>>29684549>>29684533>>29684578Don't listen to EITHER of them. It's not a perfect image for sure, and it's definitely not bad either, but neither baseless shitting nor ass-kissing helps you to improve.
Overall, the image could use a lot of cleaning up.
>Her left bicep is Popeye-tier>The bottom of the bikini top should have some shape to it, not just be a straight line across>Parts of her original skirt are still in tact, right above the tie of her bottom, and below her left hand>Big blotch of skin color in the gap of her crotch>Right thigh is significantly fatter than her left thigh>The line of her left fingers is going through the bag handle>Probably a bunch of other minor errors that I'm not immediately noticing, but you get the point>Not to mention, everything you've edited is lacking shadingFor a rush job, it looks good, and I can tell you're talented (hell, I could never draw legs like that), but I suggest taking it back to the drawing board and cleaning it up more.
>>29684724Preserve that lineart for posterity. In-game-Serena is highly underrated.
