>>33206796I'll start nitpicking all of them if you want?
I just wanted to be kind and point out something I noticed in what you called the "worst possible art".
>>33206531I find it fucked up that they're still done up like their 10 year old selves, but Serena magically has tits now.
I guess that shows what the artist had more in mind than amourshipping.
>>33205478Pathetic, looks like a child did it, neither of them even look remotely like their respective anime selves.
>>33204266For it being... chibi art? It looks, not that great.
Characters are too stiff, pointy chins and noses that look like they can stab people with them.
It could have been done better, the hats are also bad, especially for the girls!
They just jut too far forward for them, like their foreheads are much larger beneath them!
>>33203999Not the best job of grass work, they don't really look like they're laying on the ground, and before kissing, it looks like he broke her back.
They also have that uncanny look that someone traced them.
>>33203811Not bad... I like this one just for the nice hair, great detail in clothing, original artstyle, really this is something I can't bitch too much about.
They look like what they're supposed to be, but the pocky thing is overdone.
It would have been more meaningful without it, like it was just added after the fact.
>>33203015Clothing work on Serena is shit, and she looks so much skinnier than I feel like her head should be able to support. Ash is alright, but she's gotta eat something.
>>33201288Ash's arm is too tiny for his body.
Serena's face looks weird on her head, I can't describe it, but she needs shading to avoid the fat neck syndrome.
Hair is nice, not great, but I like how she worked on Ash's hair.
>>33205435Not art, but she looks like she's trying to drown Ash. I feel really sorry for him, she just pounced on him and is threatening to kill him.
Why is she waving her hand, why is Ash reduced to a black thing of hair?
