>>32789077I like the idea of Lyra being a flattie, even in fan-art.
Otherwise, I think Lyra's forward shoulder is a bit off while her rear arm seems a bit long (Or is the front one short?), May's rear arm is bugging me, and Dawn's nose is a bit strange.
Also, I personally think the nipple puff on Lyra is out of tune with the rest of the image. Not that I don't like some nip, but it's a context and atmosphere thing.