it so your pokemon have synergy rather than just random sets.
