>>33874795while i agree the anatomy needs improving, it's not something that happens overnight. drawing fanart, in my experience, helped me improve because, a) i enjoyed doing it so i drew a lot, and b) because i already knew what the characters were meant to look like, it felt easier to tell what was 'off' about a picture
i think OPs art is cute, but the proportions are off, especially for the limbs. generally the elbows will come to the waist, and the wrists to the crotch. thighs and calves are about equal in length.
also dulse's pecs look like ftm top surgery scarson a positive note, i think the swimsuit choices are very fitting for each character