>>34630451If you were, say, in your mid-teens or something (which I hope you're not), I'd say this is good for your expected skill level.
Also, another anon mentioned the proportions. Yeah, work on that, but you might want to work on perspective as well. The computer desk in particular looks like it's sliding down a slope into oblivion. Your coloring is fine, though—at least when compared mine, which looks like smeared, wet chincilla dung.