>>34271917Fire starter is fine to be honest, it's mostly the crabs. Look at the middle and final stage, they honestly barely look any different aside from color. Castle theme in the last one is way too subtle and could be expanded upon. Similarly, I don't like how it goes from moustache to... different moustache? Usually there's a clear progression, for example "hairless -> moustache -> full beard". In short, I feel like the jump from middle to final stage is only a half-step. Don't be afraid to go a bit more extreme.