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>>38623502
Fire starter is horribly generic, grass starter is good. Water looks like a generic regional rodent.
4/10.

You seem talented, why do you waste your time with things this creatively bankrupt?

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:30:29 No.38623556 Report

Quoted By: >>38623619 >>38624238

>>38623521
idk yet they were just quick sketches, i think he will stay quadruped
>>38623508
thank you nonny
>>38623536
im glad you like the grass one. they were quick things and i didn’t have many ideas, at first the water one was going to be a dolphin but i didnt like it so i turned it into a beaver.

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:31:06 No.38623563 Report

Quoted By: >>38623583 >>38623616 >>38623631

>fire starter fakemon
>it's a goat or snake

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:35:15 No.38623583 Report

Quoted By: >>38623631

>>38623563

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:40:00 No.38623616 Report

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>>38623563
Apologize you made him sad you bitch

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:40:13 No.38623619 Report

Quoted By: >>38623641 >>38623648

the grass one looks too much like a rodent, desu
rather, it looks too much like the water one, they should clash more

>>38623556
this is honestly much better

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:41:28 No.38623631 Report

Quoted By: >>38623648

>>38623563
>we haven't had neither a goat nor a snake fire starter
what did he mean by this

>>38623583
try a spider starter pls
I'd love to see how you'd make a cute looking spider

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:41:29 No.38623632 Report

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>>38623502
i like em. idk why people complain about stuff not being so explosively flashy in design when it's conceptually solid lol

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:43:12 No.38623641 Report

Quoted By: >>38623678

>>38623619
>le fish with legs meme
>better

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:44:04 No.38623648 Report

Quoted By: >>38623825

>>38623619
the grass one is based off a dormouse since they’re one of my favourite animals and i relate them to nature/berries a lot. he stores berries in his pouch. and ye i think their bodies are a bit similar, i might switch back to the dolphin
>>38623631
hes an anti-zodiacfag nonny. i might make the regional bug a spider though

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:45:01 No.38623654 Report

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>>38623502
They're pretty cute

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:47:29 No.38623678 Report

Quoted By: >>38623825

>>38623641

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 16:55:01 No.38623730 Report

Quoted By: >>38623825

>>38623502
>3 mammals
>3 boring mammals at that
why do you fags keep doing this

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:02:05 No.38623781 Report

Quoted By: >>38623825 >>38623890 >>38623936 >>38624305

slug water starter? idk

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:09:40 No.38623825 Report

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>>38623678
>F
just dab on him

>>38623648
yeah I think my main issue was >>38623730
though I don't have much of a problem with one of them being a rodent and the other being a goat-thing, but two of them looking like rodent is meh desu

>>38623781
what's covering its back kinda looks like mud, it'd be nice as a ground slug, maybe ground/electric if you sharpen its ears a bit

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:16:11 No.38623875 Report

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>>38623502
>Water
Oshawott 2.0
>Grass
Possible future waifubait, but still nice
>Fire
Could be worse, just change the eyes

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:18:41 No.38623890 Report

Quoted By: >>38623940

>>38623781
Please make a cute puppy thing with a golden retriever as your inspiration. Y'know, if you feel like it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:23:51 No.38623936 Report

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>>38623781
Perfect

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:23:58 No.38623940 Report

Quoted By: >>38623970 >>38624256 >>38624400 >>38627558

>>38623890
honestly i will. one day ill make a fan game but idk how to code so its a distant dream

Also here’s the final sketches for them thanks for the help /vp/

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:27:48 No.38623970 Report

Quoted By: >>38624400

>>38623940
Now make it's evolution

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:46:46 No.38624127 Report

Quoted By: >>38624143

>>38623502
>all mammals
Also you def took some traits from pic related

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:47:50 No.38624143 Report

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>>38624127
Please read the thread i changed the water one bro... also ive never seen that fakemon before, i literally just drew a chibi beaver

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:52:49 No.38624181 Report

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>>38623502
Cute hoofer!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 17:59:34 No.38624238 Report

Quoted By: >>38624261 >>38624328

>>38623556
That starter is way fucking better though dude, I genuinely am starting to think your idea for what fakemon should be is creatively bankrupt.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:00:36 No.38624242 Report

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>>38623502
>Two rodents and a generic fire goat
0/10

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:01:36 No.38624256 Report

Quoted By: >>38624328

>>38623940
MUCH better, you're probably going to need to change the grass one out too because it doesn't give off starter vibes.

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Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:02:03 No.38624261 Report

Quoted By: >>38624283 >>38624328

>>38624238
>creatively bankrupt
tons of fakemon artists fall for the shitty overused "dolphin with legs" meme

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:04:47 No.38624283 Report

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>>38624261
That looks like a quadruped though, which is way less common.
Instead of simply being a dolphin it looks like it's crossed with some canine mammalian traits.
See me after class.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:07:43 No.38624305 Report

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>>38623781
Sligoo but good

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:10:09 No.38624328 Report

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>>38624261
That base design is cute, shame the evolutions are a bit ugly
>>38624256
The grass one is my favourite so i wont change him, but I originally had him a bit fatter which i think gave off more of a ‘’starter vibe’’. Idk tho I’m not gonna use these designs for anything just wanted to see what people thought.
>>38624238
I have lots of fakemon ideas but i wanted to keep the starters more simple and rounded, since nowadays starters are used for marketing/toys/anime shit

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:12:58 No.38624356 Report

Quoted By: >>38627402

Fake

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 18:17:10 No.38624400 Report

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>>38623940
>>38623970
For the evolutions you should probably do the third stage before the middle and add that in to start showing details changing
Any DA/Tumlr account?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 21 May 2019 19:24:01 No.38624914 Report

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>>38623502
>the fire goat's distant, hopeless stare
Who hurt you, goat?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 00:30:13 No.38627335 Report

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>>38623502
That is adorable.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 00:32:00 No.38627351 Report

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>>38623502
Really cute, nice work!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 00:36:53 No.38627391 Report

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I do but can the fire have toriyama eyes, I think it might look a little cooler with them

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 00:38:13 No.38627402 Report

Quoted By: >>38627410

>>38624356
Pretty much this. If it doesn't have the Game Freak magic, you might as well not bother.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 00:39:28 No.38627410 Report

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>>38627402
No fun allowed

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 22 May 2019 01:00:39 No.38627558 Report

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>>38623940
Do you have a account on like twitter for example? Really nice designs you've made

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