>>38576385Kanto is a bit off, the line from Vermillion to Lavender should go back up to Cerulean and down through Rock Tunnel, also this is implying you do Silph Co & Sabrina's Gym before Koga in which case you see the predicament in that you can do Gyms 3-6 in any order and can do 7 after 5, Kanto's non-linearity makes a straight line through it rather difficult.
For Johto everything is fine but you forgot the Rocket Radio Tower incident.
Hoenn you forgot the Petalburg City Gym, which is part of why Gen 3's first 5 gyms are so good because you effectively run that big Western Loop several times to get to it, otherwise everything else is good.
Sinnoh appears to be the Pt version so we'll work with that, in that case you actually do Celestic Town before Canalave and prior to this you've been working on the principle of not being able to use Fly which in Kanto would be a much quicker way to get to Cinnabar, in addition you forgot the Coronet climax although credit you did remember the Galactic HQ battle.
Unova is mostly correct although in BW although you forgot after the 7th Gym you have to go to the Desert Resort and then Nacrene City to get the stone with Reshiram/Zekrom in it. B2W2 is completely correct.
Kalos is mostly correct although there should be an intend to the left on Route 13 to account for the Power Plant, above Laverre City there should be one for the Pokeball Factory, another one at Dendemille Town for Frost Cavern, other than that the rest of it is fine.
Ignoring the numerous cutscenes and pointless detours in SM (this is SM since there is none of Mina's fucking trial present) the map seems to be pretty much correct, my only note would be you can't fly so the path after Lana's trial shouldn't look the way it does and the path to Olivia's Grand Trial looks more complex than it actually is. You also forgot the match against Guzma in the Malie Garden, otherwise everything is in order.