>>31381030It's like 14 pages long and the core content is good, then the rest of it is pictures of other girls. I don't need the doujin to be incredibly long, it should have a natural endpoint and it had that. All that matters is the art is high quality and he delivered on that.
This was disappointing not because it's short but it just feels incomplete. Like in general he seems to be the guy who goes thin on story and just does brief pieces based around general hooks and concepts. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Maybe he's not cut out for proper doujins.
