>>31976529Yes, I do in fact like girls doing cute gay things together.
The art was cute. Really cute. I'll give that and get it out the way first.
Now onto the main part. First of all, both girls. Starting with Moon/Mizuki. I personally don't like her design, as it's too generic, so it wasn't really any fun to look at. The personality the author gave her was a cute one, though, so it kind of sort of made up for this. The problem with this, though, was that she was too bubbly and nice, almost to an annoying extant. Even more than fucking Hau, and that's saying a lot. I thought she was cute for the first couple of pages, then it just got annoying.
As for Lillie, not much better either. Her design is one thing I liked, so it was pleasant to look at her in this cute artstyle throughout the entire thing. That's it. Her personality was literally just that she wanted to fuck Moon/Mizuki, whom I found more annoying than Hau, so I wasn't exactly fond of that. Then there was this whole thing about looking down on herself, which is part of her in-game personality and I liked it, but it really had no reason to be in a doujin just trying to be cute. It comes of as pointless and annoying.
Then the gay part. It had a total of one gay scene, and that wasn't even shown properly, and none of the girls even reacted to in any way because one was sleeping, so it might as well have not happened. Like, what the fuck was even the point if you're not going to show it and it's going to mean literally nothing. If you're going to be gay, be gay. Don't half-ass it. If I just wanted to see a kiss that wasn't even going to be shown, I'd look at simple fanarts rather than wasting my time reading a doujin.
I didn't like the girls, they were not even close to their game counterparts, so I had no real connection to them, and literally nothing of note happens in this doujin. Thus, I consider it an overall of waste of my time, time I could've spent reading some cuter and gayer doujin.
