>>32988908This is absolutely the place to chitter. This is a designated chittering area. The worst that'll happen is that me, or somebody like me, will point out faults or things that need improvement.
Making jewelry is neat. Taking care of Pokemon is a bit of a strange hobby, but it speaks to her caring, maternal nature. Being a Breeder is also pretty neat, that's all good. I've always liked Pokemon Husbandry when it isn't an excuse for Pokefuckers to get knocked up full of eggs. When it's the actual practice of courting two creatures for their genes.
I don't get what you mean by "which allowed the ability to sit with her Pokemon." People can normally do that, right? Sit with Pokemon? I'm thinking you may have meant sing, which would make more sense.
I'd like to hear more about her team and what they do to help raise certain types, as well as faults and flaws she may have as a character.
>>32989403Right, see, I accounted for the fact that it was a mistake. "being gifted a perfect, ridiculously rare Pokemon as a starter because of chance". That's bad because it's just dumb luck. Providence. If something is justified, it can be excused. Like, if the character was wealthy, they could have had that starter purchased for them. Maybe they came from a line of Breeders, or were good friends with some Breeders, or something in that line. The reason being "it just sort of happened," that's not as satisfying. It's not like not knowing about his perfect IVs means his perfect IVs didn't play a part in battles. Most people ignore IVs, they're hidden values, that's half the point. At the same time, it's a better explanation than the "Volkov found this Beldum alone, fed it some berries, and they became friends" that you see so often. It's something, it's not nothing. So there's that.
>>32989912I do rather like the physical design of the character. Mostly the outfit. Nuclear Scizor sounds pretty dumb though yeah. But Electric/Steel tech company dude, that's neat.