>>34358717Copy and pasted from way back:
Looks a lot better, anon!
Though I do have some further issues with it. Sorry If it seems like I'm making you keep working.
Here's what I think you should do:
>smooth the lines instead to fit Aether's art-style, but make sure they're still sharp to an extent; can't look blurry (Aether Character art showcases this well)>give the shoes and the area around them a bit more detail, around Faba's level of detail>replace the Aether logo with a crystal, similar to the other Aether Admins, and make sure there's one visible on the other arm as well>coat should resemble the original design more (see black arrow on bottom edit to see what I mean), but keep the length of the current edit>gold rings should be more U-shaped: refer to Faba and Aether Grunt scans>sleeve cuffs should be more pronounced like Aether Scientists, or should be exactly like where the blue arrow is pointing left in the image>add back the two missing rhombus shaped buttons on the black shirt, but change them to small, aether-style buttons, but if they don't seem to fit, revert to the rhombus style buttons>sleeves should be moved back a bit to where they were in the original design>add back the Aether pin, but put it up higher and pointing almost straight up>knees need to be pronounced a little more, but this might be hard to pull off; refer to Aether Grunt's official art for this>if possible, change the visor's "eyes" to resemble a part of the Aether logo more, where a black arrow is pointing in the image>turn the gold part of the belt into a crystal, like the big chest one on the previous edit but facing horizontally instead of verticallyEverything in this image wasn't done by me except for placing arrows, it's from the Sage threads when they were finalizing the design.
Thank you for taking your time for doing this, by the way.
