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Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:45:23 No.24719648 View View Reply Original Report

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I'm new at this so plz rate

Ev1: Lonewer 0.6m 3.0kg
Ev2: Castalone 1.2m 8.5kg
Ev3. Kingdalone 2.6m 50.8kg
Ability:Levitation/Sand Veil
Type: Ground-Ghost

CAPSLOCK

CAPSLOCK Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:47:58 No.24719659 Report

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>>24719648
GIANT FUCKING WATERMARK/10

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:51:09 No.24719671 Report

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>>24719648
>>>/trash/

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:52:30 No.24719677 Report

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Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:52:31 No.24719679 Report

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This feels too much like Terracotta.

By that, I mean there's barely any changes to it.

Chemical Man

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Chemical Man Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:53:34 No.24719687 Report

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Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:54:07 No.24719690 Report

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>>24719648
>LONEwer
>castALONE
>kingdALONE

Is this /r9k/: the Pokemon?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:55:33 No.24719698 Report

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>>24719648
The levitating part of the design is dumb

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:56:29 No.24719702 Report

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>>24719648
Too similar between each others. Kingdalone looks interesting enough, but right now only works as a standalone.

If you give him changes, like giving him a thicker torso, maybe adding two little towers from which the arms come from, or something else, it could be easier to accept that Castalone is the pre-evo.

Keep going with it. The idea behind it is not bad but overall remember, while you need to keep the theme, you need to change them more.

Also, next time you could try asking for opinions here >>24708787 , because as you see, most people are going to shit on you outside of the "containment thread".

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:56:34 No.24719704 Report

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Names are shit.

The difference between Ev1 and Ev2 is way too small. It should go Ev1, Ev3, and then something even more ridiculous.

Sand is interesting, but a sandy ghost is not. Like, seriously, what sort of backstory would you give the Pokemon? What would their Pokedex entry look like?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 22:58:18 No.24719712 Report

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>>24719704
>revengeful castle born from the bullies messing with the kiddies work on the beach

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Nov 2015 23:04:18 No.24719747 Report

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>>24719648
Hand in grape jelly is pretty dumb famm.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 27 Nov 2015 05:54:34 No.24722171 Report

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get ride of the first one,
and make the last one more like,

also download paint tool sai
and set your presure to s-7

It's much better than photoshop lines

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 27 Nov 2015 06:07:12 No.24722249 Report

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>>24719648
>Metric shit

>>>/trash/

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 27 Nov 2015 06:12:12 No.24722275 Report

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Time to join the rest of the world American

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