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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:42:09 No.39620632 View View Reply Original Report

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Feedback on my design?

Electric/Ghost platypus.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:50:53 No.39620717 Report

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>>39620632
doesnt look like a ghost

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:51:07 No.39620723 Report

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Looks ok except the eyes make them look like gen 1 dbz eyes

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:51:08 No.39620724 Report

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>>39620632
look prety good but the yellow make him look a bit too much like psyduck.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:53:02 No.39620746 Report

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>>39620632
I'd change the color a bit to make it more different from Psyduck, but overall i really like it and definitely would train it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:53:52 No.39620752 Report

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>>39620632
what's with the screw ears

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:54:35 No.39620758 Report

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>>39620632
Push the frankenstein-ness of it more. Make the flesh a blue-green rotten colour.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:54:53 No.39620762 Report

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>>39620724
That's kind of what I was going for.

It's a Frankensteins monster of official designs. Much like how the real platypus was originally perceived as a hoax.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 19:55:27 No.39620767 Report

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Doesn't look like a Ghost. Compare it to Mimikyu: Mimikyu has the same clothlike appearance but you can still clearly tell that it's just a costume and underneath it's an actual ghost. This just looks like a platypus doll.
If I saw this in a fangame or something I'd assume Electric/Normal, Electric, maybe even Electric/Steel or Electric/Water (because it's a platypus).

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:01:06 No.39620823 Report

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>>39620762
Cute concept, I like it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:02:33 No.39620842 Report

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>>39620632
Would train

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:04:53 No.39620870 Report

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>>39620758
How's this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:06:26 No.39620877 Report

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>>39620870
How unexpected of you, Perry the platypus
And by unexpected, I mean COMPLETELY EXPECTED

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:06:37 No.39620885 Report

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>>39620870
Much better. Wow.

Good job anon. You did good today.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:06:49 No.39620887 Report

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>>39620632
I think its cute. The design doesn’t really communicate its ghost typing though

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:06:55 No.39620888 Report

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>>39620870
Eh thought I would go back and desaturate the colors.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:07:51 No.39620898 Report

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>>39620870
Unironically great

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:08:19 No.39620904 Report

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>>39620632

>yellow grookey

ishygddt

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:09:27 No.39620914 Report

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>>39620870
Now he's Ducklett, try white

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:12:34 No.39620941 Report

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>>39620914
?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:15:27 No.39620965 Report

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>>39620941
I love it <3

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:17:48 No.39620990 Report

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>>39620888
Very nice

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:18:32 No.39620998 Report

Quoted By: >>39621101 >>39621147 >>39621511 >>39621515

If anyone is interested in here's the evolution. Decided to go full into the Frankenstein inspiration. Originally I wanted to evolve it's parts along with it. (Psyduck head becomes Golduck head, Oshawott feet becomes Samurott feet, etc.)
But I couldn't make it that different from the first stage.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:19:13 No.39621004 Report

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>>39620632
I would change the beak and then add it to my team. Great job anon !

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:29:19 No.39621101 Report

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>>39620998
More context for it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:36:47 No.39621147 Report

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>>39620998
>>39620632
These are pretty good. Do you have anymore designs?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:39:19 No.39621174 Report

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>>39620888
OS, very good. Captures that slightly-rotten feels beautifully.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 20:59:56 No.39621365 Report

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>>39621147
Fighting/Fire w/ Steelworker
Based on a blacksmith. Appearance is partially inspired by circus strongmen.

>Description
It can mold inorganic material by warming up it's hands to a blistering 2700° F while twisting and bending it with it's strength. Groups come together in a competition and slam their hammers on the ground. If it's hammer doesn't brake and the more destruction it causes the more proud it is of it's work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:01:30 No.39621376 Report

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>>39621365
would be cooler if he wasnt wearing human clothes

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:06:10 No.39621420 Report

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>>39621365
Maybe make him have an ability to mold metal into little minion guys that look like his pre evolution that he uses to attack

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:08:51 No.39621450 Report

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>>39621365
Would nane Hephaestus. But whats with the beak looking mouth?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:14:11 No.39621498 Report

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>>39621450
Because its also partially based on the Kanazuchibō, a japanese yokai.

>It is depicted in a number of different ways by different artists, but in most depictions it has long, flowing hair, big, buggy eyes, and a beak-like mouth. Some paintings portray it more bird-like, while others portray it in as a grotesque, misshapen goblin-like creature. It’s most identifying feature is the large mallet it carries. It is usually portrayed holding the mallet over its head, ready to strike another yōkai.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:14:47 No.39621506 Report

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>>39621365
I generally don't like clothes on pokemon, but I can see where it could potentially work wit hthe design, but jesus, this one literally looks like he's wearing a wifebeater and boxers, and not even nice ones, the kind of clothes you buy in a plastic bag at walmart. this pokemon looks like after a long day of doing pokemon stuff he has to peel that sweaty wifebeater off his back and put it in the wash for tomorrow or else he'll be nude.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:15:37 No.39621511 Report

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>>39620998
I like it, but it's missing that certain je ne sais quoi that would tip it over the edge

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:16:19 No.39621515 Report

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>>39620998
the eyes look too human and alert, I would make them more glassy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:17:58 No.39621533 Report

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>>39621506
Daddy!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:38:26 No.39621722 Report

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very cool

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:41:22 No.39621751 Report

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>>39620870
Personally I love this one! Good job OP

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:42:38 No.39621761 Report

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cool, cool , cool, cool, cool, cool, cool,cool, cool, coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 21:45:13 No.39621787 Report

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i'd use him

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 22:21:13 No.39622105 Report

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porn where?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 22:21:42 No.39622112 Report

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>>39621365
I like the general concept but to reiterate what several anons have said: why the clothes?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 22:48:00 No.39622339 Report

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>>39622112
It wasn't supposed to come off as literal clothes. It's supposed to be a body pattern that resemble strongman leotards.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 23:07:09 No.39622485 Report

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>>39621101
If you want it to scream ghost type, it needs purple somewhere. Gengar, frosslass, chandelure et c all have purple or a mist going on

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Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 23:30:48 No.39622679 Report

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I really like the concept behind this guy, with all of those elements of different Pokémon mashed together. It’s a cleverly concept and well-executed. I agree with a few other anons, however, that he could use something that makes him more Ghost type-like, such as stitches on some of his parts. Otherwise, a very solid and cute design, anon, great work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 23:41:53 No.39622776 Report

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>>39621376
this, human clothes on Pokemon is always bad

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 06 Aug 2019 23:47:20 No.39622809 Report

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>>39621376
maybe something like the pants on >>39621498 could work more, the shirt being so close to the hammer thats already gray kind of takes away the attention from it

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 07 Aug 2019 00:02:22 No.39622933 Report

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>>39620762
so is it literally torn off pieces of other pokemon stitched together?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 07 Aug 2019 00:05:05 No.39622959 Report

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>>39620888
Purple or darker coolers might help it look more ghosty

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Anonymous Wed 07 Aug 2019 00:24:34 No.39623031 Report

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>>39621147
This was already posted here before. But here's just some updated artwork.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 07 Aug 2019 00:25:36 No.39623037 Report

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>>39623031

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