>>36332859Well for one, your lineart needs work. There are several places where lines extend further than they should, but the tie is the worst offender. A little touch up goes a long way.
Speaking of which, wtf is this hand? It's like one solid wedge with squiggles going down it. Did you give up right at the end? Why not just crop that part off like the other hand?
You need to watch your corners when using the fill tool. If the lines are too close together, you'll get some dead pixels like on the collar here. It's tiny, but it stands out even from a distance.
His ear is just a rhombus. And that's not a problem in and of itself if you're going for a simplistic style. But then you went and made the inner ear look realistic. And by realistic, i mean a chewed up wad of gum.
Ok, what even is this shading? I really don't know what's going on. There is a line going all the way down to his belt. Is that all supposed to be shaded and you forgot?
Lastly, this text is just bad. The I's and L looks fine even if the L is a a bit long on the bottom. But the jagged look to the M and A don't go well with them. Especially since the white outline you used acts as a separator making it look like IL IMA
