>>24944894Listen lad, I can tell you spent a lot of time thinking about your post and I just want to give some feedback on your endeavor.
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Where's the anime? I don't see any anime anywhere in your post and this is troubling to me, a user on one of the net's largest anime discussion site.
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I don't understand the moral? Spice it up! Every good post starts with a good conflict, try to incorporate this into your future posting.
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Posts without structure often don't attract many readers. Make it clear who you're addressing! In the future be sure to site every quotation with the appropriate speaker.
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Create the right mood with your posting! Many readers will be thrown off by your haphazard writing style and avoid the thread all together. To avoid this, read through your post as if you're a prospective poster. Does it seem natural? Interesting? Be sure to think through these!
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Before you start crafting your post, it's important to remember that successful posts are written in the same way, before you start writing be sure to read over the classics! Get a feel for your audience!
I hope I helped! Please work hard to make this a high-quality community!
