>>35491358nnnn i actually really like these concepts. I really think they need a few tweaks, though.
>Grass Starter- Why is it a bunny? Would work better as a different animal, honestly. Something that relates more to the tiki voodoo theme.
- First stage looks too generic, needs more defining characteristics. Second stage needs more animal-like features.
-Final stage is cool. Wish it were more animal like. Some of the details are just too much, like the spikes everywhere. They need to be delegated to one area if that's going to be a detail. If it's a rabbit, it needs to LOOK like a rabbit, not like a person.
>Fire Starter-Once again, first starter is too generic. Doesn't have that "Pokemon" feel.
- Second Starter is Okay, I like that it carries the concept. It's a little bit "just gets bigger." Belt reminds me of Incineroar. The spots are a little much. Needs more distinct markings, perhaps.
- Final Stage is really cool but needs to be less...sexy? I want it to look like a bull. I would say don't make it bipedal but...we know GF at this point. Cool concept though. Need to choose like, one of the starters to have a bones/skull theme, not two.
>Water Starter- Probably my fave
- First starter needs a *little* more distinction, I just can't put my finger on what kind. The eyes definitely need to be different. He looks like the yellow kid from Xiaolin Showdown. The mouth, too.
- Second starter is really cool and good. I would do something different with the hat. Maybe make it look more like a growth instead of just a cloth?
- Third stage is a little too literal. Needs a bit more creativity with the "accessories." For example, I would say *one* peg leg is more than enough, if at all. The hat should look a little more like a growth. The markings also need to be more distinct.
BUT I really really love these concepts. They're pretty strong. I love the grass and water themes, I totally get them (except the fire starter desu, needs more uniqueness).
