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>>37670309
Its a decent concept, but a little generic. Maybe try to sylize the camera more and make the body more distinct. Maybe a film pattern somewhere??
>>37670299
I like this one less. Without the blue its just a Gila monster and the poison around the next looks out if place and gross. Maybe try to further differenciate between the real creature, and maybe explore the poison mane a bit more.

Both pretty good starts

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:16:48 No.37670349 Report

Quoted By: >>37670452

I think it's neat! I'm sorry you're not getting the attention you could be; I think creative threads like this are more fun than a lot of what else is getting the focus right now, but alas.
I don't really have time at the moment to give much specific feedback, but I like that design! I think the only thing that jumps out at me as unlike Pokémon's style is the string around the waist fur (though it's a clever way of making it look like clothing), but then again, we do have Decidueye, so even string like that might not necessarily be off-limits. I dunno!
On the other hand, you definitely did a good job with the proportions and with making it out of basic shapes - it feels like something Game Freak would do! - and I'm a fan of the way you stylized the head. (I also saw the basic stage you posted on the other thread and I appreciate how well you differentiated them! I think the top right one was my favorite - I'm a fan of when a line changes from quadrupedal to bipedal or vice versa rather than staying the same all the way through.)
Anyway, yeah, I hope this thread doesn't die. I don't have anything of my own to share at the moment, but I still enjoy seeing what people post on threads like this!

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:24:32 No.37670414 Report

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>>37670320
sorry my gringo friend stole my phone and i had to use my webcam xD
>>37670299
design wise the cute and gross elements clash with each other and make it unappealing for me
inspiration wise all i see it that it's a cartoon gila monster and that its poisonous
overall not great and could use other inspirations aswell as design overhaul that tones down the grossness or cuteness

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:30:24 No.37670452 Report

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>>37670349
thank you sir what about this one

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:33:37 No.37670468 Report

Quoted By: >>37670496 >>37670683 >>37670716

Posted the fellas a while back, but id like more thoughts.
They are fisherman bears

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:34:40 No.37670475 Report

Quoted By: >>37670496 >>37670683

Here are my bugs

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:38:57 No.37670496 Report

Quoted By: >>37670692 >>37670977

heres an old version so you have an idea of what the colors are
>>37670468
love this, only real critique i have is that the art is kind of wonky
you need to work on proportions and the mid evo looks kinda flat
>>37670475
same with this one, i like it but the art could be better

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 03:44:52 No.37670526 Report

Quoted By: >>37670683 >>37670718 >>37673235

an improved mega raticate after critique

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:01:44 No.37670683 Report

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>>37670309
>>37670299
i agree with the criticisms from >>37670326
, good job so far!
>>37670475
i love the first and last ones especially... i might change the middle, but i'm not really sure how, i think i'd probably change the shape a bit? i don't really know

>>37670468
i love the final evo, it's extremely creative, and a very interesting bear concept.
>>37670526
too many megas go for straight "coolness" (the kind of cool that say, decidueye and charizard have, i apologize for the poor wording) but this one is super cool, it's very rugged looking.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:02:32 No.37670692 Report

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>>37670496
Pants feel out of place. I feel the design is a bit too busy

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:05:11 No.37670716 Report

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>>37670468
I think the first stage is pretty bad but the rest are great, honestly I'd just turn it into a 2-stage wild pokemon rather than have it as a starter.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:05:48 No.37670718 Report

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>>37670526
It looks a bit too unkempt, like a normal raticate got ran through the wash

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:23:08 No.37670828 Report

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>>37670692
amen, took me forever to revise it
>>37670718
kind of what i was going for: a big mentally unstable rat with overgrown teeth and fur and a slightly more athletic build with the unhinged nature of a rabid animal

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:35:27 No.37670901 Report

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>>37670828
Its not bad as a design. I just dont particularly like it

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:37:30 No.37670917 Report

Quoted By: >>37670985 >>37670986

>>37670115
Posting the better grass starter.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:40:29 No.37670936 Report

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>>37670299
Like this one a lot but...
>>37670309
Fucking dreadful.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:43:42 No.37670955 Report

Quoted By: >>37670986 >>37671043

Here’s my plant samurai based on sawgrass again. I took advice from someone else to incorporate cherry blossoms into the design, so I did that to give him some anime hair. Should I remove the “hair” and give him a rice hat made of sawgrass, like the old design?

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:47:16 No.37670977 Report

Quoted By: >>37670986

>>37670496
Lose the hair ties

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:49:14 No.37670985 Report

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>>37670917
No one cares about your waifubait furrymon.
Go back to jacking off to your Sonic OCs.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:49:23 No.37670986 Report

Quoted By: >>37671022

planning to redo this one also but posting it anyway
>>37670917
yikes
>>37670955
could use better art but honestly not bad, i think it would be interesting if you could somehow integrate the sword into the body (like maybe make it an attachable horn to a samurai helmet or a hair pin that grows in size for instance)
>>37670977
i already revised it in the OP image

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:49:42 No.37670988 Report

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:50:52 No.37670999 Report

Quoted By: >>37671029 >>37671052 >>37671057 >>37671079

>only gets better with the final evo

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:53:51 No.37671022 Report

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>>37670986
Oh shit you right, I didn’t notice it was different in the OP

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:54:54 No.37671029 Report

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>>37670999
The acorn looks a little misplaced, but I really like it otherwise. Maybe you could attach cartoony leaves to the acorn, and make it look like a bowtie or something, idk

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:56:18 No.37671043 Report

Quoted By: >>37671050 >>37671057

>>37670955
If youre going for all out ninji, go for the edge route. If its sawgrass, add some other aspects of its habitat. Its a good starting concept but def needs help with design. Imo, this is too cute to be a good ninja poke

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:57:57 No.37671050 Report

Quoted By: >>37671061

>>37671043
Ah no, not quite ninja. I really want it to evoke “ronin”, but maybe it is too cute lol. I really want to make a good mon based on the concept, I’m just struggling a lot with the execution. Definitely gonna redraw it though, might repost later.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:58:03 No.37671052 Report

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>>37670999
Lose the acorn and its perfect. Or alternatively, make the acorn aspect more prominent, and give the first form an acorn cap hat

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:58:14 No.37671053 Report

Quoted By: >>37671074 >>37671125 >>37671607

honestly a monkey ape works too

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:58:30 No.37671056 Report

Quoted By: >>37671199

>>37670309
You desperately need to think of something to work with the camera concept.

Combine it with an owl maybe. Or turn it from a camera into a camcorder/security cam pokemon and make it into a hound as if it can set off alarms.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:58:30 No.37671057 Report

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>>37670988
a simple yet effective design though it doesn't necessarily stand out to me
>>37670999
too many complex shapes on the leaves especially on the head, the acorn looks out of place
>>37671043
i mo it could work as a single stage or a pre evo

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 04:59:41 No.37671061 Report

Quoted By: >>37671104

>>37671050
If youre going for ronin, i suggest a very long grass ponytail that evokes the length and structure of sawgrass.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:00:12 No.37671067 Report

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> op here that made the post about the above grass starters

didn't make those btw, credit to the artist (50shadesofheliosk), just wanted to share to see what you guys would think

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:01:49 No.37671074 Report

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>>37671053
I love this design

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:02:23 No.37671079 Report

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>>37670999
Not liking the long spikey claws or the green-yellow transition on the limbs and tail.

Also are the leaf outcroppings branches or just style?

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:05:27 No.37671098 Report

Quoted By: >>37671109 >>37671125

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:06:11 No.37671104 Report

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>>37671061
That’s a pretty good idea, thank you

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:06:11 No.37671105 Report

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>>37671079
they look like leaf outcroppings to form a scarf maybe?

kinda like greninja's I guess

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:07:03 No.37671109 Report

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>>37671098
Simple but cool. This style however doesnt make them look too pokemon like. Something with the eyes.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:08:57 No.37671125 Report

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>>37671053
i hate it, the details look random and out of place
>arm, leg and back plates for no reason
>jewels(actual gemstones) look extremely out of place
>dumb brass knuckles because artist couldn't think of any other way to make it look tough
>tail is way too thin and long for such a big creature with way too many thorns
>tiny flowers on the shoulder bush just to make it look more cluttered
>>37671098
simple and effective; the face looks dopey on the second one and should look something more like nidoking or rhydon

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:10:27 No.37671132 Report

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>>37671125
Cowface kaiju with koffing symbol and Megalon hands.
What is this and why?

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:13:25 No.37671147 Report

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>>37671132
just a drawing of crystaking from clover
i thought it looked neat and didnt like the rendition done by the other artist

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:20:22 No.37671199 Report

Quoted By: >>37671217

>>37671056
The whole thing I was trying to go for was a sort of spectral photographer Pokemon, partially man made to justify the use of the camera and coil neck (so it get better angles and take pictures at different heights) I'll try to redesign it with the criticism in mind

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:23:03 No.37671217 Report

Quoted By: >>37671227

>>37671199
Maybe a tripod body??

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:24:48 No.37671227 Report

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>>37671217
Might be kind of awkward for it to move around with that

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:25:41 No.37671234 Report

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>>37671057

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:25:43 No.37671235 Report

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:27:23 No.37671246 Report

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>>37671235
If this is a desert variant of Treecko, it’s not bad.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:28:13 No.37671249 Report

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>>37671227
I meant like, have 3 legs..
Base it off the War of the Worlds tripod things and keep you wires as hands.
Hell i might just do this one

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:28:49 No.37671252 Report

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:29:20 No.37671256 Report

Quoted By: >>37671264 >>37671271

>>37671234
that fucking sucks!!!!!!!!

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:30:32 No.37671264 Report

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>>37671256
don't care virgin.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:32:19 No.37671271 Report

Quoted By: >>37671292 >>37671463

>>37671256
Underage go away

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:32:42 No.37671273 Report

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>>37670115
Literally a fuckin battle ox

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:38:25 No.37671292 Report

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>>37671271
not since 5 months ago so u can suck it!

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:46:44 No.37671348 Report

Quoted By: >>37671361 >>37671463

>>37671292
>I was actually right
kek you still post like you're 12 though, and I know /vp/ is full of underages. Wasn't hard to guess.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 05:49:11 No.37671361 Report

Quoted By: >>37671452

>>37671348
LOL i bet you love kanto, stupid genwunner

go back to playing lets go faggot

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:02:23 No.37671452 Report

Quoted By: >>37671463

>>37671361
>becoming this butthurt after being called out as underage
>blaming it on the /vp/ version of "le boomers"
this post can't be serious

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:04:51 No.37671463 Report

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>>37671271
>>37671348
>>37671452

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:10:51 No.37671500 Report

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>>37671463
What did he mean by posting a shitty quality pic related

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:31:32 No.37671607 Report

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>>37671053
I love the design and type, but some stuff not fit in its design as the flowers and blue gems/diamonds, try to add old architecture patterns, like SoC bosses.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:49:56 No.37671706 Report

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:56:06 No.37671732 Report

Quoted By: >>37672091

Drew this based on another anon's drawing based on a scribble another anon did. Thought it was neat.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:57:05 No.37671741 Report

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I want to design a Fairy/Dragon Pokèmon somewhat based on pic-related. The first stage is pretty basic but is upside down to reference real life while its evolution is right-side up and resembles an empty Chinese Dragon costume.

Don’t know where to start though, so anyone have any ideas on how certain features should look?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:58:13 No.37671748 Report

Quoted By: >>37671760

>>37670115
I can tell you that a minotaur pokémon will be revealed

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 06:59:42 No.37671760 Report

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>>37671748
god i hope not that minotaur design has been in the works for like 3 years

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 08:21:08 No.37672091 Report

Quoted By: >>37673827

>>37671732
The design is nice but the candy legs really distract from the rest- perhaps swap the color with the rose, the part that's meant to stand out.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 12:13:00 No.37673235 Report

Quoted By: >>37673847

>>37670526
is that you amazenmegas?

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 13:37:52 No.37673827 Report

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>>37672091
Well I had the original two, I think they're supposed to just be solid pink, but that's what I took from the design. I was gonna try redrawing it and the anon's first two stages in a Sugimori style, or best I can.

It's actually way different from the original, but the anon who made him seemed to like it.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Feb 2019 13:41:26 No.37673847 Report

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>>37673235
no its OP lol

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