>>39722622Not bad. I like your points about "potential" and how that improves the experience of playing the games. Plus, I'm inclined to like anyone who thinks Fraxure and its family are rad.
It could use some proofreading, though. I saw a lot of grammatical mistakes, such as improper punctuation or misused words (like saying "let's" when you should say "lets", forgetting to put punctuation at the ends of sentences, using periods instead of question marks, using singular words when you should be using their plural forms, etc.).
And there are some phrases that don't make sense, like
>it’s a series that boasts itself with feeling “alive”.You should instead say
>it’s a series that prides itself on feeling "alive".Anyway, I hope that bit of feedback helps. It's not a bad piece overall, and you raise some good points, ones I didn't really think about before.
>>39723201It holds true in other games too. Absol is often found in places with some connection to disasters, like Mt. Coronet, Giant Chasm, and Tapu Village.
