>>34669037Linework needs some work, try to colour more evenly. Better paper will help with this, cartridge paper is shit and most markers/felt pens will end up splotchy and horrible. Invest in a tidy sketchbook with nice thick paper. Also prefer it when people do their own shit and don't copy. I'd give this a solid 5/10 for effort. Keep going buddy, practice makes perfect.
>bonus point for not using lined paperThis infuriates me so much, even when the artwork is great it just destroys it. Why people do this I don't know, sketchbooks/doodle pads aren't expensive.
