>>27503317not bad for a quick artwork, but also very obviously rushed as fuck. Lines are sloppy and the poses are awkward with no fluidity or genuine movement.
Try to develop your own style instead of just emulating whatever shitty anime is your favourite this week. Also learn some colour co-ordination. Where you've safely mimicked the pokemon colours are fine, but as soon as you go into your own thing, like the eye choices it's fucking atrocious with the third one being particularly awful. It actually hurts my eyes to try focus on.
4/10 you tried which is more than most of vp ever do.