>>39641508Alot of posts here are accurate, albeit autistically charged so gonna give you the low down real quick
-wind motifs work when every part that isn't tied down actively moves, otherwise it looks sloppy and half done, make the dress and sleeves have flow or don't bother with it
-turner's pose is stiff as shit but making the legs twist inwards doesn't improve either, just kinda reminds us of a retarded nip trend.
Draw them more expressively, a slight tilt to one will do that easily. The thigh gap is also kinda of an issue cuz i doubt this 10-12 year old is canonically getting dicked every hour but that brings issues in itself on fixing, best solution would be trying to give her a wider stance leg-wise or closing the legs a bit but fuck if i know what masuda and ohmori write anymore
-Draw her fucking feet normally, don't twist them in she's clearly not some kawaii uguu cunt, she's a goth mate, just cuz nips do that to everything doesn't mean it's good
Also Don't Ever Reply to fucking Criticism you don't like, it makes you look like a bigger faggot than you most likely are, either listen and just do it or don't fucking bother
